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Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
beaweasley2166 Reviews | 5.88/10 (166 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )
Sometimes your life simply turns upside
down when you least expect it to. Hermione thought her life was all mapped out and going according to plan. Nevertheless, one night at the opera and a mysterious romantic dream may have changed things for her forever.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
Since you can't tell us who you are so we can read your other stories, you should take pity on us and start a sequel. Nice story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
But you will know who I am someday. I was asked for a sequil, but I think I'd like to try another story. Thanks for asking. oh, and thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
But you will know who I am someday. I was asked for a sequil, but I think I'd like to try another story. Thanks for asking. oh, and thanks for the review.
I loved Pepper humming happily while cleaning cauldrons, considering that's what Severus usually dolled out as a detention for his students. I love also that he's brewing the Wolfsbane Potion for her clinic. Good thing he courted her instead of rushing things, I like that too. All around a nice way to end a story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Thanks. Yes, well, she's a house-elf. Cleaning is fun for her. Yep, Severus is helping out in anyway he can to gain Hermione's notice. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Thanks. Yes, well, she's a house-elf. Cleaning is fun for her. Yep, Severus is helping out in anyway he can to gain Hermione's notice. Thanks for the review.
This was absolutely wonderful, I loved this story! I love a Severus who admits to himself that he wants Hermione and then goes for it, and you write him so well:-))
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. That was exactly what I wanted Severus to be. Thanks for the compliment.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. That was exactly what I wanted Severus to be. Thanks for the compliment.
I am sooooo glad that they are going to go shop for different fabrics! Cabbage roses are just scary. :)I enjoyed this story immensely, thank you for entering it in the contest!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I'm pretty sure that Hermione will redecorate. Yes, the catalogue picture I used as a 'guide' was hedious! I'm glad that you liked my story. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I'm pretty sure that Hermione will redecorate. Yes, the catalogue picture I used as a 'guide' was hedious! I'm glad that you liked my story. Thanks for the review.
I rather enjoyed that. I'm glad Severus and Hermione have their happily ever after. I'm thinking Ron and Lavender made each other unhappy for a good long time.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, I love happy ever after endings. So I did this one! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Dunno, maybe someday Ron will grow up. He's not Peter Pan afterall.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, I love happy ever after endings. So I did this one! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Dunno, maybe someday Ron will grow up. He's not Peter Pan afterall.
Great story, I'm sad to see it end... A sequel, maybe?gab
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh. You liked it enough for more? wow. Thank you!I thought I'd try another... hmmm I could come back later and add... or do another... hmmm Oh, Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh. You liked it enough for more? wow. Thank you!I thought I'd try another... hmmm I could come back later and add... or do another... hmmm Oh, Thanks for the review.
That was so sweet of him and shows just how much he wants her. And I love how they come together. Beautiful. This was an awesome chapter. I look forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I'm so sorry, it wasn't marked as complete. This is the last chapter. I did want him to show how much he really did want her through the story, without making him a stalker. I'm very glad you liked this chapter. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I'm so sorry, it wasn't marked as complete. This is the last chapter. I did want him to show how much he really did want her through the story, without making him a stalker. I'm very glad you liked this chapter. Thank you for the review.
Ron needs a charm to keep his pants up and his robe down! Will Hermione go after Severus? Only time, and a new chapter, will tell.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh, I love this. I don't know of a Charm that will do this. Could make one up I suppose. OH, I can't possibly answer the other question because the answer will be revealed!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh, I love this. I don't know of a Charm that will do this. Could make one up I suppose. OH, I can't possibly answer the other question because the answer will be revealed!
I just love the way the last sentence makes me feel. Resolute Snape being sweet just melts me.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. After having him just Apparate away like I did, I really just needed to show he wasn't giving up.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. After having him just Apparate away like I did, I really just needed to show he wasn't giving up.
