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Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
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Sometimes your life simply turns upside
down when you least expect it to. Hermione thought her life was all mapped out and going according to plan. Nevertheless, one night at the opera and a mysterious romantic dream may have changed things for her forever.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for Wonder Witch Love Potion 69
Oh yes! So the incigent at the opera really did happen. I wonder how Hermione will feel when she realises it was Snape?Ron is such a git. He can never admit when he has done something wrong, even when it is glaringly obvious!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Oh yes. The incident at the opera did really happen. I wrote it to be quite vague as if drunk, the transitions cut and jumpy just like waking from a drunkeness. How she will feel comes up next.Ron, I wrote him like I see him in canon. immature, careless, doesn't think before doing (which is in stark contrass to the 'chess player stratigist') But yes, I made sure things were bad between Hermione and him. They get worse.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. Oh yes. The incident at the opera did really happen. I wrote it to be quite vague as if drunk, the transitions cut and jumpy just like waking from a drunkeness. How she will feel comes up next.Ron, I wrote him like I see him in canon. immature, careless, doesn't think before doing (which is in stark contrass to the 'chess player stratigist') But yes, I made sure things were bad between Hermione and him. They get worse.
Very interesting beginning. I can't wait to see how all those prompts fit together!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I did it. I mean I really did blend them all together. I hope you like it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I did it. I mean I really did blend them all together. I hope you like it.
wowee wow! hot and interesting! loving this story so far. thanks so much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm glad you are.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I'm glad you are.
Severus' use of the polyjuice potion was very clever plot device. I like that he can move about unrecognized when necessary. "A very thin, pretty woman, possibly a model at one time....." I always thought of Professor Snape as drop-dead gorgeous, and now we have proof! He even makes a pretty woman. ;^)And I am glad that he knows that the incident at the opera, while seeming like a dream, was real.Hermione is surrounded by friends who are in the grip of Ron's Folly, each in his or her own way justifying their behavior AND insisting that it is NOT the result of Ron's Folly -- whew! it's enough to drive her to distraction. She's gonna brew more, right?What a wonderful story! Update please.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, he is a potions master, isn't he. Seemed quite logical! which explains why he'd use Polyjuice to move about incognito - and know about the potions Hermione brewed. He justknew the affects and such.Yep, Hermione's friends are all a bit confused. They knew that the truffles were contaminated, but still aren't sure what's real or what's from uner the influence. brew more - I dunno?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, he is a potions master, isn't he. Seemed quite logical! which explains why he'd use Polyjuice to move about incognito - and know about the potions Hermione brewed. He justknew the affects and such.Yep, Hermione's friends are all a bit confused. They knew that the truffles were contaminated, but still aren't sure what's real or what's from uner the influence. brew more - I dunno?
Who knew the opera could be soooo gooood? Tickets anyone?This is a wonderful start. I'm looking forward to following your story.
Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks.
Ron is such an idiot. He's told to use the one's with the fuschia labels, and he uses all the vials, even ones without. hmmm.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
"Hi, Ron. already working?" Ginny gave him a box and said, "These are the one's Hermione made. I'm going to go and see what George wants me to do.""Okay. Sure." Ron searched through the vials, looking for Hermione's list. There was always a list. Why can't she just use bottles? Didn't George give her bottles? He found the lsit. There were only four potions on the list. There were about twenty vials. He started to pick them up to sort them in groups according to their labels, and noticed that they didn't all have labels... a few of them to be exact. Blimey! Now which one is this? he asked himself as he starred at an unmarked vial. It was peach - sort of... Teehehe. See?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
"Hi, Ron. already working?" Ginny gave him a box and said, "These are the one's Hermione made. I'm going to go and see what George wants me to do.""Okay. Sure." Ron searched through the vials, looking for Hermione's list. There was always a list. Why can't she just use bottles? Didn't George give her bottles? He found the lsit. There were only four potions on the list. There were about twenty vials. He started to pick them up to sort them in groups according to their labels, and noticed that they didn't all have labels... a few of them to be exact. Blimey! Now which one is this? he asked himself as he starred at an unmarked vial. It was peach - sort of... Teehehe. See?
Mutual interest on Severus and Hermione's part, who needs potions, he just needs to be alive!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, without the potions they wouldn't or might not have gotten together. Who knows - they are now.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Well, without the potions they wouldn't or might not have gotten together. Who knows - they are now.
