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Future Perfect
Doomspark136 Reviews | 6.01/10 (136 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Fourteen year old Severus discovers that there's a very good reason why Time-turners are restricted.
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Reviews for Future Perfect
I absolutely DID NOT see that coming. Bloody Brilliant!!!!!! I cannot wait to read more. This is quite our of the ordinary, refreshing. I can't wait to see where it leads.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it! I love ending chapters with cliffies.
Holy crap!!!! Bad Severus! Bad! He screwed everything over!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Not exactly...
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Ooops - now that's most interesting... can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: More surprises to come! I promise you that!
Wow this last line left me ... openmouthed and speechless. I don't know if Riddle being headmaster is AU or just a consequence od Severus' use of the time turner. I guess I'll know soon enough. This is a very fantastic story and I can't wait to have more.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Future Perfect is *very* AU. Look for more surprises to come. But rest assured, there are logical reasons for the way things are. At least, I think they're logical.
Interesting. Headmaster Riddle. Better than Lord Voldie!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
True! Hope you continue to read!
Oh my! This looks to be wonderful! and thanks for bringing up the whole Sirius barely punished for attempting to kill a fellow student thing! That has disturbed me for a long time.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Same here - as far as I can tell from the books, Sirius never paid any consequences for his own actions. I've always thought that his stay in Azkaban was karma making up for what he did to Snape.
yikes! Doomie, you always leave us wanting more. I don't know if fourteen-year-old Severus knows who Tom Riddle is/was, or if young-Severus' absence in the past changed things that drastically. I will try to be patient while waiting for the next chapter, but no promises. thanks for the update!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
I love my cliffies - you should know that by now. Hope you continue to enjoy my AU tale. More surprises to come!
What??? No way! More, more, more!But wasn't Voldemort Voldemort way before Severus was 14? Or is this his not-so-evil twin brother?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Well - when you start messing around with Time Travel, strange things happen. I explain a little bit about how it works later on.
Duh, duh, duh, duh.....Uh oh!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
*grin* I hope that's a good "duh"!
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
It was, and it was very musical too.
Well, you've definitely caught my attention. That last line is completely and utterly evil, you do realize that, right? I look forward to more!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Love my cliffhangers, I do. I'll post more soon.
Well, this has taken an interesting turn. I look forward to reading more.