Unveiling
Chapter 4 of 5
fizzabellaThe bandages come off.
ReviewedAuthor's Note: Back by popular demand. More drabbles, more concessions, more snark.
Many thanks to CharmedForce, who beta-read this for me, and suggested that Severus hardly needs to SHOUT his comments. A simple italics command (like a whisper) is all the emphasis he needs.
And of course, this would not be possible without the fabulous J.K. Rowling, whose characters these are. I make no money from my use of her wonderful universe, but I am exceedingly grateful to be able to take her characters out to play for the afternoon.
My muse is whispering there should be one more chapter, possibly two. I hope I can make use of her inspiration when she whispers it to me.
Chapter Four: Unveiling
~OoO~
“Poppy says the bandages come off when she gets back from St. Mungo’s. She is bringing an eye specialist with her.”
Silence.
“Have you run away?”
She sits on the edge of the bed and wraps her arms around him.
“I’m here. I just had to find room to sit. This is a small bed.”
His lips quirk up at the corners.
“You’re not fond of small beds?”
“They look so… flimsy.”
“I’m sure this one is. But it isn’t intended for long term use.”
“Long term use?”
“The bed in my family home has been there for five generations.”
~OoO~
“You’ve gone quiet again.”
“I needed to catch my breath.”
A significant pause.
She frames his face with her hands, and kisses him very softly.
“I take your breath away, witch?” A very satisfied, very male smile curves up the corners of his mouth.
“Ever since we began working together at Grimmauld Place. And I forgive you for gloating.”
Her hand caresses his hair, then tugs, none too gently, on a long lock.
He captures the tugging hand and presses a kiss into its palm.
“My own sweet witch… You take my breath away, too.”
His voice wraps her in warmth.
“When do you want to marry?”
“Two weeks ago is good.”
~OoO~
“You don’t insist on a long engagement, then?”
“I haven’t much patience.”
“That’s my line, witch.”
“It applies equally well to me.”
He hesitates then says, gently, “I suppose I don’t wish to give you time to change your mind.”
“I want to be married to you, Severus. Only then will I believe this hasn’t been some wonderful dream.”
His hand strokes possessively over her hair.
“I’ve never… had anyone… belong to me. I hope I don’t… frighten you with my… expectations.”
“I don’t scare easily.”
“No, I would suppose not. But I believe in fidelity, Hermione. And expect it. From both of us.”
“So do I.”
~OoO~
Poppy Pomfrey bustled in to the hospital wing followed by a Healer from St. Mungo’s.
“Ah, Severus, are you ready to go without those bandages?”
He nodded his head, outwardly composed, but Madam Pomfrey didn’t notice how tightly he clutched Hermione’s hand.
She squeezed his hand gently in return.
Madam Pomfrey drew screens around the bed and cast a charm that curtained the window and lowered the lights.
“Alright, I’m removing the wrapping. Don’t touch the eye pads.”
The gauze wrappings unwound themselves, and a flourish of Poppy’s wand moistened the pads over his eyes.
Skilled fingers dragged the moist pads away, and Severus Snape opened his eyes.
He blinked at the light but waved away the oculist and Madam Pomfrey. He had to see Hermione.
“Miss Granger. My Hermione.”
~OoO~
She looked a mess. Her hair was more unruly than usual, and her clothes were rumpled. There were purple circles under her eyes.
She was gorgeous.
“Severus.”
He smiled.
“You’re …” Where were the words he needed? His voice dropped to a whisper. “I’m very glad to see you.”
And now that she could see his eyes, she heaved a sigh of relief.
“Hermione?” There was a question burning in those dark eyes.
She waited an instant, then crawled into the arms opened to welcome her.
And Severus gathered her in, stroking her hair and murmuring her name.
He held her tight.
~OoO~
Poppy and the Healer did a few tests and finally left Severus and Hermione alone.
“What did you mean, you’ve never had anyone belong to you?”
“I never have. Through my own stupidity, I lost Lily. I didn’t indulge in—relationships—after that. I couldn’t afford to. But I always wanted to marry. To give my wife my name—and a child, if she was willing.”
“Children.”
“Children, then.” Another very male smile. “If you take my name, witch, and take me to your bed, you will belong to me.”
“That’s everything I want. Where do I sign?”
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This series was soooo sweet, thanks. You put a smile on my face!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad it made you smile:) Thankl you for the feedback:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Just came across this and wanted to let you know that it was very sweet and enjoyable. I'm always impressed when people can tell a coherent story through drabbles!Thanks for sharing :)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much. Drabbles are hard for me to write because I like words too well:) I'm honored you liked this set:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I can't wait to read more!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much. I have been writing a story for the gift exchange, and not been working on this, but I will get back to it.Thanks so much,Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much. I have been writing a story for the gift exchange, and not been working on this, but I will get back to it.Thanks so much,Warm regards,Fizzabella
“Our publisher said it was a pleasure to read something that was not about potions." Awww this remains my favorite line. Its nice to know they can work together outside the lab! Wait that sounds kind naughty?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I assure you, they work very well together in the lab, too:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Oh! So...yay! Cute! Babies, what a lovely christmas present, and a book too! Perfectly delightful!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thanks so much, I am so glad you liked it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
"Our publisher said it was a pleasure to read something that was not about potions." LOL. I like this bit! :)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
LOL:)Thanks so much for taking the time to review and let me know you liked the story:)Warm regards.Fizzabella
Sweet. I liked that they chose to update Hogwarts: A History and added in the Voldemort years.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so much. Since that book keeps getting mentioned as Hermione's favorite book of all time, I thought it was suitable. And I am so glad you liked this latest chapter:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Yay!!! Babies... as in more than one! I am so happy you have added to this tale of love and devotion. I've been completely hooked since you began to publish these series of drabbles. Thank you for updating!
