Red House
Chapter 1 of 17
julymorningJust after Voldemort's defeat, Hermione is doing research at the Department of Mysteries when she discovers she has inherited Spinner's End. As she uncovers the secrets of the house, the effect on her work – and her life – is startling.
ReviewedAuthor's Note: All characters belong to J. K. Rowling.
Red House
There's a red house over yonder
That's where my baby stays
The red-brick house sat at the end of a row of red-brick houses, bounded on one side by the cracked asphalt of the street and on the other by a scraggly field of wild grass and brambles. The white trim painted onto the window and door frames was cracked and peeling. Divots in the brick testified to the level of local air pollution. In the distance to the east, the rusted chimney of a textile mill loomed. It juxtaposed neatly with the spire of York Minster rising into the grey clouds on the southern horizon. Both towers provided unrepentant evidence of mankind's achievements; each was beautiful and ugly in its own way.
Hermione Granger put a hesitant foot on the steps leading to the front door of the house and looked back at her companion uncertainly. 'You're sure about this?'
Kingsley Shacklebolt shoved his hands into the pockets of his Muggle jeans and shrugged. 'Everything was clear and above-board. The will just finished probate yesterday. The house is yours.'
Hermione fingered the Yale key in her hand. Less than a month had passed since the discovery of Severus Snape's last testament in the headmaster's office at Hogwarts. Why has he left this place to me? But the answer was obvious: everyone else Snape knew was either dead or already in possession of a home. With her parents' decision to remain in Australia, Hermione had resigned herself to living at Grimmauld Place with Harry and Ron until yesterday, that is, when the letter from the Ministry had informed her of her new acquisition.
Snape, dead and gone, buried on the grounds of Hogwarts with all of the other casualties of war. Grief, sharp and fresh, squeezed her chest. Sixty-two days, she thought. It has only been sixty-two days. I'm allowed to feel sad still. She catalogued the list of fallen heroes in her mind, finishing with her former professor. She had not seen the memories Harry had taken from him, but she knew that it was he who had led them to Gryffindor's sword and he who had given Harry the final piece of the puzzle. Snape couldn't have known that Harry would survive; otherwise he might have fought harder for his own life.
And now there was this house Spinner's End the last unexplored relic of the man who had given and given of himself for twenty years and continued to give from beyond the grave. It was enough to make her cry again, had she not been standing in front of the acting Minister of Magic. Determined to keep her dignity intact, Hermione turned her focus to the building that was now hers. If Snape's office at Hogwarts was anything to go by, the house would be filled with grotesqueries. Had he practiced the Dark Arts here? Would there be any lingering traces of what had surely been a miserable youth? Nobody had been inside for almost a year; she could imagine, at the very least, mould and mouse droppings. Could I even live in this house? I bet it's disgusting...
'Are you going to go in or what?' Kingsley interrupted. 'If we stand out here much longer, we're going to get soaked.' He angled his head to look up at the lowering sky.
'Right.' Hermione nodded determinedly and climbed the steps. The key turned easily in the lock, and the door glided smoothly open. Her first reaction was one of disappointment: where were all of Snape's books? For obviously he had possessed many, many books shelves were built onto every wall, ceiling to floor, and over the spots where the windows and fireplace must be. She could not even see any doors to the other parts of the house.
'Ooh,' Kingsley murmured over her shoulder. 'Creepy dark in here.'
Ignoring him, Hermione lit her wand with a non-verbal Lumos and passed over the threshold into the front room. Originally, this space had been a lounge and a dining area: two threadbare armchairs sat forlornly on the brown shag carpet in the near half of the room; through a wide archway, she could see a scarred oak table that, judging by the ink stains, had probably done duty as a desk rather than an eating surface. Dust motes danced through the air in front of her wand.
'Erm, Kingsley?' Hermione asked. 'Any idea how to get into the rest of the house?'
'Not a clue.' He stepped around her and headed for the back of the room, beyond the dining table. She followed, passing her wand-light over the shelves, looking for cracks.
