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Cold Moon
chivalric128 Reviews | 6.13/10 (128 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
Remus Lupin, unemployed and unhappy, makes a deadly, if not to say stupid, decision: he becomes a full-time wolf. Only Severus Snape has no intention to accept this.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Cold Moon
Oh boy, I hope these two will come around!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
That depends on what you mean with this ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
That depends on what you mean with this ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, those two men, that is so heartbreaking.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
The next chapter will end up in tears. Hope that helps ;-)Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
The next chapter will end up in tears. Hope that helps ;-)Thanks a lot for reviewing!
i am really loving this story. in the scene at the beginning, you described severus's agony and determination so well. i liked that you also put in little touches of humor, in the midst of such serious stuff. and i really liked in the hospital when dumbledore was showing concern for severus. one would like to think he would show some affection for him like that. the scene with remus when he says severus has no friends and no life was so sad - i really hope that you are going to take this in a direction so that he has more to live for. : )
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Now which direction that would be? *look innocently up to the ceiling*Next chapter is written, I will post it early next week.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Now which direction that would be? *look innocently up to the ceiling*Next chapter is written, I will post it early next week.Thanks for reviewing!
Hmm. I detect a slashy undertone, but it could just be wishful thinking...
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I am very fond of wishful thinking... and I am very, very fond of slash *smirks* Hope that makes it easier to wait for the next chapter.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from peppermint (Reviewer)
Score! :D
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I am very fond of wishful thinking... and I am very, very fond of slash *smirks* Hope that makes it easier to wait for the next chapter.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from peppermint (Reviewer)
Score! :D
Remus now has hope, where will Severus find his?
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Clear question, clear answer: in Lupin's arms.Hope you are not offended by slash... and as a warining, the next chapter will end up in tears ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Clear question, clear answer: in Lupin's arms.Hope you are not offended by slash... and as a warining, the next chapter will end up in tears ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
This is so exactly the kind of story I have been craving. My two favourites getting on and actually being friends. Thanks for this. I just simply love it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
In this case I really hope that you are not offended by male-male relationships, as the next chapter will get quite... specific. Thanks for liking the story so far. And many thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
In this case I really hope that you are not offended by male-male relationships, as the next chapter will get quite... specific. Thanks for liking the story so far. And many thanks for reviewing!
That was awesome~
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you!
Excellent and exciting! Thank you for writing this! Looking forward to that next chapter you say you have written.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Acutally, it is with SouthernWitch already. Will nag her a bit to put it into queue...Thanks so much for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Acutally, it is with SouthernWitch already. Will nag her a bit to put it into queue...Thanks so much for reviewing!
Good for Severus. there are definately times when a nasty tongue come in handy, and a really horrid mother-in-law is one of those times.I just hope he can find Remus in time.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
He will, or I wouldn't have a story ;-)And Snape will keep his nasty tongue when chasing Lupin...Thanks for reviewing. The next chapter should go into queue soon, I've sent it to SW.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
He will, or I wouldn't have a story ;-)And Snape will keep his nasty tongue when chasing Lupin...Thanks for reviewing. The next chapter should go into queue soon, I've sent it to SW.
I'm a bit worried for Snape. Poor bloke. Hope all's well.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
You've got every reason to be worried ;-)Next chaper follows soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
You've got every reason to be worried ;-)Next chaper follows soon. Thanks for reviewing!
i just read the first two chapters and like this story a lot. i enjoy stories that explore a friendship between snape and lupin, in whatever form, so i'm excited about this one. as far as the grammar issues - it seems to me like it was written by someone for whom english is not the first language, so there are some little awkward things that made it through. that was my impression, but it did not detract too much from the story for me. that's a real compliment coming from me - trust me. : )
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you - concerning all issues. In my opinion, Snape and Lupin are always friends, at least. Sometimes, they are more. I truly hope you will like where this story goes.And no, I am not a native speaker, but usually, after my betas had their go, it is indetectable. I will have a strong word with them :-)And of course I trust you. I trust all my reviewers!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you - concerning all issues. In my opinion, Snape and Lupin are always friends, at least. Sometimes, they are more. I truly hope you will like where this story goes.And no, I am not a native speaker, but usually, after my betas had their go, it is indetectable. I will have a strong word with them :-)And of course I trust you. I trust all my reviewers!
Interesting. Oh, I hope that Severus is successful. I would be sad, very sad, if they died.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I wouldn't kill my two main characters that early in the story *g*Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
I wouldn't kill my two main characters that early in the story *g*Thanks for reviewing!
I wish Severus would poison this particular version of Andromeda. And really, Tonks and Teddy need to move in any case.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Promise: they will. After Snape might or might not have found Lupin.Thanks so much for reviewing!P.S. Poisoning her... interesting thought. It was meant only as a threat, but you gave me an idea :-))
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Promise: they will. After Snape might or might not have found Lupin.Thanks so much for reviewing!P.S. Poisoning her... interesting thought. It was meant only as a threat, but you gave me an idea :-))
I like where this story is going. I'll be following it avidly!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
This story is going into the woods ;-) At first. Looking forward to further opinions!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
This story is going into the woods ;-) At first. Looking forward to further opinions!