How did Severus know where she lived? Or where she Apparated to get to her flat?Oh, I do like that she was going to confront Ron and Lavender. I would have really enjoyed reading about Hermione's confrontation! If it was anything like the last it would have been good!I really liked how Severus explained the effects of the Potions! He was trying sooo hard to be nice but his acerbic self just kept creaping up! Nicely done.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I dunno. He's a spy and followed her one day. Or he figured it out becasue he's smart? It might not be the only safe spot - other's might use it too.I'm glad you liked how I handled the prompt on Firenze. And yes, lying on the grass stairing at the stars would be fun, until it got cold at night. Thankfully, he still has the classroom.And yes, Severus is trying a bit in this, isn't he?Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Oh and yes, about Ron - Oh he got it and good. Lavender may have escaped unharmed, but I'm sure Ron got an earful and a few curses.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I dunno. He's a spy and followed her one day. Or he figured it out becasue he's smart? It might not be the only safe spot - other's might use it too.I'm glad you liked how I handled the prompt on Firenze. And yes, lying on the grass stairing at the stars would be fun, until it got cold at night. Thankfully, he still has the classroom.And yes, Severus is trying a bit in this, isn't he?Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Oh and yes, about Ron - Oh he got it and good. Lavender may have escaped unharmed, but I'm sure Ron got an earful and a few curses.
“I think I shagged Severus Snape in Dolores Umbridge’s bedroom!” I loved this line!I like how you answered the questions about Firenze. it was perfect. not to dotty and just vague enough to be so like him. Funny - I'd have loved haiving classes outside on the grass as a kid, even if it was at night!But confronting Severus about the house - Hehehe I can't wait to read Severus' answer to that!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I really liked this line too! And I did try and match the 'perfect decore' for the witch. Thanks on the comments about Firenze. Yep, he's doing well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I really liked this line too! And I did try and match the 'perfect decore' for the witch. Thanks on the comments about Firenze. Yep, he's doing well.
Another good chapter. Poor Lavender. I feel very sorry for her and the little one here.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I know - Ron's such a twit! Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I know - Ron's such a twit! Thanks for the review.
The house wouldn't be so bad if he got rid of the doilies and the cats LOL
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
The house would be great with a lot of redecorating. He just hasn't gotten around to it yet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
The house would be great with a lot of redecorating. He just hasn't gotten around to it yet.
Ha ha! This story is great! Just the right mix of humor, technical information and incredible hotness! :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you vey much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you vey much.
Another great chapter!!! Hopefully she'll find him soon!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks! Or he'll find her?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks! Or he'll find her?
Love this chapter. Severus is so patient with everything that's going on with Hermione right now, and she is kicking herself for not following him when he left George's.I'm really looking forward to the next update.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. He knows and he's getting what he wants. and Yes, she is. I'll update soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. He knows and he's getting what he wants. and Yes, she is. I'll update soon.
what a randy wanker wanker!ron is. loved severus' explaination of the whole problem. looking forward to their getting together again. thanks so much for the lovely update
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
You are welcome. and thankyou for the review. Yep, Ron is a wanker, but in his defense, his shagging Megan was potion induced. I'm glad you liked how Severus explained it all. I thought it would be more fun haivng him tell it than Hermione getting it from a book(s)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
You are welcome. and thankyou for the review. Yep, Ron is a wanker, but in his defense, his shagging Megan was potion induced. I'm glad you liked how Severus explained it all. I thought it would be more fun haivng him tell it than Hermione getting it from a book(s)
This is a really interesting story. The way you've managed to weave together so many different plot strands is very clever. :-)Just one thing - when Hermione referred to herself as 'a muck'... did you mean 'mug'?! 'Mug' is an English slang word for someone who's been gullible, easily-deceived or taken advantage of. 'Muck' as a noun just means dirt or manure...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thankyou very much. I'm having a blast putting all of the prompts together. I'm glad you like it to.Oops, yes, I did mean 'mug.' It's a typo I missed... thank you.
