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Becoming Silhouettes
rhiannonofthemoon190 Reviews | 6.62/10 (190 Ratings, 0 Likes, 75 Favorites )
Years after the fall of Voldemort, a mysterious illness throws the wizarding world into chaos. While struggling to find a cure, Hermione learns new things about old acquaintances, and Severus learns that self-preservation may not be the path he wants to travel. Harry learns the price of neglect, and Ron learns why “May you live in interesting times” is a curse and not a blessing. Draco learns… very little at all.
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5/4/08
Hello, dear readers and fellow writers!
I read and write in the Inuyasha and Harry Potter fandoms, preferring non-canon pairing that involve bad boys of the fandoms: Sesshomaru, Snape, Draco, Lucius (mmm, Slytherins), and Hermione is the Potterverse bicycle.
Completed fics in the Potterverse:
* The Devil is in the Details (HG/SS - M for language and violence - and I'm happy to mention that it was a Featured Story at TPP for 2/08 and nominated for the SS/HG awards Round Two)
* For All Intents and Purposes (HG/SS - M for language and violence)
Completed fics for Inuyasha:
* Darkness (Kag/Sessh - NC17 for smut - won multiple awards at IY groups)
* To Shed a Little Light (Kag/Sessh - NC17 for smut- won multiple awards at IY groups)
* Quadrangle (Kag/Sessh - NC17 for smut)
* Moving Pictures (Sessh/OC - NC17 for smut)
* Don't Know What You've Got 'til it's Gone (Kag/IY - NC17 for smut - and this was my first fic ever, so be warned)
WIP:
* Cereal Box Romance (Kag/Sessh - Inuyasha - updated irregularly- won multiple awards at IY groups)
* Primal (Kag/Sessh - Inuyasha - pretty much abandoned)
Upcoming projects? Yes. I've got a one-shot HG/SS cooking that I may never finish or post, and I've started a multi-chapter HG/SS as well. I will probably write a number of the chapters before I start posting, so you probably won't see anything new for a while.
Reviews for Becoming Silhouettes
So far so good. I wonder what this skin disease is. Is it serious or just embarrassing?
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks! Only time will tell... :)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks! Only time will tell... :)
Liliputs sounds disgustingly hilarious and the conversation between Draco and Hermione while there was just hilarious. Thanks for the giggles.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
I always thought that Draco would be the type to appreciate a good boob job. ;)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
I always thought that Draco would be the type to appreciate a good boob job. ;)
A mystery and use of two prompts, you must like a challenge. Great use of prompt 19, can't wait to see what you do with the other. I love that you have tied in many characters we already know. Nice work!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks! :) I'm enjoying myself, and if the readers like it, what could be better?
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks! :) I'm enjoying myself, and if the readers like it, what could be better?
Thank you, this is very interesting! And I cheered in my mind when you described him with small stature, I'm so bored with the fanon portrayals of him as a some sort of lamppost. Looking forvard for more!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Funny that you mention the small stature - another reviewer razed me for it. Though I like a tall Snape as much as the next fangirl, I prefer to write him as the shorter man that he is. Thanks!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Funny that you mention the small stature - another reviewer razed me for it. Though I like a tall Snape as much as the next fangirl, I prefer to write him as the shorter man that he is. Thanks!
Interesting combination of these two prompts. I like that you've included Draco in it and evidently he's plotting and plotting.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Can't have a Draco that isn't plotting! I actually already had the plot mapped out - the prompts flowed seemlessly into what I wanted to do. So, the fic isn't prompt-centric - they are subplots. If that makes sense.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Can't have a Draco that isn't plotting! I actually already had the plot mapped out - the prompts flowed seemlessly into what I wanted to do. So, the fic isn't prompt-centric - they are subplots. If that makes sense.
A very interesting first chapter, I am pretty sure that I will come to like this story very much and I look forward to read more!!!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thank you! I hope that do you like it. :)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thank you! I hope that do you like it. :)
This is a very interesting beginning and I am looking forward to the rest!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thank you! I'm glad that you gave it a look. :)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thank you! I'm glad that you gave it a look. :)
Very interesting start. Looking forward to the nest instalment :)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
So glad to hear it! I always get nervous when posting something new.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
So glad to hear it! I always get nervous when posting something new.
Oh this is a tantalizing beginning. And when I read teh prompts my pulse quickened. You hit the Hermione one already - but not a hit of Severus'! It'll be interesting to see how you weave this one.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks! It will take a few chapters to get there - have to build it up, you know. ;)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks! It will take a few chapters to get there - have to build it up, you know. ;)
Thirty begins your fourth decade. 0 to 10 is the first. 10-20 is the second. 20-30 is the third. 30 to 40 is the fourth. And the name is Zabini, not Zambini. The sores are weals not wheals. Small stature?????? The man is 6 ft 1 inches tall! Small stature only next to Hagrid. I like the story but you have definite things which need fixing.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Actually, "wheals" and "weals" are alternate spellings of the same word. As for stature, the canon Snape doesn't seem to be that tall. He is shorter than Sirius Black, probably putting him just below six feet. Alan Rickman is tall, but I'm not using that. However, my Draco is tall, and in comparison (the thought was Draco's after all), Snape would seem short. As far as I'm concerned, 6'1" is average and at the low end of acceptable.As for the other two, you got me. Unfortunately, mistakes happen.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Actually, "wheals" and "weals" are alternate spellings of the same word. As for stature, the canon Snape doesn't seem to be that tall. He is shorter than Sirius Black, probably putting him just below six feet. Alan Rickman is tall, but I'm not using that. However, my Draco is tall, and in comparison (the thought was Draco's after all), Snape would seem short. As far as I'm concerned, 6'1" is average and at the low end of acceptable.As for the other two, you got me. Unfortunately, mistakes happen.
