Dead On Time
Chapter 10 of 17
julymorningHermione tests a theory.
ReviewedDead On Time
Stamping on the ceiling, hammering on the walls
Gotta get out
She scrambled along the sofa, crab-like, terrified, her eyes squeezed tightly shut. When she reached the opposite end and could move no further, she opened her eyes to a narrow slit and peeked across the room. What she saw made her freeze in place: the candles were lit; the furnace hummed comfortingly; Snape, young and austere, was sitting calmly in the armchair across from her. Two mugs of tea steamed gently on the coffee table.
'You're dreaming,' Snape said softly.
'Am I?'
'You passed out.' He leaned forward and picked up one of the mugs. For a moment, he cradled it in both hands, seeming to enjoy the warmth. Then he said, 'I didn't mean to frighten you. I apologise.'
She stared. He looked exactly as she had seen him in her bedroom and in her sitting room: the thick, shoulder-length hair; the plain, black clothing; the pale, angular face. Only the expression was different more open, somehow, and friendlier. His dark eyes were not so forbidding now.
'Please,' he said, gesturing at the table. 'Have some tea.'
Slowly, without taking her eyes from his face, she reached for the second mug and brought it to her lips. She tasted nothing; her slumbering mind seemed unable to approximate the flavour of tea. 'What is going on here?' she asked, suspicious and more than a little angry.
'It would be pointless to attempt an explanation. Most people do not remember the complexities of their dreams. Only the atmosphere lingers.' He waved one graceful hand expansively. 'I've tried to create a pleasant atmosphere, but I can only work with what is already in your mind.'
'I remember my dreams,' she insisted stubbornly.
'No, you do not,' responded Snape. He sipped his tea thoughtfully, then added, 'But you remember more than most people.'
'What happens if I wake up?' she asked.
He shrugged. 'Nothing. You wake up.'
'You're not keeping me unconscious?'
Snape laughed. The sound was so familiar to her, yet she was sure that she had never once witnessed him smiling, let alone laughing, when he had been alive. 'I cannot alter reality,' he said finally. 'At least, not under the present circumstances. This you know, even if you don't know that you know. Think about it, Hermione. How is it that you can see me or hear me or feel my touch?'
His emphasis on the words 'see,' 'hear,' and 'touch' did not escape her. 'You can affect my sense perceptions.'
'What governs sense perception?' he asked.
'The body.'
'And what interprets those perceptions?'
'The mind.'
'And,' he prompted, 'what links body and mind? What governs how the mind interprets those perceptions?'
She knew the answer, just as she suddenly knew how he was manipulating her senses and her sleeping mind. It horrified her. 'The soul. You're messing with my soul!' She leapt from the sofa and backed into the corner of the room next to the record player. 'Stop it! Stop it!' The panic she felt was overwhelming.
An expression of impatience crossed his face, and for a brief moment he looked exactly like the old Snape, the living Snape. 'I could point out,' he snapped, 'that, at present, you're contemplating doing something much worse.' He rose to his feet and began to walk toward her.
She shrank further into the corner, pressing her back against the wall, and asked cautiously, 'What do you mean?'
'You know what I mean,' he said. Pausing in his approach, he turned to the bookcase that held his collection of records. He ran his long fingers idly along the spines. 'You know what you are looking for and why.'
'You started it!' she accused, indignation propelling her a step forward. 'You made me see you.'
'And you know the reason for that, as well.' He was watching her impassively now.
She stalked directly up to him, fists clenched, eyes flashing. '"Let me distract you,"' she quoted angrily. 'I told you that I remember my dreams. So, is that it? You're trying to stop my research by keeping my mind occupied with you?' She smiled unpleasantly. 'You're not as compelling as you think, Professor Snape.'
'Oh, really,' he said flatly. 'You do, however, seem to enjoy my distractions. Perhaps your memory isn't as good as you believe.' He grasped her upper arms and pulled her resisting body flush against his. His lips next to her ear, he whispered, 'How many times have you come apart in my hands?'
