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Potions Under Duress The Silvering Divide
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The Silvering Divide

1: Curious

2: Beneath

3: Parted

4: Revealed

5: Exodus

6: Presents

7: Return

8: Complicated

9: Discovery

10: Frozen

11: Closer

12: Questions

13: Closure

14: Family

15: Victory

16: Come June

The Silvering Divide

Somigliana

138 Reviews   |   138 Ratings, 0 Likes, 188 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 50,716 Words 16 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione encounters a strange lake-dweller one morning. Her new friend will give her insight into the most mysterious man of them all...

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Chapters (16)

Chapter 1: Curious

Chapter 2: Beneath

Chapter 3: Parted

Chapter 4: Revealed

Chapter 5: Exodus

Chapter 6: Presents

Chapter 7: Return

Chapter 8: Complicated

Chapter 9: Discovery

Chapter 10: Frozen

Chapter 11: Closer

Chapter 12: Questions

Chapter 13: Closure

Chapter 14: Family

Chapter 15: Victory

Chapter 16: Come June


About Somigliana

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Somigliana

Member Since 2005  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 110  |  11 Reviews Written  |  309 Review Responses

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http://www.livejournal.com/users/somigliana/
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10/10

Tilly

A gorgeous slow winding story; their relationship feels very natural. I loved the selkie twist! My favorite part was Hermione's narration and the emotions we get to see as she faces growing up, her parents, and post war 'normality'. I will definitely be re-reading this in the future.

10/10

joan_glover

(This is a joint review for The Silvering Divide and Silver Bells)

It wasn't until I started to read this set of stories for the second time, to savor them, that I found the words I wanted to summarize my thoughts: ". . .distinct tingle in the cadence and beauty of the prose. . . ."  Your fresh simlies and metaphors give me so much pleasure!  "the ink spill of black hair. . . ."  "filling her throat like a swelling sponge. . . ."  sigh  What delight!  I also appreciated your creative use of collective nouns such as "an alarm of birds."  I think your delicate balance of sarcasm and irony as the characters of H & S develop into people who are able to begin to be intimate with each other is masterful.  But perhaps what I appreciated the most was the clear boundaries between teacher and student, and the care with which you wrote about the beginning of their transition out of these roles into being able to be adults with each other.  I haven't yet read any author who understood the dynamics and what needed to happen as well as you did in this set of stories.  Thank you.  I've now read all of your work that's posted here, and I look forward to reading more.

0/10

Mari01

This is a wonderful story and I enjoyed every moment of it!!! The development of the relationship between Gall and Cass (I loved the nicknames =] ) was really well writed and beautiful to watch and Syrena was a sweetie. Congratulations!!!! 

0/10

rachow

I read this again the other day. I've been feeling like I'm going through fanfic withdrawal because many of the stories that I'm following have been VERY slow to update. I was going through my bookmarks, checking on statuses, like if there were any chapters in the queue or if something was abandoned (a depressing number of them were). I decided to read this one again. It was even better the second time through. I found myself wishing for more, even after reading Silver Bells too. I've been going over it in my head, trying to figure out what more you could do with it, but I can't come up with anything. The story feels complete. I guess I want more details about what their notes were about or more flirtation or their first time together. I just want MORE. You set up such a fascinating history for Selkie-Sevvie (as I call him). Well, maybe someday you can write another snapshot follow-up?

Rachel

10/10

KingPig

An achingly beautiful story!!!

10/10

KingPig

'“Given the time period I grew up in, denim is practically a birthright.”'

Thank you, thank you, for this sentence. Often writers are all but flamed for putting Snape in jeans, but it seems just as natural as Hermione wearing denims. Thank you for writing that, and not throwing him in some odd Victorian-style, buttoned up clothing that is supposed to pass as his "casual" style.

Also, I am in love with your characterization of Snape, and the endless supply of cheeky t-shirts keeps me rolling in laughter. I love it!

10/10

KingPig

*squee* June can't come soon enough!!!

10/10

KingPig

"Quid pro quo, Clarice... I have a question for you."

I adore the Muggle movies' cameos!

10/10

KingPig

"Black is for mourning, she thinks with idle resignation. I’m mourning for the absence of his practice pants."

*
cackles*

10/10

KingPig

Ah ha! I had guessed that Leenash had to be related to Snape somehow, and I love how you wove this fascinating scenario into the story so seamlessly. *rushes to the next chapter*

10/10

KingPig

I wonder how I've been a member of this archive for over a year and have somehow completely missed your stories. I love this fic, and, as always, your writing is impeccable (please forgive me my atrocious spelling)!

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Ahh. I miss loads of fic as well--on the updated list one day, off the next ;)Thanks so much for reading, though--Grin.

10/10

Selene

This is such a wonderful story.  It is very beautiful and I love the way the relationship builds between them.

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you so much!!

10/10

Muggline

Urgh - creepy...

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Well, yes... I think it was quite creepy in the tunnel :)

0/10

kimjo2

words have always failed me about how much i loved this story.  thank you so much for your divinely beautiful take on that prompt and i think it has been a shining and silver experience for your readers, too.   i can't wait for the sequel!                                           (me blowing kisses)

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you so very much for reading!

0/10

sunny33

Fitting they should start their new life under the water! :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Nods. I thought it would be apt to end the story that way.Thanks :)

10/10

faeriebell

Bravo that was beautiful!

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you!!

10/10

aura

Really enjoyed this.  Looked forward to each of the updates.  Glad to hear there'll be a sequel too.

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you so much; I hope you enjoyed the sequel, too.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Ooh, an excellent, excellent ending. So sweet, so well tied together! I applaud the fair and wondrous authoress

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Grins. Thank you so much!!

10/10

Muggline

What a wonderful ending to an enchanting tale...

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you!!

10/10

sinbad

A very lovely ending...I'm looking forward to the post-script to this story.

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you so much; I hope you did enjoy the sequel :)

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I didn't even see or know about a sequel.  Can you give me the link?

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Hi there...It was just a one-shot follow-up story, so it was likely easy to miss :)Here's the link: http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/viewstory.php?sid=13229

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

Thanks!

0/10

Kailin

Ths was utterly wonderful.  I hate to see it end, but I'm looking forward to the sequel.  Thanks for writing it; I consider it time well-spent.

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

Thank you so much for reading,

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

.

9/10

sinbad

Good chapter, I liked your more mature Harry.

Response from Somigliana (Author of The Silvering Divide)

THank you; Harry is a firm favourite of mine :D

10/10

aura

Really liking this.
Giggled over Severus' hoping for a hidden meaning to the hairpins...  Hope she comes up with something later on that does mean something.
Looking forward to the next.  ^_^

0/10

sunny33

Christian Bale... mmm... yes.   Anyway, where was I?  Excellent chapter. I like the way Harry had his scruffy old clothes under the finery.  :)

0/10

kimjo2

i can't wait to see severus in the water again, too!  lovely update.  thanks so much

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