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Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse

137 Reviews | 137 Ratings, 0 Likes, 50 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 12,590 Words 6 Chapters WIP

Hermione Granger Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Pansy Parkinson Ronald Weasley

Seventeen years ago, the Head Girl took Snape's rejection of her personally and exacted a long-lasting revenge--one that Dumbledore was not above using for his own end.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

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WriterMerrin

Member Since 2006 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 51 | 822 Reviews Written | 741 Review Responses

Sometimes writing, nearly always beta reading, I love to unwind after work by reading fanfiction.

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Reviews for Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse

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10/10

HBAR

So I came across Antidotes this weekend and read it and it is really good . I thought that I should look at your other fics and find something else to read as I didn't think I had read any of your other stuff. I realized that SS and the HGC that I had been reading back when it was posted was yours. Admittedly, I don't remember exactly what happens in it (will have to reread and refresh my memory) but I liked it enough to bookmark it. Tell me you are still working on it! I'll head back to chapter one and start reading so I will be caught up because the next chapter IS going to post soon. *ducks in case heavy objects are being thrown*

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gurlimargrethe

I hope you have not abandoned this. It is a wonderful story, eagerly awaiting an update

10/10

BrenaMarie

Awwwww Thats great that she's happy for him! I really do enjoy the changing scenery of their dream worlds and what they learn from and about eachother during their time together. Thanks for the update! Cheers! ~Brena

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for the enthusiastic review. I hope you like the next chapter; it's with the beta!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for the enthusiastic review. I hope you like the next chapter; it's with the beta!

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kimjo2

love it! but when can we expect some lemony goodness? thanks so much

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Oh, um, it's going to be a long wait. I hope you'll keep reading, but my goal for the story is for them to eventually reach that place, but I'll plan to keep it only as hot as it can be with the current rating. Thanks.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

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Mint Stick

Oh yes, a new Head Girl might indeed have been a problem... a good thing that this proved relatively easy to take care of!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'd been reading some very inspiring Draco/Pansy fic.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'd been reading some very inspiring Draco/Pansy fic.

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BrenaMarie

Great Chapter! I love how quickly you're moving DH along. I seriously hated that book and it's sometimes difficult for me to read stories that re-live that torture. I love this plot so much though that I'm glad I've been reading! Cheers! ~Brena

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! It's been torture at times to reread the book in researching the story, but I'm working to hang these bright ornaments on the tree of the book.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! It's been torture at times to reread the book in researching the story, but I'm working to hang these bright ornaments on the tree of the book.

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CharmedForce

It seems a good thing that Severus has had all that practice denying the lust spell, because Hermione seems to be falling more and more into it as the bond deepens. Can't wait for the update after voting!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. The beta has the next chapter.My thought on that was that Severus isn't really under the lust portion of the spell (that doesn't happen until she breaks her part), but his physical affection intensifies it in Hermione.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

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CharmedForce

Oh, smart chap to appeal to her femininity like that.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! If Severus is one thing, it's smart ;)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! If Severus is one thing, it's smart ;)

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CharmedForce

Scary to be dropped into a dream like that!

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CharmedForce

ew... no dreams of Ron please. Severus is smart to be honest with her from the beginning. She would feel misled and lied to and used if it came out later.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Glad you approve of Sev's honesty. I'm afraid we haven't seen the last of Ron yet. Thanks.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Glad you approve of Sev's honesty. I'm afraid we haven't seen the last of Ron yet. Thanks.

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CharmedForce

What a creative twist to a bond fic! I just love it.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I'm glad to know that it's creative :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I'm glad to know that it's creative :)

10/10

beaweasley2

Cool. He staved off Pansy! Clever guy.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Hee! I was inspired by some Draco/Pansy fic I've been reading. Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Hee! I was inspired by some Draco/Pansy fic I've been reading. Thanks!