She gasped in surprise, a sharp inhalation of air that pressed her breasts to his chest. 'That was you?' Wide, brown eyes gazed unseeingly into black ones. 'But... only three times...'
The black eyes crinkled faintly at the corners; she realised he was smiling again. 'Far more than three times,' he countered softly. 'You just don't remember. More's the pity.'
'I will remember this,' she vowed.
'I hope so,' he said. Then his lips were on hers, and a conflagration of desire exploded across every inch of her body. His kiss was as humiliating as it was familiar and arousing; she realised that his anonymous appearances in her dreams had conditioned her to enjoy his attentions. Even though she now knew it had been Snape all along, she was nevertheless powerless to resist her body's joyful response.
He kissed her ears and her neck; because this was a dream, she was not concerned when their clothes seemed to disappear, and the rough concrete of the floor, which would have been so uncomfortable in reality, bothered her not at all when he guided her down to it to lie on her back. For the first time, she was able to appreciate the sight of his body; she loved his broad shoulders and narrow hips, the wiry muscles of his arms and legs. Never mind that he had not looked this way in life; she would never know him in life again, so this inaccuracy did not bother her, either.
He kissed her breasts and her belly; because this was a dream, she did not mind the slight pain his love bites caused or the roughness of his palms against her smooth skin. And she did not care, when he parted her thighs and began to lick her sensitive folds, that he was dead. These feelings were a construct of her soul: this was not death, it was life!
She came powerfully, crying out her completion unreservedly, and was still gasping when he stretched out his body on top of hers and kissed her tenderly.
'Please,' she whispered. 'Finish it.'
Snape sighed into her hair. 'I can't make you feel things you don't know how to feel.'
Never, until this moment, had she regretted her state of virginity; never, until this moment, had she come close to having an opportunity to do anything about it. 'Next time,' she thought, 'I'll have that fixed.'
'No!' Snape said urgently, answering her unspoken thought. 'No.' He kissed her again heatedly, impassioned, trying to drive the nascent plan from her mind. Outwardly, she surrendered to him again, silently determined to remember this thing, too; and she was pleased to discover that, because this was a dream, her responses to his touch were in no way diminished a second time around, or a third.
***
When Hermione awoke, every muscle in her body ached and screamed in protest when she tried to move. A minute or two passed before she realised why: she was curled into one corner of the sofa, her head resting on the arm, and her body had cramped up while she slept. There was a pain behind her eyes, too, which felt suspiciously like a red-wine headache. Her mouth tasted awful.
Gingerly, massaging her neck and back, she sat up and stretched her legs out in front of her. She remembered exactly where she was; her headache made her grateful for the pitch-black of the windowless basement. When she finally felt able to stand, she groped her way to the stairs and ascended them to the kitchen. The cold, grey light of early morning filtered through the windows.
Groaning, she filled the kettle and spooned some instant coffee into a mug. Her first swallow of boiling, black caffeine revived her somewhat, and she was able to sit relatively painlessly in one of the kitchen chairs and consume a piece of toast. Her brain felt incredibly sluggish, but she forced herself to think while she chewed her breakfast mechanically. Something had happened during the night, something she had to remember...
I need to remember. She remembered the Urim and Thummim; she could recall quite clearly the succession of questions and answers. And then Snape had appeared, frightening her out of her wits, and she had had a dream...
What had she dreamt? The tasteless tea, she remembered that; the debilitating pleasure she had experienced in Snape's arms was as clear to her as if it had really happened. There had been other things, too, things she had commanded herself not to forget! But she could not force her thoughts away from Snape now that they had drifted in his direction. Snape, naked. Snape, doing that to me. A look of contentment came into her face, and she wondered idly if she had the marks of any new love bites this time.