Oh, totally love the direction this going. Can't wait to see what's next, as well as when Hermione learns that Severus is alive!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. There's more coming and it gets better. IMHO
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. There's more coming and it gets better. IMHO
Snape needs to hurry up and become officially alive and reveal himself to Hermione. Not in a naughty way! Well at first. A re acquaintance will do. Ron's an idiot. I love saying that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
If you think Ron's and idiot - you'll love what happens next! Any yes, things reveal themselves - lots of revaling going on!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
If you think Ron's and idiot - you'll love what happens next! Any yes, things reveal themselves - lots of revaling going on!
Still like this story very much. Love all of the challenges! More please!gab
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. The fun is only getting started.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. The fun is only getting started.
Interesting start. I am looking forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you.
I liked that 'organizational flow charts that looked like a pureblood family tree! Ha! and how with all the new laws the department had to be completely revamped.Its obvious to me that Hermione isn't really looking forward to her wedding! and they already dont seem compatable. It's interesting reading Severus view point on the two potions then finding out Hermione brewed them. Kind of a portent to what may come. if what I hope happens happens that is!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I jsut tthouhgt that with what was said in cannon - about all the laws Umbridge created, and I could see her meliciously doing a lot of creating, the department would be a mess! I imagined loops, and trees that don't branch but double back- Teehehe sick I know.No, she's looking forward but not to the huge elaborate wedding planned. I think Hermione would preferr a nice simple wedding, just family - not a 500+everyone who's anyone attending kind. That would be frightful in my book.Yes, Severus knows these potions, very well for something he called obsecure and not common knowledge... But he does know them well. And yes, Hermione brewing them....
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I jsut tthouhgt that with what was said in cannon - about all the laws Umbridge created, and I could see her meliciously doing a lot of creating, the department would be a mess! I imagined loops, and trees that don't branch but double back- Teehehe sick I know.No, she's looking forward but not to the huge elaborate wedding planned. I think Hermione would preferr a nice simple wedding, just family - not a 500+everyone who's anyone attending kind. That would be frightful in my book.Yes, Severus knows these potions, very well for something he called obsecure and not common knowledge... But he does know them well. And yes, Hermione brewing them....
Very good story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you.
This was great, I loved the way you used differnet parts of the musical movement in your erotic descriptions. Fantastic
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you.
Wow, you're attempting something!! Great start on a story, I'm looking forward to more!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. Believe me they all fit together nicely!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. Believe me they all fit together nicely!
Wow, with all those prompts it looks like this will be quite interesting. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. Yeap each and every one was poking my muse saying "Pick me - pick me..." so she did! Eeek! But it worked out really well!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. Yeap each and every one was poking my muse saying "Pick me - pick me..." so she did! Eeek! But it worked out really well!
Anonymous
That is a heckuva lotta prompts! Holy smokes, I would have trouble with just one, LOL! Then again, plot ain't my strong suit.
Great writing, great start, and hey, who here hasn't had those same dreams about that same man? Somedays, you just don't want to wake up!
Looking forward to more, especially as I can't guess, right now, the details of what will happen. I love it when it's not obvious to my eye from chapter one. See ya soon, I hope!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I know its a bundle, but when I read them they all sort of jumbled together and worked out for me.
Thanks again.
this sounds like it will be very interesting.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I hope so.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I hope so.
This is a great start! wow what a lot of prompts you've chosen. I am looking forward to more! I like 'magic-intensive' stories. and dreams, I like the good use of dreams. Well done.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I know I've chosen a lot of prompts, but I have worked them all in together and it works. The thing is, was that a dream after all? Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. I know I've chosen a lot of prompts, but I have worked them all in together and it works. The thing is, was that a dream after all? Thanks for the review.
Great set-up and the whole opera thing was a dream and she got on with her dream lover - wow what a tale - cannot wait to see what happens next.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. But was it a dream or was it magic or possibly real?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thanks. But was it a dream or was it magic or possibly real?
What is real and what is a dream? I am sure I will find out when you post more chapters.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, you sure will. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Yes, you sure will. Thanks for reviewing.
Lots of food for thought there! Those potions sound very dodgy LOL
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
The doggiest! Nope - Severus is spot on about them. Thanks for the reivew.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
The doggiest! Nope - Severus is spot on about them. Thanks for the reivew.
Um... good start on your thousand prompts. Hahaha... I'm curious about the "dream" she had. It was a bit weird that she didn't remember leaving the Opera. Did she even really go?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. Yes, she did go. You'll find out more of what happened later. Thanks for the reveiw.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. Yes, she did go. You'll find out more of what happened later. Thanks for the reveiw.
Very neat beginning. I can not wait for more. "It wasn't Ron!" I love it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. I hope you like the next chapter too.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you. I hope you like the next chapter too.
Really enjoyed this story. Thanking you for writing it.
Cheers, Sonia :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much, and you are most welcome. It was fun to write.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)
Thank you very much, and you are most welcome. It was fun to write.