To Claim The Maiden's Kiss
neelix32 Reviews | 7.03/10 (32 Ratings, 0 Likes, 51 Favorites )
A dark figure enters Hermione Granger's home, and she returns to a surprise she certainly wasn't expecting.
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
Work with teenagers.
Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.
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Reviews for To Claim The Maiden's Kiss
Severus knows how to make an anniversary memorable. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!
The boys do have a talent for stating the obvious, don't they?
Loved it. I'm a fan of Snape and Hermione. I'd love to hear about the wedding. You need to write a prequel! Lovely story, Nee.
Would love to see how this developped! :D
I really loved this. I was dieing to see what Harry and Ron thought. Snape/Hermione is my favorite ship. Thanks so much for writeing this.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
lol... thanks for reading and reviewing, so glad you enjoyed it!
Fantastic story! There's so much passion in this little piece of heaven. I love clandestine relationships! Especially under the noses of 'the boys'. Very well written!!! :D
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Oh thank you so much! I loved writing it - I really enjoy stries about Hermione just doing her own thing and being independent of thought... the boys are so stupid! lol..
Moody professor indeed. :)I adore the twist in the middle; it was unexpected and very well done. Fantastic job!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Oooh thank you - I didn't think people were still reading this. I loved writing it actually, I like stories that are unpredictable!
Very cute fic. I wondered why Snape was in hiding. I don't blame Harry and Ron for badgering her with quesitons in this one. Three years is a long time to keep that secret. :)
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thanks for reading my little story. I just thought, how exciting to have secret lover /husband !!!
what a terrific story. loved the marriage surprise. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thanks! It's lovly to get such positive feedback.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thanks! It's lovly to get such positive feedback.
Wow! This was a really cute story. Wonderful plot line. I really liked the end with Harry and Ron asking all those questions too. Keep up the great work!~Jen
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
LOL... I love getting one over on Ron and Harry. Thanks for the great comments.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
LOL... I love getting one over on Ron and Harry. Thanks for the great comments.
I really like it, but i think it needs a little more. that's just me though. I want to know what was going on that they had to hide in the first place. if you don't want to write it for everyone, you could just write it for me and I'll write something for you in turn! anyways, it really was great.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Part of the reason I wrote it this way was so that people would ask questions. So many people are asking me about the back story so perhaps I should do a little one shot about it? Watch this space! Thank you for the review.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Part of the reason I wrote it this way was so that people would ask questions. So many people are asking me about the back story so perhaps I should do a little one shot about it? Watch this space! Thank you for the review.
REal cute. I didn't know what was going on at first, though I coudl see that was your intention. I thought it was especially cool that he came back (I assume each year) on their anniversary. But the questions from Harry and Ron - were they asking her about him all along? It didn't seem like it at the end, but in the beginning they didn't really seem to be friends anymore either. I got a little confused at that, but it was a great story and very entertaining.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
I am pleased you enjoyed it and that it made you ask questions - I don't think Harry and Ron had any idea about her relationship, and the reference to them badgering her - well, in their eyes she's a spinster who does nothing but eat, sleep and work... little did they know!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
I am pleased you enjoyed it and that it made you ask questions - I don't think Harry and Ron had any idea about her relationship, and the reference to them badgering her - well, in their eyes she's a spinster who does nothing but eat, sleep and work... little did they know!
WOOOOW!!!That was some piece of hot writting!!
More More?? lol
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Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it.
GOD that was HOT. Some piece of clithing of mine is gonna remember this for while... 
But I feel slightly frustated. I wish you've written the back story: how they fell in love, where did they marry, the wedding night *very large grin*, that sort of thing. Well I like it very much as it stands now. It was just a thought *imperio...*
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
LOL.... well, the back story is for someone else to write I think - I wanted them to be there already.... Thanks for the review.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
LOL.... well, the back story is for someone else to write I think - I wanted them to be there already.... Thanks for the review.
Lovely. Especially the ending; I love it when Hermione gets to shock the boys!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
hehehe... yes, I enjoyed that bit too! thanks for the review.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
hehehe... yes, I enjoyed that bit too! thanks for the review.
