Albus has made Severus decide to do what's best and voice his decision out loud.  That was a smart thing to do.  Now Severus has to take responsibility for carrying out his decision.

Well, at least Severus is realizing that people really do care for him.  I'm guessing Charlie is going to be teaching potions.  I bet Severus won't like that.

Once again, Severus's stubbornness gets him into trouble which brings embarrassment to him and, I'm ashamed to say, a bit of humor to this reader, at least.  I like how Minerva took the initiative to kiss him this time.  While you haven't given us a lot of history about how this relationship or this attraction might have developed, you're doing a good job of showing that both parties are definitely interested in each other.  It's interesting to see so much of Alastor in this fic, as well.

So, he kissed Minerva.  And I think she liked it, but how will she convince Severus of that?

*giggles*  Poor Severus!  But it was so funny!

Loved it.  I'm glad there's a sequel or two.  The end left me wanting more. 

I like Severus all soft and drowsey too!thanks for the story

Oh heavens how you torture the poor man!

I'm doomed.This comment made me grin because it seems like he would be doomed without his friends to help him.

An interesting choice with Charlie. Hummmm

My goodness!  He sure is going to a lot of trouble not to let people know how sick he is.  That can't be good...

Seems like things are finally starting to sink in for Mr. Stubborn.

Oh now I want cookies and milk too!!

Poor Severus!  He sounds like he's in bad shape.  It will be interesting to see how certain women will fuss over him.  :)

So did Minerva want him to kiss her? Damn that voldy for interupting a moment!

Clearly Severus is going to fight his recovery every step of the way isnt he?

Severus is just a glutton for punishment isnt he? Albus & Co will just have to monitor him all the more closely.

You described very well how wretched a person feels when they are getting sick. Suddenly everyday things are a burden and a person just cant take it. Poor Severus

If he wont take care of himself then his friends will just have to step in wont they??

Goodness! How long can the poor man last in this condition? We must make that stress go away! Vanish!

That sleeping spell is handy isnt it?

It's nice to see Dumbledore behave in a fatherly way to Severus.

I enjoyed Albus's talk with Severus. It seems like Severus is coming around at long last.

How funny that he prefers to sit with Moody over anyone else!  And that was so sweet what he said about Minerva.  Oh, he's so stubborn!  And he acts like such a baby.  And those voices are so frightening.  I hope he can heal in more than just a physical way.

Whoa that must be some potion.  There are days I think I could use a dose of it.  I find it amazing after all the other characterizations of Alastor and Severus' relationship that you have him choosing Alastor.  I hope you give us a look at the next few hours so we can understand.  My heart breaks for Severus, more so because I know so many of us can identify, in some small way, with how he feels.  I think that is one of the beauties in fan fiction it brings into relief our own inner most feelings and fears.