Part XVII
Chapter 17 of 38
MemorySeverus meets Albus Severus. The past comes back in a very peculiar form.
ReviewedDisclaimer: This is a non-profit tribute to the works of JK Rowling, who created and, together with her publishers and licensees, owns the characters and settings elaborated herein.
All my gratitude to my betas and previewers DementedLeaf, Xoxphoenix and Morgaine_Dulac. Many thanks to all my kind readers and reviewers.
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Part XVII
That morning, Severus Snape woke up curled on a wooden bench. He raised his head and blinked, surprised to see an unfamiliar, yet also strangely familiar, scene before his eyes. The mountains were shining in the distance, a gentle breeze was stroking his hair, and the sunset had changed into dawn. Suddenly, he remembered everything and looked around, anxiously searching for Lily. But she was nowhere to be seen and, for a moment, fear tightened his heart. Then, he noticed the little picture still hanging there. Could that mean that she would come again to visit him?
An immense hope ran through his fibres. Lazily, indulging in that soothing feeling, he got up from the uncomfortable position he had held for the night and yawned, stretching his arms... when his gaze unexpectedly met Minerva's smiling eyes.
The old witch was considering him with great tenderness, and he stiffened in embarrassment, trying to find something to say. But Minerva was quicker.
"Good morning, sleepyhead!" she exclaimed joyfully. "How are you feeling today, Severus? I know you had visits yesterday."
He blushed. How did Minerva know? But, above all, what did she know? However, her smile didn't seem to hide any second intention. It was a nice, friendly smile, and he felt reassured.
"Ah, er, yes, it was effectively an interesting afternoon," he replied, looking at the buttons of his cuffs with exaggerated attention.
Minerva tilted her head.
"I'm glad," she replied. "Hermione Granger... well, I should say Hermione Weasley, but I still can't associate her with that name, even after so many years that she's been married."
She stopped to shake her head in disbelief, then took a deep breath and resumed her talking. "Anyway! Hermione, as I was saying, told me that the two of you have had a nice conversation. At least, she was evidently pleased. And I know that Harry was here too."
Her voice softened. "I'm glad he finally came to speak to you. I had the chance to exchange only a few words with him just before he left."
She glanced at Snape in expectation, but he was still busy with his cuffs.
"How annoyingly uncooperative your buttons are this morning!" she considered lightly, and he blushed again and finally looked at her. But now, it was Minerva's turn to look lost in daydreaming.
"It has been such a wonderful day!" she murmured. "Having them all here again... It was as if time had never passed."
She sighed and, once more, she was again her practical self.
"So, as I was telling you, I have spoken with Hermione. She has found a very brilliant solution to help you with grading the parchments. Being raised in a Muggle family could be an advantage for a clever wizard or witch, these days. I have to admit that sometimes Muggles can be incredibly creative in their solutions, and Hermione always was a"
"An insufferable know-it-all," Snape muttered, raising his eyebrows in exasperation. She frowned at his words; then she unexpectedly burst into a happy laughter. Snape too felt a smile widen upon his face. He tried to scowl, but it was simply impossible. Joy was so infectious that morning!
"So, what did she say?" he insisted, crossing his arms.
Wiping tears of mirth from her eyes, Minerva resumed her talking.
"I'll tell you in a moment. First, you will be kindly asked to leave this picture for a while. This request seems to be a bit repetitive lately, don't you think? But this time you will be allowed to stay in another picture and enjoy the show. A master painter from St. Mungo's is coming today to make a special addition to your tools."
"That is?" he asked, a little concern tingeing his voice. What had that damn girl, no, woman, suggested?
"Ah, er, the name is... is..." Minerva looked confused for a moment. "The name is fax. F-A-X."
She smiled at his puzzled expression and continued with a didactic tone, "Hermione told me that it was invented at the end of the last century, and that the Wizengamot has agreed to allow its use in special occasions. Hermione also said that it's employed at the Ministry to communicate with other countries: it's faster, simpler and surer."
She stopped her enunciation to look at him.
