Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
beaweasley2166 Reviews | 5.88/10 (166 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )
Sometimes your life simply turns upside
down when you least expect it to. Hermione thought her life was all mapped out and going according to plan. Nevertheless, one night at the opera and a mysterious romantic dream may have changed things for her forever.
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beaweasley2
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
What a fun story!! You followed your prompts so well! I love your writing style!! Thanks for sharing!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. I was a fun challenge, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Cute story, but I'd have loved if you had continued it on more. More with the Ron love triangle, more with the werewolf clinic, more of everything really. But i loved what you shared, so thank you!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
LOl, more on the triangle bits - that would take it's own story to fully explore. I do have a werewolf clinic story started on my computer, but it's on hold for now. However, I'm utterly delighted that you enjoyed this story, as short as it is. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Way to go Severus. It's nice that he could learn something about how to deal with women. And nice manuevering to get Lucius to pony up the funds. :) I wonder if Hermione will ever find out what he has done?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, I wanted a 'war over' 'drop the pretenses' Severus. It's nice to see he's capable of being nice. It was fun to type the Severus Lucius conversation. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, I wanted a 'war over' 'drop the pretenses' Severus. It's nice to see he's capable of being nice. It was fun to type the Severus Lucius conversation. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Nice to see that over with. Interesting how Ron has managed to get himself in the most hot water of anyone. LOL I don't feel the least big sorry for him though. :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
LOL Yep, only Ron is sunk in much! BUt he did bring it on himslef. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
LOL Yep, only Ron is sunk in much! BUt he did bring it on himslef. Thank you for the review.
Poor Hermione. Well, now that she's speaking to Severus, perhaps they can pool their knowledge to figure out what she's done. Though that may change things between them to realize that it was a potion causing them to see the truth. And I love him laughing at the end when she compared the house to Umbridge's
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, between them they should figure out what happened. How they react - well, you'll see. That's part of the fun. Somehow, I think having their bedroom compared to Umbridge's badroom would make anyone laugh. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, between them they should figure out what happened. How they react - well, you'll see. That's part of the fun. Somehow, I think having their bedroom compared to Umbridge's badroom would make anyone laugh. Thank you for the review.
Thank you very much for a nice satisfying story. I really enjoyed how everything unfolded and it was nice to see Severus taking credit for what he did for Hermione and that she accepted it graciously.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. What a lovely compliment. I'm gld you enjoyed it. I wanted a happy 'eveyone wins' story. (Okay, Ron didn't but he wasn't destined to) Thank you for the sweet reviews.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. What a lovely compliment. I'm gld you enjoyed it. I wanted a happy 'eveyone wins' story. (Okay, Ron didn't but he wasn't destined to) Thank you for the sweet reviews.
Too bad that Hermione didn't stick around, but because of the potion, I'm sure she will meet up with her mysterious lover again. :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Actually, I think she was afraid that Dolores Umbridge would walk in the door - regardless of how great her nephew/son/brother - whoever that guy was *snicker* was in bed. But yes, the potions will draw them together again. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Actually, I think she was afraid that Dolores Umbridge would walk in the door - regardless of how great her nephew/son/brother - whoever that guy was *snicker* was in bed. But yes, the potions will draw them together again. Thank you for the review.
Poor Hermione. She really shouldn't have brewed potions she didn't know what they did. And putting them anywhere near Ron... Well, I'm not entirely surprised that he messed that one up. Great job in working so many of the prompts into a compelling story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Hermione brewed them for a reason, and it was Ginny who boxed them all up and placed them in the room with Ron. So, it's not really Hermione's fault at all. Of course Ron woudl mess it up! He's Ron. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Hermione brewed them for a reason, and it was Ginny who boxed them all up and placed them in the room with Ron. So, it's not really Hermione's fault at all. Of course Ron woudl mess it up! He's Ron. Thank you for the review.
I really like how this started. Poor Hermione brewing potions she doens't know what they are for. LOL And I really do look forward to seeing how you pull all those prompts together. :) There is a lot of potential there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Hermione was brewing them not to use, but to prove a point - that they could be brewed. what they did was irrelevant. I hope you like how I pull all of the prompts together, it was really fun to do so. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Hermione was brewing them not to use, but to prove a point - that they could be brewed. what they did was irrelevant. I hope you like how I pull all of the prompts together, it was really fun to do so. Thanks for the review.
I loved it!! You deserve hugs, chocolate, and a new kitten too... or perhaps a Severus of your very own, for writing such a great story. :) -
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. I'm realy delighted that you liked it. Thank you for the kind reviews and pretty flowers.
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
You are welcome. The way I see it, you deserve many kudos for writing such a wonderful story. I have read many good ones in my time, but this has to rank among the best. I am excited to find out who you are so I can read more of your work.
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. I'm realy delighted that you liked it. Thank you for the kind reviews and pretty flowers.
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
You are welcome. The way I see it, you deserve many kudos for writing such a wonderful story. I have read many good ones in my time, but this has to rank among the best. I am excited to find out who you are so I can read more of your work.
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
That was nice of Severus to ask Lucius for the funds for Hermione's project. A damn good chapter as always! -
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Wll he didn't have enough of his own funds to buy it... so he went to someone who did. Thank you for the compliment. I appreciate it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Wll he didn't have enough of his own funds to buy it... so he went to someone who did. Thank you for the compliment. I appreciate it.
I know that I have said it before, but Ron is such a git. And how sweet is Sev! I love how he is with Hermione in this chapter. Good job!!!
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
LOL Well, yes in this story I think I typed out the very worst in him. I"m glad Severus is too sappy for you. I wanted to bring out his 'caring' side and yet still have some canon Snape in him. I was afraid I'd failed. Thanks for the review and my flower. I love those!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
LOL Well, yes in this story I think I typed out the very worst in him. I"m glad Severus is too sappy for you. I wanted to bring out his 'caring' side and yet still have some canon Snape in him. I was afraid I'd failed. Thanks for the review and my flower. I love those!
I am glad that Ron and Hermione broke up; she belongs with Sev. Lovely chapter as always! :) -
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh, Like I was going to leave them together - you should know me better than that... oh wait. Ok. After the reveal, you'll know who I am and then you'll know I'd never do that to you!Thanks for the flower!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh, Like I was going to leave them together - you should know me better than that... oh wait. Ok. After the reveal, you'll know who I am and then you'll know I'd never do that to you!Thanks for the flower!
It sucks that Ron cheated on Hermione, but I honestly did not put it past him. He can be such a git sometimes.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Inall fairness, ti was a love potion... of course I have no excuse for his affair with Lavender. BUt yes, git he is and git is how I see him to.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Inall fairness, ti was a love potion... of course I have no excuse for his affair with Lavender. BUt yes, git he is and git is how I see him to.
I loved the incident of Ron mixing the potions that Hermione did not intend for him to use--it spells disaster already, and I am looking forward to the outcome.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh it doesn't bode well at all! Of, course he assumed, didn't he? and got it all mixed up! Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Oh it doesn't bode well at all! Of, course he assumed, didn't he? and got it all mixed up! Thank you for the review.
Good story so far; am looking forward to seeing the outcome of what is a brilliant story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Wow, thanks. I really hope you like the rest of it. 
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Wow, thanks. I really hope you like the rest of it.
Lovely hot chapter! I just adore how you wrote Severus.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Hope you like the rest. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Hope you like the rest. Thanks for the review.
I really enjoyed the story! It's obvious you spent a lot of time working out the details and carefully crafting it. I think I would suggest that next time you don't list the exact prompts you use until the last chapter. It was a a bit of a spoiler to read the author's note.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I t was fun to weave all of this together. I thought that all the stories had the Prompts in the first chapter? So I just added my comments as I went along. Mostly the comments fit the chapter. I'm sorry if anything was spoiled for you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I t was fun to weave all of this together. I thought that all the stories had the Prompts in the first chapter? So I just added my comments as I went along. Mostly the comments fit the chapter. I'm sorry if anything was spoiled for you.
Oh, see, this is how Slytherins really work. It isn't about being publicly acknowledged for actions... it's about being acknowledged by the right people. The Malfoys can have whatever reason they want to donate this, but when Hermione finds out, she will realize Severus also had something to do with it. Nicely done!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I just thought it would be how Lucius would handle it. Teehehe Yep. but then he might want her to know.Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
I just thought it would be how Lucius would handle it. Teehehe Yep. but then he might want her to know.Thanks for the review.
