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... With Feeling Chapter 4: Bested
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... With Feeling

1: Day & Night, Past & Present

2: Dunch

3: Insult

4: Bested

5: Strangers

6: The Unplanned, the Unintentional, the Unexpected

7: Living Under the Same Roof

Bested

... With Feeling

Chapter 4 of 7

crapperdapper24

Hermione withstands a failing marriage while Severus seeks the help of a psychiatrist. Takes place during the time period of the Epilogue (19 years later).

Humor Drama Angst Potions Under Duress 6,218 Words 7 Chapters WIP
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Chapter 4 – Bested

“Hermione”

I want to move to another country – better yet, another planet. I want to pack all of my things, grab my two lovely children (and possibly Sherry), and migrate to the moon.

What was supposed to be a pleasant afternoon filled with delicious food and plenty of laughter turned out to be the most awkward evening of my life. I’d like to say this was all Snape’s fault, but truly it wasn’t; it was Sherry’s.

When Sherry heard that Snape and I knew each other, she automatically wanted to hear stories. I don’t know about Snape, but any stories that came to my mind were not exactly the types of stories one would tell if they wanted people to believe they were sane. I could just imagine beginning some of them: “Hey, do you remember the time when one of your incredibly unintelligent protégés hexed my teeth and you made fun of me afterwards?” or “Hey, do you remember that time where you killed the greatest Headmaster ever to reign over Hogwarts?” Something told me neither of these examples would bode well.

I had to think quickly. “Well – erm – there was this one time where I set him on fire.” I quickly looked over at Snape; he was glaring at me.

Sherry’s eyes lit up. “WHAT?! Seriously?”

Here, Snape decided to join the conversation. “Yes, Miss Granger was one of my most careless and incompetent students,” said Snape, that loathsome little smirk still on his face. “She added two chemicals that should never be mixed together and nearly set the whole lab on fire.” It was my turn to glare.

“Oh, too funny!” says Sherry, a smile on her face. “So, you were about our age when you taught Hermione then?” she asks. Snape nods. “Was he a cutie back in the day, Hermione?”

I don’t quite know who looked more murderous, me or Snape. “I didn’t think so back then,” I said through gritted teeth. Sherry didn’t pick up on the hint to stop talking and instead continued to press for answers.

“That was back then; do you think he’s attractive now?” I was going to kill her.

But then I looked at Snape and a thought suddenly came to mind. “I see no difference,” I said with a smirk on my face ten times bigger than the one Snape was wearing earlier. At the expression on Snape’s face, my smirk suddenly crumbled.

Right then was when I decided I wanted to move away. Move very, very, far away.

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“Severus”

Today one of the worst things that could ever happen to a person like me happened: I was bested by a former student. I couldn’t outright tell her that she bested me, however, so I opted for the next best alternative – I insulted her. Again.

“Bravo, Miss Granger!” I said, clapping my hands sarcastically as I rose from my seat. “You have insulted my appearance in the hopes of feeling better about yourself! Congratulations! Did it feel good to finally get that off your chest after twenty-some-odd years of holding a grudge?” I started putting on my jacket as I continued. “You think you’re clever, Granger, you always have, but I have a piece of advice for you that I hope you’ll keep stored for later use: you are no different than the rest of the dunderheads I had to teach, Granger. No different. Oh, sure, you had every line of the text memorized and you could follow directions, but so could a monkey if you trained it well enough. You were not special, Miss Granger, and you never will be. You will die just like the rest of us, and the world will go on without you, no matter how many books you've read or hundred percents you earned in school.”

Sheryl Schrienk looked at me with a mixture of shock and revulsion written on her face while Granger sat there with her mouth opening and closing like a fish.

“Close your mouth, Granger,” I said as I walked passed her toward the door. “You’ll catch flies.”

Now, as I sit at home staring at the telly, I realize it was actually a reasonably well-said impromptu speech; too bad I didn’t mean a word of it…

Damnations.

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Latest 25 Reviews for ... With Feeling

69 Reviews  |  6.1/10 Average

10/10

mimmom

oh dear, poor hermione.

8/10

Musesinmybasement

Evil cliffy!!! D: Love the story! :)

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Severus49

Well, SOMEBODY jumped! Unfortunately it wasn't Severus/Steven. 

10/10

mimmom

oh no, please write more!!! Don't abandon this fabulous story!!!

10/10

mimmom

These two characters seem to work so well together.  I'm still enjoying and still reading.

10/10

mimmom

Excellent.  Can't wait to read the next chapter!

10/10

mimmom

LOL.  I love it!

9/10

mimmom

ooh, fun's a coming

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CB13

Very nice.  Well written, well paced, well done.  I look forward to their evolving relationship, no matter how you pace it.  It's your story.  And the title - is it perchance from a They Might be Giants song?  "I Lost My Lucky Ball and Chain?"  It's on Flood.Cheers!CB

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snapify52

Nice chapter.  At the moment I don't see the need for the POV changes and find them a bit distracting.  However, I'm really intrigued by the premise of these two characters reuniting in a different world (the muggle one).  I am definitealy looking forward to more!

9/10

Anonymous

... and it's still a yummy read. I hope you won't give it up!

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Aha! Now we are getting somewhere.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Urk! Foot in mouth. Love it.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

One correction first. Wild MANE of frizzy hair. Mane like a lion's mane. Main could be a water pipe, a street, a primary thing but not hair.But good nonetheless.

Response from crapperdapper24 (Author of ... With Feeling)

Yeah, someone already got me on that lol

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Getting even more interesting.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Like this. It is interesting.

10/10

Persevero

Aargh.  I'd tell you off for writing such frustratingly short chapters, except that I do the same!  I am really, really enjoying this, and I hope that they are going to get all the misdirected tension sorted out soon.

10/10

emmeline33

This chapter was well written and interesting.  There is a sense of both Hermione and Severus being lost in the turmoil of their own minds as the world continues around them.

10/10

emmeline33

This story has so much promise and hope.  I am looking forward to reading more.

10/10

emmeline33

This was really painful to read. Severus' parting words betrayed so much sadness and alienation.  Your story has a ring of honesty to it that I appreciate.  I will certainly be reading more.

9/10

Muggline

"Unknowingly, she has also slipped into my life" - I love that sentence...Have bookmarked - will follow - please write!

10/10

snitchette

The last line brought a big toothy smile on my face. *turned into grin of course*

10/10

blue artemis

Poor Hermione.  I hope she and Ron manage to come to a mutual end of the marriage soon.  It is tough to be in that situation. 

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sunny33

Now this is where he needs to take the plunge, and trust someone.

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akasha2411

I'll be keeping an eye on this story, thats for sure!I like the way you write your story, and the idea of those two in therapy ....lovely!!

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