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Future Perfect
Doomspark136 Reviews | 6.01/10 (136 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Fourteen year old Severus discovers that there's a very good reason why Time-turners are restricted.
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very interesting premise. well written except for quote: <<“That’s blackmail!”...“Yes it is.” >> if you want to get technical, it's extortion - blackmail involves money. still, i'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter and finding out what happens to severus.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Agreed that it's technically extortion - but I'm not sure a 14 year old would know the difference. Hence "blackmail".
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Agreed that it's technically extortion - but I'm not sure a 14 year old would know the difference. Hence "blackmail".
Oh, that is really not a good thing, now is it?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Oh things are going to get interesting for Sev. Trust me.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Oh things are going to get interesting for Sev. Trust me.
A time turner fic! That is one of my favorite kinds. This one is full of suspense already! Poor Severus! I wonder where and when he ends up.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
I'll give you a clue: Think about the last hex Remus put on the Time-turner.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
I'll give you a clue: Think about the last hex Remus put on the Time-turner.
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Ooh, I love stories with young Severus, and I love time turner fics! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Uh ohhh! Big trouble in Slytherin land... Where did Snape end up? This is a nail bitter for sure. Accio next chapter! Great read by the way... cheers!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
You'll have to wait and see! I hope you won't be disappointed.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
You'll have to wait and see! I hope you won't be disappointed.
Oops! Where is he going to end up, or rather ,when?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Wait and see!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Wait and see!
I like stories with a good Tom Riddle. Nice to see Lucius decent as well. :)
surprises, indeed! i can't wait to see how this plays out...facinating concept. thanks and mucho smoochies
I am so glad to see this update appear. I reread all the chapters and enjoyed it just as much the second time. I look forward to seeing how Severus copes this time around. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Yay! You updated! Sweeeeet!
Such interesting twists in the new world. Can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Pettigrew and Black? Is she blind? LOL
OMG OMG OMG!!! I can't believe what I've just read. And more importantly I can't wait to doscover more. This alternate world is wonderful. Just one thing: will we know what will happen in the "real world" about Severus' disapearing?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
*chortle*
James Potter married Petunia??? There is no Lily Evans? Pettigrew with Narcissa.... so he is wed to Sirius' cousin. Is there a Bellatrix? Tonks? And why hasn't Lucius married? Oh, you've certainly spun this universe around! I'm eager to see what else you're going to do to shock us. THANK YOU for the new chapter!!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Next chapter will explain a little bit more about Lily and Narcissa. I'll very carefully not answer any more of your questions.
This is fascinating. I can't wait to see how it progresses :)
I LOVE this new world you've created! It's positively rife with possibility.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy the tale!
Oh please, please, please, continue this story! It's been sitting all forlorn in my favorites for a long time and is pining for an update.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Updated! I'll try to do better.
wait.... so there's no school record of a vanished student named Severus Snape? this Lucius doesn't remember giving the TIme-Turner tohim? so in this timeline, Severus never existed?? uh-oh.... and will there still be a Narcissa and Draco and Dobby and Hermioone in this universe? thanks for the new chapter, and I suppose I'm still waiting for the scene for which you expect to be lynched!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Exactly! And you'll have to wait and see!
I think it would be interesting to have him re-Sorted. Perhaps in this new time stream, Slytherins are different than what we're used to. Wow, you've opened up a lot of opportunities for this story. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
I am quite confused by this alternate universe you've created, but it's quite intriguing and I'm looking forward to where you will lead this.
I remember back in the 70s, when I was in college, reading an essay about time travel theories. I always disliked the theory Flitwick has proposed here, because if there are infinite variations on a time line, somewhere there is a me that is not lucky and happy.That is a silly reason to dislike a time travel theory. Anyway, this story is wonderful, but what happend to Severus Snape in this timeline? perhaps he was never born, and that is what attracted him to land in this stream which did not hold his duplicate. (there's a good idea.) Perhaps he was killed as a child. or born a squib.Looking forward to more! thank you for sharing this wonderful tale
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
I'm a huge fan of alternate history novels. Harry Turtledove's "The Guns of the South" is one of my favorites. The idea of going back into the past, changing one event, and then extrapolating an alternate future as a result is just... intriguing.I'm glad you're enjoying my story!
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
I saw a college course listed, in a college I ended up not attending, that was a history class in which you researched and wrote what would happen if your choice of event had occured differently. I never forgot that neat idea for an independent research/creative paper. (or story)
He sounded a bit like Hermione there... "I read it in Hogwarts: A History" Lol.
Sirius... *shakes head* What was he thinking? An orphanage? It seems as if he hasn't changed too much from the past.
I must say, this is fascinating. I don't think I've read any thing that has used the time turner as a springboard to alternate realities. I've always liked your writing, looking forward to reading more of this.
A touch-feely Filch... That's possibly more startling than Tom Riddle being Headmaster. I can't wait to see what else you have in store!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Well... Filch has always been one of my favorite characters to write about. He has a role in Catspaws and The Varlet, and he's central to The Room, One Night in Azkaban, Pride Goes, and All Hallows Eve.
Very interesting bit of theory there, sounds quite like a physics theory I read about a while back. I like how everyone's so similar to their counterparts and yet seem different, too. I sort of wonder whether this is the "time stream" in which what might have happened had Riddle been given the DADA post years and years ago. Just my idea, ya. ^_^ Enjoying and looking forward to the next installment.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
This is what happens when a Science-fiction geek starts writing HP fanfic...
Response from Ugly Kitten (Reviewer)
LOL, I know precisely what you mean. Did you base it off of String Theory, btw? Though, of course, String Theory bases itself in interdimensional means rather than simple time fluxes. ^^; I'm a Science geek. Unfortunately, my talent seems to lie with coming up with Potions and new magical creatures. It's what happens when a former Pokemon artist gets her hands on a weird world. ^^;
cool! talk about a tt story with a twist! love it! thanks so much.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
Glad you're enjoying it!
Indeed there are a lot of changes for poor Severus to adjust. I hope everything will get better for him.
Hey I've just realized that Hermione must be in her fifth year too as well as Harry and Ron. When are they to meet ?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Future Perfect)
*grin* That would be telling! You'll have to wait and see what happens next!