Beth
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Dear Beth,I'm so glad you liked the new chapter:) I am tickled to death when my writing makes people happy:)Writing Hermione and Severus-lovely!Writing drabbles-tear-out-my-hair frustrating (at times)Pleasing my readers-PRICELESS!!!{{hugs}}Fizzabella
*sniff* that was touching. thanks so much
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you liked it:) Thank you for the review and letting me know that you liked the story.Warm regards,Fizzabella
“Who wouldn’t want to work for the most intelligent, snarky, sexy teacher at Hogwarts?”Oh so true :-)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
::Chuckles:: I think so, too:)Thanks for letting me know you like my story:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
*Sniff* That was lovely. There's such a beautiful feeling about this story. Their devotion for one another is so wonderful.Now, she said babies... is she expecting twins? (Or more?) Bwahahaha!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I think real love between a man/woman, husband/wife is something to be cherished and valued. And I wanted Hermione to have those feelings for her, and for him to hold her almost in reverence. He has come through so much, and had such a horrible life, I want him to have the best and sweetest once he survived the horror of the war. Nobody deserves it more.Did I put that 's' on the end? : smacks self on cheek:: ooops:) Yes, it's twins:) You caught that right away! I can never choose whether they should have a boy or girl so they get both:){{hugs}} thanks for letting me know you liked my story:)Fizzabella
Peace and domesticity are wonderful. Sweet.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thanks so much. I wanted Severus to have that, since no one deserves it more, and I want him to feel valued and loved. And Hermione is one of the few who could, I think, see Severus for the complex man he IS, and appreciate and love him on an HONEST footing. One of the few who is smart enough to see through the stereotypes about him.I'm so glad you enjoyed this:) Thank you for taking the time to let me know that you liked it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
what a great exchange between the the two of them - this is wonderful!! You have captured in a few strokes what we love about them as characters - and I am so excited to read the sequel! Thanks for sharing
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
It's my pleasure to write this, and a great thrill to know it's been enjoyed:)Thank you so much,{{hugs}}Fizzabella
thank you for your work - you have done such a beautiful job of revealing through dialoge - It is so difficult and truly reveals your abilty as a wordsmith! Thanks for sharing
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm honored, thanks very much:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Currently I'm in bed under a comfortable blanket and I'm very warm. And not just from the blanket. Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I am so pleased that you liked it:) I have really enjoyed writing this:) Thank you for letting me know you like my little drabbles:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
This is such a wonderful series of drabbles, for each time you update, I start reading from the beginning before I allow my self to read the update, and I enjoy it just as much every time!Brilliant, brilliant work!!!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so honored that you find my story worth more than one read:) Thank you so very much:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
yeah!!! Thanks -
I'm so so so happy. The end of this chapter is particularly delicious. Upon re-reading the whole story I find myself wondering how this happened to Severus. I thought it was the war but she's been his apprentice for three years and I can't imagine a potions accident. So I'm clueless. Any help?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
LOL:) You have me there:) The plot bunny didn't explain this to me BUT one possibility is that the war didn't end till after the Trio had graduated, and Hermione was working as Severus's apprentice after Hogwarts and THAT is when the final battle took place. I admit I am filling that in after the fact, but the timing works and isn't really inconsistent with anything that I have already written.:) I hope:) :: crosses fingers::Thank you for spotting this, and thank you for the review, I am so glad you liked the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
LOL:) You have me there:) The plot bunny didn't explain this to me BUT one possibility is that the war didn't end till after the Trio had graduated, and Hermione was working as Severus's apprentice after Hogwarts and THAT is when the final battle took place. I admit I am filling that in after the fact, but the timing works and isn't really inconsistent with anything that I have already written.:) I hope:) :: crosses fingers::Thank you for spotting this, and thank you for the review, I am so glad you liked the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Hmmm... very, very nice. And who wouldn't want to belong to this Snape! Yes, very nice indeed. I'm thoroughly enjoying the back and forth of their conversations. Very good work! Can't wait to see what you do with it next!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so very much:) I'm honored that you enjoyed it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you so very much:) I'm honored that you enjoyed it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Really very enjoyable.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it:) and appreciate you taking the time to review, also:) THank you so much!Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it:) and appreciate you taking the time to review, also:) THank you so much!Warm regards,Fizzabella
Excellent.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Tickled that you liked it :) Thank you:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Tickled that you liked it :) Thank you:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Again, very sweet.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you {{hugs}} and warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Thank you {{hugs}} and warm regards,Fizzabella
Sweet, I liked that.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Wow, you went back and read the other chapters:) I'm honored, thank you so much:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
Wow, you went back and read the other chapters:) I'm honored, thank you so much:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I had to page back to say 'good job!' Good Job!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad it was worth your time to go back:) I enjoy your writing very much, so to receive a compliment from someone who does them so well means quite a bit to me:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so glad it was worth your time to go back:) I enjoy your writing very much, so to receive a compliment from someone who does them so well means quite a bit to me:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Very touching. I love the flow of the idalogue - It's so like them!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so tickled that you think so:)Thanks very much,Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Slytherin Concession)
I'm so tickled that you think so:)Thanks very much,Warm regards,Fizzabella