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Cold Moon
chivalric128 Reviews | 6.13/10 (128 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
Remus Lupin, unemployed and unhappy, makes a deadly, if not to say stupid, decision: he becomes a full-time wolf. Only Severus Snape has no intention to accept this.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Cold Moon
Hello! I'm so glad you sent me the link to your story. I really love both AU fics and Snape/Lupin -- so I'm excited to see where this will go! What a great start
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you so much! I was a bit worried you'd mind me using your potion for this sort of story...Hope you continue reading. Hope you like where this will lead to!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you so much! I was a bit worried you'd mind me using your potion for this sort of story...Hope you continue reading. Hope you like where this will lead to!
I really like the fact that Severus' passion is now directed at saving the life of his friend. Very good start!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks. Once Snape is determined to do something, he will do it, no matter the danger.Hope you like the rest of it - I'll update soon.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks. Once Snape is determined to do something, he will do it, no matter the danger.Hope you like the rest of it - I'll update soon.
I really like how you are changing things here. I'm greatly distressed that both Remus and Severus could literlaly tear each other appart - what gives? and you have Dumbledore as a conniving prick. Update! Don't leave us hanging!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I will send the next chapter to SW69 at the weekend. And yes, tearing apart is quite likely to happen...Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I will send the next chapter to SW69 at the weekend. And yes, tearing apart is quite likely to happen...Thanks for reviewing!
Bad decision by Remus indeed. It's strange seeing Snape as his friend, but it's not a bad thing. :) Looking forward to more.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I always see them as friends, in all my fics. The other option is Lucius Malfoy, but Remus is my favourite. The next chapter is on the way :-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I always see them as friends, in all my fics. The other option is Lucius Malfoy, but Remus is my favourite. The next chapter is on the way :-)Thanks for reviewing!
I really thought your story was great. It is great. I am puzzled by Snape being friends with Lupin...Snape tolerates Lupin, only so that he can make the wofsbane potion for him. Of course this is AU, so anything is possible. And Harry's hostilites towards Snape are still apparent. And Dumbledor is nothing but a snivilling wheeze bag....I love Albus Dumbledor, but he sounds very resigned to the fact of killing Remus.It is a great read, and I'll look forward to reading more.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Right then, let's give you a few hints so you won't be shocked at the things to come...This is very AU, and not only becaus all of them are alive. Snape and Lupin are frinds. Explanation in the next chapter.Absolutely everything is possible. Dumbledore will play a minor role in the coming chapters.Harry and Ron will be back in the Epilogue.Hope that helps ;-)And many thanks for reviewing
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Right then, let's give you a few hints so you won't be shocked at the things to come...This is very AU, and not only becaus all of them are alive. Snape and Lupin are frinds. Explanation in the next chapter.Absolutely everything is possible. Dumbledore will play a minor role in the coming chapters.Harry and Ron will be back in the Epilogue.Hope that helps ;-)And many thanks for reviewing
I hope all the best things for Remus. Can't put it into words well, but I like this story very much. Keep going!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Remus is in grave danger, I can tell you that much. But Snape won't give up. Thanks for your friendly words - I know that a Snape/Lupin centred story is not the best liked ship. But the prompt called out to me and I have written a bit too many SS/HG stories lately ;-)Next chapter will be sent to SW69 this weekend.
Response from elsolel (Reviewer)
I think it is a great ship. Lots of really well written Snape/Lupin is out there. I think a Snape/Lupin/Potter threesome was one of the first HP fanfictions I read. (McCay's)I've been hooked on HP fan fic ever since.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Do me a favour - give me some titles/archives. Most Snape/Lupin stories I found were either too short or too bitter.
Response from elsolel (Reviewer)
http://remembrall.slashcity.net/I hope the link works, otherwise, go to yahoo, look up chocolate frog, scan down to the one that says Snape slash fiction for adults. That's the one. The author writes other pairings, too. But, I feel lucky that my first exposure to HP fanfic was hers. (Or almost first) She's really good.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Remus is in grave danger, I can tell you that much. But Snape won't give up. Thanks for your friendly words - I know that a Snape/Lupin centred story is not the best liked ship. But the prompt called out to me and I have written a bit too many SS/HG stories lately ;-)Next chapter will be sent to SW69 this weekend.