'Here,' Kingsley murmured. He was standing in the back left-hand corner of the room. Hermione peered into the gloom and saw a set of hinges. Experimentally, she reached out and tugged on the nearest shelves. With a faint creak, they swung toward her and revealed a staircase that travelled up behind the back wall of the room to the first floor. The stairwell was pitch-black. Are there any windows in this house at all?
Kingsley had crossed the room and was examining the right-hand corner. Leaving the upstairs for later, Hermione approached him just as he gave a tentative push against a section of shelving. The wall opened away from him, and light, grey and rainy but nevertheless illuminating, filtered into the front room.
'This looks like the kitchen,' he said, walking forward. She strode behind him into a space half-heartedly brightened by yellow linoleum and wallpaper. Cabinets, worktop, refrigerator, hob: a perfectly respectable, if grimy, Muggle kitchen. Curiously, Hermione opened a few of the cabinets, but they all appeared to be empty. So were the oven and the refrigerator. She twisted the hot tap in the sink: clean, steaming water poured out. At least Snape paid his bills! A battered electric kettle and toaster sat on the worktop near the hob. Looking up, Hermione saw a coffee press on top of the fridge. A small round table with two chairs was nestled into the corner of the room under the windows.
'Look out here,' Kingsley said, drawing Hermione's attention to the heavy door that stood at the far end of the room. It led into a small laundry area washing machine but no tumble dryer fitted with, naturally, more shelves, which held a few bottles of household cleaner and one lone hammer, the plastic on its handle blue and worn. A screen door opened into the back garden.
Despite the rain, Hermione wanted to see what was out there. Pulling up the hood on her jumper, she descended a few stairs onto a concrete walk that passed through the sparse grass of the yard to a wooden shed against the back wall of the garden. The shed wasn't locked; peering through the doorway, Hermione could just make out a rusty lawnmower and a bottle of weed-killer. Between the shed and the back of the house, someone had strung clothesline; wooden pins hung on it, covered in lacy cobwebs.
Returning to the kitchen, Hermione found that Kingsley had made his way into the front room and was now standing in the doorway to the staircase.
'Where do you think these go?' he asked, motioning.
'They go up.' Lighting her wand again, feeling a twinge of trepidation, Hermione ascended the stairs carpeted in the same brown shag to a dim hallway. To her left, she discovered an entirely unremarkable bathroom and another small room whose walls had not escaped Snape's shelving obsession. To the right of the stairway was a small bedroom: low single bed, desk, chest of drawers, wardrobe. Brief investigation revealed these items of furniture to be as empty as the kitchen cabinets. And at the far end of the hallway, a closed door, dark and forbidding.
When she opened it, Hermione decided that inheriting this house hadn't been a waste after all. In contrast to the rest of the place, this room was light and clean. Two windows looked onto the street in front of the house; a third gave an eastward view across the scraggly field. The four-poster bed still bore the frame for a canopy. Its dark mahogany contrasted beautifully with the small pine dressing table between the front windows and the twin pine wardrobes on either side of the east window. A tall bureau, its drawers shallow and elegantly carved, made up the set.
'I'll take it,' she said delightedly to Kingsley, who was hovering in the hallway.
'You sure?' he asked, eyes glinting speculatively. 'What do you think this place would fetch on the market?'
'I'm not selling it,' Hermione said firmly. 'I would have made it into a memorial for Professor Snape, but I'm going to live in it now instead.'
Kingsley raised one eyebrow. 'To each his own, I suppose. Sure hope you're going to tear down some of those shelves.' He walked away; Hermione heard his light tread going back down the stairs.
She ran her hand over the mattress on the four-poster bed and gazed dreamily around the room. In her mind's eye, she imagined what it might look like if she had the money to renovate. Light carpet in here instead of this horrible brown stuff maybe grey or beige with sheer drapes over the windows. A canopy of pale green muslin for the bed and a matching skirt for the dressing table, darker green bedclothes. I reckon I could knock out most of the walls up here and have one huge bedroom and one huge bathroom. The idea of a separate shower and tub seduced her. She wandered to the opposite end of the hallway and inspected the plumbing. I could even put jets in the bathtub...