The sudden rush of recollection hit her like a freight train, making her gasp aloud, the memories tumbling over one another in quick succession. I cannot alter reality at, least not under the present circumstances... You're messing with my soul!... I can't make you feel things you don't know how to feel.
'Oh, my God,' she whispered.
Then she was on her feet, snatching quill and parchment from her bag hanging on the back of the kitchen door. She scribbled:
Edward,
You must come back at once I have had a bit of a breakthrough. Spinner's End, 7 pm. I'll make dinner.
Hermione
P.S. I don't know what you saw in my hallway, but I assure you, I have no boyfriend.
Apparating to Grimmauld Place thankfully empty of Harry and Ron, who were still on their training course she tied the scrap of parchment to Pigwidgeon and shoved the tiny owl briskly through a window. Just as quickly, she was home again.
Breakfast forgotten, she stood in the kitchen and unashamedly stripped off all of her clothes to inspect her skin. She regarded triumphantly the love-bites that dotted her body: there, just above her breast, and another on her hip, and another on the inside of her thigh. She was right her theory was right! Snape could affect things in the physical world, but perhaps without realising how, or even that he was doing it. She knew, of course, that the marks on her body could be psychosomatic, but she doubted this was the case.
Being Hermione, however, she could not let her theory go untested; this was the reason for her hastily scratched letter to Teach and for the rash excitement, the hectic heedlessness, she currently felt. She would test her theory this evening and perhaps kill another bird with the same stone: there were certain things she was determined to 'know how to feel' before too many more nights had gone by.
***
By the time seven o'clock rolled around, Hermione was on her fourth glass of wine. She had just tipped a load of linguine into the saucepan of water boiling on the hob when she heard the telltale crack that heralded Teach's arrival. She set her wineglass carefully on the countertop and pushed her hair behind her shoulders. Strange, how she didn't feel at all nervous, but rather recklessly confident. She would have liked to blame it on the wine, but she knew it was a product of the anticipatory excitement she had felt all day. New discoveries were beckoning from the edges of her awareness, and she was determined not to let the opportunity to reach them slip away.
'Miss Granger? Are you here?' Teach was calling from the sitting room. 'I'm sorry I had to Apparate straight in, but I wasn't sure if it was wise to try it on a Muggle street...' His voice trailed off when she entered the room.
Hermione secretly enjoyed his expression of astonishment; she knew what he was seeing, having perfected it in the mirror earlier, and his reaction delighted her. Her hair, wild and tousled; her smoky eyes; her perfectly smooth skin, given a golden sheen by the candlelight in the dining room; her body, artfully revealed in the tiniest red dress she could find; her bare feet and painted toenails. She had hoped it would make him think of sex; it didn't look as if she were going to be disappointed.
'Wine?' she asked politely.
Teach nodded silently. She Summoned the bottle from the kitchen and poured the dark red liquid into one of the wine goblets on the table. She was at leisure to look at him as she did so; he wore yet another dark suit, this time without a tie, and the top two buttons of his shirt were open, revealing the barest hint of hard, bronzed chest beneath the hollow where his collarbones met. His light brown hair was windblown and just slightly too long where it brushed against his high cheekbones on either side of his face. Hermione had no trouble imagining herself carrying her plan through: he was gorgeous. Not in the same way as the youthful Snape, who was lean and angular, but with a robust hardness that she appreciated almost as much.
When she handed him his wine, she allowed her fingers to graze against his; then she stood back again and waited for him to drink. He glanced briefly at the glass in his hand, as if he had no idea what it was, and returned his gaze to her, seemingly unable to stop staring. Finally, he tore his eyes away from her body and put the wineglass on the table. 'Miss Granger,' he said and stopped uncertainly.
'Hermione, please,' she breathed, swaying a step closer and lifting her chin to look up into his face.
