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Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
rhiannon113121 Reviews | 121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Can Severus and Hermione stay out of their own way long enough to fall in love?
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rhiannon113
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I love writing and reading. I work from home, which gives me the temptation to read or write fanfic instead of work! I have lived in both the US and UK. I currently live in the US, with my husband and three beautiful girls (all of whom wish to attend Hogwarts when they're of age! LOL).
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Well... at least they'll have something to talk about for the next few months. I'm glad he didn't give into his 'darker' inner voice. That kind of thinking would have devastated her. Nice one! :D
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks very much. I'm so pleased that you liked it. I hope you'll stay with me. =]Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Well, I'm glad he's got over his blame game. Its not like she needs to trap him into marriage or anything! He needs to realise everyone just does their best. Its all anyone can do!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I've seen a load of men who are married play that particular 'blame game' and it always annoys me. Sometimes, things really are accidents. One man said he just didn't want to have that many childrend. I told him to stop knocking-up his wife! LOL I'm pleased that you enjoyed it! I hope you'll stick with me. =] Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.*hugs* Rhiannon
Psycho-pregnant Hermione was hilarious. Hopefully we'll see more of her. And Severus' uncertainty was understandable for him. Hopefully, he'll see how 'easy' parenting is and calm down. Well, hopefully, he'll just calm down and have some belief in himself.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I try to set up situations that are true to life. I was a complete psycho when I was pregnant so that's very close to my heart. Hormones are NOT our friends. I've got a few more pregnancy surprises in store for her, I hope you'll enjoy those as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Brilliant chapter and their honesty was so refreshing. Of course they have fears and doubts and no one comes to Earth completely versed in and perfect in the art of child rearing. I know I wasn't. But my husband and I managed and we produced two of the most beautiful and kindest young women to grace this world. Sorry! Couldn't resist crowing for a moment there. But they will manage. With Hermione's unlimited capacity to love and her good sense and judgment, she will teach him. She may call him a few choice names when she's in labour but hey......that's part of the deal. Well done. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I think showing their human side only makes the magic and fantastic aspects of the story better. Parenting is wonderful! I have three girls and there are days when things are crazy but I wouldn't trade it for the world! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
Very sweet chapter, I loved it. I thought Severus's reaction was spot on.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. He's having some trouble adjusting to the idea, but he is trying to come to terms with it. He's also crazy in love with his wife and that's a big motivation for him. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
And pregnancy brain lasts for quite a while past pregnancy.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
That is so true! My youngest is three, and I still have some relapses from time to time! LOL Hermione's experienced is based on one of my own just before I found out I was pregnant with my second child. I couldn't figure out why I couldn't shut-up even though it was obvious that I ought to! I was relieved to find out I was pregnant and not going mad, literally! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Next chapter is nearly finished. It ought to go into queue soon! *hugs*Rhiannon
Yes, I liked this chapter very much!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks for letting me know! Thanks also for reading! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the little twists and turns. *hugs*Rhiannon
Hmmmm. So he is with her for now, but is he just going to wirhdraw from her later agai. She is right with one thing: she can't always be the one to fix things. I just hope she takes the warning from her dream and does not let this thing destroy her.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you for the insightful review! They've got a rather long road ahead of them, but for now things are much better. I really hope you'll enjoy where I'm headed. Thanks again for the review and also for reading! *hugs*Rhiannon
thank heaven those two finally got together! wonderful update. thanks muchly
