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Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse

137 Reviews | 5.82/10 (137 Ratings, 0 Likes, 50 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 12,590 Words 6 Chapters WIP

Hermione Granger Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Pansy Parkinson Ronald Weasley

Seventeen years ago, the Head Girl took Snape's rejection of her personally and exacted a long-lasting revenge--one that Dumbledore was not above using for his own end.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

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WriterMerrin

Member Since 2006 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 51 | 822 Reviews Written | 741 Review Responses

Sometimes writing, nearly always beta reading, I love to unwind after work by reading fanfiction.

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Reviews for Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse

Displaying Review 51 - 75 of 137 in total

10/10

makaem

Your Snape reminded me of the Snape in another Ramos fic, "Hinge of Fate". Excellent start and I can't wait to read more.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Wow! Those are some big shoes for my Snape to fill. Thanks for reading! The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Wow! Those are some big shoes for my Snape to fill. Thanks for reading! The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

Muggline

Now that's an intriguing start...

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is a little bit longer, and I hope it's still intriguing.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is a little bit longer, and I hope it's still intriguing.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh no, more, I need more. ~pout~ Please I will beg if need be. Pretty please.lol

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

*is afraid of your smilies*The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

*is afraid of your smilies*The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

FlittterKat

Great chapter. I like how Severus is making the effort to be charming to Hermione. *Wonders if this is his real self or a mean to an objective* Hope his real self is shining through regardless. Thanks for the quick update.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

I think you've got the idea; I think he's letting his real self show through while trying to tell himself it's just an act. Thanks for the insightful review!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

I think you've got the idea; I think he's letting his real self show through while trying to tell himself it's just an act. Thanks for the insightful review!

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update! I am very pleased that Severus has as part of his goal to stop any interludes between Hermione and Ron, I hope he is very sucsessful in that area:-))I look forward to read more!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, canon is on his side in this case; it never occurs to Ron to just snog her! Thanks :) The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, canon is on his side in this case; it never occurs to Ron to just snog her! Thanks :) The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

pookah

Interesting tale. I look forward to seeing how she reacts to the dream, and whether she thinks it might be real, once she is awake.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I think you'll like what she does once she wakes up. The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I think you'll like what she does once she wakes up. The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

Hogwartslibrarian

This is really fun! What an original idea! I love it! Please update sooon!!!!!!!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

blue artemis

I love that story. And I'm enjoying yours.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! When I was trying to picture Severus in this scene, I kept on remembering the way he and Hermione could influence the way they looked in UB.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! When I was trying to picture Severus in this scene, I kept on remembering the way he and Hermione could influence the way they looked in UB.

0/10

nata

As I said in the first chapter - lovely. I especially like how you accept Hermione's intelligence and have her figure out the similarity between her dream Snape and Harry's dream Voldemort. It is, in fact, quite refreshing to see her act smart in fanfiction rather than just talk about it.And the bookmarking really send emails. Thank you for the tip.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I'm glad you like how I'm writing Hermione.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I'm glad you like how I'm writing Hermione.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, I love deram Severus! Hermione was awefully quick to accept this as real. Hmmmm

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I love giving him a chance to be a little out of character. And blame the lust spell for Hermione's gulibility.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I love giving him a chance to be a little out of character. And blame the lust spell for Hermione's gulibility.

10/10

Marble Meadow

Wonderfully written. It gave me a clear picture of this dreaming and the abilities possessed by both. It also doesn't make DD look bad, which is... rare? I suppose I've been reading a lot of evil DD lately. ANYWAY... brilliantly executed. It's intriguing and I want to read more.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, I am a fan of evil DD, but he's kind of good in this. I'm glad you're intrigued. The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, I am a fan of evil DD, but he's kind of good in this. I'm glad you're intrigued. The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

beaweasley2

I like the idea behind the cursed prefect badge.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I liked the stories in the last challenge that showed him when he was closer to his students in age, and I thought I'd use that idea.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I liked the stories in the last challenge that showed him when he was closer to his students in age, and I thought I'd use that idea.

0/10

sunny33

She may not like his dreams much, although they may explain a lot about him.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

She enters one of his dreams in the next chapter, which is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

She enters one of his dreams in the next chapter, which is in the queue.

0/10

soccermom

Interesting dream conversation. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue.

10/10

debjunk

"You have no idea." Very funny. Well, at least Hermione didn't start hexing him when she found out who he was. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I worked hard to end the chapter with that line.And the lust spell is keeping her from hexing him... for the moment.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I worked hard to end the chapter with that line.And the lust spell is keeping her from hexing him... for the moment.

10/10

Marble Meadow

It's really an interesting and original idea. I like it and am looking forward to reading the rest of this...

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. The next chapter is up now!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. The next chapter is up now!

0/10

pyjamapants

I'm interested to see how this bond plays out!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I think it will continue to be interesting ;)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I think it will continue to be interesting ;)

10/10

Persevero

Well, that's an original one! Not that I dislike MLCs, but I am looking forward to finding out how this premise plays out - fascinating.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The magical world is full of possibliities.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The magical world is full of possibliities.

9/10

silverdoe

Great start, looking forward to more.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! More is coming!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! More is coming!

10/10

empathicslytherin

this isnt the end is it?I rather hope not. I think this is a great story. And it had a great start so why not continue it? ^^-Amirah

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Oh, this is just the beginning, and chapter two should be up pretty soon. Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Oh, this is just the beginning, and chapter two should be up pretty soon. Thanks!

9/10

Anonymous

What an absurd and funny idea you had there, and what a good plot that makes! *laughs* Poor Severus, whatever he did do - nobody desevers a cuse like that, with the possible exception of perhaps Lockheart. I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation! ;o)

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Severus. Oh, I would be worried if it were Lockhart. Thanks for the rating and review.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I find it to be rather original and can't wait for more. :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, you do get to see these first ;) Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, you do get to see these first ;) Thanks!

0/10

asnapeintime

Oh my, what a very inventive way to form a bond..looks rather interesting.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. It's good to know there are still inventive ideas for this 'ship.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. It's good to know there are still inventive ideas for this 'ship.

0/10

sunny33

Nice, fresh idea!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I hope I can keep it that way ;)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I hope I can keep it that way ;)

10/10

braye27

I love the beginning of this story, and can't wait to see how this Head Girl Curse will play out now that Hermione is wearing the badge.Beth

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for the review with rating :) Chapter 2 will be up pretty soon.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks for the review with rating :) Chapter 2 will be up pretty soon.

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