"A... fax?" Snape repeated slowly, and she nodded in expectation.
"I wonder how it works," he continued, furrowing his brows. But he wasn't really interested. Again, he glanced at the little frame in front of him and then turned his head with a guilty expression, afraid of having betrayed himself.
Minerva smiled fondly.
"Well, Severus, I must leave you now, but the painter will soon be here, and he will tell you what you need to know. And don't worry. Your lessons have been suspended till tomorrow morning."
"That's very kind of you," he replied and lowered his head in a goodbye, happy to have a chance of losing himself once more in his dreams.
She had almost reached the door when she suddenly turned and said, "Oh, I nearly forgot! Thank you for the wonderful surprise."
"Surprise?" He awakened in panic. "What surprise?"
"Ah, come on, Severus! I'm old, not stupid. Who else could have suggested such a nice celebration? Thank you, my dear, dear boy."
Her eyes twinkled with tears. "Have a nice day."
She left before he could answer: but really, there was no need, and he felt again a great peace entering his heart.
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The painter arrived in the early afternoon. He was an energetic, good-looking man in his thirties with a mane of ruffled brown hair, a pointed beard and incredibly brilliant blue eyes. He smiled at the portrait, then introduced himself with charming informality. The name sounded foreign like his accent and, for a moment, Snape was tempted to ask for more details. But he was still too dreamy to begin a conversation and, on the other hand, his visitor seemed impatient to begin his task.
As Minerva had announced, Snape was asked to leave his frame and enter another picture. From there, he watched the painter conjure brushes and a palette of magically changing shades: in a few seconds, evoked by precise taps of the wand, an assortment of creative tools was displayed on one of the little desks. Soon the man was absorbed in his work, so Snape forgot his questions and wandered in the pictures on the walls, looking in happy beatitude at the different scenes around him. He was feeling so elated and so young, so incredibly young!
His heart was dilating with the same cheerful expectation he remembered of his teenage days, the same lively excitement, the same hopeful joy. Once more, he relived his encounter with Lily, savouring every single word that she had said and adding those precious moments to the loving memories treasured in his heart.
The little empty portrait was continuously attracting his gaze. Would Lily come again to see him?
Please do! He prayed in his mind, and the words almost blurted out in their intensity. After all, he didn't ask for too much: to see her, talk with her, hold her hand, perhaps even dare to kiss her lightly on her cheek... A shiver crossed through his body at the very thought, a prelude, an anticipation of new joy to come. It was only a hope, but it was so blissful! Closing his eyes, Snape took a deep breath, losing himself in the enchantment of his dreams: the illusion of happiness, the crumbs of happiness... yet, they meant a whole paradise to him.
"Professor Snape, it's finished!" the painter called, interrupting this meditation, and obediently, Severus entered his frame again. The smell of magical paint was stinging, but it didn't feel too disagreeable to his nostrils.
And then, he saw it on his desk. The machine. The contraption. The fax. A plastic structure coloured in grey, with buttons, lights and other mysterious protuberances. Absent-mindedly, he touched it, trying to figure out how it would work.
"Be careful! It's still fresh!" an alarmed voice warned him, but it was too late.
"Darn!" the painter exclaimed, yet there was no reproach in his voice, just an amused, sympathetic tone. "Now I'll have to retouch you both."
Embarrassed, Snape looked at the marks he had left on the object. His fingertips were grey like the fax's upper cover, and the painter smiled at his confusion.
"No problem, Professor! Please raise your hand and stand still."
Snape held his breath while he felt the delicate strokes of the brush tickle his fingers, and the new paint adhere and become part of his body.
"Thank you, Mister...? I'm sorry, but I didn't understand your name," he confessed, a bit uncomfortable.
"Marcello Bernardi al vostro servizio!*" The man promptly replied with a nice smile. Now that they were face to face, Snape noticed the painter's simple but refined elegance and his aristocratic features. The man seemed to understand and enjoy the portrait's curiosity.
