Five: Tango
Chapter 5 of 5
lady_rhianIn which our couple tangos.
ReviewedDisclaimer: It all belongs to JKR.
A/N: This prompt is given to you courtesy of bluestocking79, who admired my icon and asked for a Tango.
I hope you all have enjoyed reading this as much as I have enjoyed writing it! Sometimes, fluff hits just the right spot.
They went to bed after dinner and made love.
And again.
And again.
Severus was bloody exhausted. He had a very happy twenty-five year old sleeping beside him, for which he was grateful, but Merlin did the woman have stamina.
One of these days, he’d be able to keep up.
He turned his head to see the clock. 11:58. Her birthday was nearly over, but he was awake and she looked so lovely, lying there, clearly dreaming. Her movements were slight, subtle, but distinct, and her eyeballs were working beneath her eyelids. She turned over, and the sheets slipped down, revealing her bare bosom.
His breath caught.
Should he?
She had woken him twice…
He smirked and bent down.
*
Meanwhile, Hermione was having a lovely dream.
She looked down at her body, her eyes grazing over her cleavage and down her flat stomach to where the dress flared out at her knees. She admired her shoes – fierce black lacquered pumps which matched her clingy black dress nicely.
He took her hand in his as the music filled the ballroom. She inhaled his cologne and pressed her cheek to his as he raised the hold and, thigh to thigh, feet staggered, leading every so slightly, began to move her around the floor.
She recognized the steps immediately. Tango. Back one, two, cross –
Her lips curved in a contented smile as their feet caressed the parquet in careful, measured steps. It was a slow climb – intense, the sort that burned in your loins and rolled over you in waves. The tango was all about the build up, all about controlling passion, harnessing it...
*
Her eyes fluttered open, and she looked at the clock, slightly flustered at being awoken during so promising a dream. It was midnight. Her birthday was officially over.
And then she felt –
“Severus?” she asked, feeling his hand grazing across her calf and slowly up towards her thigh, stopping to pay attention to her knee, fingers curving, feeling for that tender and oh-so-sensitive indentation.
She gasped. “I was having the most pleasant dream.” She arched her back a little as he moved up her body.
“Is this not pleasant?” he asked lowly, his mouth descending to her collarbone.
“We were dancing the tango,” she murmured.
He chuckled. “I do not know the tango.” Press, touch, kiss, tongue. He released her mouth. “I do, however, know a different sort of tango.”
She smiled, though his head had descended too low for him to see it.
They proceeded to dance that tango sublimely.
Fin.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Birthday
43 Reviews | 6.28/10 Average
Viva la Tango!!! Kudos, lady_rhian! This was so sweet, and I can't believe it took me so long to finish reading it.*bad Beth*
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
I can't believe it took me so long to get to the review! :-) Thank you, love. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Viva la tango, indeed.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
I can't believe it took me so long to get to the review! :-) Thank you, love. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Viva la tango, indeed.
Can Severus come to my house on my birthday and cook for me? *sigh*I adore the way he puts so much thought into her "Special Day."Beth
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Oh, yes. *sends Severus over to Beth*And I have to write a romantic Severus sometime... :)xo
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Oh, yes. *sends Severus over to Beth*And I have to write a romantic Severus sometime... :)xo
Very quick thinking, Severus! Now he will have to come up with a reason for having asked her out to dinner. Perhaps, if he is lucky, the books will distract her and she will forget to ask him, "Why?"Nah..... not a chance.Love this!Beth
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
*gigglesnort**adores you*Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
*gigglesnort**adores you*Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :-)
Wow! Harry can really follow orders, and Severus made his wife happy!!! Rewards for Severus to follow, I'm sure.8^)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Beth! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to these. I have been quite remiss in answering reviews -- my apologies. I am so pleased you enjoyed this story. :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Beth! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to these. I have been quite remiss in answering reviews -- my apologies. I am so pleased you enjoyed this story. :-)
:) some very nice fluff, if I do say so myself.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! So glad you liked it. :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! So glad you liked it. :-)
those are some beautiful roses.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Yes, they are.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Yes, they are.
