Wonderfully choking intensity. One hopes they will be thus forever.  Will they only meet night after night in silence?   Words may rob something from the event of their union and mutal knowledge.  Once they eventually must speak to one another what will happen, I wonder?  At some point they must at least speak in order to plan for the time when she is no longer a tenant of his castle home. I think they will feel compelled to whisper or murmer in softest discourse when eventually they must break thier replete silence. I believe she will be able to show restraint for his sake. If she speaks too much she will miss what he may not be able to say and turn the conversation to other matters that matter less. In other words, I really loved it. I hope Hermione doesn't muck it up with too many questions.

I love a gently smiling Snape! And I smiply melt whenever those two get each other.*hugs you*

Hot. Simply hot. Damn hot. Luckily I finally managed to check your stories, dear, having just found out that you are fond of Lucius. Draco and Harry are even better, IMO!Thanks for sharing!

Wow! Beautiful and erotic and, oh yes, hot! Here on a recc, and really, why have I not explored all of your offerings heretofore? I shall remedy that soon enough.

And only one word spoken between them the entire time? Oh. My. God.

I bow low, NSS. Exquisite work.


Author's Response: LOL.  This was written way back when.  I think I was afraid of dialogue. 

lulabelle72's response: Well, that's one way to get around it!

And to think that I thought this was an experimental piece, LMFAO!

Still love it!

Author's Response: Oh, it was experimental, all right.  I was experimenting with writing. 

*SQUEE*OMG--YES!  He is going to keep her!Brilliant!  I love these two together, and I love how passionate they are too!Well done!

*SQUEE*OMG--that was so freaking hot, holy cow!Mmm-yummy, I SO want to be Hermione!;~D

speechless....they were and I am.

hot, very hot!

This is one of my favorite stories. You've managed to pack so much emotion into just one single word of dialogue. Love it!

very nice

I remember reading your story some time ago. It’s great. I wish I could use all the fantastic wording that you do. Also it’s an excellent description of emotions and you almost didn’t use dialogue. It's a magnificent piece. Congratulations.

That was the sexiest, hottest, most mindblowingly erotic thing I've seen in a looooooooooong time! As in ever. As in wow! 

I really liked the writing style in this, it was really poetic and at the same time extremely powerful. 

One's own, far more mundane, style seems all dull and dreary after this.

Ummm... I'm going to need a minute to compose myself before I can form a thought coherent enough to leave a review. This is truly an outstanding piece of Erotica. Absolutely fabulous and moving and wrought with emotion and lust. If you could brew this in a cauldron, it would be a powerful aphrodesiac. (Did I spell that right?) Well done.
GG

*sighs dreamily* That was so... sweet and romantic, yet hot and wanton... You write the best smut.

Man... I think this was the first fic of yours that I ever read. It just gets better with rereading!

Merlins beard this story is FAB. And with only one word uttered Congrats on a story well written.

WOW

One word of dialogue, and thousands of description. I didn't believe that could be done. Or at least done well. I was wrong.

Absolutely lovely piece of erotica - and the lack of dialogue actually added to it, I feel -

LOL - and don't let the "parting the legs and THEN removing the knickers bother you too much.... even though I noticed it, I was so immersed in the heat of the moment, I just thought "sod it!" and kept on enjoying the passionate hotness that was this story.

Well done - and if Hermione ended up with chinese burns down the outside of her thighs from the removal of her knickers in such a manner, I'm sure she felt it was worth it!
I know I did!

Cheers!

Powerfully written, slash, smut and romance, it's got it all.  Brilliant.

I like this fic a lot.  It has some quite interesting elements to it.

Wow!!!! I simply loved your story!

This has to be hands down the sexiest story ever written.  The emotions in this story without any words being spoken is so sophisticated.  This story just oozed sex appeal without being smutty.  LOVED it.

Intensely erotic and raw, with a touch of gentleness at the end. Simply beautiful, thank you.