"Yes, I'm Italian," he added with a bow. "Many master painters who work at St. Mungo's come from my country. Italy has a long-lasting tradition and a great reputation in the artistic field. So, we are proud to promote our art in other countries."
Snape nodded. "Thank you, Mr. Bernardi," he said, trying to imitate the sounds he had heard.
"My pleasure!" Bernardi answered. "I am honoured to have been of help. I was still studying at the Accademia di Arti Magiche* when Voldemort was destroyed."
His eyes became grave. "I know the role you played in that war."
Embarrassed, Snape tightened his lips and watched his fingers again.
"Is there anything else I can do? Want me to refresh you?" the painter gently asked. He was evidently used to such requests from portraits. "I can give you richer colours, if you like."
For a moment, Snape was tempted. He furtively looked at the mirror in his picture. Why not? Now that Lily was here, why not?
Then, he understood the futility of that change. She had already seen him and found him "handsome". But she had never been his and never would be. He took a deep breath, feeling the first drop of bitterness enter his recent happiness.
"No... no, thank you!" he finally replied, a bit more harshly than he would have liked.
"Ah, come on!" the man insisted, then winked in complicity. "There must be some nice portrait in this castle."
Bernardi was more or less his age, and his words were friendly. Yet, for a moment, Snape felt oddly resentful. He wished that he could be living again and that he and the woman he had for a moment hoped to impress could be magically brought back in time. Emotion made him frown, and the painter, who was watching him attentively, became serious.
"I'm sorry. I have been indiscreet," he apologised, abandoning his amused tone. Then, he advised, "Please wait just another five minutes, Professor, while I cast the enchantment on the real fax. Then, we will test both the machines."
Sidetracked, Snape watched the man open a box and take out a perfect copy of his painted masterpiece.
Again, Bernardi smiled.
"See? It's easy! You insert the parchment here, then click the button. The sheet passes through here, comes out there and, at the same time, a copy will arrive in your machine. Same procedure when you want to send something out. Don't worry, the two machines are interconnected, so there is no possibility of mistaking the recipient, unless one of your little rascals here enchants the copy in the classroom. However, I'll put a triple-shield protection. They'll need to be very, very skilled to break it."
After a few moments, the man finally announced, "Ready! Let's try!"
The painter took a piece of parchment and wrote something on it. Then, he inserted it in the fax and pressed a button. Astonished, Snape saw a parchment slip out from his machine.
"Take it, Professor! It doesn't bite!" Bernardi encouraged him.
Snape took the parchment. The words said "Marcello Bernardi, Maestro Pittore". He watched them in awe. They came from the world, the real world. An immense emotion overwhelmed him, as if a ray of sun had found a passage through a wall of bricks. He took his quill, then paused to consider it with a bizarre, lopsided smile. What a contrast! The bare simplicity of a feather against the technological wonder of a mechanism made of so many little parts.
Finally, he took the parchment and wrote "Severus Snape, Potions Master". Then, he sent the message back with disconcerting easiness.
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Author's note:
Just a little explanation: personally, I hate OCs, so I try to use as many canon characters as possible when writing a story. But sometimes it's impossible, which was exactly the case at this point in the story. I needed a painter, but no canon character seemed suitable for this job... in my opinion, of course. So, I decided to invent one and, while I was inventing, I thought, "why not offer a tribute to my country of artists?"
This is how Marcello Bernardi was born, and this is the evidence that he was somehow waiting to come out: I don't like the name "Marcello", but this name popped automatically in my mind as soon as I imagined this character. So, I believe he was waiting to have a chance. Let's hope you will give it to him.
But there is also a more important reason to make the painter an Italian. You will discover it in the next chapter ;)
Translation of the Italian words:
"Al vostro servizio" means "at your orders"
"Accademia di Arti Magiche" means "Accademy of Magical Arts".
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157 Reviews | 6.82/10 Average
This is a great story and more so since you have been working in a second language. Well done!
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you very much! I feel honoured by your words and glad you liked the story. Best regards from Italy.