Her subtle movement appeared to be all the encouragement he needed: in an instant, she found herself crushed between his body and the table, returning his deep, heated kisses with fervent enthusiasm. His hands tangled in her hair and angled her head so that he could plunder her mouth more fully, then his fingers swept over her shoulders to slide the straps of her dress down her upper arms. She was breathless, her eyes closed, imagining Snape, then Teach, then Snape again, and powerfully aroused. She had felt this way in her dreams, yes, but now there was a living, physical body pressed against her, bending her backward over the table so that nothing seemed more natural than for her to lift one of her legs and twine it around his waist, and the sensations coursing through her frame were even more devastating and wonderful than usual.
One of Teach's hands was tracing her sternum now; the other grasped her thigh, lifted her knee higher on his hip, and slid beneath the hem of her dress. When his fingertips came in contact with her knickers, he groaned, and she answered him by plunging her tongue deeper into his mouth, unconsciously imitating the fantasy she was envisioning. She felt oddly free and light-headed; a sense of infinite possibility and capability overtook her, making her wonder if her current elation was at all similar to an overdose of Felix Felicis.
Teach hooked a finger around the waistband of her knickers at her hip. With another groan, he pulled his lips away from hers and fastened them onto her neck, just beneath her ear. 'Tell me,' he panted between breaths and kisses, 'about your breakthrough.'
Her head fell back, granting him access to the rest of her neck and chest. 'Souls,' she answered, bringing her hands up to push his jacket away from his shoulders, 'can affect the physical world.'
He bit the top of her shoulder gently, then flicked his tongue across her skin. 'How?'
'I don't know,' she breathed and turned her attention to the buttons of his shirt. 'It happens when the people around them...' she broke off to moan as he dragged her knickers down to the tops of her thighs '...are emotionally charged.' She was not at her most articulate, but then the fact that she could maintain a coherent thought while he was stroking her bare hip was accomplishment enough.
Teach kissed her lips again, driving his tongue between them, and pulled her forward. Off-balance, she lowered her leg. Her knickers fell to her knees, and she opened her legs slightly, allowing the garment to drop to the floor. Teach noticed; a second later, she was back on the table, her dress pulled up, both legs wrapped around his waist, while she tore his shirt from his body and scraped her fingernails over his chest. He ground his pelvis against the soft skin where her bare thighs met; the evidence of his arousal was hard against her flesh and shockingly hot, even through the fabric of his trousers.
He was bent over her now, kissing her still as she lay directly on the rough wood of the dining room table; she was ready for him, she knew, and she was just beginning to wonder when he was going to get on with it when a sound from the kitchen distracted her. Teach froze. 'What was that?' he whispered.
Hermione smiled. 'I think the pasta might have boiled over.'
He drew back, straightening her dress for her. 'We should check. Wouldn't want to catch your kitchen on fire, too.' He grinned.
She slid from the table, leaving her knickers discarded on the floor, and walked into the kitchen. The pasta had indeed boiled over; the sound she had heard was the hissing of the bubbling water as it fell onto the flame of the gas burner. Some of the water had splashed onto the floor, too; with a sigh, she lowered the flame on the burner and stepped away from the cooker to find a towel.
The instant she moved from in front of the hob, the pot of boiling pasta hove violently upward and flew across the room like a shot, straight at Teach, who had been standing near the back door. Incredibly, he managed to leap out of the way just in time; the saucepan crashed into the door, showering that side of the room with sprays of linguine. Before Hermione had a chance to react where was her wand? she thought desperately the cupboard doors burst open, a chain reaction exploding first along one wall and then the other. Plates and mugs, knives and forks flew into the air and crashed against the ceiling and walls. Another pot rocketed off the cooker, clattering into the kitchen table and spilling its contents. Bolognese sauce streamed across the floor like a river of blood.
Horrified, separated from Teach by the rain of cutlery and dishes, Hermione watched helplessly as he snatched his wand from his pocket and began to blast a path through the whirling utensils. Seconds later, although it seemed like hours, he reached her and grasped her arm painfully, pulling her behind him as he edged toward the door to the dining room. She preceded him gratefully into the next room, gasping and near tears, only to find that they had escaped almost literally from the frying pan into the fire.