I have a great fondness for Snape/Lupin fics, so I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes.I've always thought that Snape and Lupin could be friends; they're contemporaries, after all, and share some history. I think your portrayal of Dumbledore is pretty close to who he actually was -- he was conniving and manipulative and had, I think, no real concern for anyone. He was a user.Thanks for sharing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
In my world, they are always friends, as they always both survive. And they complement each other - what more to expect in a friendship?Thanks for your words on D. He'll be back in chapter 4. Twinkling.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
In my world, they are always friends, as they always both survive. And they complement each other - what more to expect in a friendship?Thanks for your words on D. He'll be back in chapter 4. Twinkling.
Anonymous
Wow, I'm impressed. This is more AU than most of the FFs i know, but it is really GOOD AU. As well, the characters are likewise rather in character als well as out of character - but it fits all nicely together and seems to be working really well so far. I like your Remus, Snape, Tonks and so on quite well.
Author's Response: I always try to keep my protagonists in character (oh, no, hang on, they're not mine, are they :-))
Of course I had to make adjustments so this story could work - Ms Rowling certainly had never in mind to them becoming friends. I hope I will be able to keep them in character even in chapter 5.
Please (if I may ask you that) let me know if the coming chapters are to your liking - I know that the Snape/Lupin ship is not the most popular out there...
Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: I don't mind this relationship at all. I'm open to any relationship or friendship - as long as it is plausible what draws the charcters together... I'll be offline for some weeks, though, so I might be late in reviewing ;o)
Do you know the wonderful Snape/Lupin-story by Snape's Nightie on ffnet - it's slash, though, but so well done and working so well...
He certainly got Andromeda's number! Good chapter!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks! Was a bit unsure if I should add Andromeda at all, but she just appeared and wouldn't go away. So I let Snape talk to her ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks! Was a bit unsure if I should add Andromeda at all, but she just appeared and wouldn't go away. So I let Snape talk to her ;-)
What is the MATTER with Dumbledore anyway? Does he have to play with everyone's lives? The only "bad" thing Remus has ever done in his life is survive being bitten by a werewolf as a child. This makes him what? useless, expendable, inconvenient. And how typical for Potter to go looking for someone to blame rather than trying to seek for a cure. Guess he just wants to make it clear, "Hey, it's not MY fault! Greyback bit him. Snape screwed up the wolfsbane." They both make me sick. I just want to muck out out my barn right on their stupid faces! Get out of the way for crying out loud and let the ADULTS take care of this. Grrrrrrrrrrrr!*steps off of soap box*
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks for your clear words - I couldn't have worded them better! I know I portrayed Harry as a cliche, and Dumbledore as well, but at least the old man will get to his senses soon. I will update regularly. Would be delighted if you told me if you like where I take this story!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thanks for your clear words - I couldn't have worded them better! I know I portrayed Harry as a cliche, and Dumbledore as well, but at least the old man will get to his senses soon. I will update regularly. Would be delighted if you told me if you like where I take this story!
Yes! Severus would do something like that, he is that kind of person. Very good job. Needs a bit of polishing in the spelling and grammar area but very good.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Argh! Don't say that aloud - this chapter got betead three times plus the lovely admin from this side!Will double check the spelling and grammer for the next chapter. And... thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Argh! Don't say that aloud - this chapter got betead three times plus the lovely admin from this side!Will double check the spelling and grammer for the next chapter. And... thanks for reviewing!
original and interesting idea! I like seeing Snape as a loyal friend, we know he can be loyal.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Once he consideres someone a friend, he does everything for this someone - look what he did for Dumbledore! It just takes him a little while to realise someone is his friend :-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Once he consideres someone a friend, he does everything for this someone - look what he did for Dumbledore! It just takes him a little while to realise someone is his friend :-)
Anonymous
Promising start, and quite an interesting AU! I'm eager for the next chapters.
Author's Response: I'll update regularly. The story is finished, but needs betareading. So one to two weeks between chapters, I'd say.
Thanks for reviewing!
oooo the plot thickens. Please update soon!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
The next chapter will be sent to SW69 sometime next week. And I promise to update regularly after that one as well.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
The next chapter will be sent to SW69 sometime next week. And I promise to update regularly after that one as well.Thanks for reviewing!
Wow! Look at that picture!!!!!!! So cool! And story is great too! hahahaha...
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you! Took me a while to get the picture as I wanted it ;-) The next chapters will all have a picture of the same kind, just to warn you.And many thanks for reviewing as well!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Thank you! Took me a while to get the picture as I wanted it ;-) The next chapters will all have a picture of the same kind, just to warn you.And many thanks for reviewing as well!
Oh, so cool how he threatened Mrs. Tonks - that evil angry wench! How dare she say such things in front of a baby! That aside - cool chapter, doll. Next?
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Next soon - it's written and currently gets betaed. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
Next soon - it's written and currently gets betaed. Thanks for reviewing!
It's nice to see Ron acting reasonably. Interesting to see Lupin and Snape as friends. Thanks for taking on this challenge, it looks to be interesting.
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
He can't be the prick all the time. Actually, I like him - as long as he is not married to Hermione ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Cold Moon)
He can't be the prick all the time. Actually, I like him - as long as he is not married to Hermione ;-)Thanks for reviewing!