That was very intense, I'm so glad Severus found Al,and got him back to Hogwarts in time. Severus loves little Lily so much, whoever else he may resist, he could never resist Lily's pleas. Thank you for the update.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thanks to you for leaving me a review each time. I hope you will enjoy the last chapter. Looking forward to hearing your final comment. Best wishes for the new year!
Ooooo! So heart-wrenching. ^_^
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
You should know me by now... I am a very emotional Italian ;)Thank you very much for leaving me a comment. Last chapter has been uploaded. See you soon.
Complete is better.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
You will excuse me, but I don't understand what you mean.Sorry.
Poor Al, I hope he will be alright, and that Severus can explain his reasoning more fully when he finds him.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you very much for your message. Something very particular is going to happen... but of course I cannot tell you anything. Best regards from Italy.
I loved the way Severus granted the wishes, young Al is a very sweet child. The flying was wonderful, the childrens surprise at Severus' ability to fly was great. I hope that Harry will finally see what a prat Sirius Black really is.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you liked the chapter as it's one of my favourites ;)Only three chapters to the end, but there is room for other "surprises" that, hopefully, you will like.
It is not surprising that Severus is feeling so depressed, reliving all the pain Dumbledor watched him endure. I wonder what wishes Severus will grant to the children, I will have to wait for the next chapter to find out.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you very much for leaving me a comment. Severus is in a painful situation. I hope you will like what happens in the next chapter.
A wish? Can he even work magic right now? Excellent writing although a bit depressing. Of course, that may be what you were trying to do here. ^_^
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
In fact. Be prepared to a wide assortment of all the possible emotions, in pure dramatic Italian style ;)No, well, seriously: be prepared to moments of anguish and moments of joy. The situation in which Severus is now is really destabilising, as you can imagine. And soon he will ask himself if... Sorry, can't say anything else. Thank you very much, especially for your comment about my writing. Opinion like yours make me feel taller.
My first reaction to Gimmy was anger { hurting Severus is not on , in my book. }, but as she opened up and began to speak about her life with Harry, I began to see her point of view. I had never thought about it before, but Ginny does not seem to have had much say in the names of her children, it's all Harry, his family, the people he admires. I look forward to the next chapter, thank you.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Hello! I was waiting for your review ;) Thank you for being such a loyal reader. Yes, I think that Ginny had to accept a lot of things. She has a very ardent character, but when it comes to Harry, I see that she is ready to comply with his will. I suppose we could call it "love" ;)The next chapter is still with my beta. I hope she will send it back soon. However, the countdown has started. Only five chapters to the end. I hope you will like them all.Best regards from rainy Italy.
Awwwww! Such a cleansing moment! This has been such an excellent story. I hate to see it end, but all good things must end sometime. Hopefully not for another ten or twenty chapters, though! Huh? Huh? ^_^
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
That's so kind of you and so nice to hear! Thank you very much! I really appreciate your generous words and I am extremely grateful for your comments. They make worthwhile the long, exhausting hours I've spent trying to convey my ideas and emotions in a language completely different from mine. And you can't imagine how this kind of exercise can be frustrating! Especially when I see you other wonderful native authors flying high... while I am here, chained to the ground.So, in my Italianly emotional way, thank you very much. I'm glad that you like my story as much as to hope that there are other ten or twenty chapters. But I'm sorry to tell you that, unfortunately, chapter 38 will be the final one. I hope you will enjoy what happens in this last part of the story, that takes place during a whole Christmas day.Thanks again and best regards from sunny Italy. (And sorry for my English... my answers aren't betaed).
Response from MsTree (Reviewer)
Your English is probably better than mine. ^_^
This is fantastic!! I'm new to The Petulant Poetess and I found myself drawn in by your story a few days ago!!! It's brilliant!! You brought out all the fantastic sides of Snape that JK only hinted at!!
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Wow! This is certainly a very nice review to find, especially considering that I am Italian and therefore I feel like a sort of ugly duckling amongst the other fantastic authors in this site. Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you like the story so much. You arrived almost at the end, however. Only other 6 chapters to the end. I hope you will enjoy them, because according to me, they are the best part of my novel.