Books soared from their shelves as if thrown by an invisible hand, pelting Hermione and Teach mercilessly as they dashed into the sitting room. Hermione tore at the lock on the front door, trying to ignore the hail of paper and the sound of her favourite possessions ricocheting around the room. Panic numbed her fingers; she almost sobbed aloud when she finally managed to undo the locks and fling the door open. They ran into the street, Teach slamming the door closed behind them.
The narrow street was silent in the chill October air. They stood in the road, panting, Hermione leaning against Teach's firm chest, until they caught their breath. Then he pushed her away and stared at her, his eyes running over her body. 'Are you all right?' he asked.
'Yes,' she answered shakily.
'Good. Then you can tell me what the hell that was!' he shouted, enraged.
'I don't know,' she whispered, shrinking away from him.
'Oh, yes, you do,' he countered and reached out to hold her in place. For a moment, she thought he was going to start shaking her, but he simply gripped her shoulders and waited for her to respond.
Sighing, she admitted, 'It was my ghost. I have a ghost. In the house.'
His astonishment was obvious; taken aback, he seemed to grope for words before asking at last, 'Is it Severus Snape?'
Despite her fear and the hectic rush of adrenaline through her veins, a curious calm suddenly fell on Hermione. 'No,' she lied, looking him directly in the eye. 'It's always been there. The neighbours told me about it. It's just a ghost.'
He seemed satisfied with her answer; releasing her arms, he dragged his fingers through his hair wearily. 'Is that the man I saw upstairs last time I was here?'
She shrugged. 'I don't know. I've never seen anyone. It just moves things around sometimes.'
Teach shook his head in amazement. 'Doesn't it scare you?'
'Of course,' she responded casually. 'But there's not much I can do about it. Most of the time, we live together quite peacefully.' She smiled, hoping her dishonesty wasn't showing in her face.
'Are you going to go back in there?'
'I suppose I ought to, really. That mess will need clearing up.' She wrapped her arms around her chest, barefoot and shivering now in the cold.
'I'll help you,' he offered, turning back toward the door.
'I appreciate that,' she said sincerely, placing her hand on his arm, 'but I don't think you should go back in. It's used to me; it won't mind if I'm there alone.'
He favoured her with a doubtful glance and noticed that she was hugging herself. 'All right,' he sighed. 'But if anything else happens, you know you can come stay with me.'
She nodded, then looked pointedly at his bare chest. 'Thank you. I'll bring your clothes out.'
A few minutes later, when Teach had Apparated away with his shirt and jacket, Hermione returned to the kitchen and sat down, exhausted, at the table. Blankly, she surveyed the remains of her dishes. She was aware that she had stepped in the Bolognese and now had mince beef and tomato clinging to her feet, but she did not, at this precise moment, care.
'I know you're here, Snape,' she said conversationally. 'You know everything that goes on in this house, don't you?' Unconcerned, she swirled her big toe in a puddle of sauce. 'Do you enjoy spying on me? Watching me in the shower, perhaps? Are you a jealous ghost?'
Slowly, Hermione got to her feet and went to the door of the basement. Uninterested in the red footprints she was leaving behind her, she descended the wooden stairs and switched on the small lamp, taking up her place from the night before on the indented cushion of the sofa. The bag with the marbles was still on the rug where she had dropped it. She picked it up and settled back, shaking the bag idly. 'I'm not going to go through the process of asking for you by name,' she stated calmly. 'I think my intentions are clear enough.'
The only sound in the basement was that of the marbles, rattling around in the sack. Finally, she asked, 'Was that your little fit of temper upstairs?' She reached into the bag and withdrew the green marble. 'Ah. I thought so.' She replaced the marble and shook the bag again.
'Oh, and tell me,' she added sarcastically, 'was that your version of a warning?'
Green again.