Reluctantly, she focussed her eyes and pulled her mind back to the present. First, she would have to deep-clean everything, maybe even repaint the trim outside. Get duplicate keys made. Seed the back garden. Mentally compiling a list of 'house tasks,' she ambled down the staircase and into the kitchen. No dishes in the cupboards she would have to buy or borrow some. Sitting down at the little round table, she pulled some parchment from her bag and began to write. After a few moments, she looked up to see Kingsley standing just inside the shelf-door, seemingly inspecting the blank wall there.
'What is it?' she asked.
'The stairs run right above here,' he answered, pointing. He cocked his head thoughtfully.
'So?'
'You said, "those stairs go up" and where stairs go up, they also go down.'
Intrigued, Hermione hurried from her chair to stand next to him. 'You think there might be a basement?'
'If there were...' He ran his hands lightly along the wall. 'If there were, this is where the entrance would be. Don't you think?'
Hermione narrowed her eyes and looked closely at the stretch of wall. She couldn't see any seams or hinges. Placing both palms flat against it, she gave a firm push, but nothing happened. Balling her hands into fists, she rapped her knuckles lightly against the wall.
'You're not going to find out anything that way,' Kingsley scoffed. He walked across the room into the laundry area and came back bearing the hammer. Holding it by the head, he pounded on the wall with the handle. Low booms echoed through the room. 'It's hollow,' he confirmed.
'How do we get down there?' Hermione asked wonderingly.
'Exterior entrance?' Kingsley suggested.
'I didn't see one,' she said.
'Best leave it alone, then,' he cautioned, returning the hammer to its shelf. 'If you can't get in, nothing can get out.'
'I'll find a way,' Hermione said determinedly.
Kingsley wrinkled his brow in concern. 'If you do find a way,' he said, 'don't go down there alone. Get Harry or Ron to go with you.'
The image of a giant snake in an old woman's bedroom erupted in her mind. Did Kingsley think it had been Harry and Ron doing the protecting all these months? 'I will,' she promised. Like hell.
He made his way back to the front door. 'When will you move in?'
'As soon as I can,' she called to him, gathering up her things and taking one final, lingering look around the double front room. Must remember to put the paperbacks on those shelves that are doors otherwise they'll be too heavy to open. I wonder who got all of Snape's books. She thought ruefully that, however horrible this house might have been, it couldn't possibly be worse than the ancestral Black home with its dark corridors and screaming portraits. Flash of Kreacher, skulking in his lair behind the kitchen. Remus Lupin's last visit, his argument with Harry. That narrow upstairs hallway where Sirius had lived, his room rummaged by Snape last summer. The bedroom of teenaged Regulus, gone forever into the cave by the seaside. The entire place held the bittersweet breath of too many people loved and lost. Snape is one of those people, she thought suddenly that stark, grey bedroom he had sometimes slept in, the swishing sound of his black robes sweeping malevolently through the dirty kitchen or the darkened library. There was more of Snape at Grimmauld Place than in this lonely house in northern York.
'Coming?' Kingsley shouted from the road.
She stepped onto the front stoop and locked the door carefully, depositing the key in the pocket of her jeans.
'Back to the Ministry?' he asked when she approached.
'No,' she said, gazing at the late-afternoon sky. The air was damp with drizzle. 'I think I'll go into York and have a look around.'
'See you later, then.' He walked round the far end of the house. A moment later there was an abrupt crack. Hermione hoisted her bag securely on her shoulder and strolled down the street.
At the bottom of the close, she turned into another street and followed it to Water Lane where she caught a bus going into the city centre. It let her off a few minutes later just outside Bootham Bar. The façade of York Minster loomed over the stone gateway; through the arch, she could see the famous Heart of Yorkshire window. Tourists streamed in and out of the west doors of the cathedral.