Response from elsolel (Reviewer)
I think it is a great ship. Lots of really well written Snape/Lupin is out there. I think a Snape/Lupin/Potter threesome was one of the first HP fanfictions I read. (McCay's)I've been hooked on HP fan fic ever since.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Do me a favour - give me some titles/archives. Most Snape/Lupin stories I found were either too short or too bitter.
Response from elsolel (Reviewer)
http://remembrall.slashcity.net/I hope the link works, otherwise, go to yahoo, look up chocolate frog, scan down to the one that says Snape slash fiction for adults. That's the one. The author writes other pairings, too. But, I feel lucky that my first exposure to HP fanfic was hers. (Or almost first) She's really good.
What a perfect ending.Thanks for sharing. I have no problem with slash and would have read it even had there been a warning, though I must say that not everyone feels that way so you must be sure to put the proper warnings on your work.Thanks for sharing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Believe me, dear, I won't make that mistake again! The warning is up now, at the beginning of the story where it belongs. I didn't want to upset someone, but slash is so normal for me by now, I didn't even think I could offend someone.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Believe me, dear, I won't make that mistake again! The warning is up now, at the beginning of the story where it belongs. I didn't want to upset someone, but slash is so normal for me by now, I didn't even think I could offend someone.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
And now you're going to add Hermione to the mix ... how delightful. Dare I hope for a Remus/Hermione/Severus threesome? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Oh, yes, definitely! The sequel (one-shot) is about half way through. Lupin, Snape, Hermione. Interested in betaing it?
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Oh, yes, definitely! The sequel (one-shot) is about half way through. Lupin, Snape, Hermione. Interested in betaing it?
Oh, that was just lovely. SS/RL is one of my favourite pairings. I've always thought that they could be friends if they could only work through their past. And friends to lovers isn't such a huge leap.I know Remus is married to Tonks, but I wouldn't be adverse to her making it a trio.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
As you know by now, Tonks is more interested in Hermione ;-)I simply love SS/RL. I found I can't write 100% SS/HG, and I really like slash (easily to be detected in this chapter...) so Lupin is IMO the perfect match for Snape. They are so very different, they attract each other like magnets. I am affraid I will write some more stories about those two!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
As you know by now, Tonks is more interested in Hermione ;-)I simply love SS/RL. I found I can't write 100% SS/HG, and I really like slash (easily to be detected in this chapter...) so Lupin is IMO the perfect match for Snape. They are so very different, they attract each other like magnets. I am affraid I will write some more stories about those two!
Thank goodness they both made it through all right.I'm thinking there may be more than friendship between them soon. Yay!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Glad you are looking forward to a bit of male-male action ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Glad you are looking forward to a bit of male-male action ;-)
This chapter was a real nail biter!Loving it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks, dear. I wanted it to be real and am glad I managed to keep your attention.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks, dear. I wanted it to be real and am glad I managed to keep your attention.
Poor Harry. LOL That was an awful lot for him to digest, but everyone is happy with it so it really isn't any of his business, is it?
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Not only for him, for all of them ;-) And no, it's none of his business. They are happy, that's all that counts.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Not only for him, for all of them ;-) And no, it's none of his business. They are happy, that's all that counts.
Well, that was utterly unexpected. Who knew that Tonks would also have an alternative lifestyle. LOL Poor Severus got tossed into the deep end of the pool, didn't he?