'Are you trying to warn me about Edward Teach?' she asked.
Green again.
Hermione nodded thoughtfully. Then, without warning, her arm drew back, and she threw the tiny green marble against the opposite wall with all of her might. It slammed into the drywall and bounced, rolling back toward her across the rug. When she picked it up again, she saw that it was cracked along one curve, a jagged slash that reminded her of the one in the Resurrection Stone.
She situated herself more comfortably on the sofa and rested her head against the cushions. She had passed beyond angry and was now drifting in the sweet calm on the other side of her fury. She was determined to discuss this incident with Snape face-to-face; he would learn that he could not manipulate her like that again. Wearily, she closed her eyes and waited for sleep to come.
But Hermione did not dream that night.
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What a story. I am blazing through it, shamefully jumped over the Aristotle soul quotes to read about Severus, but will catch my breath now, re-read calmly, and remember to watch details, not just plot. Gods. obssessive Love.
I always did want a reason to read Avicenna, being interested in herbs, gardens and the Moorish-Spanish times in European History, Al- Andalus. a time of true scientific curiosity and partial tolerance.
Our times could learn something from those inquiring minds. Why do labels have to strip people from feeling tolerance with each other ? well, It is wonderfully written , and am truly delighted you have not stopped writing it.
Wow, this story is so intense. Usually I dislike stories that have anything to do with spirits or the afterlife or the soul. This story put the aforementioned in an entirely different perspective for me. I truly hope that this story gets finished sometime.
So glad you've come back to this story. This is a great updates. I'll keep my eyes on the lookout for more.
Oh man, I got so excited when this popped up on my alerts. You did not disappoint.
Very interesting story! Thanks for the update!
An update after all this time was such a welcome sight! It's such a good story!
Events in this chapter are really ominous though. Bet it's that Edward Teach--he's always given me the creeps.
Catching up with this story--so compelling, I'm not reviewing much. I really like the continued closeness of Harry and Ron and Hermione. A lot of stories have them drifting apart right away, and that doesn't seem all that likely to me, given what they've shared. Snape's manifestation and the small boy and the brown man all have me a bit puzzled, but I'm sure they and their roles will become clearer with time. I'm also a bit shocked by the rule-abiding Hermione's willingness to push ethical boundaries here. But what really gave me pause in this chapter was the furnace. If it was in the hidden basement, how did she think the house was heated? How would she fill it with fuel?
I am also very glad to see this story. It is very original and just keeps getting more interesting. I jumped on the update as soon as it hit but shamefully didn't review right away for which I apologize. Love the story. Best wishes, Kat
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
PS: I love the song titles for chapters. You even hit one of my desert island discs in there.
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
PS: I love the song titles for chapters. You even hit one of my desert island discs in there.
Lovely to see this! It's been one of the fics on my wistful list--unfinished fics so good I can't help but reread from time to time and check to see if there is anything new. And Lo! (please forgive the Tolkien moment) here is chapter 17 with more to come. Rubs hands gleefully and jumps right back in.
