Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
beaweasley2166 Reviews | 5.88/10 (166 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )
Sometimes your life simply turns upside
down when you least expect it to. Hermione thought her life was all mapped out and going according to plan. Nevertheless, one night at the opera and a mysterious romantic dream may have changed things for her forever.
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beaweasley2
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
What a great job you did. I enjoyed this greatly.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much and you are most welcome.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much and you are most welcome.
Severus is certainly the consummate Slytherin, isn't he? Not above a little friendly persuasion when needed.Lovely update.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes he is, and nope, he isn't. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes he is, and nope, he isn't. Thank you for the review.
Another interesting installment. Ron is living up (down?) to my every expectation of him.The wanker.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. Yeah, I didnt' paint him in very good light in this one.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. Yeah, I didnt' paint him in very good light in this one.
"I think I shagged Severus Snape in Dolores Umbridges bedroom!" That's not a dream, that's a nightmare.Can't wait to read more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Gads yes! But it's also funny and a misunderstanding. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Gads yes! But it's also funny and a misunderstanding. Thank you for the review.
Things are really starting to get complicated, aren't they?I hope that Hermione will soon learn the truth about her secret lover.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh yes, they are. She will find out who he is soon enough. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh yes, they are. She will find out who he is soon enough. Thank you for the review.
Color me impressed, I loved your story. You did a very nice job of tying all your prompts together in an enjoyable story. I liked how you kept Hermione interested in werewolf rights. I'm glad they found each other. As far as the DH epilogue, I've always hated how Severus got screwed royally.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. It was a lot of fun to write. I tried to be true to canon, but totlaly hated the epilogue. I think JKR just... well I won't go rambling! Thaks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. It was a lot of fun to write. I tried to be true to canon, but totlaly hated the epilogue. I think JKR just... well I won't go rambling! Thaks for the review.
Very ambitious in your prompts, my kind of story! Loved your first chapter, can't wait to read the rest of the story. Very well written.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. They just all clicked together in my head. I"m glad you like the beginning. I look forward to read what you think of the rest. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. They just all clicked together in my head. I"m glad you like the beginning. I look forward to read what you think of the rest. Thanks for the review.
Ginny seems to be the only reasonable Weasley. good, she has a confidante here.oh no, she had to learn it from the papers. To be prepared for what is awaiting her on the bench in the park. What a shock. No doppelgänger. no dream. everyting is real.And he really wants to be hers.acting like a teenager.you made a really nice story! thank you
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Did you really think that Ron would be reasonable? Ginny has always had a good head on her shoulders in my book. WEll she is dealing with a lot in only a few days, and she is a teenager-very young woman. But yes, it was Severus, not a dream and very much real. Yes, he wants her - very much. I'm glad you like my story. Thanks for the review.
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
blast Ronnikins. I thought of the rest of the ginger-headed clan.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Did you really think that Ron would be reasonable? Ginny has always had a good head on her shoulders in my book. WEll she is dealing with a lot in only a few days, and she is a teenager-very young woman. But yes, it was Severus, not a dream and very much real. Yes, he wants her - very much. I'm glad you like my story. Thanks for the review.
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
blast Ronnikins. I thought of the rest of the ginger-headed clan.
HA! what did I just say?!now this was a big scene she was performing in Grimaulds Place. 
But, funny enough, she did not think of what she had done in the Opera. Not a word about it, or a thought.But she had her revenge. Yes!And meeting Severus again, and again by falling into his arms. *sigh* And then awaking in "Umbridges" bedroom. urhg, I feel for her.
But poor sevi will not be happy to find his bed cold.whatwillhedotomeethe, and to tell her who he really is? and yes, dear sir, the road is clear for you!!
