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Forbidden Forest Sacrifice
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Sacrifice

1: Part 1

2: Part 2

3: Part 3

4: Part 4

5: Part 5

6: Part 6

7: Part 7

8: Part 8

9: Part 9

10: Part 10

11: Epilogue

Sacrifice

Southern_Witch_69

122 Reviews   |   122 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )

Angst Romance Slash Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Forbidden Forest 29,315 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Severus Snape

Harry feels that the only way to keep Snape from serving an undeserving stint in Azkaban is to go through a bonding ceremony with him, thus proving that if Harry Potter has enough faith in Severus Snape to marry him, the man can't be all that bad. How long will it take before the ruse turns real?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Part 1

Chapter 2: Part 2

Chapter 3: Part 3

Chapter 4: Part 4

Chapter 5: Part 5

Chapter 6: Part 6

Chapter 7: Part 7

Chapter 8: Part 8

Chapter 9: Part 9

Chapter 10: Part 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


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Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



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0/10

rhiannon113

The phoenix song was a really nice touch. Gave me the chills!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thanks!

10/10

mummy

Iv'e never read hp/ss before as i'm a ss/hg fan,but i to have to finish this story as it's so well written.thank you so much 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Hey, that's a compliment that I can appreciate very much. Thank you. :) xoxoox

10/10

chivalric

*snigger* Good old Rita, always doing her best to reveal the truth. More, please!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

She aims to please.... Hhaha

10/10

chivalric

Life’s a bitch, every now and then. How often does it happen that one falls in love with someone although he is already in a relationship? How often one has to hurt someone else’s feelings and be it only for not to perish with grief oneself? And a bit of smut on top of the desperation – just how I like it ;-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

LOL Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

And I heard someone saying just today (after his wife bitched him out) say, "Life's a bitch, then you marry one, and then you die."Hahhahaha

10/10

sinbad

An honest Rita?  Who's blackmailing her?  lol  This chapter was handled well.  Very good reading material.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Heh, she's being "nice" because she wants their permission to write a book about them. LOL

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I knew there had to be an ulterior motive... lol

10/10

sinbad

Keep socking it away at J.K.R.  I never did like her ending.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

LOLNor I!

9/10

Anonymous

The Daily Prophet at its best. *smirk*

Author's Response: :) Uhhuh

10/10

snitchette

I'm really impressed by Rita. I would have expected more venom from her, but she's relating events quite right, even quoting people with their actual words and NOT distorting them. Quite an improvement.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

She's trying to be nice so they'll give her the rights to tell their story. :) LOL

10/10

Muggline

So they convinced Rita. But I get the feeling that you are procrastinating ;-) Something needs to be done about Ginny, and soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Oh, she's in the next chapter. :)

0/10

rhiannon113

Rita never changes does she? God bless her. *wink*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

She's so slick... :)

0/10

sunny33

Aha.  That epilogue was only a dream.  Knew it! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Hehe.. That's mah story! :)

10/10

potterbrat

  SNARRY SNOG!!  WOOT!  Now, we're getting somewhere.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

yes indeed!

10/10

blue artemis

Did Arthur see something, since he pushed for that?  Anyway, I would hate a marriage to someone who had fallen for someone else, I don't wish that on Ginny. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Yeah, that would suck for her. :( I think Arthur just saw no other way, but I also believe he knew Harry would do it because of the way he'd stayed by Snape's side at St. Mungo's.

10/10

snitchette

I feel so sad for him. This is a terrible choice. Unless he decide he want them BOTH and the story turns into a threesome. Which I would gladly approve of.... *wicked grin*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

LOL :) No threesomes here. ~grin

10/10

Muggline

Oh yeah, this decision is not an easy one. But that's life, isn't it...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

So right.

0/10

rhiannon113

Whoa. Though I have had feelings for two people at once, I've never been in this exact position. You've done a lovely job of making the reader feel the confusion, longing and pain. Difficult, without being entirely gut wrenching. Excellent.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thank you very much. :)

10/10

pyjamapants

Hunh? What? Oh, are you wanting me to say something?Oh yes, the chapter was very good.*returns to daydreaming about that kiss*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

LOL!! Thanks! :)

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

Somewhere in here I was so sure I saw something along the lines of "I will update every day." ???  I guess I'll just have to favorite this story (which I would have done anyway) so I don't need to check the site like I did a couple times yesterday and a couple times today. I really loved this chapter. The various interactions they had at the table spoke volumes. And I've never got to see Harry and Severus dancing together in a story before and being so intimate in that quiet, sort of accidental way. I look forward to your next update. (At least I am assured there will be one!)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

sorry about that. I had a busy day yesterday and a funky day today, but I've just updated. Thanks for reading! :) Hope you continue to enjoy. Teehee

10/10

Anonymous

Brilliant, this chapter! Snape really surprised me with his words and doings - I wouldn't have him thought capable of it. I'm just sorry for Ginny, though - I fear that you are going to give her a hard time and some borken heart.

Author's Response: You may be surprised about Ginny. :)

10/10

Anonymous

Restlessness, cluelessness and helplessness... soo well done! :o)

Author's Response: LOL thanks!

10/10

Anonymous

Great chapter! Intriguing how they dance around each other, and you give them great dialogues. So good that Snape finally heard a bit about his appearance and hygiene *giggles* - the underpant part had me in fits of laughter. It's great how you show Snape's changing with him staying well in character.

Author's Response: Bwahahaha... I had to pick on his underpants. :)

10/10

potterbrat

Very, very good so far.  You are being quite delicate with Ginny and, as a fan of hers, I appreciate that.  Hehehe... But, man, am I ready to see some Snarry action!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thanks. I think you'll be okay with how she's handled. :)

10/10

chivalric

Comparing Harry and Snape to Molly and Arthur was a genious idea! I bet it made it so much easier for Snape to be seen in public after this advvice.Dance-floor scene was lovely. Eagerly looking forward to more - may I ask how many chapters are left?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thanks! Let me see... There are four left after this one. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Oops. That's four left after the one I just posted (chapter seven). :)

10/10

snitchette

I feel sad for Harry and Ginny, but at the same time, I feel happy for both men. They seem enjoying thier evenning despite small interruptions. That is the second aborted kiss. I hope the third one will be quite substantial...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thanks! Ginny will be taken care of. :)

9/10

sinbad

Good chapter, you made it easy to see how a Harry is questioning many topics from a corrupt ministry to his own sexuality.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Sacrifice)

Thanks!! :)

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