There are numerous errors in this chapter. Too many to list.

It's massaged, not messaged.

When Draco is speaking of his father, Father should be capitalized. Annunciate should be enunciate.

It's everybody, not every body, sight, not site, gall, not gull.

omg you gave her a Dark Mark?!?!  whooooooaaaa.  p.s. i really like this story!  i'm in a vampSnape mood.  there are so few of them!  alas.

That is soo sad and beautiful but duh! Id become a Strigoii with him and spend a millenia or two with a twenty something body!

That was the most beautiful and sad story; I'm sohappy he decidedto come back for her, and that HE was the one tokill moldie-mort. He never gets off this easy in hardly any stories. This is excellent and one of my top 5 faves. 160 years is enough and it was sweet he charmed himself to age for her. You should definately do more 'Vampire Chronicles'! Bravo!

That was the most beautiful and sad story; I'm sohappy he decidedto come back for her, and that HE was the one tokill moldie-mort. He never gets off this easy in hardly any stories. This is excellent and one of my top 5 faves. 160 years is enough and it was sweet he charmed himself to age for her. You should definately do more 'Vampire Chronicles'! Bravo!

That was the most beautiful and sad story; I'm sohappy he decidedto come back for her, and that HE was the one tokill moldie-mort. He never gets off this easy in hardly any stories. This is excellent and one of my top 5 faves. 160 years is enough and it was sweet he charmed himself to age for her. You should definately do more 'Vampire Chronicles'! Bravo!

Corazon,  I love this story!  Absolutely adore it.  I'm so glad I hit 'random story' and had it pop upThe only thing:  in chapter 23 Hermione says something to Bella to the affect of 'why do you think you were in a Muggle cemetary on the night of his return?'Bella was still in Azkaban the night Voldemort returned to power and wasn't released until early in Book 5.  That's it, something minor.  I only recognized it because I had to check it out for one of my stories.Love it!  Can't wait to read more of your work,

I love this story more and more.

Wow.  This was unlike any other story I have ever read.  I've never read a story so beautifully written and touch on so many emotions.  I wish I had your flair for writing so I could truly give your story the proper review it deserves.

Wow,absolutely amazing story!!

That was very intense. Very erotic, with some very delectable tension buliding up now!

Truly a dark fic. It doesn't sound like it will end in roses and puppies, yet it's written well and I find myself looking forward to reading more.

Whoa! I can't believe she was bit! This is really, really, dramatic!

Now things are really getting tense! And amorous what with the primitive way Severus seems to have 'claimed' Hermione as his. That's quite hot for some reason.

just thought i would let you know i thought this story excellent, and im so very sorry for the loss of your friend

just thought i would let you know i thought this story excellent, and im so very sorry for the loss of your friend

Wow, that was intense. I have always backed away slowly from potter fics that involve vampires - mainly because they try to be buffy and fail horribly. But this was special. You managed to condense a strong plot, that could have babbled on for so much longer, into something both entertaining and to the point. Go team you. Next stop for me is checking out your other stories. Keep up the great work.

wow o_0 great job...they will be toguether forever and...gosh I´m such a crybaby T.T

No doubt Jonathan will be very very proud of how you managed to finish this story.. It had me intranced from the very beginning and held my attention throughout.

Thank you so very much for bringing this story to life and continuing it even with the lose of your close friend.

Cheers, Sonia

I had been reading this on another site and had been enjoying it. I'm so glad you are posting here as well.

What a wonderful ending, even though it was a bit sad. But they will be together.

Great story... the ending was sad, but very sweet

Thank you so much for sharing this story.  The writing was excellent and it captured me from the first to very last chapter.  It was my first "vampire Snape" story and I feel lucky to have stumbled upon it.  Thanks again!