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The Promise
serenity_potterx44 Reviews | 44 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )
Through a series of flashbacks and real time passages, Hermione and Snape re-live their recently ended affair, but some sparks still fly...
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Im an A-level student living just ouside London. I also am Fan Fiction mad. Im addicted to both the Hary Potter and Twilight fandoms they rock nd each contain some awesome peopele. I love my friends they light up my days and make me laugh constantly. My dad is my absolute world. He's my role modle and best friend.
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Oh just get back together haha!!!
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
hehe xx
lovely and sad but in character. thanks
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
thank you :)S_pxxx
Leave it to the man to destroy their relationship because he's sure he'll wreck it. Yet another Severus sponsored self-fulfilling prophecy. Silly man, sometimes you just want to kick him in the butt and shake him.
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
I KNOW!!!! I wanted to punch him during writing this lol. He's such a MAN!!! lol Thanks for the review S_pxx
I hoped I'd see an update on this story. I really like it, but I'm concerned about the ending. Any chance of a happy one?
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
Im glad your following with interest, the ending concerns me to, you'll have to keep reading!!! S_pxxx
This is heartbreaking...hopefully for us all (SS/HG shipers,) things will turn around! Please!
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
Im sorry!!!! but im glad its working lol as in im glad you care lol please keep reading and whatever happends i promise it will make sense lol thanks so much for the reviewS_pxxx
wow, gang. this is great! thanks so much
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
thanks :) x
It's a very promising story. I hope to read more soon.
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
ahh thank you xx
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
ahh thank you xx
Good beginning. I like it so far.
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
glad you like it x
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
glad you like it x
interesting start , I wonder where it will go?
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
well keep reading and all will become clear... thanks for the review xx
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
well keep reading and all will become clear... thanks for the review xx
Oh, my... what's going to happen next! And roundrobin? I'm not sure what that is... but I would like to have more of this story.
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
i will be uploading the next chapter soon, hope your stil interested by then x
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
i will be uploading the next chapter soon, hope your stil interested by then x
Aww, thanks for the special note. It's a pleasure helping you!By the way, when's the next chapter going to be done? I am taking my beta-nagging role very seriously, you know.
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
aww you are more than welcome seriously I'd have given up on it by now if you wern't helping me lol. Hopefully Ill have finished it by the end of today so it will get it in the very near future!!. Thanks hun*Hugs*S_px
Oh dear, this sounds horrible. But I trust you all to make it better, soon...
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
Ahh Im sorry!!! lol keep reading all will become clear S_px
He will go after her, right?
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
Im praying that he will lol but you know how things are lol thanks for your reviewS_pxx
I love this story, but my heart breaks for Hermione. Seems like they love each other. Will be interesting to find out what happened.
Response from serenity_potterx (Author of The Promise)
Ahh thank you. Hopefully it will be lolthank you for the reviewS_px
I really like this ending. Heartbreak is something that is known to each of us at one time or another, so I am always glad when Severus and Hermione find their way to each other.
However, I would like to read the epilogue that you would like to write. This is your story, after all, and it should be you who decided how it ends. Having said that, if I were to choose, I would choose a happy epilogue rather than a heartbreaking end.
Thank you for sharing!
Beth
Why cannot Severus Snape just allow himself to love this woman, this Hermione. He is such a dunderhead in matters such as these.
Oh, The angst is killing me!
Beth
Run after her, Severus! Find her and take her home. Stay with her, Severus.
Arrrrgggghhhh. This is so sad... and angsty. And Good!
Beth
It seems like all Hermione can think about is Severus. This must be the web they weave. I hope they become ensnared in it... in the best possible way!
Beth
Doggone it! Those two should be together, not dating other people! It makes me sad that they are sad. But I know they can find a way back to eachother. What made them break up anyway?
Great first chapter!
Beth