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Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse

137 Reviews | 5.82/10 (137 Ratings, 0 Likes, 50 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 12,590 Words 6 Chapters WIP

Hermione Granger Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Pansy Parkinson Ronald Weasley

Seventeen years ago, the Head Girl took Snape's rejection of her personally and exacted a long-lasting revenge--one that Dumbledore was not above using for his own end.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

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WriterMerrin

Member Since 2006 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 51 | 822 Reviews Written | 741 Review Responses

Sometimes writing, nearly always beta reading, I love to unwind after work by reading fanfiction.

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Reviews for Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse

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becrenee

I am enjoying this story an cannot wait for an update!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is up :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The next chapter is up :)

10/10

BrenaMarie

This was a great chapter. I loved how she was able to go to his dream world and experience what his dreams are like. I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the awesome work! ~Brena

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! It will be a challenge in later chapters to keep the dreams looking fresh and different.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! It will be a challenge in later chapters to keep the dreams looking fresh and different.

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Mint Stick

I like her being able to enter his dreams, too - gives them a bit more equal standing at least in that sense.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Yeah, he holds so many of the cards that I could see Hermione determined to change that. Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Yeah, he holds so many of the cards that I could see Hermione determined to change that. Thanks!

10/10

beaweasley2

So a Death Eater's dreams are not too unlike Hermione's. Interesting.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, I think no one has nightmares like Severus, him being in a unique position in the war. But I intrigued myself with the idea of seeing the battle over Little Winging from his perspective.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, I think no one has nightmares like Severus, him being in a unique position in the war. But I intrigued myself with the idea of seeing the battle over Little Winging from his perspective.

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HermioneJeanSnape

Oh, update soon, please!!!I love this scenario, it is fabulous! Very creative and enthralling :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The idea of writing my own classic-style bonding scenario was too good to pass up.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! The idea of writing my own classic-style bonding scenario was too good to pass up.

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trekchick

Very interesting story.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! And I like your name :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! And I like your name :)

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trekchick

Really good start. Looking forward to more.

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blue artemis

Interesting bond idea.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. It's been fun coming up with a bond that kind of harkens back to the old days.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. It's been fun coming up with a bond that kind of harkens back to the old days.

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kimjo2

lemons! lemons! i want lemons! lovely update, tho. i liked hermione going to him on his home turf, so to speak. thanks so much and i look forward to the next chapter

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. Well, anything remotely citrus is going to have to wait quite a while. I hope you stay along for the ride!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. Well, anything remotely citrus is going to have to wait quite a while. I hope you stay along for the ride!

10/10

debjunk

It sounds like someone cares a bit more than they're willing to admit. I'm glad she spoke with Dumbledore. He actually helped (!) her to trust Severus. Miracles never cease, do they? And now she knows not to get involved with Ron. (Yay)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Yeah, poor Severus doesn't quite know what to do yet. And I'm enjoying reinventing Dumbledore a bit. Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Yeah, poor Severus doesn't quite know what to do yet. And I'm enjoying reinventing Dumbledore a bit. Thanks!

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Southern_Witch_69

Still enjoying. I liked that she can now go to his dreams and even manipulate them.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! Hermione is going to be formidable in this story.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! Hermione is going to be formidable in this story.

9/10

helshez

Nice use of canon. I'm always interested to read canon events from a slightly AU perspective. Good chapter, you've still got me intrigued.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. That's exactly what I was going for!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. That's exactly what I was going for!

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kimbee73

This is good! Can't wait to see what happens next. Now that I have caught up i will be bookmarking this for updates.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks so much!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks so much!

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kimbee73

Way to go Severus! Make her trust you.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

You've got him pegged :) Thanks.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

You've got him pegged :) Thanks.

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kimbee73

An interesting start. I just found this so I will be catching up with it here today. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks so much!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks so much!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I feel better now that you updated. Oh, but now I need more again! Don't make me send out my smilies again.So, get back. This a great story, I really do love it.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Sorry it's taken so long, but the next chapter is up! Thanks :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Sorry it's taken so long, but the next chapter is up! Thanks :)

10/10

makaem

i know Snape is acting the way he is to maintain the bond with Hermione, but how long until he starts to feel things for real? if he does, will he admit it? Great Story.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, I hope you keep reading to see where the line starts to blurr.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Well, I hope you keep reading to see where the line starts to blurr.

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braye27

Directed dreaming... I have read of it, but never experienced it myself. It seems that Dumbledore gave Hermione the encouragement she needed to be able to cooperate with Severus in their shared dreaming.Right now, she feels secure in Severus' embrace as they dream themselves in the backyard of the The Burrow. This is a very interesting and different story, and I can't wait to find out what will happen next.Beth

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

I can usually direct my dreams to some extent at least once a week. Hermione is trying a lot harder than I do ;) I'm working on remaking Dumbledore a bit, yeah. Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

I can usually direct my dreams to some extent at least once a week. Hermione is trying a lot harder than I do ;) I'm working on remaking Dumbledore a bit, yeah. Thanks!

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sunny33

The tie ins between DH and this are well done. :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks!

10/10

FlittterKat

Love the whole concept of the story and it is so very well written. I like how you've woven some of the DH elements into your story but I would be just as happy that events do not play out the same way. In fact I know I would rather not see events happen the same way. For example, I would rather Hermione went back to school, definitely don't want the epilogue to come to pass, etc. But, however your story unfolds, can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks so much! I'm planning to stick pretty close to DH for the general outline, at least for a while...

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks so much! I'm planning to stick pretty close to DH for the general outline, at least for a while...

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nata

It is very sweet that they interact so tenderly in their dreams. The lust spell makes it believable, but I miss Snape's bark.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I've tried to make sure that Snape barks at least once in every scene after getting this review.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I've tried to make sure that Snape barks at least once in every scene after getting this review.

10/10

pookah

An excellent chapter! I really like how you are using the dreams. And the incidents in DH. You are reeling me into this story!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. It's been neat rereading DH with the view of making it SSHG

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. It's been neat rereading DH with the view of making it SSHG

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Persevero

Excellent. Though I hope there aren't too many nods to 'Unfinished Business' - lovely story but *sniffle*! Snape's relative honesty about what is happening is very interesting.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Aww, I am pretty sure that was the only nod. I hope it stays interesting for you. Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Aww, I am pretty sure that was the only nod. I hope it stays interesting for you. Thanks!

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KarenDetroit

Very intriguing premise! I will follow with great interest. Thanks for sharing!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I hope you find the next chapter just as intriguing!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks. I hope you find the next chapter just as intriguing!

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missbluejuju

Very intriguing. I really like this story and its premise so far. I'm eager to see what happens next.More, please!!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'm happy to oblige. The next chapter is inthe queue.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Severus Snape and the Head Girl Curse)

Thanks! I'm happy to oblige. The next chapter is inthe queue.

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