Touch you up some.  Hey you can touch me up some or a lot if you like.  Okay getting my mind out of the gutter now.  I like that they are getting along and that he is starting to like her and opening up to her in a way.

This chapter has it all: Maurauders, dueling, and a first kiss.  Again, I love that, though the story is less than fine literature, it is amusing and well-written.  And 'Mione' doesn't sound so bad coming from young Severus' lips.

"I should have uploaded this a couple of days ago, but I hated to jump in front of deserving stories when queue is so long."
Because the chapter was so good, you're forgiven.
"Pettigzoo" indeed. And they're already holding hands and kissing all in one day. Wasn't she supposed to go slow (according to Snape himself)?
Anyway, I think I don't mind the clichés. In fact I liked them very much and I bet you had fun writing them.

LOL.  Great fight! Pettingzoo was a master stroke.

Gads, Hermione is playing this to the hilt!  And so quick! I thought that when Snape(A) told her to take it slow, let him get to know her that she'd be more subtle! Nope, she dug right in on Severus(S) and went for it! And to see them already holding hands! That was quick!Oh, the quick Sorting, the fire ball and the snappy retorts - she is going to have a ball being Slytherin and a bad girl, isn't she? I loved the Entrance Hall fight! I think I recognized a few time-turner ones all rolled in one there. Teehehe I get such a giggle readign this.  It really is fun.

This story is so very deserving in its own right!!! Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more!!

I enjoyed that.  Although I think you got pretty much every element from every time turner fic fight with the Marauders in that one.  Hee. 

"Pettingzoo"....."Touch you up some" BwaHAHAHAHA!!! Yeah, I bet you'd like to do some touching up... *snerk* heehee! This is fabulous. I see stuff and think, OMG I hope I have never written that!!! LOL Hilarious!

Odkins and Pettingzoo.  You do have a way with names, don't you? 

Oh, Severus and Mione are so cute together!!!!! squeals the fangurl.

This is such a sweet story. I love how the Gryfindors are the bad guys...especially that Pettingzoo fella ha, ha. I am so glad she gave him back some.

Loved it! This is the first parody that I truly enjoyed. Most end up as crack!fics and that just isn't my cuppa.

He hugged Harry? I love it! Looking forward to your update!

Oh My! I can't stop laughing at the obvious, but at the same time, I like the premise! It's really great!

Oh, Southern! Even as a parody, I love the interactions between Severus and Hermione in this story. Some of the deliberately goofy concepts and dialogue make me smile and chuckle, but at the same time I'm enjoying the romance of it all.Heh.  Good job.

Snape embracing Harry.  Now, SW, that is definitely going too far! :P

Very cool! Love this story. He told her he loved her!

All the classic stuff's in here, but it's so well done, it's easy to forget it's a parody.  I loved when Albus and Minerva were laughing at Severus.  And that hug to Harry!  Whoa!

He hugged Harry? I love it! Looking forward to your update!

What a great chapter!!! Lovely! Thank you!

You were absolutely right about the snorts and snikers i will await the rest very impatiently.

I'm enjoying this very much so far.  I'm looking forward to Hermione going back in time.  I suspect you will send the readers a few surprises along the way.

I'm enjoying this very much so far.  I'm looking forward to Hermione going back in time.  I suspect you will send the readers a few surprises along the way.

I have a strong sense of deja vu at the moment...  perhaps the next challenge could be, "How many cliches can be written in  5000 words?"

Where the hell are the billowing robes?!  Good thing you've got another chapter coming... I want to see some billowing being mocked!!!

Mione... oh, how I hate that name. XD