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With A Little Drop of Poison
Danu54 Reviews | 5.89/10 (54 Ratings, 0 Likes, 56 Favorites )
A love potion + the Weasley twins = trouble for a certain Potions Master and new Transfiguration Apprentice
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Danu
Member Since 2005 | 5 Stories | Favorited by 24 | 13 Reviews Written | 25 Review Responses
I'm just a quirky girl that dreams of one day being a writer.
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yes 2 more chapters... pretty please.. Did you write the song?
After reading her say "I think I love you" in the last chapter - all I could think about was David Cassidy singing. lol
Sorry couldn't help myself
David Cassidy / I Think I Love You Lyrics
http://www.inlyrics.com/lyrics/D/David-Cassidy/147869.html
Ba, ba, ba, ba.Ba, ba, ba, ba, ba.Ba, ba, ba, ba, ba.I'm sleepingAnd right in the middle of a good dreamLike all at once I wake upFrom something that keeps knockin' at my brain. Before I go insane I hold my pillow to my headAnd spring up in my bedScreaming out the words I dread:"I think I love you!"This morningI woke up with this feelingI didn't know how to deal with And so I just decided to myselfI'd hide it to myself and never talk about itAnd didn't I go and shout itWhen you walked into my room."I think I love you!"I think I love you.So what am I so afraid of?I'm afraid that I'm not sure ofA love there is no cure for.I think I love you.Isn't that what life is made of?Though it worries me to sayI've never felt this way.I don't know what I'm up against.I don't know what it's all about.I got so much to think about.Hey, I think I love you.So what am I so afraid of?I'm afraid that I'm not sure ofA love there is no cure for.I think I love you.Isn't that what life is made of?Though it worries me to sayI've never felt this way.Believe me,You really don't have to worry.I only want to make you happyAnd if you say,"Hey, go away," I will, but I think better stay,I'd better stay around and love you. Do you think I have a case?Let me ask you to your face:Do you think you love me?I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you.Oh, I think I love you. Some Other Lyrics by DavResponse from pickles (Reviewer)
If I would have read author's notes I would have seen who did the song. Sorry. Taking a break from 2 sick kids - They are all covered up on the couch.
You know what has always truely amazed me, is that no matter how many times I read that Albus is playing matchmaker between Hermione and Severus and Severus falls for it despite the knowledge, it makes me smile. Very enjoyable. More, please. -- B
yes I want an epilouge please :D
I like it very much. I'm of the mind that it's happily ever after, and while I think this is good as is, I wouldn't mind seeing more. I'm odd that way, never wanting stuff to end. hehe
I like it. I like the open-endedness of it. There is just enough resolution to feed our imaginations, or at least mine. Very nice story. Good job!
Thank you for the squeezing a new chapter in between your studies. Good writing. waiting for more.
Patty
Her last thoughts as she fell asleep were of being waltzed around the room by an out-of-character Severus.
Heeheehee. Indeed. So there's only one more chapter? shucks. Yay, as well, but mostly shucks. I'm enjoying this.
Muahahaha! Halloween Ball, eh? **Imagines the possibilities!** Great chapter, doll. Don't worry about the wait. It was worth it. Cheers.
Poor Hermione, to get dosed into realizing that she was already in love with Severus. I am sure that the formidable Miss Granger will get her man. Great job. -- B
ooo...this is a rather interesting little tale...I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Please update again SOON!!
More, please! ~Lotm
Oh GEEZ!!1 Now what? Just when its getting good the Weasley boys show up. Hopefully you will have a new chapter up soon. great writing..
Response from Danu (Author of With A Little Drop of Poison)
I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I had gotten some of it done yesterday so by the end of this weekend it should be up
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Maybe the Professor and the Student won't notice the intrusion?? Yeah just like I thought too good to be true.. lol have a great weekend
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Is the update ready yet??
Response from Danu (Author of With A Little Drop of Poison)
I'm working on it. I got a little busy with Halloween and homework. I promise, as soon as it's done and oked by my betas, it'll be up.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Take your time we want a great read for the next chapter...
This just let's my imagination run away.
Well off to the bus stop. Time for the kids to be in school. YIppee.. to bad the youngest isn't going.. oh well 2 more years...
Sod it, indeed! woohooo! I'm glad he threw caution to the wind, but I wish the ruddy Weasleys hadn't showed up! hehe
Response from Danu (Author of With A Little Drop of Poison)
You know those Weasleys, they have the worst timing ever :oP
Glad to hear you're enjoying the chapter
I love this story ... it's very cute - can't wait for more. Poor Prof Snape caught in the middle!
great chapter. love her calling him severus. i'm sure it annoys him to no end.
surprised he didn't put a lid on the pitcher. never know when one might slip and fall. that would put a damper on him find a solution..
well i'm going to try and get some sleep. hopefully through telepathy my husband is finally getting sleepy.. when he is working nightshift and he can't sleep - i'm wide awake. no kidding. just our connection.
And so it begins... muahahaha... good chapter. Can't wait for your update.
Oh this is cute! I like the set up, such as Hermione being Minerva's apprentice, rahter than Severus', and that Snape has been developing... feelings for her. I look forward to seeing the story develop and hope you update soon.
I love when Ron is a prat:) I love it when he is so stupid! I'm glad, i found the second chapter here. But I wonder how Snape is going to react! Will it be a short story?
Response from Danu (Author of With A Little Drop of Poison)
So far I've written about four chapters and it looks like it will take at least four more to end the story how I want it to end. So I guess it depends on your definition of a short story
I posted here mainly because I was hoping to reach more readers and I do plan to keeping posting over at Ashwinder. It just seems it takes them longer to look over things. As of right now my second chapter is still waiting to be looked over, which I shouldn't complain because they are a rather big site.
Response from Triskell (Reviewer)
I thought it would be a short story (for me, it is less than 4 chapters). Glad you came here because it is a wonderful site.
And you're now in my favs so I will get an alert e-mail :)
oh that was an excellent ending to the chapter. Oh boy when the twins find out the are going to sh--!
will it be a few chapters before the lovebirds find out what happen?
Waiting for more. Patty
Ron is a day late and a dollar short. Oh, I do like that he's been "thinking" of her. muahahaa... Now to see if she's been thinking the same before the potion...
I am quite interested in what happens next. Muahaha... does a certain professor happen by?
Well now that will teach Fred and George about meddling in things that they should leave well enough alone.
Awwwww. Phooey. *pout* More, please! ~Lotm
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DANU. Hopefully the family/friends take you out for a great dinner and presents.
Great chapter. hermione silent partner - is that possible? is it possible the potion brought out her real feeling for the professor?
waiting for more. enjoy your weekend. p
Sneaky!Hermione. I wonder if Snape is going to realize that she said something to the effect of she could have "finally" shagged him. Methinks she felt something before. hahaa! Keep up the good work.