oh dear, poor hermione.

Evil cliffy!!! D: Love the story! :)

Well, SOMEBODY jumped! Unfortunately it wasn't Severus/Steven. 

oh no, please write more!!! Don't abandon this fabulous story!!!

These two characters seem to work so well together.  I'm still enjoying and still reading.

Excellent.  Can't wait to read the next chapter!

LOL.  I love it!

ooh, fun's a coming

Very nice.  Well written, well paced, well done.  I look forward to their evolving relationship, no matter how you pace it.  It's your story.  And the title - is it perchance from a They Might be Giants song?  "I Lost My Lucky Ball and Chain?"  It's on Flood.Cheers!CB

Nice chapter.  At the moment I don't see the need for the POV changes and find them a bit distracting.  However, I'm really intrigued by the premise of these two characters reuniting in a different world (the muggle one).  I am definitealy looking forward to more!

... and it's still a yummy read. I hope you won't give it up!

Aha! Now we are getting somewhere.

Urk! Foot in mouth. Love it.

One correction first. Wild MANE of frizzy hair. Mane like a lion's mane. Main could be a water pipe, a street, a primary thing but not hair.But good nonetheless.

Getting even more interesting.

Like this. It is interesting.

Aargh.  I'd tell you off for writing such frustratingly short chapters, except that I do the same!  I am really, really enjoying this, and I hope that they are going to get all the misdirected tension sorted out soon.

This chapter was well written and interesting.  There is a sense of both Hermione and Severus being lost in the turmoil of their own minds as the world continues around them.

This story has so much promise and hope.  I am looking forward to reading more.

This was really painful to read. Severus' parting words betrayed so much sadness and alienation.  Your story has a ring of honesty to it that I appreciate.  I will certainly be reading more.

"Unknowingly, she has also slipped into my life" - I love that sentence...Have bookmarked - will follow - please write!

The last line brought a big toothy smile on my face. *turned into grin of course*

Poor Hermione.  I hope she and Ron manage to come to a mutual end of the marriage soon.  It is tough to be in that situation. 

Now this is where he needs to take the plunge, and trust someone.

I'll be keeping an eye on this story, thats for sure!I like the way you write your story, and the idea of those two in therapy ....lovely!!