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Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
rhiannon113121 Reviews | 121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Can Severus and Hermione stay out of their own way long enough to fall in love?
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rhiannon113
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I love writing and reading. I work from home, which gives me the temptation to read or write fanfic instead of work! I have lived in both the US and UK. I currently live in the US, with my husband and three beautiful girls (all of whom wish to attend Hogwarts when they're of age! LOL).
Reviews for Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
Oh yay, there's more! You tied it up so pretty at the end there that I was afraid it was going to be a one-shot! You've done well with both of their voices here.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I really am enjoying 'speaking' for both of them. The beginning did seem rather wrapped up, but there are loads more surprises coming. =]Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
hermione's reaction had me a bit teary and sev's too. wonderful update. thanks muchly
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So thrilled that you've enjoyed it. I hope you'll keep with me as things continue for them.Thanks so much for your reviews and for reading! Your comments are appreciated. *hugs*Rhiannon
A new beginning! Yippee!!!!! :D I'm so glad that they found a way to reach out to each other again.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So glad you like it! There may be a few storm clouds on the horizon, nothing worthwhile is easy. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
About time he saw sense! :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Well, it is rare for a man to be both indescribably sex and have common sense! I love him anyway...Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Non-stinky Sevvy is still an idiot. But I'm glad they at least found each other physically.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Physical connections can, in some cases, open doors to a more emotionally intimate relationship. Or not. Thanks so muhc for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
Very sweet, and very intense! I liked it a lot!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
oh... that was soooo wonderful. Just incredibly moving.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Severus + lemons = Yummy! (imo!!) I'm pleased that you liked it, and thrilled that you've taken the time to review. Severus still has a bit of growing up to do, but they did have a nice reunion! Thanks again!*hugs*Rhiannon
I was so heartbroken for Hermione that he was doing that to her. I glad that they "kissed" and made up :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I can only torture them for some long!! I do love them as a couple!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Thank heavens he woke up. The man's a stubborn mule. At least Hermione's calling his name opened his eyes.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I liked that while she was unconscious, his voice could reach her and now hers has done the same thing! =] I'm so pleased that you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Well at least they are finally somewhat back together. Great angsty chapter. Can't wait for the next update.Sevibaby
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
They are a 'work in progress'. It will take some time, but I do believe in happy endings! I'm pleased that you liked it. Thanks also for your lovely review!*hugs*Rhiannon
So has the ice broken? I hope so, I can't imagine she would handle his decision to walk away very well.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Things are on the mend, sort of. It takes time, especially for Severus, to adjust! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
With a little bit of hope, they wiill be able to work things out because it's bloody well obvious that they need each other, and because I wouldn't mind more lemons haha.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
=] I'm thrilled that you liked the lemons! I'm always so frightened that I won't be able to bring it off! (No pun intended!) They have a long road, but I believe in good endings!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
that big doo-doo head!! fix this, please? love this story and you! thanks muchly
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I love you too, dearest! I promise I'll fix it, eventually! One must suffer to truly appreciate the joy in life. Thanks (as always) for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I love you too, dearest! I promise I'll fix it, eventually! One must suffer to truly appreciate the joy in life. Thanks (as always) for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
Well, Severus need to get his head out of his arse and start getting the woman that he loves back. Hermione definately came through her ordeal like the champ that she is. This was a well written chapter and can't wait for the next one.Sevibaby
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
All their suffering will be rewarded... eventually! True love does not automatically rule out stupidity. That is something I dislike in stories, the old "they got together and everything was wonderful forever" is less realistic than alien abduction. Next chapter is in queue!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Severus seems to fluctuate between the two extremes: completely smothering her, the pushing her away. All he has to do is accept the light and banish his darkness.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes, he most definitely has 'feast or famine' syndrome!! I personally think that's more difficult to deal with than any consistent behaviour!!thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Poor stinky, silly, severus! He's his own worst enemy. Excellent story. Lots of fun.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So pleased you're enjoying!!!! Aren't we all our own worst enemy? There's loads more, so I really hope you'll stick with me. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!*hugs*Rhiannon
oh no, poor severus.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes, he's going to have a bit of bad luck. I love him, but it makes for such lovely tension when I torture him!!! LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
I love it.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So pleased to hear that! Thanks for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Whew. Has Severus just passed out from shock and exhaustion, or is something more sinister at play? *Scuttles off to next chapter*
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
You were wise to read it all in one go. I've somehow become the queen of the evil cliffie!! Hope you're enjoying! Thanks so much for the review.*hugs*Rhiannon
So the more in love a person is, the deadlier the poison? Poor Severus. How could he do without the love and devotion now that he has found it?
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes, I wanted to explore the dark side of Dumbledore's assertion that love is the most powerful force in the world. Things will work out for them in the end. They both have a lot to learn, but they'll get there eventually. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Let me get this straight: They have the rarest love of all and he goes back to his self-destructive ways. Is he a frakken idiot?! Let us hope that he regain sanity.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Right in one. Just because it is true love, does not mean that it's going to be sunshine and roses. Besides, like all men, he can be wonderful as well as an incredible arse. thanks for the review, I hope you'll keep reading. *hugs*Rhiannon
ugh horrible place to leave us hanging. Very well written but heart breaking.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm sorry you dislike it. I have to break chapters somewhere, no one ever likes the places I choose. The next bit is in the queue. So you won't have to wait long. Thanks for the review and for reading. *hugs*Rhiannon
Oh, he's such a self-fulfilling prophecy. He 'deserves' to be loveless so he does whatever he can to push love away. At least he realizes what he's done. I hope he doesn't go all "I'm no good for you" and push her away further.
That last line... really beautiful in a Severus Snape sort of way.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I find that many people try to ruin what is best in their lives. They have a few more bumps ahead of them, but things will work out for them... eventually. thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
ROFL. This is so much fun!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you! I'm so pleased that you've enjoyed it so far. I warn you, it isn't all sweetness and light, but it is a romance. I hope you'll continue to enjoy! Thanks again for reading and for your lovely review. *hugs*Rhiannon
This is a REAL love story. It's fresh and quite delicate....I'm having trouble describing it but rest assured......I'm really enjoying it. Sev is romantic without being a complete sap and she is still assertive. Could the plant's name be interpreted as either "murdered by love" or "kills love"? Will she still love him when/if she recovers? Just some musings I have. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much your praise means. That is EXACTLY what I've wanted it to me. Yes, the plant is 'Murder by Love'. There will be some lasting effects from the poisoning, but I'd rather not say right now. Thanks so much for the wonderful support and for reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon