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A Slytherin Concession
fizzabella96 Reviews | 6.32/10 (96 Ratings, 0 Likes, 68 Favorites )
A series of 6 100 word drabbles featuring Severus's idea of negotiations.
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fizzabella
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I'm Lynnette. I'm a wife, stay at home mother of 9, with 5 daughters and 2 sons still at home. I have two grandsonz and one granddaughter:)
I LOVE to read, I LOVE to write, and am thrilled to be published here on The Petulant Poetess. I love the Harry Potter books because of my kids, and hope to get good enough to become an accredited beta reader at some point:)
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oh yes, I just love this:-))
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much, I'm tickled pink that you enjoyed it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much, I'm tickled pink that you enjoyed it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I love you. No I love them. Well with this I think I shall love everyone I meet today. Can we expect more coming ?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I suspect I will be on the receiving end of some rather nasty curses if I don't get those bandages off Severus's eyes:)Yes, I am beseeching my muse to inspire at least one more chapter:)Thanks for reviewing, and I am so glad you like this little series of drabbles:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I suspect I will be on the receiving end of some rather nasty curses if I don't get those bandages off Severus's eyes:)Yes, I am beseeching my muse to inspire at least one more chapter:)Thanks for reviewing, and I am so glad you like this little series of drabbles:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Ooh, where's the rest of this one?~Lotm
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
LOL, this was supposed to be a one shot:) But Hermione goes and provokes Severus and he has to respond:)(I think it's a very Slytherin tactic, actually.)So glad you enjoyed this:) Since you correct my missing commas and grammarial oddities, it means a lot to me that you like this:){{hugs}} and many thanks,Fizzabella
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
No, seriously, where's the rest of it? You cannot leave it there! What happens when he gets his sight back?--Does he even get his sight back?? *iz nervous at that possibility*~Lotmwho wants to know more!...I have a and I'm not afraid to use 'em, ya know!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
severus made it clear that his blindness was TEMPORARY, and the bandages probably way more precaution than was needed, but Poppy was so used to fussing over him that it was fruitless to argue. I was told in NO uncertain terms that he would tolerate it for a SHORT while. but he was no Edward Fairfax Rochester to be blinded and maimed for the sake of a plot:) And I certainly am not going to argue with him:){hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Well, that's definitely good to know. And probably very wise, as the man does know more Dark spells than everyone except for maybe Moldiebutt, who thankfully is thoroughly dead by now in your story, I'm quite sure....But I'd still like to see his reaction when he sees Hermione, the woman he admits he loves, with his own eyes...~Lotm
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
From your mouth to my muse's ear:)Warm regards and {{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
*hugs**...whispers an intriguing smut-plot possibility in your muse's ears**hugs some more*~Lotm
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
LOL, this was supposed to be a one shot:) But Hermione goes and provokes Severus and he has to respond:)(I think it's a very Slytherin tactic, actually.)So glad you enjoyed this:) Since you correct my missing commas and grammarial oddities, it means a lot to me that you like this:){{hugs}} and many thanks,Fizzabella
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
No, seriously, where's the rest of it? You cannot leave it there! What happens when he gets his sight back?--Does he even get his sight back?? *iz nervous at that possibility*~Lotmwho wants to know more!...I have a and I'm not afraid to use 'em, ya know!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
severus made it clear that his blindness was TEMPORARY, and the bandages probably way more precaution than was needed, but Poppy was so used to fussing over him that it was fruitless to argue. I was told in NO uncertain terms that he would tolerate it for a SHORT while. but he was no Edward Fairfax Rochester to be blinded and maimed for the sake of a plot:) And I certainly am not going to argue with him:){hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Well, that's definitely good to know. And probably very wise, as the man does know more Dark spells than everyone except for maybe Moldiebutt, who thankfully is thoroughly dead by now in your story, I'm quite sure....But I'd still like to see his reaction when he sees Hermione, the woman he admits he loves, with his own eyes...~Lotm
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
From your mouth to my muse's ear:)Warm regards and {{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
*hugs**...whispers an intriguing smut-plot possibility in your muse's ears**hugs some more*~Lotm
Enjoying very much! Do wonder what happened to him...