Hermione walked slowly along High Petergate, the medieval buildings on either side of the narrow street so close together that they seemed to meet overhead, and emerged into the Minster Yard. The cathedral was huge, one of the biggest in the country. Its spire seemed to touch the low, heavy clouds. With a start, she realised it was touching the clouds, and that the rain was going to start pouring any minute now. Unfurling her umbrella, she continued onward into Deangate, pausing to admire the statue of the Roman emperor Constantine in the cathedral garth.
Beyond the eastern end of York Minster, she passed St William's College, another fabulously medieval building, and at last found herself standing under the archway of Monk Bar, sheltering from the rain with a load of other bedraggled pedestrians. There was enough history in this city to keep her occupied for years. Even as she stood there under the ancient stones, she noticed a sign for the Richard III Museum. And the libraries! The Minster had one, surely, and the city must have its own archives. Hadn't Alcuin, Charlemagne's court magician, been from York?
Yes, Hermione thought with satisfaction. I could definitely live here.
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What a story. I am blazing through it, shamefully jumped over the Aristotle soul quotes to read about Severus, but will catch my breath now, re-read calmly, and remember to watch details, not just plot. Gods. obssessive Love.
I always did want a reason to read Avicenna, being interested in herbs, gardens and the Moorish-Spanish times in European History, Al- Andalus. a time of true scientific curiosity and partial tolerance.
Our times could learn something from those inquiring minds. Why do labels have to strip people from feeling tolerance with each other ? well, It is wonderfully written , and am truly delighted you have not stopped writing it.
Wow, this story is so intense. Usually I dislike stories that have anything to do with spirits or the afterlife or the soul. This story put the aforementioned in an entirely different perspective for me. I truly hope that this story gets finished sometime.
So glad you've come back to this story. This is a great updates. I'll keep my eyes on the lookout for more.
Oh man, I got so excited when this popped up on my alerts. You did not disappoint.
Very interesting story! Thanks for the update!
An update after all this time was such a welcome sight! It's such a good story!
Events in this chapter are really ominous though. Bet it's that Edward Teach--he's always given me the creeps.
Catching up with this story--so compelling, I'm not reviewing much. I really like the continued closeness of Harry and Ron and Hermione. A lot of stories have them drifting apart right away, and that doesn't seem all that likely to me, given what they've shared. Snape's manifestation and the small boy and the brown man all have me a bit puzzled, but I'm sure they and their roles will become clearer with time. I'm also a bit shocked by the rule-abiding Hermione's willingness to push ethical boundaries here. But what really gave me pause in this chapter was the furnace. If it was in the hidden basement, how did she think the house was heated? How would she fill it with fuel?
I am also very glad to see this story. It is very original and just keeps getting more interesting. I jumped on the update as soon as it hit but shamefully didn't review right away for which I apologize. Love the story. Best wishes, Kat
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
PS: I love the song titles for chapters. You even hit one of my desert island discs in there.
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
PS: I love the song titles for chapters. You even hit one of my desert island discs in there.
Lovely to see this! It's been one of the fics on my wistful list--unfinished fics so good I can't help but reread from time to time and check to see if there is anything new. And Lo! (please forgive the Tolkien moment) here is chapter 17 with more to come. Rubs hands gleefully and jumps right back in.
