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Chapter 15 of 25
CorazonProfessor Severus Snape is a man of few words who is serving two masters along with having many mysteries – one that is about to be solved by none other than Hermione Granger. A story of lust, love, need, desire along with darkness.
ReviewedForbidden Obsession
Decimoquinto
By the time the Order had arrived, it was too late to save those who had been slain. Those Death Eaters still alive fled, victorious. The Ministry had taken a big hit, with a majority of the Wizengamot seriously injured or dead. Among the dead were Griselda Marchbanks, Amelia Bones, and Albus Dumbledore.
It would be only a matter of time before word spread, inhibiting the motivation to fight against Lord Voldemort.
The Death Eaters now gathered, waiting for their master to speak. Their circle, which had been complete prior to the battle, now contained several open spaces.
Voldemort stood before his followers, noting the empty gaps. "My children," he softly spoke. "On this night we are victorious. In the morning, the world shall have no doubt that Lord Voldemort is the new power." The Death Eaters cheered.
The Dark Lord turned toward the empty space in the circle belonging to Severus Snape. The rest of the Death Eaters only noted the empty space but remained silent.
"For years Severus has remained my faithful servant. Tonight we witnessed a true act of loyalty." He glanced at Lucius and Bellatrix for a moment. "The confrontation between Dumbledore and Severus during our battle with the Ministry will be one to speak about for generations. The Old Fool always believed good would dominate evil. On this night, he witnessed firsthand just how wrong he was." The Death Eaters chanted. "Severus, step forward, my son."
Severus Snape stepped out from the shadows, slightly limping from his injury, but standing tall and proud. The Death Eaters stepped back, allowing him through. Taking his place next to Voldemort, Severus stood still, his expression smug and arrogant. Clearly the loss of Dumbledore had no effect on him.
"Severus, you are my highest ranking servant." The Dark Lord turned to his servants and commanded, "Bow to your liege Severus!" Quickly they dropped to one knee, murmuring, "Severus," and took it in turns to kiss his hems.
Lucius and Bellatrix obediently paid their respects to Severus. Knowing he now held a higher rank infuriated them. Each already held a prominent position with their Master, and neither had been outranked until now.
"Celebrate, my children." With a wave of the Dark Lord's hand, several dozen willing women appeared. In the light of the full moon, the Death Eaters indulged in women and drink, celebrating late into the night.
Voldemort walked around, proud of his servants, but noticed Severus was not joining in on the celebration.
"Severus," hissed Voldemort, "Do you not join in because you have openly defied Dumbledore?" Severus quickly bowed and stood before his Master.
"No, my Lord. It was only a matter of time before Albus saw who my true Master is."
"Then I do not understand, Severus. Having destroyed Albus you now hold the highest rank among my Death Eaters, yet you do not celebrate our victory."
"Forgive me, my Lord." Severus quickly bowed again and left to join the festivities. Voldemort watched him leave, suspicious of his explanation.
"Master, may I have a word with you?" spoke the smooth voice belonging to Lucius. Voldemort turned to him, eyeing him suspiciously, along with Bellatrix who was standing by his side.
"Speak quickly, Lucius." It was evident he was losing patience with Lucius.
"My Lord, I have information that you will find of interest." The Dark Lord drew his wand, sneering at his servant.
"And I assume this information will be worth the risk of you earning a punishment..." He eyed Bellatrix, "...for both of you?"
"Yes, my Lord," Lucius bowed quickly and then stood. "It seems that Remus Lupin is alive and well. He was just spotted roaming the woods not far from here, in werewolf form."
Voldemort's hands grasped his wand so tight that it snapped in two.
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Hermione sat on the windowsill, watching the movement of every branch, every leaf, every flicker of shadow waiting for him. Her hair was tangled and knotted but pulled back with a tattered piece of ribbon. Her clothes were stained and wrinkled, giving off a stale odor from being worn for several days.
"How is she?" asked Professor McGonagall, watching Hermione's head turn momentarily in her direction only to show disappointment that it was not him.