After that performance the road is laid with red carpet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, I know. Hermione angry to the point she wrecks the huse is scarrrry! Nope, seemed to forget that fact about the Opera, didn't she. But oh yes, Ron got the message.Yes, she met, fell into his arms and shagged Severus Snape. You'll see his reaction - he'll want answers. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, I know. Hermione angry to the point she wrecks the huse is scarrrry! Nope, seemed to forget that fact about the Opera, didn't she. But oh yes, Ron got the message.Yes, she met, fell into his arms and shagged Severus Snape. You'll see his reaction - he'll want answers. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
It was NOT a dream! ouch! *stupidme* Hm, Severus got very quickly behind everything.and now he decides to go to Kingsley. wow. there's a lot to be explained, and a lot of trouble coming ahead for him.Ron brought Megan home.O-o!! you better run if you want to see some reason for not marrying Ron.A lovers spat, you created a really good mess in this shop! Wow. am definitely looking forward for more!!!!!!!!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Nope, it wasn't. It was real - under-the-influence of the potions. But as she was 'high' so to speak it seemed sureal to her and so I wrote it that way. Dream-like.Yes, he's a right smart bloke.Yes, he has a reason to come out of hiding and playing-dead. Things won't be too bad.Yes, Ron brought Megan home - and shagged her. Big time.Yes, there is a HUGE mess to sort out. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Nope, it wasn't. It was real - under-the-influence of the potions. But as she was 'high' so to speak it seemed sureal to her and so I wrote it that way. Dream-like.Yes, he's a right smart bloke.Yes, he has a reason to come out of hiding and playing-dead. Things won't be too bad.Yes, Ron brought Megan home - and shagged her. Big time.Yes, there is a HUGE mess to sort out. Thanks for the review.
she sweeps up the potions and mixes them in that instant.Is Salis Oldenburg the real name, or a pseudonym?Snape will be astonished to see what she brewed if he will get to know it.And that dream, oh my. Lets not hope the ghost of hamlet appears to me in that fashion. *gg*No, girl. it was NOT Ron!! and we do not feel sorry about it at all *hehe* neither will you once you found out who? no, it will be a shock rather.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, she was rather careless, our Hermione. Snape would have had her head if she'd done that in his classroom!The name was borrowed. If I say from where I'll be shot/hung/hear many groans of dismay.Yes, Snape will be quite amazed but not surprised, me thinks.No, it was not Ron. (as if) and yes, it will be quite a shocker. There are a number of shockes ahead of her...
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
about S.O.: I just wondered, if it would be a pseudonym for S.S., who was hiding behind it for the magazine, or for his own articles.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Nope, just an arrogrant concited Potions master, who thinks he knows all that!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, she was rather careless, our Hermione. Snape would have had her head if she'd done that in his classroom!The name was borrowed. If I say from where I'll be shot/hung/hear many groans of dismay.Yes, Snape will be quite amazed but not surprised, me thinks.No, it was not Ron. (as if) and yes, it will be quite a shocker. There are a number of shockes ahead of her...
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
about S.O.: I just wondered, if it would be a pseudonym for S.S., who was hiding behind it for the magazine, or for his own articles.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Nope, just an arrogrant concited Potions master, who thinks he knows all that!
Very enjoyable too read but far too light on Ron. He needed his arse kicked! Well done.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, it was an accident. I think he's been chastized enough - just think what the others said or did to him, too! Just because I didn't write it doesn't mean that his sister, George Angelina and other's didn't do/say something. Imagine away! Thank you for your review.
Ronald got off far too lightly!! Good chapter
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yessss, well, Hermione did. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Great story and a good use of all of the prompts you chose. I enjoyed it. Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. It was loads fun to write. I'm really glad you liked it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. It was loads fun to write. I'm really glad you liked it.
The Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures!!Yes!! this is the very place hermione would want to be.Why always make her the potions mistress or assistant. (though I love every single story of those) no, THIS is her place ! and I can see how you weave the centaur into your myterious plot-net!a-ha. potions again. she is doing research, and is "watched" by a not recognising Severus. funny game.have to stop here. come back soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, all the prompts just fell into place on this one. I thought RaCoMC would be perfect for her. And the prompts with Remus and Firenze fit right in.Yep, he's following her research without even knowing it!Thnks for the review. I hope you like the rest.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, all the prompts just fell into place on this one. I thought RaCoMC would be perfect for her. And the prompts with Remus and Firenze fit right in.Yep, he's following her research without even knowing it!Thnks for the review. I hope you like the rest.
Excellent new story! I hope to see who you are "Hidden before voting" so I can read your other works but your style seems familiar so I probably already have! Good Luck!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I don't know, maybe - you might have. Either way, thanks for the support and the nice review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I don't know, maybe - you might have. Either way, thanks for the support and the nice review.
"#70. Fred & (Not Fred, sorry, he’s dead,) George Weasley's newest invention "La-la-la I can't hear you! (I wrote that prompt)pretty great so far, all things considered:-) pokey, selectively canon-compliant
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I hope you like the rest of the story. I loved this prompt by-the-way!! It really had me spinning from the first moment I read it. Thanks!! I mean - reallly! Thanks.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I hope you like the rest of the story. I loved this prompt by-the-way!! It really had me spinning from the first moment I read it. Thanks!! I mean - reallly! Thanks.
All sorted out in the end... except maybe Ron... well that's his problem! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Well not every thing is tied up with a bow? One couple out six. That's not bad odds.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Well not every thing is tied up with a bow? One couple out six. That's not bad odds.
well, that was a delightful way to while away the better part of an afternoon! i really enjoyed that your severus in this story knew what he wanted and allowed himself to go after it. and of course, that he got it in the end! :D it was so funny that she thought he took her to umbridge's bedroom to have sex with her! only one of many wonderful funny moments you created. i'm looking forward to finding out who you are. oh, yeah, and let me add my kudos on how you managed to weave so many prompts into your story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thnaks. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review, I'm glad it made you laugh.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thnaks. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review, I'm glad it made you laugh.
Great story. I'm glad he got the girl in the end. 
Great use of all of those prompts. I'm still amazed at your tackling so much. It truly flowed into a credible and fun story. Good job, whoever you are! Lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. When I read them they just all clicked together in my head and the story practically wrote itself. I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. When I read them they just all clicked together in my head and the story practically wrote itself. I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for the review.
i adore happy endings. thanks so much for sharing your talent.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Me too! You are very welcome. Thank you for the nice review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Me too! You are very welcome. Thank you for the nice review.
i've been meaning to read this story for a while, and now i'm kind of glad i waited, since it's all done so i won't have to wait patiently for updates. : ) thoughts on the first chapter - well, hermione for being the brightest witch of her age is behaving in a singularly idiotic fashion, making potions when she doesn't know what they will do, and cleaning up two different potions with the same rag when she knows they are very volatile concoctions. but it makes sense - she's so focused on proving whatshisname wrong that she isn't thinking about anything else, like exercising a little care. your description of the magical opera made me wish i could see one. and as to your description of her daydream about what else happened there - i loved how you used the music in that scene. i look forward to seeing how this all develops! *runs off to read another chapter*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Yes, she's a bit careless with the clean up, but she wasn't making the potions to use - just prove a point. She was probably going to send the two away to the jerk and be published. The opera was fun to write, and having been to the opera a few times with my dad, a magical one would be impressive indeed. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Happy reading.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Yes, she's a bit careless with the clean up, but she wasn't making the potions to use - just prove a point. She was probably going to send the two away to the jerk and be published. The opera was fun to write, and having been to the opera a few times with my dad, a magical one would be impressive indeed. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Happy reading.
Very good story. Very imaginative. Thanks.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks.
What a wonderful story and a wonderful ending for Severus and Hermione!!! I have loved every chapter!!!And, yes, of course they live happily ever after, and they marry, have three children, and many grandchildren and great grandchildren.Severus' business ventures are phenomenal successes, and they both live well into old age, passing away within minutes of each other, and spending the "next great adventure" blissfully on the other side of the veil.That about covers my imagined ending for your beautiful story. Please forgive me for being so bold, but I couldn't help myself. When a author writes a great story and leaves me the opportunity to fashion my own ending, I always opt for something like this.You've got talent, my dear, and I look forward to finding out who you are. Thank you for such an entertaining read!Hugs, Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Beth, I think you just wrote my sequel! Thanks for all the reviews.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
No, my dear, only YOU could write the sequel!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Beth, I think you just wrote my sequel! Thanks for all the reviews.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
No, my dear, only YOU could write the sequel!!!
Sorry to see this end, it was fun while it lasted, but then again all good things must come to an end. This was the perfect place to end this story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm glad that you liked my story. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm glad that you liked my story. Thanks for the review.