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad:) I am not sure where this is going:) But I don't think it's done quite yet:)Thank you for taking the time to review:) Much appreciated:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad:) I am not sure where this is going:) But I don't think it's done quite yet:)Thank you for taking the time to review:) Much appreciated:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
very good. I think she won this time.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Hmmm. Not sure how I would score it, but since she got to kiss Severus, even if she lost on points, she won:)thank you for letting me know you liked the chapter:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Hmmm. Not sure how I would score it, but since she got to kiss Severus, even if she lost on points, she won:)thank you for letting me know you liked the chapter:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Love it Love itLOVE IT please write more!!!!!! Oh and let Severus not be blind.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you liked it,
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
:) I am dinking around with another chapter but Severus is being difficult. He won't be blinded, though, I promise. He would never forgive me.Thanks for all your encouragement:) You brighten my day:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
I am doing a bit of background reading for a hurt!severus quiz dontca know...whistles away innocently
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I loved that quiz and the Hurt Hermione one from back a bit in time:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you liked it,
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
:) I am dinking around with another chapter but Severus is being difficult. He won't be blinded, though, I promise. He would never forgive me.Thanks for all your encouragement:) You brighten my day:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
I am doing a bit of background reading for a hurt!severus quiz dontca know...whistles away innocently
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I loved that quiz and the Hurt Hermione one from back a bit in time:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
I love this, Fizzabella! Love it. I'm smiling all over.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Wow:) I am so pleased you enjoyed it:) I love your story "Second Life" so it's a thrill to me that you, one of my writing HEROES-liked my story:)You've made my day:)Thanks so much:) and warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Wow:) I am so pleased you enjoyed it:) I love your story "Second Life" so it's a thrill to me that you, one of my writing HEROES-liked my story:)You've made my day:)Thanks so much:) and warm regards,Fizzabella
It's very refreshing. They like arguing so much and i find that fascinating if not addictive.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and very touched that you took the time to review:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and very touched that you took the time to review:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Awwww! It's a moving, amusing, adorable little snarkfest. I love to see them tap dance around each other before either will admit anything and you've come up with some exquisite choreography here. I wonder how long they will be married before either actually admits to anything!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
( does her best Eeyore imitation):"Days... weeks... months... who knows?"So glad you enjoyed this:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
( does her best Eeyore imitation):"Days... weeks... months... who knows?"So glad you enjoyed this:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I adored it, very well written!!!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so very much:)And I appreciate you taking the time to review, too:)Thanks again:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so very much:)And I appreciate you taking the time to review, too:)Thanks again:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
*squee* Very cute, very funny drabble! I will have that image of Hermione feeding Severus like a baby in my head for the rest of the day now. It's hilarious. Good job!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Wow:) I'm just thrilled that you got the same mental images I did:) Thanks so much:)Appreciate you taking the time to review, too:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Wow:) I'm just thrilled that you got the same mental images I did:) Thanks so much:)Appreciate you taking the time to review, too:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I really enjoyed this. It made me giggle.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
:) I am so glad you liked it:)Thanks for taking the time to review, also:) much appreciated:)Warm Regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
:) I am so glad you liked it:)Thanks for taking the time to review, also:) much appreciated:)Warm Regards,Fizzabella
That last answer from Severus sounds like a "yes" to me lol
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
She sort of corners him:) About time the tables were turned on him-in a loving, non-threatening way, of course:) Thank yoou for taking the time to share your thoughts with me:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
She sort of corners him:) About time the tables were turned on him-in a loving, non-threatening way, of course:) Thank yoou for taking the time to share your thoughts with me:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Fizzabella, this is adorable! I love it -- it's scrumptious!It IS Severus !!!Beth...and I'm first
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
You've made my day. I was sitting here thinking, after it was posted, "Did I even put their names in this? Is anyone going to know who it's about?"Congratulations on being my first reviewer, and thank you for taking the time to tell me you liked this:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