Oh my God, you're finally back! I had already given up hope on the story being continued, and I'm really happy to be proved wrong! Wonderful chapter and great story, keep up the good work! Cheers and welcome back ;D Luiza
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
OMG, I only posted the new chap about 2 seconds ago! Thank you so much for coming back to read some more, you rock. :-D
Response from Moon999 (Reviewer)
uhsahsuhsuhs Oh, I guess I was just excited ;D Are updates going to be more regular now or is real life getting on the way? If you need any help or a beta or anything you can ask me (even though I'm not a native ;P).Luiza
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
OMG, I only posted the new chap about 2 seconds ago! Thank you so much for coming back to read some more, you rock. :-D
Response from Moon999 (Reviewer)
uhsahsuhsuhs Oh, I guess I was just excited ;D Are updates going to be more regular now or is real life getting on the way? If you need any help or a beta or anything you can ask me (even though I'm not a native ;P).Luiza
I come back to this so many times and I'm always incredibly disappointed that it's abandoned. Is there any chance at all of you letting someone beta the finished copy?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
It's back, there's a new chapter up! Come read, I promise not to suck and abandon it again. :-)
The situation with Cheat was never resolved. I don't trust him to keep this information to himself, and Hermione seems to feel no compunction to do the right thing and let Kingsley know that they had a falling out and he has left angery and in possession of this knowledge. She needn't tell Kingsley exactly what their falling out had to do with. She could even say he was afraid that she had been tempted to keep Snape in his body permanently. Kingsley wouldn't automatically assume sex to be the only good reason to bring back Severus Snape. From his point of view there could have been many other motives. Snape is a hero, an Order Memeber and a friend. He would understand the temptation but would also trust Hermione would never actually do such a thing.Hermione and Kingsley stupidly had never really investigated Cheat's personal integrity when they allowed him to sponser this project and know everything it entailed. That seems odd considering what they had just endured from Voldemort. How did they know Cheat didn't desire eternal live himself? Have only the short sighted people survived the war? Cheat's open ending, I suppose, is in keeping with the genre. There have been many horror movies that have left an open ending, adding to the present fear the knowiedge these horrible things could be rediscovered, and all Hell could break loose again. Also, most horror movies need individuals making stupid and short sighted choices to create the perfect storm for dangerous outcomes. Everyone in the audience is yelling "Don't go down there!" or "How stupid could you be!" Well done!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thanks for the 'well done' but the story isn't finished! I've just put a new chapter up—come back and read it, please. :-)
Hermione, Hermione, Hermione...Now what's going to happen to you. I'm sure Cheat won't be finanancing your research any longer. Why didn't you destroy the everything as he asked, after Cheat was back? Will you do it now? I doubt it. How do you know he hasn't gone right back to your house and stolen it to be used for nefarious purposes? You are the lamest Hermione I've known. You should be sharp as a tack and figuring out this stuff before it happens. Are you just so traumatized by the war that you've lost your edge?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Lamest Hermione ever? :-)
This feels wrong. Totally wrong. It isn't like Hermione to be so foolhearty. That's why she wanted Harry to destroy the Prince's book. Her Gryffindore impulsivity must be ruling her. I don't like this. I hope I'm wrong and nothing bad happens to Severus. It might be good if Cheat never gets back into a body, I think. Now, how to remove him from the earth relm? Command him into the veil, I think. She never really checked out why he was so facinated with Serius' death. He's too good to be true. Too rich, too generous, too seemingly benign and too handsome. I think Cheat wants Hermione to make him a horcrux. Who is he going to kill to get himself torn to make a piece for the horcrux? This is Dark Magic. This is the stuff of Voldemort. Snape did it, but I sincerely doubt he enlisted a dead soul to go into his body. That isn't at all like him. I know HE isn't this foolhearty. And it sounds like Hermione has been shagging Cheat. But it doesn't sound like she's in love with him. It doesn't seem like Hermione to be this easy to influence. I'm missing something. How could she continue shagging Cheat in Severus' house? Doesn't Hermione see that she has fallen for the same ethical lies that allowed Snape to take The Mark, to his ever lasting despair? I truely hope this is what Severus wants Hermione to do so that he can speak to her. I hope she remembers she loves him. She is out of control right now. (or under control) Too bad Harry doesn't know what she's up to. I think he would try to stop her. He wouldn't exploit Severus Snape this way, and I don't think that when it came down to it, he would ever want Hermione to try to actually make a Horcrux and that is where this is headed, I am pretty sure. I don't think this is what Kingsley had in mind when he allowed her to do this either.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Hermione is too wrapped up in discovering new magic to be cautious. And yes, I think Harry would stop her too, which is why she's not telling him what she's doing. I started writing this story originally because I thought Horcruxes seemed like only half an idea—something maybe JK didn't think through too deeply—and I wanted to explore the implications of being able to do something like fiddle with one's soul.