Gaaahhhhh! I'm out of chapter updates!! Nooooo! (I guess I should have verified that this was a finished story before I started reading it!) Please update soon, I'm loving the story so far and so excited to see what happens- where's Ginny, is Hermione infected, will her and Snape finally shag like bunnies?? Please update!!
Hmm, had to stop and leave a review to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story so far, and I'm finding the premise of it very original so far! (dark, zombie-producing mushrooms? Lol)
Also, have to ask if you write any Labyrinth fanfiction (I couldn't help but place the chapter title at first glance!) If you do, I'd love to know what boards you post on, and your author name if different; labyrinth and hp are the only fanfiction genres i read! :)
OMG. I love this story. It totally gets the heart pumping! I was totally freaked out at the end! I hope Hermione doesn't get the funk! I really wish Severus & Draco would stop playing games, but I know thats a big part of whats going on. Where the crap is Ginny? And who is the new overlord anyways? I can't wait till you actually answer these questions! It's like you're trying to make my head explode! Thanks for the update hon, I honestly can't wait to see what happens next. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thanks so much! That's such a fantastic compliment! The next chapter should answer some questions... of course, I have to finish the one I'm working on before I post it. ;P
Bugger! This is completed on TPP!! I had just finished 10 chapters on FFN. I do hope you are well and that you didn't intentionally abandon this story. I hope you update soon. xx
Holy Crap. Okay like all week I was trying to get through this story and I was so upset that I'm all caught up now because I want to know what happens! There have been so many different specific scenes that made me laugh out loud throughout chapters 3-9 but I didn't review every single chapter because I just wanted to get to the next one! You really have an awesome mix of humor, drama and angst here. I love it! I'm so sad that Severus lost his house! And I seriously hope he wakes up and realizes that she doesn't want Draco! I can't wait to see what happens next! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Thank you! I'm glad that the humor comes across. By the fourth and fifth reading, I can't tell if it's funny or not. Personally, I like a mix of genres. Too much angst is, well, too angsty and can drag one down. I hope to get the next chapter up soon!
Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed this during the challenge and am happy to have caught it again. I have it favorited so I won't miss any updates.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
I'm glad that you are enjoying it! I know it's a little off-beat for the fandom.
Great chapter and so much to think about. Good thing Severus had the foresight to use spells to fire proof his belongings.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
He seems the type to be prepared. :)
Yea! plot twists that mean more of this incredible story! Thank you so much for all of your hard work on this piece - it is wonderful!! Really enjoying the very slow reveal of SS feelings.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Oh yes, there is plenty more story. :) So glad you like it! I know things are moving slowly between them, but in this instance, it must.
Yay, update! Here's an idea-- Just send Draco over to Harry's and keep the lovebirds together and let's see what Mr. Honorable thinks about surviving Hermione, then.No, do it your way.... you are way better at plotting than I am.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Ha! Quality alone time... Don't worry, I've got something in store for them.
Lots of crazy stuff going on. Poor, homeless Severus. Can't he recognize that he deserves to be happy too? Hermione needs to get on that right away.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Well... he thinks he is happy in his own way. People define happiness differently. Hermione will simply have to convince him to redefine it. :)
I love the action and adventure of your story except for the burning of Spinner's End. Poor Severus, I hope he gather's up his inner Gryffendor and goes after Hermione, in Slytherin fashion of course.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Yes, it was a pity about Severus' house. Poor guy, as if he hasn't suffered enough.
silly severus, can't he tell she likes him? poor guy... can't wait to read more!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Well, he's pretty determined to keep her at a distance. It's also not like he's had a lot of experience in relationships or recognizing certain social cues.
Oh man, who and why were they attacking Severus' house with bricks and M-coctails? And all those books! Burned! Such a waste! Wake up Severus! You're supper dense and blind! Only you can be so pig headed and stubborn. Really, She finally gets him home and she's sending them to Harrys?
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Grimmauld Place is safer - Harry has protections on it that Hermione never bothered to do. Good point, though. :)I know, the poor books. :( Poor Severus.
The mushrooms were infused with the wizards essence and used to ensorcelled all those in his territory who had a natural talent for Dark Magic.
I've always thought Ginny's run in with Riddle would have serious after effects on her which were never addressed in the books.
I'm glad you're updating this story again. Off to the next chapter.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Ha! I'm not going to say anything about that. :)
I suspected that Ginny was infected badly because of her former possession by V, but now I wonder if she is a new Dark Lord. Woohoo! good chapter, very exciting. I love this story!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of Becoming Silhouettes)
Intuitive musings. ;) Glad you like it!