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The Birthday

43 Reviews | 6.28/10 (43 Ratings, 0 Likes, 29 Favorites )

Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 2,760 Words 5 Chapters Complete

It's Hermione's first birthday as a married woman. However will she and Severus celebrate? A five-part series written during the mad-crazy Portus Envy season.

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: One: Coffee

Chapter 2: Two: Roses

Chapter 3: Three: Books

Chapter 4: Four: Dinner

Chapter 5: Five: Tango

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lady_rhian

Member Since 2006 | 37 Stories | Favorited by 238 | 216 Reviews Written | 1,498 Review Responses

The Tenant of Lyonesse Hall is on a temporary hiatus. Look for an update in winter 2012!

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Reviews for The Birthday

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10/10

braye27

Viva la Tango!!! Kudos, lady_rhian! This was so sweet, and I can't believe it took me so long to finish reading it.*bad Beth*

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I can't believe it took me so long to get to the review! :-) Thank you, love. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Viva la tango, indeed.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I can't believe it took me so long to get to the review! :-) Thank you, love. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Viva la tango, indeed.

10/10

braye27

Can Severus come to my house on my birthday and cook for me? *sigh*I adore the way he puts so much thought into her "Special Day."Beth

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Oh, yes. *sends Severus over to Beth*And I have to write a romantic Severus sometime... :)xo

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Oh, yes. *sends Severus over to Beth*And I have to write a romantic Severus sometime... :)xo

10/10

braye27

Very quick thinking, Severus! Now he will have to come up with a reason for having asked her out to dinner. Perhaps, if he is lucky, the books will distract her and she will forget to ask him, "Why?"Nah..... not a chance.Love this!Beth

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*gigglesnort**adores you*Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*gigglesnort**adores you*Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :-)

10/10

braye27

Wow! Harry can really follow orders, and Severus made his wife happy!!! Rewards for Severus to follow, I'm sure.8^)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Beth! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to these. I have been quite remiss in answering reviews -- my apologies. I am so pleased you enjoyed this story. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Beth! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to these. I have been quite remiss in answering reviews -- my apologies. I am so pleased you enjoyed this story. :-)

0/10

mock_turtle

:) some very nice fluff, if I do say so myself.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :-)

0/10

mock_turtle

those are some beautiful roses.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Yes, they are.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Yes, they are.

10/10

snitchette

*happy sigh* That was a very lovely story. Can I expect to read about what she would do to his birthday?

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I think this series was a one-time thing, but we'll see.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I think this series was a one-time thing, but we'll see.

10/10

snitchette

When I read he was making meatballs I thought of Lady and the Tramp too. Nice chapter.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thanks! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thanks! :-)

0/10

kimjo2

lovely. i would wish to be in her place. thanks so much double delight, of course!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! :-)

0/10

sunny33

Now that's a tango!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I do agree. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I do agree. :-)

10/10

_Levicorpus_

This is absolute perfection! It made me want to be them... =)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)

10/10

Sampdoria

Lovely, absolutely lovely!!!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)

10/10

Marty21

Very subtle and extreamly hot! I like Severus's version of the Tango. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! I like his tango idea, too. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! I like his tango idea, too. :)

0/10

ladyofthemasque

*applaud* Nicely ended.~Lotm

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, lotm! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, lotm! :-)

10/10

snitchette

I love back stories. It's always funny to see Severus fumbling with his feelings before he realises he's fallen in love.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! So glad you liked it, dear.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! So glad you liked it, dear.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

All I can think of right now is Texas 'In Demand' video clip featuring Alan Rickman. OMG, somebody please have mercy on my poor soulIn behalf of Hermione, I thank you for a wonderful birthday. /M

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, m'dear! So glad you liked it!And that video is... mmm... quite sexy. :)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)

I need to learn how to tango. Imagine running into AR or SS one day, and having to admit that I don't know how to dance ;-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, m'dear! So glad you liked it!And that video is... mmm... quite sexy. :)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)

I need to learn how to tango. Imagine running into AR or SS one day, and having to admit that I don't know how to dance ;-)

0/10

sunny33

Yum. Does he do take-out?

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I hope he does! :) Glad you liked it!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I hope he does! :) Glad you liked it!

0/10

sunny33

Snotty hankie in the cleavage. Hope she Scourgified it LOL

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! :-)

10/10

Marty21

Lovely! I adore Speghetti and Meatballs, what a great birthday dinner. Hope he makes it up to Hermione for not letting her have her wicked way with him. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Indeed he will. :-) The last installment is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Indeed he will. :-) The last installment is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh, I can just imagine Severus using his nose to roll a meatball towards Hermione. Sweet as sugar :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, sweets! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, sweets! :-)

10/10

Chillit

I love re-reading fabulous fic!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You are too good to me, darlin'. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You are too good to me, darlin'. :)

0/10

tonksinger

A date with Severus to a bookstore... I like it.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*raises hand* Me, too. :) Ideal first date location.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*raises hand* Me, too. :) Ideal first date location.

10/10

beaweasley2

Nice progression of the tale. I especially like the two rejected reasons, ‘To shut you up’ did not seem like a good answer.Neither did ‘Because your dress looks like cling-film and it would peel off nicely.’ I nearly laughed in front of everyone, and I'm not suposed to eve be on the computer! *hugs* Looking forward to the next.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You hit on what are possibly my two favorite lines in this installment. So glad you enjoyed it! :-) And laughing at inappropriate times/in inappropriate places is great fun. Thank you for the review!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You hit on what are possibly my two favorite lines in this installment. So glad you enjoyed it! :-) And laughing at inappropriate times/in inappropriate places is great fun. Thank you for the review!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh I love it!I had to bite my lip a couple of time so I wouldn't laugh out loud. ' Decent women did not walk like that.' hahaTell your Muse to hurry, I want more. Please... /M

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you're enjoying it, thank you! This series has actually been finished for a while; I'm just now submitting it to TPP. The next segment is in the queue.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you're enjoying it, thank you! This series has actually been finished for a while; I'm just now submitting it to TPP. The next segment is in the queue.

10/10

Marty21

Another fab chapter! Well done, can't wait to read more.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Installment four is in the queue.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Installment four is in the queue.

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