I just adore this story, I love the confidence Hermione shows when confronted by Harry and Ron the next day. That sort of confidence shows a person who loves and knows she (or he) are loved just as much in return. Very well done!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
You hit the nail on the head,
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
. Hermione is married and very much in love with her husband. She has learned to trust him and to live with their secret, and that makes for a powerful committment I think.Thanks for the lovely review :)
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
You hit the nail on the head,
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
. Hermione is married and very much in love with her husband. She has learned to trust him and to live with their secret, and that makes for a powerful committment I think.Thanks for the lovely review :)
Hmm, what more can a girl say than: thank you.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
You are very welcome. I enjoyed writing this very much and it's great to know it's be enjoyed by others. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
You are very welcome. I enjoyed writing this very much and it's great to know it's be enjoyed by others. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Oh wow! Now...this deserves a back story. :) This is a fitting ending to something much, much jucier and wonderful! I absolutely loved it! :)
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
The back story... well, perhaps someone else can add that? I wanted to cut to the chase with this fic, but I am very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
The back story... well, perhaps someone else can add that? I wanted to cut to the chase with this fic, but I am very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing :)
What a homecoming!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Glad you enjoyed it :)
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Glad you enjoyed it :)
ha! for the 20th time, i love this, and all your stuff!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
At the risk of sounding sleazy...we both get around a bit don't we honey?Thanks for all of your reviews, they are very much appreciated.Mwhuaaa! XX
Response from Noe (Reviewer)
I'm really selective who I get around for! 
And you know how much I adore sleazy...
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
At the risk of sounding sleazy...we both get around a bit don't we honey?Thanks for all of your reviews, they are very much appreciated.Mwhuaaa! XX
Response from Noe (Reviewer)
I'm really selective who I get around for! And you know how much I adore sleazy...
That was wonderful! Very Sexy
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Glad you liked it. I think Severus is incredibly sexy, actually - JK missed a trick. Harry Potter - The Blue Version.... the best book never written!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Glad you liked it. I think Severus is incredibly sexy, actually - JK missed a trick. Harry Potter - The Blue Version.... the best book never written!
I love this one-shot! The premise is interesting, and I have to say that it would lend itself to a greatly expanded story... several chapters at least, if you were of a mind to do it. But it is very good on its own!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thanks for your comment Beth. You are right, of course, it does lend itself to something more.... however, I wanted to get it down and complete without the preamble I sometimes get embroiled in. Glad you enjoyed it though 
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Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Thanks for your comment Beth. You are right, of course, it does lend itself to something more.... however, I wanted to get it down and complete without the preamble I sometimes get embroiled in. Glad you enjoyed it though .
Very interesting. Though I find myself wanting more details...how did they first come together? Well, better stated under what circumstances? Where did he go? What is the aftermath? Excellent one-shot, but I think it could have been a wonderful chaptered story. Many thanks!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Ahh rihannon, it would have been wonderful to have expanded this, but the plot bunny wouldn't let me. I had to get in and get out, just like Severus.Thanks for the review though!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
Ahh rihannon, it would have been wonderful to have expanded this, but the plot bunny wouldn't let me. I had to get in and get out, just like Severus.Thanks for the review though!
Heehee! This story incorporates it all. You gave us an entire story in one go, and I love it. Short and sweet, but I have all the backstory I need, and a little 'gotcha' at the end for the two boys, which I always love. Wonderful story, neelix!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
*Does a little curtsey* Thank you very much. It means a lot to get a review from one as exalted as your good self. And such glowing praise. Personally, I think Harry and Ron should get their comeuppance at least once in ever Author's lifetime - this was mine!
Response from neelix (Author of To Claim The Maiden's Kiss)
*Does a little curtsey* Thank you very much. It means a lot to get a review from one as exalted as your good self. And such glowing praise. Personally, I think Harry and Ron should get their comeuppance at least once in ever Author's lifetime - this was mine!