Ron got off easy, I believe. And I would have hexed him for the hug. But I'm not a nice person. I did enjoy the chapter, actually, quite a bit.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Ron has gotten it twice from Hermione already - Once in his bedroom in spetacular fashion if I do say so myself and at Diagon Alley when she overheard Lavender (implied and hintd)- I figured that's enough. Besides, Hermione is just too drained by all this - so she's just letting go. Breaking up is never easy.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Ron has gotten it twice from Hermione already - Once in his bedroom in spetacular fashion if I do say so myself and at Diagon Alley when she overheard Lavender (implied and hintd)- I figured that's enough. Besides, Hermione is just too drained by all this - so she's just letting go. Breaking up is never easy.
Great chapter! I like your patient, or is it just sure of himself, Severus. Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm sure he's a bit of both, loads of practice as a spy to learn patience, and I've never really seen lack of confidence in him in canon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm sure he's a bit of both, loads of practice as a spy to learn patience, and I've never really seen lack of confidence in him in canon.
I was really wondering how they all seemed to resolve their issues in an extremely calm and mature manner. They're all saints!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Because they aren't exactly unhappy with how things turned out. (well, maybe not Ron, but heck, he did get to shag so he's not all that unhappy) Thanks for the reveiw.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Because they aren't exactly unhappy with how things turned out. (well, maybe not Ron, but heck, he did get to shag so he's not all that unhappy) Thanks for the reveiw.
Cabbage Roses and Severus Snape, not a good mix. Wonder if he will start to redecorate or wait for Hermione?Great Chapter, thanks for the update, keep'm coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
He's only reciently aquired the house. He hasn't gotten around to redecorating - yet. Besides, I have a feeling he's still poking around, reading letters, looking at photos - trying to learn a bit about the old woman and his Uncle. And I will remark on the redecorating a bit later.Thanks for the reveiw.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
He's only reciently aquired the house. He hasn't gotten around to redecorating - yet. Besides, I have a feeling he's still poking around, reading letters, looking at photos - trying to learn a bit about the old woman and his Uncle. And I will remark on the redecorating a bit later.Thanks for the reveiw.
Ron is in way over his head with two women and an illegimate child.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yep. He sure is.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yep. He sure is.
Just read the whole story to date and enjoyed it thoroughly. I'm curious to see how Severus' character develops. He seems a bit nicer and more well adjusted at the moment. I'm looking forward to understanding him as Hermione gets to know him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Nah, he's just got the weight of the war off his shoulders and is finally happy with life. mostly.I'm reallly glad you like this story. Thanks for the reveiw.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Nah, he's just got the weight of the war off his shoulders and is finally happy with life. mostly.I'm reallly glad you like this story. Thanks for the reveiw.
Funny and fun to read. "Live long and Prosper!" You made an old trekkie happy with that line. Ron is a jerk. Hermione was too nice to him. She should have punched him like she did to Draco.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks from one trekkie to antoher. Yep, Ron is a jerk. Hermione is still trying to cope with everything, since most of this stroy only happens in a few days. A lot is going on around and to her. Actually, I did have her yelling and hexing him again, but i had to simply imply it or the chapter would be too long. "You're going to hear a Gryffindor roar." *cut* sorry, but imagine the bedroom scene only on Diagon Alley - nad no exploding bedframes or wardrobes, doors, picture frames, mirror and... what else did she break?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks from one trekkie to antoher. Yep, Ron is a jerk. Hermione is still trying to cope with everything, since most of this stroy only happens in a few days. A lot is going on around and to her. Actually, I did have her yelling and hexing him again, but i had to simply imply it or the chapter would be too long. "You're going to hear a Gryffindor roar." *cut* sorry, but imagine the bedroom scene only on Diagon Alley - nad no exploding bedframes or wardrobes, doors, picture frames, mirror and... what else did she break?