Oh my God, you're finally back! I had already given up hope on the story being continued, and I'm really happy to be proved wrong! Wonderful chapter and great story, keep up the good work! Cheers and welcome back ;D Luiza
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
OMG, I only posted the new chap about 2 seconds ago! Thank you so much for coming back to read some more, you rock. :-D
Response from Moon999 (Reviewer)
uhsahsuhsuhs Oh, I guess I was just excited ;D Are updates going to be more regular now or is real life getting on the way? If you need any help or a beta or anything you can ask me (even though I'm not a native ;P).Luiza
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
OMG, I only posted the new chap about 2 seconds ago! Thank you so much for coming back to read some more, you rock. :-D
Response from Moon999 (Reviewer)
uhsahsuhsuhs Oh, I guess I was just excited ;D Are updates going to be more regular now or is real life getting on the way? If you need any help or a beta or anything you can ask me (even though I'm not a native ;P).Luiza
I come back to this so many times and I'm always incredibly disappointed that it's abandoned. Is there any chance at all of you letting someone beta the finished copy?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
It's back, there's a new chapter up! Come read, I promise not to suck and abandon it again. :-)
The situation with Cheat was never resolved. I don't trust him to keep this information to himself, and Hermione seems to feel no compunction to do the right thing and let Kingsley know that they had a falling out and he has left angery and in possession of this knowledge. She needn't tell Kingsley exactly what their falling out had to do with. She could even say he was afraid that she had been tempted to keep Snape in his body permanently. Kingsley wouldn't automatically assume sex to be the only good reason to bring back Severus Snape. From his point of view there could have been many other motives. Snape is a hero, an Order Memeber and a friend. He would understand the temptation but would also trust Hermione would never actually do such a thing.Hermione and Kingsley stupidly had never really investigated Cheat's personal integrity when they allowed him to sponser this project and know everything it entailed. That seems odd considering what they had just endured from Voldemort. How did they know Cheat didn't desire eternal live himself? Have only the short sighted people survived the war? Cheat's open ending, I suppose, is in keeping with the genre. There have been many horror movies that have left an open ending, adding to the present fear the knowiedge these horrible things could be rediscovered, and all Hell could break loose again. Also, most horror movies need individuals making stupid and short sighted choices to create the perfect storm for dangerous outcomes. Everyone in the audience is yelling "Don't go down there!" or "How stupid could you be!" Well done!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thanks for the 'well done' but the story isn't finished! I've just put a new chapter up—come back and read it, please. :-)
Hermione, Hermione, Hermione...Now what's going to happen to you. I'm sure Cheat won't be finanancing your research any longer. Why didn't you destroy the everything as he asked, after Cheat was back? Will you do it now? I doubt it. How do you know he hasn't gone right back to your house and stolen it to be used for nefarious purposes? You are the lamest Hermione I've known. You should be sharp as a tack and figuring out this stuff before it happens. Are you just so traumatized by the war that you've lost your edge?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Lamest Hermione ever? :-)
This feels wrong. Totally wrong. It isn't like Hermione to be so foolhearty. That's why she wanted Harry to destroy the Prince's book. Her Gryffindore impulsivity must be ruling her. I don't like this. I hope I'm wrong and nothing bad happens to Severus. It might be good if Cheat never gets back into a body, I think. Now, how to remove him from the earth relm? Command him into the veil, I think. She never really checked out why he was so facinated with Serius' death. He's too good to be true. Too rich, too generous, too seemingly benign and too handsome. I think Cheat wants Hermione to make him a horcrux. Who is he going to kill to get himself torn to make a piece for the horcrux? This is Dark Magic. This is the stuff of Voldemort. Snape did it, but I sincerely doubt he enlisted a dead soul to go into his body. That isn't at all like him. I know HE isn't this foolhearty. And it sounds like Hermione has been shagging Cheat. But it doesn't sound like she's in love with him. It doesn't seem like Hermione to be this easy to influence. I'm missing something. How could she continue shagging Cheat in Severus' house? Doesn't Hermione see that she has fallen for the same ethical lies that allowed Snape to take The Mark, to his ever lasting despair? I truely hope this is what Severus wants Hermione to do so that he can speak to her. I hope she remembers she loves him. She is out of control right now. (or under control) Too bad Harry doesn't know what she's up to. I think he would try to stop her. He wouldn't exploit Severus Snape this way, and I don't think that when it came down to it, he would ever want Hermione to try to actually make a Horcrux and that is where this is headed, I am pretty sure. I don't think this is what Kingsley had in mind when he allowed her to do this either.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Hermione is too wrapped up in discovering new magic to be cautious. And yes, I think Harry would stop her too, which is why she's not telling him what she's doing. I started writing this story originally because I thought Horcruxes seemed like only half an idea—something maybe JK didn't think through too deeply—and I wanted to explore the implications of being able to do something like fiddle with one's soul.
