Glad to know Severus is going to make his apprearance.

I knew this Wilson woman was the other woman. And knowing about her husband family, something not good is coming (but surely you know better than me ;). Then there is the last part *wide grin*. I just hope for Severus' appearance and everything will be perfect. *sigh*

I love that you specified 'only the muggle part' :pAnyway, it was great to get a bit of Lucius/Hermione on an otherwise truly and utterly crappy day of enormous proportions.If there hadn't been obvious underlying nefariousness in play here, I would have to say that the law about the schooling might not be a bad idea to prevent Voldemort-ish racism. The next one about the hoods on cloaks really struck something in me. In these terrorist days I see a very clear parallel there. Intentional?I'm ever so pleased to be getting the threesome, but I'm very curious as to how Severus knows how to hack a computer...

Ooooh, a Death Eater sandwich perhaps, since Severus just happens to be alive?

I already don't like this husband of the Floosie. I think he is up to his neck in this whole situation with Ron too.At least Lucius is able to appreciate what a true woman Hermione is.

So, I was going to wait to review till the end, but I have to ask...are you a fellow Arizonan? If you're not, you've got the locality down so perfectly.

And what's wrong with breeding Recluses? Now if you don't mind, I'll just be off to go kill the one that just appeared on my wall (speak of the devil and it and all it's ugly 8 legs shall appear)

HEhehehhehe.  I can't wait for the truth serum! (which I am having serious difficulties spelling!)  I hope Ron's brains become unmushed.

Hmm... I'm pondering things. I love the little people and Merlin. Good work.

Lots o' Apparating indeed. :) I liked that they were snickering about the way Lucius treated Edwina at Hogwarts. Hahhaa... Love Harry in this one. Whoot

I love that Snape did that. He's such a good one to have in the corner, eh? :)

This story continues to intrique me!  It will be interesting to see what happens when Severus joins them! 

Interesting cliffhanger...I can't wait for the next chappie!

Merlin, the Dragon, is wonderful.  I love his way of communication and his sense of humour.The spokesman for the Little People didn't seem to like Hermione too much, but after getting Severus' message, he changed his mind.  Severus is obviously adept at many, many things.But the most intriguing part of this chapter is Lola's question to Severus about why Hermione was a affected by the journey.  She must be pregnant. And the second most intriguing part of the chapter is when Lola told Severus to “Go. Now.”, Severus said it wasn't time yet, “Besides, they’ve gone back to sleep.”  I'll bet Severus is going to have Magick Sex with Hermione, isn't he?  *Sigh*Lovely, wonderful, fun chapter!!!Beth

Could Ron be under the Imperius Curse?  Harry thinks he's been acting wierd.  But in Chapter Four, Hermione, speaking of Edwina and Ron, told Lucius, “I doubt she’s the first, but I can’t be certain. It’s just a gut feeling. There were earlier occasions when I thought I’d detected a whiff of a woman’s perfume or found a black hair on his robes. But I always let it go. I guess I was... comfortable."  So maybe he is just a bastard, after all.Harry's reaction to discovering that Lucius and Severus share a bed when ever they can was priceless.  “Bi? Both of them?”I wonder where they are going?  Small folk?  When Severus and Lucius informed them that they would be going "on vacation" some place where they would be safe, I had assumed they would be going to Karl and Lola's city, Agharta, under the South Pole.But in Chapter Five, Severus had told Lucius, “A handful of Muggles have joined them since I’ve moved here. They were only allowed to enter after agreeing unconditionally to remain down below if they enter through the South Pole region. Apparently, other areas allow for somewhat more open contact.” So now I know they are going to another "place" under the Earth.This is a great story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!Beth

Interesting chapter!! Please update again soon!!

Second try - I have to be very careful now, because the first time I tried to comment on this chapter, the Anti Apparition wards slammed down and I was trapped for presumed spam reviewing (I had included a nice litte link)...  Do you , by chance, know the German children's book "Jim Button and Luke the Engine Driver" by Michael Ende? I wonder, because in the sequel "Jim Button and the Wild 13", they find his home country, which has been drowned in the sea by a very bad dragon - and it is called "Jamballa" (which reminds me very much of your "Shamballa" here).

So is she knocked up yet, or is that Sev's job?  I love this story.

Oh, thank you for using little people,  they are never used in fanfiction, not that I'm awhere of.  I bet there are all kinds of creatures they don't know about.  Will you be using any more of them in this fic?  Oh man this is too cool.  This would be some really special special effects if this was a movie.  I love special effects.  Take that Edwina.  Oh good they made it to Severus.  A day or ten. lol Stop fighting it Severus you never know you might enjoy it.  I love this story.

The last part is very full of mystery and hidden meaning words. Evil you. (from my experience, great exhaustion in a woman means baby *grin*. Am I right?)

Okay I am a little puzzled is Hermione more effected due to pregnancy or being in a fertile state so near the earths core.  I am leaning toward the latter direction because it appears Lola wishes him to do something...perhaps impregnate her?  Well done.Irish

You know, the Little People living in Northern California seems perfectly sensible. All the fog should remind them of Ireland. Another lovely chapter!

Whew. All that traveling was exhausting.And *whine* hasn't dear Severus been neglected? Surely he needs to be compensated for all the hot Lucius lurve he's missed out on with the arrival of Hermione. ;) I hope Lola's right and the moment has almost arrived.  

Ooh, Snape wants Hermione as well as Lucius.  That should be hot when you write it. 

A flying saucer? I LOVE it!  Poor Sev knows what he has to do, wants to do it, but is chicken! :)

Ooooh, an adventure with kids in tow. It will be interesting to see how they interact with Lucius and Severus.