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Travel, Conspiracy, and Men
karelia477 Reviews | 7.0/10 (477 Ratings, 0 Likes, 114 Favorites )
Hermione accepts a career offer she can't resist only to find out she's been set up. Two unlikely men offer help.
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Wow! This gets more intriguing by the chapter!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Glad you think so! Thanks!
It sounds like Severus has been living a very interesting life since his "death." I cant wait to find out more!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Oh, he has. A very peaceful one, too. Thanks for reviewing.
This is getting more and more interesting. Looking forward to more.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! More will come up shortly.
How perfectly fascinating! I can hardly wait to read more of your very good story. Thanks!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! Reviews like yours make the words come out of the quill ever so easily. :)
I love the imagery of Snape's home. I can imagine it perfectly. Good work. :)
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! I'd love to live in his home... LOL
Fascinating chapter! So that's were Severus has been all the time. I'm glad to see him so happy, and he and Lucius make a very nice couple. It seems he has found a way to modify a computer so that his magic doesn't interfere with it. I wonder if this will help them later to find out what is going on with the tracking device and the conspiracy. Very intriguing!
Again very much looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
You're so nice to me, thank you!Yes, there is a reason why he's become computer-savvy. :)
Well, that was also hot, and quite interesting.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you, glad you like it!
how on earth did severus discover people living inside the earth?!!?!?
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Ah, we shall find out later on. :)
This story just gets more intriguing!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
I'm glad you think so!Thanks for the review and the shiny stars!
Finally Sev. Brilliant chapter, can't wait for more
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Teehee, you'll get to see lots more of him. :)Thanks for reviewing!
Interesting chapter. I lok forward to more.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! Next chapter is with the beta.
Always delicious is Lucius, and now he appreciates Hermione he is even better!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
He is rather, I agree. Thank you for reviewing.
I don't think I ever would have pictured Lucius and Hermione together....A great chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! Next chapter won't be long!
Another good chapter. And now with the extra information, I'm wondering what's going to happen next and who's been scheming with what!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! Ah, keep wondering.
I suppose Mrs Wilson who has great contact into her own Ministry found a way to join her bastard of a lover while taking away the offened wife as far as she could. Must be a Slytherin that one. But Isuspect Malfoy's intentions may not be good as they are. After all this one IS a Slytherin. Anyway it's a good beginning.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Ah, well, we shall see about Mr Malfoy, shan't we...Thank you for reviewing!
The thought of Lucius Malfoy lining up to cash his pension cheque is hilarious!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
LOL isn't it just! Thank you!
OO. I like many things about this. I think it is funny that Hermione is 'aging' while Lucius is still 'perfect'. I wonder who Ron's going with.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Your words make me a happy little author, thank you!
Your knowledge of Arizona is fairly acute! I have a gut feeling that Hermione’s exchange witch is Ron’s paramour. Intriguing first start.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
You think so? I'm glad to hear read it!Thank you for your review!
Well, well, well. Why would Lucius Malfoy be concerned with Ronald Weasley's extra-marital affair? Since we are told that Narcissa is dead, who else would Lucius bother with? Surely Draco hasn't stolen Ron's heart, has he?
Okay, you've got me hooked!
Looking forward to reading more of this.
(And there are times I'd like to hex Molly, as well!)
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Hm, some interesting questions you're raising here *grins*.Thank you for reviewing!
Alright, you got me intrigued.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
That makes me happy, thank you.
The line about Percy and political correctness = LOVEThe bit about panic-apparitions = LOVEThe bit(s) about wanting to AK any- and everybody who dared associate her with the Weasleys = LOVEThe bit about Lucius being timeless in looks while Hermione was finding grey hairs = LOVEI think I've guessed who Ron's been seeing... Which is why you're probably going to throw me for a loop and have it be someone else entirely!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
OMG. Your review = LOVEYou absolutely, totally, completely, utterly have made my day, no Year!Thank you so so so so much! *dances the squeeeeeful dance*
Ooh, this is an interesting start. And Hermione openly checking out Lucius!
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you! Yes, she's rather bold, isn't she?
This a great beginning...
I love that you've set this in Arizona, my "native land". It gives it an air of reality to have it just out my backdoor.
I don't know if you've been to Arizona, live in AZ, etc, but the only thing I have to complain about is "Superstitious Mountains". It could be a part of the story that Hermione messed up the name, but if not, they're really called the "Superstition Mountains". Typo or not, no biggie, just thought I would mention it. ;-)
Other than that, I can't wait for more of this story.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Oops, I don't know where my brain was. I've corrected it; thanks for pointing it out!And thank you muchly for a lovely review! :)
Very intriguing beginning! Hm, why do I think that Lucius is up to something? Looking forward to more.
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you very much! Hm, I'd say Lucius is usually up to something. LOL
An excellent beginning. You've filled us in on the backstory while slipping in clever little jokes to keep us snorting our tea through....uh.... to keep us happy.Favourite line:"...for she would have Avada Kedavraed at least Ron. And George. And definitely Percy. And likely Molly, too, just for good measure."
Response from karelia (Author of Travel, Conspiracy, and Men)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. :)