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Forbidden Forest Sacrifice
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Sacrifice

1: Part 1

2: Part 2

3: Part 3

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6: Part 6

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8: Part 8

9: Part 9

10: Part 10

11: Epilogue

Sacrifice

Southern_Witch_69

122 Reviews   |   122 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )

Angst Romance Slash Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Forbidden Forest 29,315 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Severus Snape

Harry feels that the only way to keep Snape from serving an undeserving stint in Azkaban is to go through a bonding ceremony with him, thus proving that if Harry Potter has enough faith in Severus Snape to marry him, the man can't be all that bad. How long will it take before the ruse turns real?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Part 1

Chapter 2: Part 2

Chapter 3: Part 3

Chapter 4: Part 4

Chapter 5: Part 5

Chapter 6: Part 6

Chapter 7: Part 7

Chapter 8: Part 8

Chapter 9: Part 9

Chapter 10: Part 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


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Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Sacrifice

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9/10

sinbad

I'm surprised Rita didn't get hexed.  I have a bad feeling for Ginny as well.  I suspect she will be left along the side lines in the end.Nice chapter, easy and gun to read as well.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Rita was lucky. :) Ginny will be... You'll see.

10/10

Muggline

Oh, but they're sweet... and I'm counting on your extraordinary abilities as an author to resolve most, if not all, issues in the end ;-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thanks! :)

0/10

Christo Marvelon

very cool! i'm really enjoying this.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thank you. I'm  happy to hear it!

10/10

snitchette

I pity Ginny. She's loved Harry most of her life, and has waited for him much as long. And yet she seems to get him for short periods of time only. She's even about to lose him forever in a close future, and she doesn't know. Sad.On another note, I'd love to see Severus and Harry in an official outing, or should I call that a date? *grin*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

I do hate that poor Ginny seems to be getting left behind.  :) Hope you continue to enjoy.

10/10

pyjamapants

Ah, such an awkward dance these two have – both literally and figuratively.I suspect Ms. Ginevra won't be around too much longer to plague Severus's nascent feelings.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

I have more on Gin in about two chapters after this. :)

10/10

chivalric

You’re so much more than the bitter, cruel man I thought you to be.Great line, and I still find it surprising that it needed fandom and great stories like yours to figure it out. Snape is not the one-dimensional person he's described as in the books, he's multi-layered and he's human, after all. Besides, spouses should be attracted to each other, shouldn't they?Next chapter, please!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

lol Too right! :) Thanks so much for reading.

10/10

Muggline

Now wouldn't it be great for all of them if Ginny and Snape got along better than they do now...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Mmmhmmm LOL

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

I'm glad this is already written and that I don't have to wait long for updates. When a story really catches my interest, I sometimes try to imagine how it will play out. I hope their first kiss is in public and starts out being just for show. That would be an exciting scene.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Well... nearly. :) Hope you continue to enjoy.

0/10

sunny33

Slowly, slowly, it comes to them.  :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Let there be light!

10/10

sinbad

If Severus is developing feelings for Harry, where will it leave Ginny?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

I'll have more on her soon! :)

10/10

snitchette

What the #?~&#. Stupid beast. That's the worst timing ever for a note to be delievered. Couldn't have waited for a few minutes. Grr. Stupid owl. *grin*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

LOL You know how that goes... :)

0/10

nastygrl

Wow! This is really good, lol.  Not that I'm at all surprised at your writing skill, I'm just surprised I'm saying that about a Harry/Snape story :)And I'm actually looking forward to the next chapter.  Color me amazed :D

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

:) I'm happy to hear it! whoot

10/10

blue artemis

The angst!  Those two need to shit or get off the pot, but circumstances don't allow it, I know.  One small error I noticed, though.  When you call Grubbly-Plank a widower, that would only work if she was a man.  It is widow for a woman who loses her spouse. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Fixed. :) Not sure where my head was. Seemed okay at the time, I guess. Haha Glad you are enjoying!

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

LOL Severus is going to have to be loyal to Potter. I really liked the segment of the article that Severus read. I hope every word of it is true. =)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

thank you! :)

10/10

chivalric

Nearly, there would have been a kiss - Yay! And that although I am a Snupin shipper ;-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Teehee. Come over to the Snarry Side.

10/10

chivalric

So Harry begins to replace Lily, at least enough that Snape begins to dream about the boy. Looking forward to more, looking forward to some nice smut *g*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

I shall have some... at one point. :)

10/10

chivalric

Drugged up Snape - now why do I like this thought so much? Maybe because now, he finds himself in a situation he has to learn to deal with and a husband he has to learn to love ;-)Great chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Agreed. Thank you!

10/10

Muggline

I guess I said that before - I can't wait to see where you are heading...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Heading for a bit of fun of course. Eventually.

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

Oh, I did enjoy it, thank you. I got so excited when I read your summary. I haven't read a good Severus/Harry story in too long. This is one story idea I'd never have imagined, Harry forcing Snape to bond with him for his own good (hmm, maybe ths "his" in that sentence could apply to either or… hmm…), but it's a good set up, and you make it work really well.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Awesome! I'm glad you like it so far. Whoot.

10/10

potterbrat

Wow!!  I loved how quickly this was posted.  I'm loving this.  And I love jealous-Snape.  hehe!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

I'm gonna post every day! :) Hope you like what I have up now! ahaha

10/10

Muggline

Hmm. Still wondering where this is headed (apart from the obvious, of course)...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

~grin~

10/10

sinbad

Nice work Southern!  Getting Severus to take a shower and brush his teeth is a major accomplishment.  I always wondered if canon Snape suffered with undiagnosed clinical depression.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Haha! A very big accomplishment. I remember a JKR interview where she said he just never took time to care for his appearance because he was more interested in other things. Poor sod.

9/10

Anonymous

Good way to show Severus a bit of thruth about himself *grin*. It's difficult to see Jo's character managinig so much insight, but I'm rather convinced that she did know him that well. I would have thought him always capable of it, though, and am glad that I'm not alone with that.
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hope you continue to like it! :) MOre up shortly.

10/10

snitchette

You, Snarky Woman. Or should I sai Wicked? No, I'm saving it for more serious stuff. ;p

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Teehee. :)

0/10

Anonymous

Severus is really well written and his motives and musings are really well done! Fascinating how he reacts here. 

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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