You wrote the characters spot on! If anyone couldn't recognize Severus and Hermione in this story, well ... I'd have to ask myself how they found their way here to being with.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
You've made my day. I was sitting here thinking, after it was posted, "Did I even put their names in this? Is anyone going to know who it's about?"Congratulations on being my first reviewer, and thank you for taking the time to tell me you liked this:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
You wrote the characters spot on! If anyone couldn't recognize Severus and Hermione in this story, well ... I'd have to ask myself how they found their way here to being with.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Very sweet and enjoyable. Sigh. They're devoted and tender and yet they're both "intelligent, snarky, sexy". Love it. Look forward to further installments!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
thank you so much. I hadn't thought about writing more chapters but my plot bunnies always surprise me.my warmest regards,Fizzabella
:thud: I'm all happy now.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
This is so adorable. And all of the sudden, I am in the mood for carrots ;-)Thanks for sharing. It's really a very sweet story. Will there be more?Cheers. /M
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Dear Morgaine,Thank you for the lovely compliments:) I am waiting on the Muse for this one, but there will be at least one more chapter.Thank you for the review:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Looking forward to it./M
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Dear Morgaine,Thank you for the lovely compliments:) I am waiting on the Muse for this one, but there will be at least one more chapter.Thank you for the review:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Looking forward to it./M
At first it was OMG he said she's lovely. And now I can add HOURRAY they're engaged !! THIS is absolutely perfect. I'm so glad you made this sequel. Thank you OH mu GURU
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
You're more than welcome, it proved to be my pleasure:)Thanks for reviewing:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
You're more than welcome, it proved to be my pleasure:)Thanks for reviewing:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
lovely, just lovely. thanks so much
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
It's my pleasure:) Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
It's my pleasure:) Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Just lovely!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
So, so sweet! A perfect drabble! Are you going to continue? (I hope so...)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
THank you very much:) I am having fun with it, so yes, I am working on a third chapter now:)Thanks for taking the time to tell me you liked the story, as well:) Much appreciated:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
THank you very much:) I am having fun with it, so yes, I am working on a third chapter now:)Thanks for taking the time to tell me you liked the story, as well:) Much appreciated:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Nice one, Fizzabella!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:) I'm glad you enjoyed it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much:) I'm glad you enjoyed it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Ohhh more drabbles yay :) It's sweet the way they sort of 'nudge' eachother to admit things.the last drabble demands another set of drabbles :))
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this:) And I have 2 sections of 100 words each written already, I'll probably finish the set today:)Thank you for taking the time to review and let me know you liked the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this:) And I have 2 sections of 100 words each written already, I'll probably finish the set today:)Thank you for taking the time to review and let me know you liked the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Fizzabella, you have done it again! A precious, precious story. I love these warm and fluffy vignettes, and yet both Snape and Hermione are in perfect character.
Very well done! My hat is off to you once again!Thanks for a lovely bit of entertainment before bedtime.Beth
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story:) And I'm honored that you think I am keeping them in character. On good days, I can hear Alan Rickman's voice and Emma Watson's in my head, repeating the dialogue, but I always wonder how accurate the little voice in my head actually is:)Thank you so much, your compliments will send me to bed with a smile on my face:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story:) And I'm honored that you think I am keeping them in character. On good days, I can hear Alan Rickman's voice and Emma Watson's in my head, repeating the dialogue, but I always wonder how accurate the little voice in my head actually is:)Thank you so much, your compliments will send me to bed with a smile on my face:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Glad you continued it. Like how he went from denying he could love her or that she should love him to suddenly deciding what must be done for the engagement...and after.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Severus has never struck me as being indecisive:) I KNOW he enjoys keeping Hermione and everyone else off guard, off-center, and just a step or two behind him:) I think he enjoys watching everyone flounder to catch up:) Mischevious man that he is:)Thank you for taking the time to review, much appreciatted:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Severus has never struck me as being indecisive:) I KNOW he enjoys keeping Hermione and everyone else off guard, off-center, and just a step or two behind him:) I think he enjoys watching everyone flounder to catch up:) Mischevious man that he is:)Thank you for taking the time to review, much appreciatted:)Warm regards,Fizzabella