I don't think that Harry would be in much danger, Severus is above all , a man of honor.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Well, a man of honor yet still a man. You shouldn't undervalue temptations, especially in a case as complicate as a portrait coming back to real life. But you will see how Snape will face dangers and options and how he will handle them in the next chapters.Thanks for reading and leaving me a message :)
This chapter made me cry! Good work! ^_^
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Next chapters will be as emotional as this... but hopefully, a good, sweet emotion. Thank you for reading and leaving a message.
I'm sure Mr Zabini thinks he has all bases covered,but he has forgoten with whom he is dealing. He will find his biggest mistake was threatening Lily.
So glad everyone is getting better, I knew Severus could do it.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Your assumption is right, but I think you will be surprised by the next chapter ;)Thank you very much for leaving me a message. Best wishes of a joyful holiday season and a Happy New Year!
evil cliffie... really evil cliffie. did you write this whilst on drugs? i loved this story! the characters were fleshed out in both micro and macro form. loved the philosophical understanding.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Er... thank you. I feel honoured by your words, though a bit puzzled about the part regarding drugs. Should I take it as a compliment? You see, I'm Itaiian, so perhaps I don't catch every shade in your sentences ;)Anyway, thanks again. If you liked the story and have the patience to wait for the new segments to be uploaded (the queue lately seems eternal), there are still 8 chapters before the end. And according to me, they are the most interesting.
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
well, thanks for your response, memory. i understand that you're italian. everyone in my family has got cough so i read your fanfic whilst being high on cough syrup and found it extremely meaningful and 3-dimensional. no need to apologise about being italian. i need to thank you for bringing me along on this wonderful journey. come visit me when in singapore! :))
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
that's if u ever want to come to singapore or malaysia :) i've been to italy! :) and the vatican city...
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Ah, Singapore! Wonderful city. Never been there, but my father and sisters used to go there often. One of my sisters now lives in Myanmar, and she goes to Singapore many times. Hope one day I'll visit it too :)Best wishes for the holiday season and Happy New Year!
From a child's point of view { and Finlay was a child at the time } there can be no excuse, or explanation for such an act. To say that it could have been worse, if not for Severus' diverting attention away from the victims is a poor excuse, at best. Hopefully the fact that he gave his life in atonement,, will count for something, to the authoritys, if not to Finlay.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
I see that what happened to the Finlay family has really impressed my readers. Therefore, I hope that you will like what happens in the next chapter... ;)Thank you very much and best regards.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
I see that what happened to the Finlay family has really impressed my readers. Therefore, I hope that you will like what happens in the next chapter... ;)Thank you very much and best regards.
Hopefully, Harry will actually listen to both sides of the story before he takes further action. People's lives are currently on the line and the past is the past and can't be changed. I understand Finlay's pain and he should have his moment, but I can't help saying, NOT NOW! ::grins:: Severus really should have brought the man on board before getting the journal transferred - Finlay is the Deputy after all. It will be interesting to see how this is resolved.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Harry is an interesting pawn in this game. I hope I'll be able to update soon; I'm curious to know your reaction.(Anyway, Severus couldn't involve Finlay in the "experiment". He needed to keep it as secret as possible, because of Lucius).Thanks and see you soon.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Harry is an interesting pawn in this game. I hope I'll be able to update soon; I'm curious to know your reaction.(Anyway, Severus couldn't involve Finlay in the "experiment". He needed to keep it as secret as possible, because of Lucius).Thanks and see you soon.