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thrilled that you liked it, my dear! My beta has the next chapter, so it ought to be up soon. =] Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Well whenever he gets too stinky I will be very glad to bathe him or hose him down. As we know ladies it is a very dirty job but hey! Someone has to do it.Yes....sometimes even the most loving couples get into these sort of bad times which can only be solved with greater and more honest communication. I've no doubt though that his love for her will eventually make him see sense. Well done you for a fantastic story but have I missed something? What does the title mean? I think it's some sort of Gaelic (Welsh/Irish?). Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it! I dislike 'happily ever after.' Yes, they will end up together, but true love does not automatically make things sunshine and roses! Love is no less magical when it's hard won. The title is from a song from the 40s. "Bie Mir Bist Du Schoen" is Yiddish. It means 'to me, your are perfect'. I thought it was fitting for Hermione and Severus. My favourite version is by the Puppini Sisters. If you put the title and their name into YouTube, you'll see what I mean. It was featured in the film 'Swing Kids.' Great little big band tune!! As far as bathing Severus, I will give you a run for your money for that little chore. LOL I am a huge AR fan! Thanks so much for your lovely review and for reading.*hugs*Rhiannon
Oh, some serious makeup sex is in order.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
That seems to be popular opinion! Glad I wrote the next bit the way I did!!! ;] Lemons on the way!!!Thanks for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Such a sensual honeymoon! Yes, Severus, having one of your own is not as bad as looking after someone elses kids.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
My husband felt that way. We'd be out somewhere and he'd see a child behaving badly. he'd say, "See there. That's why I don't want kids." I'd say, "I don't want 'that' kid. Our kids might not be that way at all!" He does prefer our children to everyone else's! LOL Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.*hugs*Rhiannon
Goodness. Powerful stuff. Great story!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks very much! I'm so pleased that you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Severus your a muppet and you smell lol. Some make up sex is in order I think hehe.
Severus your a muppet and you smell lol. Some make up sex is in order I think hehe.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes, there are lemons on the way! Thanks for your review!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Lovely wedding. The vows were straight from the heart. Stupid Ron though. Coming to her wedding to upset her. Jerk!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I wanted the wedding to be romantic but not over the top. Everyone has that one bit of their wedding that just goes sideways. If she gets Severus forever, one last row with Ron is a fair trade. Thanks for reading and reviewing.*hugs*Rhiannon
That was too funny. I can see Severus being kidnapped by a bunch of men he only tolerates most of the time, and to have a miserable time as well. I love the change to the war memorial. Just the thing a bunch of drunk witches would get up to.
I love the line, "something vexes thee?" From Robin Hood after the sheriff has has his little tantrum, abd ofcourse the swear words from Love Actually!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I am AR's biggest fan! I had to use a few well known lines. The stage do and the hen party are both taken from accounts of parties I've attended/ heard of, without the magic of course. The story is going to become rather serious, so I wanted something that would lighten the mood. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and the review!*hugs*Rhiannon
I love the first person narrative, and the glimpses of what they are thinking about the other's motives.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you so much! I've never written in FP before but it seemed the best way to tell this story. I'm so pleased that you like it. Thanks also for the review.*hugs*Rhiannon
Oh, this was heart breaking. He is such a dolt, really... It's all about HIM, isn't it! lol... I hope there's some serious make up sex in the next chapter. Hermione deserves it.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Hehehehehe! She quite deserves something. There are make up lemons on the way! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hiugs*Rhiannon
He gets her back from the abyss only to push her towards the cliff. He'll regret his actions. I think he's got a long way to go before she'll forgive him. I know I wouldn't. Not anytime soon.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I am really fascinated by the way even the most devoted of couples will go through these sort of cycles: closeness, estrangement, closeness, etc. thanks so much for reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Yes, Stinky Sev was very funny! :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Sexy or not, body odour is still rank! LOL Glad I could make you laugh.Thanks for your review!*hugs*Rhiannon
Oh boy, they need to be awake at the same time!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
That does tend to improve a relationhip doesn't it? LOL Things are going to get better for them... eventually!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Oh, dear, Neville must be feeling so bad!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
At one point, I had a really long scene with Neville apologising, and Severus finally accepting, but with everything else I wanted to do it didn't make it in!Thanks for your review!
LOL now, that made him think! :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So glad I could make you laugh! Thanks for the review.*hugs*Rhiannon
Well, I really hope he comes to his senses soon!!! Good chapter!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Sadly, many men are affected by craniorectinitis (head in the arse)! Severus should begin to recover soon.Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon