New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Oh, no! Hermione is in serious trouble. I'm glad that Severus had the chance to comfort her before going to sleep and didn't just rush to relieve her symptoms.
OMG, I was so excited when I saw this had been updated, and now my heart is racing. I hope she's okay.
This is why you are a GODDESS T SS/HG FANS. We think the curse is broken and then what happens.............not what we think. I feel very brave tonight posting my 1st comment ever on this wonderful story,but you were the to 1st post on my lj (many thanks, i really could'nt believe it was really you). I know most of your reviewers are authors so I hope you dont mind me being so bold. Many thanks your readers. ? Are you writing something else....................we don't know about
Subversa, dearest, that's just cruel. Waiting, hoping, worrying about our Severus and Hermione, wondering if they're well and having lots of beautifully smutty sex, and now we have to worry MORE?Please say we get good news and lots of wonderful, heart melting smut soon?BeccaBTW, you've officially turned me into an addict. (I should be out transplanting mint and doing laundry instead of reading)
first, nothing makes my heart leap in my chest like seeing that you have updated this story. this chapter was stunning, as always. the way you brought them out of that horrible situation, and severus attending to her so sweetly, and trying to maintain his distance and all of that. and then, just when things finally seem to have settled down a little - boom! another evil cliffie! aaarrrggghhhh! so who can we get to Imperio you to post the next one?!!
Another EVIL clifie!!! I'm really wondering what that is all about! But I'm so glad to be able to read this before going on vacation tomorrow!!! Great chapter!!!!!gab
Very nice chapter.Hmmm.But the ending scares me.Great writing as ever.
Oooh cliffy. I'm tempted to imperius you so I don't have to wait. Wonderful job as always. I'll keep my theories to myself today as I've already gotten in trouble once for speaking my mind and annoying two authors in one day would be more than I could take!
Bravo Bravo to Droxy and SBrande! My heart is leaping from joy from this wonderfully pined update from Subversa!!! Thank havens for the muses that bit you! I can't even begin to count my smiles!
Scary chapter, I can't wait to find out what the heck is wrong with Hermione.
Side effects? I've heard of side-effects of the casting of a spell (such as Cruciatus), but never of the 'removal' of a spell ("if" such is the case)---???You've put lots of questions into my mind, but oh, what a perfect vehicle by which for him to realize what she truly means to him!Can't wait for more!
and the crowd goes WILD!!!! We need more!! Yeah for an update!
Wow, wonder what Morgen has done to Hermione? Thanks for the update.
Thank you for another wonderful chapter. I am glad that Severus is allowing himself to feel, even if he doesn't want to. I look forward to finding out how this evil cliffhanger is resolved!
Oh, you are evil with the cliffhangers! (no, no, I didn't mean evil, nice author. Please make them all happy again, good lady!) I'm so glad they escaped the Death Eaters, though. Excellent writing!
Wow...that was sooo sweet!!!I loved the way Severus cared for Hermione...even if his reaction to her blowjob was a bit chauvinistic: who said only bad girl can do that kind of things? Anyway I think her condition is Morgen's fault: what if she used something other then cruciatus on Hermione? How many chapters are there 'til the end? will we see an happy ending?
First of all, thank you for the update. Seccond, with a chapter like this, I sincerely hope that Droxy and SBrande are strong enough to hold the imperion long enough to force the next chapter from you:-) If they fail, I will be waiting with Honeydukes finest chocolate, trying the "nice" way to compell you to give us the next chapter and help for Hermione..... Does her illness have anything to do with that errant spell that hit her? Is it a complication from her curse? Please update sooooon.....:-))))
I love this story! And Im gonna keep pulling on my hair till I find out what's going on with Hermione! hehe I loved the different thought processes of Severus this chapter, and can't wait to read more (please please please soon!) Thank you so much for sharing your creativity! :)
Ack! No! She can't die! You won't let her. I know you won't. But you'll make Severus realize that he actually does love her! That's a great idea! Plus the fact that everyone reading this story will kill you if you kill her. So it's good.*nods sagely*Thank you for the chapter, and please please please please please post another soon!~Katie
Can we hope for an update or are you on vacation?
What a chapter - good thinking on Severus's part. Morgen is so going to be out of the picture now - Morgen is dead witch walking. I loved the end of the chapter where he said ah, petal - he does care for her.
Oh crap to curse her to another - how can they get out of this one. I think Hermione does believe that he does not care for her but I think he does to some degree.
This story is brilliant. There is no other word for it. I'm waiting breathlessly for an update.
All I can say is "wow and amaizing".Was it Snape that cast the magit that saved Tonks, if not what on earth was it? An just WHAT was the sharp pain Hermione experienced when Bella died?Oh, yes, and what a perfect way for Bella to go. I dont think Voldemort is going to be very happy with Morgan.
First of all, I must make my sincerest apologies to you ... I just realized this afternoon (upon my third reading of this chapter) that I have not left a single review here through out my reading of this wonderful story! I can make no excuses for myself other than to say that I began reading this and several other WIPs at the same time, and I was so enthralled that I just raced from chapter to chapter -- I've been trying to catch up like crazy. A poor reflection on me, and one for which I am heartily sorry.This chapter was very intense and angst filled for me. Your acumen in weaving together the disparate threads of this story leave me breathless -- making whole cloth out of many pieces. I have several favorite authors whose work I follow, and while all of them are as good as you are, none are better. The sheer detail with which you imbue The Love You Take is par excellence.This chapter has answered some of my questions, but raised others. Now I have seen how clever is our Severus in the way he secures and protects Hermione! But now I ask myself if the pain she felt as Bella died was the ending of the curse, and, if so, how will that affect the relationship between her and Severus.The ending of this chapter ( ‘Well played,’ he said simply, his caressing tone communicating more than the words he would not speak.' and 'Ah, petal,’ he said, and tenderly gathered her into his arms.' ) have given me hope that all will be well with our hero and heroine, but I'm such a 'fraidy cat' that if the curse has ended, Severus will feel obligated to end his relationship with Hermione so she can have a chance to fall in love with someone her own age. He's noble like that, you know -- thick as molasses sometimes, but noble nonetheless. I know he loves her. I know it!!!!!I am glad that Bella got what was coming to her, and I hope, now, that Morgen will, as well. Will the Dark Lord kill her? or make her his new plaything? or wed her to Wormtail or Dolohov? Perhaps I might be forgiven if I say that killing is too good for her. But I am prejudiced -- she has roundly messed with Severus and Hermione, and I think a little, make that a lot, of suffering on her part would be just desserts.I liked that Andromeda and Tonks have been brought into the story, too, and I hope they'll survive their injuries.My absolutely favorite part of this chapter are the words, ‘Ah, petal.’ WELL DONE, WELL DONE, WELL DONE !!!I remain your devoted fan, Beth