I am so glad that at least one couple, Angeline & Lee, were naturally connected. Everyone seems to be taking it well, though I would think Ron would be more upset. After all, he cheated with Lavender years ago, and Megan only happened because of the potions. It wasn't like he was going out there looking every weekend to cheat.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
No, not everyone was matched because of the potion. Ron is still reeling from the mess he's dug himself into. Guilt. BUt he's not protraid very well in this one, a bit of a randy lad and all. Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
No, not everyone was matched because of the potion. Ron is still reeling from the mess he's dug himself into. Guilt. BUt he's not protraid very well in this one, a bit of a randy lad and all. Thanks for the review.
*sniggers*I love that the room looks liek Dolores Umbridge's home. It adds teh perfect amount of humor and balances the darker issues in the chapter, mainly the experimental potion and Ron's cheating.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Ever get one of those catalogues for linnens? It's what I used - described the room from that! And having it look like It was Unbridge's, lol, just to have Hermione have the "oh, my gods, what did I do' morning have a even more hysterical aspect. I'm glad it balanced the darker aspects of the stroy for you. Thank you vey mcu for the reviews. I apperciate them.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Ever get one of those catalogues for linnens? It's what I used - described the room from that! And having it look like It was Unbridge's, lol, just to have Hermione have the "oh, my gods, what did I do' morning have a even more hysterical aspect. I'm glad it balanced the darker aspects of the stroy for you. Thank you vey mcu for the reviews. I apperciate them.
Smooth, Hermione. I'm sure Severus will think wonderful things when he goes back up to an empty room. And Lavender is such a whore! Gah... I dislike her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, considering the surroundings, she might have over reacted! 
But the room is hideous! Poor, Lavender... Won, Won isn't being nice. 
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, considering the surroundings, she might have over reacted! But the room is hideous! Poor, Lavender... Won, Won isn't being nice.
Oh, this is a fabulous start. A bit too heavy on ingredients and processes for me, but it is obvious you spent a lot of time on it. The quality is amazing!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. I know I made quite a list, but they're all for specific things. I'm glad you liked the chapter anyway. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. I know I made quite a list, but they're all for specific things. I'm glad you liked the chapter anyway. Thank you for the review.
Oh no... Ron and Megan left together? This is where prompt #1 takes effect, isn't it?Great chapter... I love how much of an idiot Ron is. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, he left with Megan. and yes... it is. I don't really paint Ron in the best light in this story. I hope you like what comes...Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, he left with Megan. and yes... it is. I don't really paint Ron in the best light in this story. I hope you like what comes...Thank you for the review.
I like the story; it's intriguing. However, there are a few grammatical & syntactical errors. Perhaps most noteworthy is "conflictions of policy" in paragraph 5. Would "policy conflicts" or at least "conflicts of policy" not be better? Confliction isn't a real word, despite it occasionally creeping erroneously into techno-speak. [Admittedly, there is an archaic 15th c. usage of confliction, but it is inappropriate here.]
But nitpicking aside, I am anxious to finish the story. Chapter 1 is off to a good start.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Hummm. Thank you, I think.
Response from snapekat51 (Reviewer)
Well, yes, I really do like the story. Sorry if you don't like my pointing out the "confliction" issue. I simply love language, and its correct usage. I'm a dying breed, I guess, or so I've been told.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
No it's just I have a great beta and well, I thought you didn't like the chapter... that's all.
Response from snapekat51 (Reviewer)
I understand. Even though the first and last sentences of my review were complimentary, it's human nature to see only the negative. By the way, of the thousands of stories I have read, on ALL the archives, I have NEVER found one that was error-free! In my own non-fanfic writing, I sometimes make mistakes. If I don't catch them all, imagine how unforgiving I am of myself!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Hummm. Thank you, I think.
Response from snapekat51 (Reviewer)
Well, yes, I really do like the story. Sorry if you don't like my pointing out the "confliction" issue. I simply love language, and its correct usage. I'm a dying breed, I guess, or so I've been told.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
No it's just I have a great beta and well, I thought you didn't like the chapter... that's all.
Response from snapekat51 (Reviewer)
I understand. Even though the first and last sentences of my review were complimentary, it's human nature to see only the negative. By the way, of the thousands of stories I have read, on ALL the archives, I have NEVER found one that was error-free! In my own non-fanfic writing, I sometimes make mistakes. If I don't catch them all, imagine how unforgiving I am of myself!