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I couldn't figured out another way to make it work. I painted the picture of a happily married couple, then let Remus end up in bed with Snape, but didn't want to destroy the marriage. So - a girlfriend for Tonks came in handy. Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I couldn't figured out another way to make it work. I painted the picture of a happily married couple, then let Remus end up in bed with Snape, but didn't want to destroy the marriage. So - a girlfriend for Tonks came in handy. Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Poor Severus having his walls brought down, but he really needed it. Of course, this is really going to complicate things, isn't it? I can't imagine Tonks taking this without reaction.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Weeell, not without reaction, no. But without a bad reaction, definitely. No one can live without walls around him all his life. Not happily, anyway. So I think it is a good thing this happened to Snape.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Weeell, not without reaction, no. But without a bad reaction, definitely. No one can live without walls around him all his life. Not happily, anyway. So I think it is a good thing this happened to Snape.
Thank goodness they both survived. Hopefully Lupin will have a better outlook on life now. Severus, too.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Well, I couldn't kill one of them in the middle of the story, could I? And I can tell you that yes, both will be happy in the end.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Well, I couldn't kill one of them in the middle of the story, could I? And I can tell you that yes, both will be happy in the end.Thanks for reviewing!
I really like your story and am looking forward to the sequels. Such a tangled web of relationships, very interesting though.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Two out of three sequels are started, but I won't be able to post before November. Thanks for encouraging me, I know that Snape/Lupin is not the best liked ship ;-)
Response from silverdoe (Reviewer)
I will read almost anything with Snape in it, except SS/RW ::shivers:: Snape and Lupin don't bother me as long as the story is good and the characters are not to OOC.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Two out of three sequels are started, but I won't be able to post before November. Thanks for encouraging me, I know that Snape/Lupin is not the best liked ship ;-)
Response from silverdoe (Reviewer)
I will read almost anything with Snape in it, except SS/RW ::shivers:: Snape and Lupin don't bother me as long as the story is good and the characters are not to OOC.
so you wrapped everything up like a shakespeare plot! And they lived happily every after. Not my usual cuppa tea, but I am reading every story for the challenge. And it's nice to read somethng new! Thanks for a happy ending after some exciting werewolf hunting.
And thank you for finishing the tale. I like finshed stories!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
*g* I am very glad you read this one and reviewed as well. I know very well that this is not the usual HG/SS story, not even the usual slash fic, but here you go, I like unusual. And I like happy endings.Thanks for reviewing. And I am totally with you - I love finished stories, which is the reason why I have never, so far, left one unfinished...
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
Ah ha! a clue to your identity! no abandoned fics!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
*g* I am very glad you read this one and reviewed as well. I know very well that this is not the usual HG/SS story, not even the usual slash fic, but here you go, I like unusual. And I like happy endings.Thanks for reviewing. And I am totally with you - I love finished stories, which is the reason why I have never, so far, left one unfinished...
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
Ah ha! a clue to your identity! no abandoned fics!
I liked this chapter very much.... I wonder though how will Tonks react to her husbands little indisgression. Or will they somehow form a yummy triad... Oh the possibliities for Remmi. Only thing I like better then Severus/Remus is Remus/Lucius
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you very much for reviewing, and I promise that I will solve the Tonks problem in the next chapter. And I have a Severus/Lucius in store, but won't post it before the challenge is over ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you very much for reviewing, and I promise that I will solve the Tonks problem in the next chapter. And I have a Severus/Lucius in store, but won't post it before the challenge is over ;-)
guhsuch an awesome chappie.oh my, what about tonks?can't wait for more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Next chapter will be sent to SW69 tonight, it should be online sort of soon. Will solve the problem with Tonks :-)Again - thanks for leaving a review!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Next chapter will be sent to SW69 tonight, it should be online sort of soon. Will solve the problem with Tonks :-)Again - thanks for leaving a review!
"I never tried to kill myself," Snape pointed out coldly. "You aren't alive, either," Lupin exclaimed. guhhhh....awesome chappie i must say.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you so very much - for reading as well as for reviewing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you so very much - for reading as well as for reviewing.
Time stretched like chewing gumfecking brilliant.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
:-) I somehow have the feeling that you didn't like the chapter too much, given the rating. What was wrong for you? And thanks for leaving a review anyway ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
:-) I somehow have the feeling that you didn't like the chapter too much, given the rating. What was wrong for you? And thanks for leaving a review anyway ;-)
i don't remember andromeda being a bitch. did you make her not like remus?i felt like we got to see more of remus' character, you know? oh remus.
before i was thinking, how the hell are snape and remus friends? but i understand now.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
In this story, she is a bitch; she is one more nail to Remus's coffin, so to say ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
In this story, she is a bitch; she is one more nail to Remus's coffin, so to say ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
i don't believe that snape would call dumby 'old man'...
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Hmmm, I must admit, I can't remember having seen it in canon, but as Albus is old and Snape can be quite rude every now and then, it seems to fit, at least to me. He calls him that in several of my stories; guess I have to look it up :-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Hmmm, I must admit, I can't remember having seen it in canon, but as Albus is old and Snape can be quite rude every now and then, it seems to fit, at least to me. He calls him that in several of my stories; guess I have to look it up :-)Thanks for reviewing!
Ok, whoa. I didn't exactly expect the story to turn in this direction.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I guess I should apologise for not having put warnings up at the beginning. I simply didn't think of it - I only warn if there is something that deserves the warning, and that only happened in the current chapter. Again, sorry. I hope you are not angry at me now for turning friendship into love, but to me, it seemed a logical step.The next chapter is harmless again. Well. Without detailed sex scenes, that is ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Oh, no it didn't offend me. I just don't always read slash. Some parings yes, but not all. It just came as a shock, because I do like to knowin advance if that is the type of story I am reading. I was surprised. However, the lead in was very well done, and the coupling - I admit I scaned through, although the emotional aspect was heart tearing. But I wasn't offended at all. The thing I do want to ask is: Are they going to go back to being just friends, or is this a slash story? How will Tonks react to this, and is Remus going to tell her? Situtations like this can destroy a marriage.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
That the story would turn in this direction was a bit of a surprise to me as well, as I wanted to write a friendship story. Therefore, no warnings, and believe me, I got a good scolding from SW69 because of this error ;-) Glad I didn't offend you - the proper warnings are up now. Better late than never...The next chapter will be sent to SW tonight, and there are no warnings needed for it. I will solve the Tonks problem and I promise they manage to talk. All of them. I have no intention to destroy a marriage, nor a friendship. Let me know if I managed this task to your satisfaction, please!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I guess I should apologise for not having put warnings up at the beginning. I simply didn't think of it - I only warn if there is something that deserves the warning, and that only happened in the current chapter. Again, sorry. I hope you are not angry at me now for turning friendship into love, but to me, it seemed a logical step.The next chapter is harmless again. Well. Without detailed sex scenes, that is ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Oh, no it didn't offend me. I just don't always read slash. Some parings yes, but not all. It just came as a shock, because I do like to knowin advance if that is the type of story I am reading. I was surprised. However, the lead in was very well done, and the coupling - I admit I scaned through, although the emotional aspect was heart tearing. But I wasn't offended at all. The thing I do want to ask is: Are they going to go back to being just friends, or is this a slash story? How will Tonks react to this, and is Remus going to tell her? Situtations like this can destroy a marriage.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
That the story would turn in this direction was a bit of a surprise to me as well, as I wanted to write a friendship story. Therefore, no warnings, and believe me, I got a good scolding from SW69 because of this error ;-) Glad I didn't offend you - the proper warnings are up now. Better late than never...The next chapter will be sent to SW tonight, and there are no warnings needed for it. I will solve the Tonks problem and I promise they manage to talk. All of them. I have no intention to destroy a marriage, nor a friendship. Let me know if I managed this task to your satisfaction, please!
Umm, invite Tonks?
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
*lol* Tonks is not out of the picture, in case you wondered. I will sort that problem out in the next chapter, which will go into queue sometime next week.Thanks for the hint, though ;-) I've got something else in mind for her.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
*lol* Tonks is not out of the picture, in case you wondered. I will sort that problem out in the next chapter, which will go into queue sometime next week.Thanks for the hint, though ;-) I've got something else in mind for her.