Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
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Can Severus and Hermione stay out of their own way long enough to fall in love?
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rhiannon113
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I love writing and reading. I work from home, which gives me the temptation to read or write fanfic instead of work! I have lived in both the US and UK. I currently live in the US, with my husband and three beautiful girls (all of whom wish to attend Hogwarts when they're of age! LOL).
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ACK!! :( i guess its as good a spot as any to make a stop, but, :(
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
My apologies! The moment I wrote it, I knew I'd have to 'duck and cover'!! Thanks so much for sticking with me! There is hope on the horizon and my beta already has the next chappie!! Thanks also for your review!*hugs*Rhiannon
Okay, I will try not to hate you but if you don't update soon me and a whole bunch of other readers will hunt you down and drag the rest of the story out of you. I love you. PLEASE hurry with the next chapter. Poor Severus he can never seem to get a break.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
*gulp* I understand!! I hate cliffies myself! There was no other way...There are some good times coming for Severus, don't worry. The next bit is with my beta, and it's got some nice back story for him. That might help...Thanks so much for your review and for your support! *hugs*Rhiannon
Rediculously long chapters are quite welcome. However, you left us with a nice evil-cliffie. I don't know whether to grin evilly or to frown menacingly. I'll do both.
Poor girl, so in love she's almost dead! What a nasty plant.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Well, the whole 'love is the most powerful force in the world' bit has always made my brain whirl in an evil way. This is the offspring of that... There are a few extremely long chapters on the way, but this one couldn't be. Sorry!! The next should be up soon!Thanks so much for your review!! Please stick with me!*hugs*Rhiannon
omgosh! They just get comfortable with the thought of having kids in the future, and then this happens. Tragic!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Isn't that life, though? Get one issue resolved and another kindly crops up to take its place. LOL Thanks so much for the review and for reading. I hope you'll stick with me!*hugs*Rhiannon
evil cliffhangers
.... we can deal with long chapters 
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So sorry. I honestly debated for quite a while on continuing. It just couldn't work. The next bit should be up soon! Thanks so much for reading and for your review. I hope you'll stick with me. *hugs*Rhiannon
Wow. Great chapter but that was just ... mean. I guess Severus is past due on a harsh payment for the happiness he'd found, eh? That's too bad.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
There is hope on the horizon!! This had to happen for the rest of the story to work. It will all work out in the end, I only want to torture them a bit first. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
What an awful plant! That was a great chapter though.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks. I love Neville and had to work him in one way or another. I've also been fascinated by the 'flip side' of Dumbledore's proclamation that 'love is the most powerful force in the world.' Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
What!!!! Girlfriend, you had better get this settled real soon....we are all waiting *stamping foot impatiently*
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
*cowers behind ;aptop* Hold your fire! I assure you, the next chappie is with my beta! There is a resolution on the way! Thanks so much for your enthusiasm and review!*hugs*Rhiannon
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Thank you Dear
Oh my gosh that a good cliff hhanger. Really enjoyed this chapter hope you update soon.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So glady you like it! I really didn't want to leave it there, but it was the logical point to end things! The next chapter is with my beta now, it should be up soon.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
How frightening. I totally understand Severus though, I wasn't sure I wanted a child, but my husband did, and I wouldn't trade my son for anything.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so pleased that you could identify with their situation. I've had friends with similar issues. It's a situation that's always intrigued me. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Good story, but, while I understand what you are going for, I don't care for the Ron-bashing. But it's your story, so.... :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I know, I feel more than a bit guilty for the Ron-hating. But so many of the other have been made to be the villian I didn't wanted to try something a little different. I love 'Canon Ron', don't misunderstand but I am taking a side of his personality and exploiting it for my own use. Ron will drop out of the story now, and we will be focused on Severus and Hermione. Please continue to read (and review)! I really appreciate the comments! I hope you'll like (or at least understand) where I'm going to take this one. *hugs*Rhiannon
Will you let Ron come to his senses? I was with Hermione and Severus on all the wedding nonsense but the wedding itself was so beautiful that I'm glad that they didn't just run off....oops there I go again, pretending they are real people. Or is that just good writing. Can hardly wait for the honeymoon
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Ron is taking Hermione's feelings for Severus way too personally. Some of his behaviours are coming from an experience I had w/ a friend. Some people, though they're very good people, get thrown off by big disappointments. It's something I wanted explore a bit. I feel like they're real as well, but thanks very much for the compliment!! Hope you enjoy the Honeymoon, its a little different than anything I've written before. I hope you like it... But it is a massive lemon!! Hopefully no one will be offended! Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Ron can be such an idiot.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes!! *snickers evilly* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Ron's a bit slow on the uptake... :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I love Ron, but delight in 'throwing him under the bus!' LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Lovely ceremony! I loved every word of it. It's too bad that Ron can't get with the program; he will certainly regret losing her friendship. Great chapter. :D
Can we hope that Ron got castrated. How dare he interrupt a wedding like that. Hermione is too kind.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Sadly, he was not castrated. But his genitals were reminded (rather stringently) that Hermione is not his to man-handle!!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
What a jerk. I'm glad she zapped him. LOL. You'd think he'd have gotten the hint before she had to do that. Jerk, jerk, jerk. But, I digress...Lovely wedding, especially the vows. And I loved the entwined Patronuses. Ahh, so romantic.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm pleased that you liked the wedding. =] The Patronuses were a whim I decided to include for my own satisfaction, thanks for noticing!! Ron was quite the git. I think he knows his place now! I hate to throw poor Ron 'under the bus', but had to have some drama!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Those vows were amazing. Simple and heart-felt. Great chapter.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you. I didn't want them to be too over-the-top or flowery. I'm so pleased it came across that way! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! *hugs*Rhiannon
Oh, you little devil! Fantastic chapter. Loved the descriptions of the parties. I totally agree that Hermione needed to say something to Severus about his behavior if their relationship was going to be successful. :D
Lovely chapter, great fun!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks very much! I appreciate the review and your taking time to read my story!! *hugs*Rhia
I love this fic. It's been awhile since you have updated. Would love some more please.