I like Cornelia. She is very intriguing.But now we have a big mystery. Which house, how does he find it, whose help will he enlist to dig up the box, and how will they gain entry into the new house? So many questions. I'm sure you will answer them in due time.I am so enjoying this story.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Hi, I'm glad that you like Cornelia and the story. For a foreigner, this is the best compliment. It means that, in spite of my many flaws, I can transmit you not only emotions but also curiosity.About the next chapter, as I always tell my reviewers, this story is complete and completely written. Still eleven chapters to reach the end, but they must be revised thoroughly to be allowed to enter TPP. This means a lot of work for my beta, and she is a busy one. But chapter 28 has just been checked, so I will post it. I'm sure you will appreciate how your questions have been answered ;)Thank you very much and best regards from Italy.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Hi, I'm glad that you like Cornelia and the story. For a foreigner, this is the best compliment. It means that, in spite of my many flaws, I can transmit you not only emotions but also curiosity.About the next chapter, as I always tell my reviewers, this story is complete and completely written. Still eleven chapters to reach the end, but they must be revised thoroughly to be allowed to enter TPP. This means a lot of work for my beta, and she is a busy one. But chapter 28 has just been checked, so I will post it. I'm sure you will appreciate how your questions have been answered ;)Thank you very much and best regards from Italy.
I can understand why she wouldn't talk to Dumbledor, with his track record of doing things "for the greater good" no matter who or what it destroys.
I'm going out of my tiny mind trying to figure out ,where the house is, I have several theorys , I can't wait for the next chapter, to find out if I'm right, or not.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thanks for being such a nice reviewier :)I think that you will be very surprised by next chapter. Sorry, it will take a bit more time to publish it because it's long and complex, so my beta is still revising it. But as you know, the story is complete, so no need to worry. Thank you for your patience. Best regards.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thanks for being such a nice reviewier :)I think that you will be very surprised by next chapter. Sorry, it will take a bit more time to publish it because it's long and complex, so my beta is still revising it. But as you know, the story is complete, so no need to worry. Thank you for your patience. Best regards.
Let's see: Will he choose Zambini, the one who replaced him? How about Albus and Scorpius? Then there's Hermione for the research. Or will he stick with personnel within the school? ^_^
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Hi, thanks for the message. About your question, just prepare to be surprised... ;)
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Hi, thanks for the message. About your question, just prepare to be surprised... ;)
Thank you for the up date, if anyone can find a cure, it's Severus, can't wait to see who will be choosen to be his staff.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you for leaving me a message. I think you will be very surprised... ;)
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you for leaving me a message. I think you will be very surprised... ;)
There can never be anything between Lily and Severus, as much as it hurts, it would hurt so much more if she pretended to feel something she didn't, after all the heart wants what it wants, Lily can no more make herself love Severus, than Severus can stop himself loving her. Whatever is wrong with Scorpius, it's something big.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
In fact, Lily has been very sincere. But sincerity is not what a disillusioned lover can appreciate. The trouble with Scorpius IS something big. And you will see its consequences in the next chapters.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
In fact, Lily has been very sincere. But sincerity is not what a disillusioned lover can appreciate. The trouble with Scorpius IS something big. And you will see its consequences in the next chapters.
Yes Lily, you hurt him AGAIN, now what is he going to do. withdraw into his shell again? What does Zabeni have to do to be alowed back into the family?On to the next chapter to see.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
The relationship between Lily and Severus is a very difficult one, now that they have somehow grown but they have also crystallised in their portrait forms. Zabini? Ehhh, Zabini has a big problem to solve...
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
The relationship between Lily and Severus is a very difficult one, now that they have somehow grown but they have also crystallised in their portrait forms. Zabini? Ehhh, Zabini has a big problem to solve...
Interesting, that Severus would choose the same test that Slughorn used,with Lily and himself, to try to help James.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Memories are coming back more and more powerfully, and feelings with them. All things that help Severus examine and learn from the past in order to build the future.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Memories are coming back more and more powerfully, and feelings with them. All things that help Severus examine and learn from the past in order to build the future.
Severus always has to learn things the hard way, doesn't he. I loved the conversation with Minerva, their friendship is growing,and getting closer.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Personally, chapter 19 is one of my favourites. I'm glad that you too liked it.
Response from Memory (Author of Second Chance)
Personally, chapter 19 is one of my favourites. I'm glad that you too liked it.