*happy sigh* That was a very lovely story. Can I expect to read about what she would do to his birthday?
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I think this series was a one-time thing, but we'll see.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I think this series was a one-time thing, but we'll see.
When I read he was making meatballs I thought of Lady and the Tramp too. Nice chapter.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thanks! :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thanks! :-)
lovely. i would wish to be in her place. thanks so much 
double delight, of course!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Now that's a tango!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
I do agree. :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
I do agree. :-)
This is absolute perfection! It made me want to be them... =)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)
Lovely, absolutely lovely!!!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)
Very subtle and extreamly hot! I like Severus's version of the Tango. :)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Glad you enjoyed it! I like his tango idea, too. :)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Glad you enjoyed it! I like his tango idea, too. :)
*applaud* Nicely ended.~Lotm
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you, lotm! :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you, lotm! :-)
I love back stories. It's always funny to see Severus fumbling with his feelings before he realises he's fallen in love.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Too true! So glad you liked it, dear.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Too true! So glad you liked it, dear.
All I can think of right now is Texas 'In Demand' video clip featuring Alan Rickman. OMG, somebody please have mercy on my poor soul
In behalf of Hermione, I thank you for a wonderful birthday. /M
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you, m'dear! So glad you liked it!And that video is... mmm... quite sexy. :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I need to learn how to tango. Imagine running into AR or SS one day, and having to admit that I don't know how to dance ;-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you, m'dear! So glad you liked it!And that video is... mmm... quite sexy. :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I need to learn how to tango. Imagine running into AR or SS one day, and having to admit that I don't know how to dance ;-)
Yum. Does he do take-out?
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
I hope he does! :) Glad you liked it!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
I hope he does! :) Glad you liked it!
Snotty hankie in the cleavage. Hope she Scourgified it LOL
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Too true! :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Too true! :-)
Lovely! I adore Speghetti and Meatballs, what a great birthday dinner. Hope he makes it up to Hermione for not letting her have her wicked way with him. :)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Indeed he will. :-) The last installment is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Indeed he will. :-) The last installment is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing!
Oh, I can just imagine Severus using his nose to roll a meatball towards Hermione. Sweet as sugar :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you, sweets! :-)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you, sweets! :-)
I love re-reading fabulous fic!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
You are too good to me, darlin'. :)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
You are too good to me, darlin'. :)
A date with Severus to a bookstore... I like it.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
*raises hand* Me, too. :) Ideal first date location.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
*raises hand* Me, too. :) Ideal first date location.
Nice progression of the tale. I especially like the two rejected reasons, ‘To shut you up’ did not seem like a good answer.Neither did ‘Because your dress looks like cling-film and it would peel off nicely.’ I nearly laughed in front of everyone, and I'm not suposed to eve be on the computer! *hugs* Looking forward to the next.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
You hit on what are possibly my two favorite lines in this installment. So glad you enjoyed it! :-) And laughing at inappropriate times/in inappropriate places is great fun. Thank you for the review!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
You hit on what are possibly my two favorite lines in this installment. So glad you enjoyed it! :-) And laughing at inappropriate times/in inappropriate places is great fun. Thank you for the review!
Oh I love it!I had to bite my lip a couple of time so I wouldn't laugh out loud. ' Decent women did not walk like that.' hahaTell your Muse to hurry, I want more. Please... /M
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
So glad you're enjoying it, thank you! This series has actually been finished for a while; I'm just now submitting it to TPP. The next segment is in the queue.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
So glad you're enjoying it, thank you! This series has actually been finished for a while; I'm just now submitting it to TPP. The next segment is in the queue.
Another fab chapter! Well done, can't wait to read more.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! Installment four is in the queue.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)
Thank you! Installment four is in the queue.