10/10

FlittterKat

"He didnt answer aloud, but when he put his arms around her this time, he allowed himself to derive some comfort." The perfect place to end this chapter. It makes me sad that he's so alone. Your chapter brings that fact to the front. The man behind the mission is very compelling. He's able to do whatever he needs to do, in order to gain a desired result. Makes me wonder if he still knows who he is. Great chapter, look forward to the next.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for the interesting insights. I'm glad this chapter caused you to think about Severus. I'm enjoying writing from Severus' POV a lot more than I thought I would as Hermione helps him to recover himself.The next chapter should be coming tonight.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

10/10

Persevero

Very clever story - I am really looking forward to finding out where this is going.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! It's a fun challenge to drag this out over the course of the whole book. There are many twists and turns to come, and the beta has the next chapter!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! It's a fun challenge to drag this out over the course of the whole book. There are many twists and turns to come, and the beta has the next chapter!

10/10

braye27

I'm so glad that the Head Girl Curse was short circuited by Miss Parkinson before it could interfere with Severus and Hermione's connection.This is such an interesting story, and I can't wait to find out what else Severus shares with Hermione in their dream, in the Headmaster's office.Beth

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

I guess we'll have to see what their dreams will bring them. Thanks for the cute review. The next chapter is at the beta's.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

I guess we'll have to see what their dreams will bring them. Thanks for the cute review. The next chapter is at the beta's.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Great chapter.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks!

10/10

makaem

Interesting. I didn't even think about who would be the Head Girl for that year instead of Hermione. Great story!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I've been very influenced by a friend's Pansy/Draco stories.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I've been very influenced by a friend's Pansy/Draco stories.

10/10

pookah

This is really a neat story! I am very much enjoying it and want more. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! More is coming as soon as my beta has time to look it over. I've really enjoyed sharing each chapter so far and getting feedback.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! More is coming as soon as my beta has time to look it over. I've really enjoyed sharing each chapter so far and getting feedback.

10/10

Muggline

Okay, so now the hard part begins... I am very much looking forward to reading about it it!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The beta's got the next chapter.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The beta's got the next chapter.

0/10

sunny33

She seems happy for him to gain the headmaster's position despite the circumstances. Good.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'm glad that came across.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'm glad that came across.

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debjunk

I'm so glad you updated once more. It's a good thing Pansy broke the enchantment before it even started. Severus needs his connection with Hermione in more ways than one.

Can't wait to see what other secrets he shares with her.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! There's another big secret in the next chapter, which is at the beta's.

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

Cool. Can't wait. You're identity was a big secret too, so that was a nice mid-update reveal.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! There's another big secret in the next chapter, which is at the beta's.

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

Cool. Can't wait. You're identity was a big secret too, so that was a nice mid-update reveal.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I can't wait to read more. :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! After tweaking the next chapter for a couple of days, I finally sent it to beta last night. Oh! I forgot to go and edit to thank her!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! After tweaking the next chapter for a couple of days, I finally sent it to beta last night. Oh! I forgot to go and edit to thank her!

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phoenix

Well done. I really love how Hermione thought it wasn't a dream for a moment.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'd had a dream recently where I kept on thinking I'd woken up and hadn't. I thought it would make a great addition to this story ;)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'd had a dream recently where I kept on thinking I'd woken up and hadn't. I thought it would make a great addition to this story ;)

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phoenix

I like how you are weaving in the major events from DH, but allowing Severus to explain as he goes along. The meeting with Dumbledore was a nice touch as well.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. If there is one thing sorely missing from DH, it's Severus' POV!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. If there is one thing sorely missing from DH, it's Severus' POV!

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phoenix

Nice that she reacted better this time, though it's a shame she didn't get the full extent of the curse. It'll be interesting to see how much is shared through this connection.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the chapter. I'm curious what part of the curse you thought she didn't get and if I've clarified it by now ;)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the chapter. I'm curious what part of the curse you thought she didn't get and if I've clarified it by now ;)

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