Are you going to finish writing this story...Just curious on how it's going to end.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thanks for your message! Yes, I'm going to finish it—now, in fact. It's been a long hiatus, but I'm finally back in the writing groove. :-)
This is such an amazing story--so engrossing and original!I sincerely hope that you have not abandoned it, although I note the last update is more than a year ago...Please let us know your intentions. Thanks.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
That long ago? Good grief, it doesn't feel like it's been that long! Thank you for leaving such a nice review. I promise the story is not abandoned, just on hiatus while I sort my life out. It is actually finished, but unedited, unbeta'd, and I'm still not entirely happy with the ending. I promise, though, that it will not die a quiet death! :-)
I was devastated when I realized there were no more chapters. I'm anxious for another one and can not wait until you have one out :)
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
I'm so sorry, my darling! There has been a long delay in updating because of RL, but the next chapter is in the works. I'm so glad you have enjoyed the story thus far. Thanks for the review! :-)
Wow, this is an intriguing story. So odd and different from any other I've read--it just hooks the reader right in and doesn't let go! I can't wait to read more! Do update soon.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. My apologies for the long delay between updates - RL has been a trial of late. The next chapter is in the works, and I hope to have it finished soon. :-)
I've just get irremediably hooked on your story.I truly hope it isn't abandoned. It's wonderful!Keep writting, please!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
It's not abandoned, just coming along slowly due to the end of the school year barrelling down! Thank you so much for the review - I will update soon!
I wonder if Draco wants a permanent break? Will Severus stay in his body permanently?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Well, that remains to be seen. Thank you for the review; sorry there has been so much delay in posting more chapters! RL takes its toll...
smile - where in the world will it go next - thanks for the grand work!!!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you, darling! What a lovely review. I hope to have more posted very soon. :-)
Oh wow... awesome story and brilliantly written! Can't wait for more!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! I received your email as well - I'm so glad you enjoy the story and want to read more. And I will have more, I promise, and hopefully soon! :-)
NO! I can't bloddy believe it!so that was why Draco was so excited by hearing about the existence and effectiveness of Snapes potion!!I would never have guessed.he wants to be dead. crazy. his body would move around but not with his soul.hm. what he had experienced the first time his soul was distracted from his body must have been something wonderful. But it didn't show on his face. other from the experiences we see on dead peoples face, where the observants often described peace, beauty, calmness, anything. but not what Hermione had seen.that is interesting.Does that have to do with him not being "really" dead by dying natural death?I mean, he can return any time.And what about Teach. He still is a ticking bomb.When and to whom will he tell or sell his story.And is Snape right. The potion as a weapon for a corrupt, terrorising tyranning governement?to really bring back ghosts of the past?to use their knowledge etc. sort of secret weapon.but Hermione is right. the asked soul can refuse cooperation, but on the other hand, a much crueler soul can creep into the body. waah.well, for the moment it is Snape. So there are 3 happy people. I guess.And Draco really had the decency not to return during love making. He is a gentleman after all *gg*They had to wait for their moment for so long.And I think Snape can be content. This time it is at least the body of a young Slytherin, and not a totaly unknown american wizzard.must be hard work for Hermioe to make believe it is not Draco standing in front of her. but on the other hand, it seems to be quite easy. but for how long???
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
at this rate the potion will be used up very quickly, I wonder?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
I love your reviews with a warm, fuzzy, loving love. :-D You always pick out the interesting things! And your commentary is so inspired. As to the potion - they are only using three drops at a time (rather like Veritaserum), so it'll be a while before they run out. To date, only 9 drops have been used...Thank you so much for the review!!! :-D
Thank you for the update! Another great chapter. Thank you for writing!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Lovely! Thank you so much for reviewing! :-)
wow! what now? besides another cup of tea! great update. thanks so much
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! 'What now' coming up soon, I hope... :-)