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The Birthday Chapter 2: Two: Roses
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The Birthday

1: One: Coffee

2: Two: Roses

3: Three: Books

4: Four: Dinner

5: Five: Tango

Two: Roses

The Birthday

Chapter 2 of 5

lady_rhian

The birthday and unabashed fluff continues.

Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 2,760 Words 5 Chapters Complete
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A/N: This portion was prompted by lurkerfromoz.


They rose again an hour or so later, made a fresh pot of coffee, and dressed for their scheduled lunch with the Doctors Granger. They were going to a fashionable bistro in Muggle London.

Severus had been surprised by his in-laws’ reaction to their daughter’s – unconventional – relationship. They themselves had an eleven-year age difference and were remarkably open minded.

It had made everything much easier.

“How do I look?” Hermione asked, coming out of the bedroom to twirl for him.

His breath caught at her loveliness. The blue dress was modest but form fitting, appropriate for lunch and any activities that may follow.

He nodded. “I’m speechless.”

She grinned and took his hand. “Let’s go.”

*

Lunch was pleasant, peppered with professional anecdotes and stories of Hermione’s childhood, so different from his own. Hermione had kept a chaste hand on his knee nearly the entire time.

When they arrived back at their flat, they found a dozen vases of Double Delight roses scattered across the sitting room, kitchen, bath, and their bedroom.

Thank you, Harry, Severus thought mildly as Hermione let out a delighted squeal. You actually followed instructions for once.

She kissed his cheek. “Thank you – they’re my favorite!” she exclaimed as she took off to find the rest of the vases.

A very content Severus went to sit in the kitchen, inhaling the flowers’ rich, sweet scent and drinking up the sight of his joyful young wife.

*

To see Double Delight roses, click here -- they are truly stunning. (Let's ignore that they were fresh-cut in September when that's really not their month.)

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Birthday

43 Reviews  |  6.28/10 Average

10/10

braye27

Viva la Tango!!!  Kudos, lady_rhian!  This was so sweet, and I can't believe it took me so long to finish reading it.*bad Beth*

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I can't believe it took me so long to get to the review! :-) Thank you, love. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Viva la tango, indeed.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I can't believe it took me so long to get to the review! :-) Thank you, love. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Viva la tango, indeed.

10/10

braye27

Can Severus come to my house on my birthday and cook for me?  *sigh*I adore the way he puts so much thought into her "Special Day."Beth

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Oh, yes. *sends Severus over to Beth*And I have to write a romantic Severus sometime... :)xo

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Oh, yes. *sends Severus over to Beth*And I have to write a romantic Severus sometime... :)xo

10/10

braye27

Very quick thinking, Severus!  Now he will have to come up with a reason for having asked her out to dinner.  Perhaps, if he is lucky, the books will distract her and she will forget to ask him, "Why?"Nah..... not a chance.Love this!Beth

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*gigglesnort**adores you*Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*gigglesnort**adores you*Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :-)

10/10

braye27

Wow!  Harry can really follow orders, and Severus made his wife happy!!!  Rewards for Severus to follow, I'm sure.8^)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Beth! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to these. I have been quite remiss in answering reviews -- my apologies. I am so pleased you enjoyed this story. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Beth! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to get to these. I have been quite remiss in answering reviews -- my apologies. I am so pleased you enjoyed this story. :-)

0/10

mock_turtle

:)  some very nice fluff, if I do say so myself.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :-)

0/10

mock_turtle

those are some beautiful roses.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Yes, they are.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Yes, they are.

10/10

snitchette

*happy sigh* That was a very lovely story. Can I expect to read about what she would do to his birthday?

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I think this series was a one-time thing, but we'll see.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I think this series was a one-time thing, but we'll see.

10/10

snitchette

When I read he was making meatballs I thought of Lady and the Tramp too. Nice chapter.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thanks! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thanks! :-)

0/10

kimjo2

lovely. i would wish to be in her place. thanks so much double delight, of course!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! :-)

0/10

sunny33

Now that's a tango!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I do agree. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I do agree. :-)

10/10

_Levicorpus_

This is absolute perfection! It made me want to be them... =)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)

10/10

Sampdoria

Lovely, absolutely lovely!!!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)

10/10

Marty21

Very subtle and extreamly hot!  I like Severus's version of the Tango. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! I like his tango idea, too. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Glad you enjoyed it! I like his tango idea, too. :)

0/10

ladyofthemasque

*applaud*  Nicely ended.~Lotm

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, lotm! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, lotm! :-)

10/10

snitchette

I love back stories. It's always funny to see Severus fumbling with his feelings before he realises he's fallen in love.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! So glad you liked it, dear.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! So glad you liked it, dear.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

All I can think of right now is Texas 'In Demand' video clip featuring Alan Rickman. OMG, somebody please have mercy on my poor soulIn behalf of Hermione, I thank you for a wonderful birthday. /M

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, m'dear! So glad you liked it!And that video is... mmm... quite sexy. :)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)

I need to learn how to tango. Imagine running into AR or SS one day, and having to admit that I don't know how to dance ;-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, m'dear! So glad you liked it!And that video is... mmm... quite sexy. :)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)

I need to learn how to tango. Imagine running into AR or SS one day, and having to admit that I don't know how to dance ;-)

0/10

sunny33

Yum.  Does he do take-out?

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I hope he does! :) Glad you liked it!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

I hope he does! :) Glad you liked it!

0/10

sunny33

Snotty hankie in the cleavage.  Hope she Scourgified it LOL

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Too true! :-)

10/10

Marty21

Lovely!  I adore Speghetti and Meatballs, what a great birthday dinner. Hope he makes it up to Hermione for not letting her have her wicked way with him. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Indeed he will. :-) The last installment is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Indeed he will. :-) The last installment is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh, I can just imagine Severus using his nose to roll a meatball towards Hermione. Sweet as sugar :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, sweets! :-)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you, sweets! :-)

10/10

Chillit

I love re-reading fabulous fic! 

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You are too good to me, darlin'. :)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You are too good to me, darlin'. :)

0/10

tonksinger

A date with Severus to a bookstore... I like it.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*raises hand* Me, too. :) Ideal first date location.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

*raises hand* Me, too. :) Ideal first date location.

10/10

beaweasley2

Nice progression of the tale. I especially like the two rejected reasons, ‘To shut you up’ did not seem like a good answer.Neither did ‘Because your dress looks like cling-film and it would peel off nicely.’ I nearly laughed in front of everyone, and I'm not suposed to eve be on the computer! *hugs* Looking forward to the next.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You hit on what are possibly my two favorite lines in this installment. So glad you enjoyed it! :-) And laughing at inappropriate times/in inappropriate places is great fun. Thank you for the review!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

You hit on what are possibly my two favorite lines in this installment. So glad you enjoyed it! :-) And laughing at inappropriate times/in inappropriate places is great fun. Thank you for the review!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh I love it!I had to bite my lip a couple of time so I wouldn't laugh out loud. ' Decent women did not walk like that.' hahaTell your Muse to hurry, I want more. Please... /M

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you're enjoying it, thank you! This series has actually been finished for a while; I'm just now submitting it to TPP. The next segment is in the queue.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

So glad you're enjoying it, thank you! This series has actually been finished for a while; I'm just now submitting it to TPP. The next segment is in the queue.

10/10

Marty21

Another fab chapter!  Well done, can't wait to read more.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Installment four is in the queue.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of The Birthday)

Thank you! Installment four is in the queue.

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