"She won't eat. She won't sleep. She won't even allow me to clean her. All she does sit by the window and stare, waiting. I have administered a sleeping potion but it has no effect. The spells I try to cast have no effect either," said Madam Pomfrey.
"How soon before this ends, Poppy? She can't go on much longer," asked Minerva with a quiet, wavering voice.
"I am unsure, but from what I understand the transformation should begin reversing soon, just as long as we keep Severus away."
"How could he have done this to her?" Minerva whispered harshly. "She is only a child."
"Minerva," said Poppy gently, "I explained to you that Severus had no choice in the matter. He saved her from a life of lycanthropy..."
"Forcing her to be his life mate?" snapped Minerva. "I'm not a fool, Poppy. I know it takes more than one feeding to do this." Hermione's head turned toward the women again, eyeing them suspiciously. She stood up from the windowsill, approached them, and glared at her Head of House.
"He is not forcing me," she whispered. "I want to be with him but..." Hermione turned back around and silently took her place by the window. Her every attempt to be with Severus failed, and she could only assume he didn't want her. "He will come for me," she said softly. "Please come for me, Severus."
"I don't know how much more I can take, Poppy. What are we going to do?" Minerva placed a hand over her mouth, muffling her sobs as the tears fell from her eyes. Poppy consoled her friend. Silently they sat together, watching Hermione, the most promising witch of her age, deteriorating before their very eyes. They had yet to be informed of the demise of Albus Dumbledore.
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"Severus, walk with me," said Voldemort. The celebration had ended hours ago, yet Severus still remained.
"Yes, my Lord." Severus took his place next to the Dark Lord, walking into the woods. The tiredness in his eyes indicated he had not fed.
The moon was full, but the thickness of the branches blocked the light, allowing the darkness to dominate. Yet Voldemort did not draw his wand to light their way. He either had the keen ability to see in the dark or sense the direction he was going. Severus was not sure which.
"Nearly twenty years of service and this is the first time you have refused my offer to feed, Severus."
"Forgive me, Master, you generosity has not gone unnoted, but the women you provided tonight cannot suffice my needs."
Voldemort closely watched Severus' expression, understanding his meaning.
"Then who will fulfill your needs, Severus?"
Without hesitation, Severus spoke her name. "Hermione Granger."
The Dark Lord allowed a slight smirk to cross his expression. Her name did not surprise him, for she was known to be an exceptional witch. Understanding what Severus was and his need for this Mudblood, he was aware she was the key to Severus' survival. It was the playing card he needed.
Voldemort looked at his two Death Eaters who were waiting in the shadows. Nodding at them, they approached. Severus' eyes followed the movement in the shadows and saw Lucius and Bellatrix approaching him with smug looks and wands drawn.
"Remus Lupin is alive..." whispered Voldemort. Severus' stomach clenched at these words and then he heard, "CRUCIO!"
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Severus was lying on the ground with his hands bound above his head and his legs bound at the ankles. His clothing was torn and ripped where various curses had hit him. His breathing was shallow and staggered. His hair was soaked and matted against his head from both blood and sweat. The pain coursing through his body was like none he had ever endured. It took all of his energy just to take a breath.
"Tell me!" shrieked Bellatrix, "Tell me now!"
"I...I don't know," whispered Severus, forcing out the words. He felt a sharp pain on his side along with another crack. He then heard a moan, realizing it was coming from himself. Again Lucius had kicked him, breaking at least one rib.
Kneeling down next to him, Lucius leaned in close to Severus' face. The few stray locks fell from Lucius' ponytail, sticking to Severus' sweaty skin. And for a moment the white on black hair reflected the irony of the situation.
"Severus, my friend, tell us the wards and this shall end," whispered Lucius. Lucius placed a hand directly on Severus' broken ribs and applied pressure. Severus flinched and another pain-filled moan escaped, but Severus did not speak.
