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... With Feeling Chapter 3: Insult
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... With Feeling

1: Day & Night, Past & Present

2: Dunch

3: Insult

4: Bested

5: Strangers

6: The Unplanned, the Unintentional, the Unexpected

7: Living Under the Same Roof

Insult

... With Feeling

Chapter 3 of 7

crapperdapper24

Hermione withstands a failing marriage while Severus seeks the help of a psychiatrist. Takes place during the time period of the Epilogue (19 years later).

Humor Drama Angst Potions Under Duress 6,218 Words 7 Chapters WIP
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Chapter 3 – Insult

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“Severus”

It’s amazing what habits and compulsions one picks up as he goes about his daily routine. I have walked these same pavements for twenty years now; for fifteen of these years, I have counted my steps. Each square of pavement must include only two footfalls (no more, no less) and I must step over any cracks. I’m not quite sure why I do this; my mother has been in the grave for a very long time now, so I am at no risk of, as the superstitious say, “breaking her back.”

Today is different for some reason. I am unable to focus on the cracks or count how many steps I take in each square. I blame my psychiatrist.

She said this didn’t have to be a date, yet my palms are still sweaty. I haven’t sought the company of a woman in nearly thirty years. I am almost sixty now; I shouldn’t have to deal with this “sweaty palms” rubbish anymore.

I look at my watch and even it seems to have betrayed me; it reads 3:56.

Damn.

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“Hermione”

We're sitting at the table when I finally ask the question I’ve been dying to ask all afternoon. “So, this client of yours… Is he cute?”

“Actually, no,” says Sheryl. This was not the answer I was expecting to hear; Sheryl generally has very high standards.

“Really?” I ask disbelievingly.

“Yep, not really attractive at all, I’d say.”

“Oh. Well, does he have a name, or should I simply refer to him as ‘The Client’?” I just realized that I’ve invited myself on Sheryl and her client’s dunch non-date and never thought to inquire about her client’s name.

“His name is Steven. Steven Pierce.”

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“Severus”

Merlin, Avada me now.

There is not one woman in her late thirties to early forties waiting for me as I walk into the café, but two. Even more unfortunate is the fact that not just one of them looks familiar, but both.

Oh, this is not good. Not good at all.

There is no mistaking the wild main of frizzy brown hair or the honey colored eyes. There is no mistaking the fact that Hermione Granger is sitting not ten feet away from me, an expression on her face that I’m sure mirrors my own.

Oh, this is not good. Not good at all...

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“Hermione”

I have been told many times in my life that I never shut up. At this very moment in time, however, all words have been reduced to mere syllables. The only word that seems to come out is a slightly accusatory, “You!”

Severus Snape stands before me alive and well, despite the fact that he's supposed to have been dead for twenty years.

“You!” I say again, still reduced to monosyllables.

Snape regains his composure quicker than I ever could. “You’ve already said that, Granger,” he sneers. “Are you capable of forming other words, or has spending so much time around Potter and Weasley completely exhausted any brain power you once had?” Only Severus Snape can both compliment and insult you in the same sentence.

I feel rather than see Sheryl appear next to my shoulder. “You two know each other?” she asks, a surprised look on her face.

Oh, crap. “Mr. Pierce was my Chemistry teacher,” I say quickly. Snape picks up on the hint right away and goes with it.

“Yes,” he says, suddenly becoming very polite. “And Hermione here was my most annoying student.” His tone is matter-of-fact as he says this, and a nasty smirk appears on his face.

Ooh, I could just slap that smirk right off.

Bastard.

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Author’s Note: If any of you are worried this story is turning out nothing like the summary promises, I’m here to dispel your fears. This is only Severus and Hermione’s first meeting in twenty years; trust me when I say we’ll see much more of Hermione’s home life and many more of Severus’s therapy sessions.

Also, my plan is for a slow build-up of trust and friendship between Hermione and Severus. If you’re looking for them to jump in the sack right away, sorry, but you’re going to have to wait awhile.

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Latest 25 Reviews for ... With Feeling

69 Reviews  |  6.1/10 Average

10/10

mimmom

oh dear, poor hermione.

8/10

Musesinmybasement

Evil cliffy!!! D: Love the story! :)

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Severus49

Well, SOMEBODY jumped! Unfortunately it wasn't Severus/Steven. 

10/10

mimmom

oh no, please write more!!! Don't abandon this fabulous story!!!

10/10

mimmom

These two characters seem to work so well together.  I'm still enjoying and still reading.

10/10

mimmom

Excellent.  Can't wait to read the next chapter!

10/10

mimmom

LOL.  I love it!

9/10

mimmom

ooh, fun's a coming

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CB13

Very nice.  Well written, well paced, well done.  I look forward to their evolving relationship, no matter how you pace it.  It's your story.  And the title - is it perchance from a They Might be Giants song?  "I Lost My Lucky Ball and Chain?"  It's on Flood.Cheers!CB

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snapify52

Nice chapter.  At the moment I don't see the need for the POV changes and find them a bit distracting.  However, I'm really intrigued by the premise of these two characters reuniting in a different world (the muggle one).  I am definitealy looking forward to more!

9/10

Anonymous

... and it's still a yummy read. I hope you won't give it up!

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Aha! Now we are getting somewhere.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Urk! Foot in mouth. Love it.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

One correction first. Wild MANE of frizzy hair. Mane like a lion's mane. Main could be a water pipe, a street, a primary thing but not hair.But good nonetheless.

Response from crapperdapper24 (Author of ... With Feeling)

Yeah, someone already got me on that lol

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Getting even more interesting.

9/10

kyriaofdelphi

Like this. It is interesting.

10/10

Persevero

Aargh.  I'd tell you off for writing such frustratingly short chapters, except that I do the same!  I am really, really enjoying this, and I hope that they are going to get all the misdirected tension sorted out soon.

10/10

emmeline33

This chapter was well written and interesting.  There is a sense of both Hermione and Severus being lost in the turmoil of their own minds as the world continues around them.

10/10

emmeline33

This story has so much promise and hope.  I am looking forward to reading more.

10/10

emmeline33

This was really painful to read. Severus' parting words betrayed so much sadness and alienation.  Your story has a ring of honesty to it that I appreciate.  I will certainly be reading more.

9/10

Muggline

"Unknowingly, she has also slipped into my life" - I love that sentence...Have bookmarked - will follow - please write!

10/10

snitchette

The last line brought a big toothy smile on my face. *turned into grin of course*

10/10

blue artemis

Poor Hermione.  I hope she and Ron manage to come to a mutual end of the marriage soon.  It is tough to be in that situation. 

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sunny33

Now this is where he needs to take the plunge, and trust someone.

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akasha2411

I'll be keeping an eye on this story, thats for sure!I like the way you write your story, and the idea of those two in therapy ....lovely!!

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