New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Argh - such an evil cliffhanger! Why didn't she sneak into Hogwarts straight away? OMG, I hope you'll have plenty of leisure time these days to finish the next chapter...
yay! Voldemort is gone! *dances* *sniffles* If Severus dies..........
What a fantastic journey this fic has proved to be. I first came across this over a year ago, and waited patiently for every addition. RL events overtook me around Sept last year and I was not able to check for updates! Until now.....What an amazing ending to an amazing story. The tension cleverly wrought at each chapter's end for evil cliffies!Wonderfully written,you're now a firm fav...will watch out for any future stories you offer up!
ABSOLUTELY STUPENDOUS! BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
NO! cliff hangers are evil! I love this story and always enjoy reading updates for it. I can't wait for you to update again.
We are almost there, and yet... another cliffhanger!ARRG!Great job as always.
gah! She CANNOT die!
It's been weeks but finally your back, yah. Have been checking daily for a new chapter and finally it is here and I loved it. Please update soon.
I will be forever grateful to Droxy and SBrande for forcing your hand - and I'll offer whatever bribes I can find to keep it going. More please?*bats eyelashes*
Holy cow, I sure hope Hermione will be alright. Severus will never forgive himself if she should die.Whatever curse or spell Morgen shot at her has really affected her. She seems totally out of it.Hopefully, Prof. Dumbledor and Madam Pomfrey can save her from whatever is ailing her.Again, a great chapter, and I will most definitely be looking forward to the next update!
Evil cliffie, go away! *chants this three times in a row*Sigh... Ah, what a wonderful, nail-biting chapter. Poor Hermione, she got a rebound of a curse, didn't she? Eagerly waiting for more. *chants again*
Wow! That was quite a battle! Great chaapter and story, of course. Glad to see Bella get hers, she deserved it, the filthy witch! Too bad Morgen did'nt get hers too. Pettigrew makes me laugh, with his childish antics. Just like he was at Hogwarts.Glad that Hermione and Severus survived the ordeal. Can't wait to see what happens next for our two favorite people! Once again, a great story and I really enjoy reading it.
wtf???????? ok she made it out of voldermorts clutches to suffer this??????????? grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr and i want to know whats ganna happen to that bitch morgen will that be part of the next chapter please dont telll me its some kind of spelll that what ever morgen feels hermione will because i know you have a twisted mind lol but beuatifully written hugs and chocolatefaula tara
Ahh my Dear, Dear Subverse...You leave us hanging with a cliffy, but it's a good place to slice the chapter. Excellent evil cliffy too. My dark heart is hoping she is also bound to Voldemort or worse Pettigrew- snicker.I want to know your secret for writing erotica. Seriously, you could write this stuff for a living. A lot of pro romance writers live in Plano of all places. They have meetings.Regarding said erotica- you manage in infuse feeling into lemons and you provide great lush imagery. I feel inedquate to even try to approach this level.Oh hell, I guess I'll just go plan my next Snape....
yay! update! i love this story. thanks so much for this wonderful update. i dying to find out what's causing these siezures.
great chapter!!!!
*gasps*I thought the curse had been removed - something has made it worse or did they manage to move it from Severus to someone else??*is bitting nails*
Oh now I know their Imperio did not tell you to leave us hanging like this! I will simply perish if there is not more soon. I have missed this story. I certainly hope it does not have to suffer or I should say I hope I do not have to suffer from another exchange hiatus. Beautiful as always. Irish
Oh, what could be wrong now? (Well, a whole lot of things, come to think of it.) Thanks for responding to an Imperio with such a great update!
Is Severus so out of sorts that he can't recognise a nightmare when he sees one?Boy, he's gonna give Hermione what for when he realises she's been releases from the compunction. Will she get distracted during an exam, or a study session, or will he merely notice her lack of trembling?And it's kind of sad that he thinks "decent women" won't pleasure their men orally. :(
Nasty thought, but Bellatrix's compulsion didn't transfer to Hermione when Morgen killed her, since Bella had been cursed first by the same person...did it? I remember her crying out in severe pain 'before the body hit the ground', or something like that...
It'd be horrible if she was now bound that way to two people, 'one' of which being Voldie...and his snake...
*shudders*Really hoping that there's a quick update this time!
Oh, what's wrong with Hermione? This is full of suspense (and yummy lemons but that's another story)! From the way you end this chapter, it seems that Severus could guess what was wrong with her. I just hope he's right and he's not too late... *whimpers*Waiting (not-so) impatiently for the next chappie now!
Hmmm. What on earth is going on. Has the curse been shifted elsewhere, has the curse been withdrawn causing withdrawal effects, or has she spontaneously developed epilepsy just to confuse them all? Hey, Sev! Try a little valium suppository!
Ahh, once again you leave us in suspense.Great chapter.
Well, I have been a long time reader of this story and had lost track of updates until I was looking on TPP for another story and I saw this was updated.Well, The Dark LOrd knows how to run the show, so to speak. Poor Hermione is going through hell, listening to Voldemort and Snape degrade her.I just cannot fathom, Wormtail and Dolohov being her 'lovers. How disgusting! I'm glad to be back reading your wonderful tale, Subversa, now I'll catch up on the newest chapters!