Are you going to finish writing this story...Just curious on how it's going to end.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thanks for your message! Yes, I'm going to finish it—now, in fact. It's been a long hiatus, but I'm finally back in the writing groove. :-)
This is such an amazing story--so engrossing and original!I sincerely hope that you have not abandoned it, although I note the last update is more than a year ago...Please let us know your intentions. Thanks.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
That long ago? Good grief, it doesn't feel like it's been that long! Thank you for leaving such a nice review. I promise the story is not abandoned, just on hiatus while I sort my life out. It is actually finished, but unedited, unbeta'd, and I'm still not entirely happy with the ending. I promise, though, that it will not die a quiet death! :-)
I was devastated when I realized there were no more chapters. I'm anxious for another one and can not wait until you have one out :)
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
I'm so sorry, my darling! There has been a long delay in updating because of RL, but the next chapter is in the works. I'm so glad you have enjoyed the story thus far. Thanks for the review! :-)
Wow, this is an intriguing story. So odd and different from any other I've read--it just hooks the reader right in and doesn't let go! I can't wait to read more! Do update soon.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. My apologies for the long delay between updates - RL has been a trial of late. The next chapter is in the works, and I hope to have it finished soon. :-)
I've just get irremediably hooked on your story.I truly hope it isn't abandoned. It's wonderful!Keep writting, please!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
It's not abandoned, just coming along slowly due to the end of the school year barrelling down! Thank you so much for the review - I will update soon!
I wonder if Draco wants a permanent break? Will Severus stay in his body permanently?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Well, that remains to be seen. Thank you for the review; sorry there has been so much delay in posting more chapters! RL takes its toll...
smile - where in the world will it go next - thanks for the grand work!!!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you, darling! What a lovely review. I hope to have more posted very soon. :-)
Oh wow... awesome story and brilliantly written! Can't wait for more!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! I received your email as well - I'm so glad you enjoy the story and want to read more. And I will have more, I promise, and hopefully soon! :-)
NO! I can't bloddy believe it!so that was why Draco was so excited by hearing about the existence and effectiveness of Snapes potion!!I would never have guessed.he wants to be dead. crazy. his body would move around but not with his soul.hm. what he had experienced the first time his soul was distracted from his body must have been something wonderful. But it didn't show on his face. other from the experiences we see on dead peoples face, where the observants often described peace, beauty, calmness, anything. but not what Hermione had seen.that is interesting.Does that have to do with him not being "really" dead by dying natural death?I mean, he can return any time.And what about Teach. He still is a ticking bomb.When and to whom will he tell or sell his story.And is Snape right. The potion as a weapon for a corrupt, terrorising tyranning governement?to really bring back ghosts of the past?to use their knowledge etc. sort of secret weapon.but Hermione is right. the asked soul can refuse cooperation, but on the other hand, a much crueler soul can creep into the body. waah.well, for the moment it is Snape. So there are 3 happy people. I guess.And Draco really had the decency not to return during love making. He is a gentleman after all *gg*They had to wait for their moment for so long.And I think Snape can be content. This time it is at least the body of a young Slytherin, and not a totaly unknown american wizzard.must be hard work for Hermioe to make believe it is not Draco standing in front of her. but on the other hand, it seems to be quite easy. but for how long???
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
at this rate the potion will be used up very quickly, I wonder?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
I love your reviews with a warm, fuzzy, loving love. :-D You always pick out the interesting things! And your commentary is so inspired. As to the potion - they are only using three drops at a time (rather like Veritaserum), so it'll be a while before they run out. To date, only 9 drops have been used...Thank you so much for the review!!! :-D
Thank you for the update! Another great chapter. Thank you for writing!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Lovely! Thank you so much for reviewing! :-)
wow! what now? besides another cup of tea! great update. thanks so much
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! 'What now' coming up soon, I hope... :-)