"Enough," hissed Voldemort. Leaning over Severus he looked at his fallen Death Eater. "Perhaps you are telling us the truth, but it will not stop us."
Severus looked into his Master's eyes and saw the gleam of satisfaction. He realized Voldemort knew all along he did not have the wards to Hogwarts and that this was just a way to enjoy Severus' punishment for lying about Lupin. Severus also suspected there was a reason to have Lucius and Bellatrix present but he was in no condition to solve that mystery.
The Dark Lord stood up and snapped, "It is time. Bring him." He Apparated into the night.
~TBC
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There are numerous errors in this chapter. Too many to list.
It's massaged, not messaged.
When Draco is speaking of his father, Father should be capitalized. Annunciate should be enunciate.
It's everybody, not every body, sight, not site, gall, not gull.
omg you gave her a Dark Mark?!?! whooooooaaaa. p.s. i really like this story! i'm in a vampSnape mood. there are so few of them! alas.
That is soo sad and beautiful but duh! Id become a Strigoii with him and spend a millenia or two with a twenty something body!
That was the most beautiful and sad story; I'm sohappy he decidedto come back for her, and that HE was the one tokill moldie-mort. He never gets off this easy in hardly any stories. This is excellent and one of my top 5 faves. 160 years is enough and it was sweet he charmed himself to age for her. You should definately do more 'Vampire Chronicles'! Bravo!
That was the most beautiful and sad story; I'm sohappy he decidedto come back for her, and that HE was the one tokill moldie-mort. He never gets off this easy in hardly any stories. This is excellent and one of my top 5 faves. 160 years is enough and it was sweet he charmed himself to age for her. You should definately do more 'Vampire Chronicles'! Bravo!
That was the most beautiful and sad story; I'm sohappy he decidedto come back for her, and that HE was the one tokill moldie-mort. He never gets off this easy in hardly any stories. This is excellent and one of my top 5 faves. 160 years is enough and it was sweet he charmed himself to age for her. You should definately do more 'Vampire Chronicles'! Bravo!
Corazon, I love this story! Absolutely adore it. I'm so glad I hit 'random story' and had it pop upThe only thing: in chapter 23 Hermione says something to Bella to the affect of 'why do you think you were in a Muggle cemetary on the night of his return?'Bella was still in Azkaban the night Voldemort returned to power and wasn't released until early in Book 5. That's it, something minor. I only recognized it because I had to check it out for one of my stories.Love it! Can't wait to read more of your work,
Response from Corazon (Author of Forbidden Obsession)
Response from Corazon (Author of Forbidden Obsession)
Good catch! It makes complete sense that Bella was not there. I am glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it!Hugs,Corazon
I love this story more and more.
Response from Corazon (Author of Forbidden Obsession)
Hi Sweetheart!Thank you! I just wish I had the time to write because I love doing it!*mwah*Corazon
Wow. This was unlike any other story I have ever read. I've never read a story so beautifully written and touch on so many emotions. I wish I had your flair for writing so I could truly give your story the proper review it deserves.
Response from Corazon (Author of Forbidden Obsession)
Thank you so much for your review. Don't worry about the lack of flair because you chose the perfect words for me to know just how much you enjoyed it.Happy Reading!Hugs,Corazon
Wow,absolutely amazing story!!
That was very intense. Very erotic, with some very delectable tension buliding up now!
Truly a dark fic. It doesn't sound like it will end in roses and puppies, yet it's written well and I find myself looking forward to reading more.
Whoa! I can't believe she was bit! This is really, really, dramatic!
Now things are really getting tense! And amorous what with the primitive way Severus seems to have 'claimed' Hermione as his. That's quite hot for some reason.
just thought i would let you know i thought this story excellent, and im so very sorry for the loss of your friend
just thought i would let you know i thought this story excellent, and im so very sorry for the loss of your friend
Wow, that was intense. I have always backed away slowly from potter fics that involve vampires - mainly because they try to be buffy and fail horribly. But this was special. You managed to condense a strong plot, that could have babbled on for so much longer, into something both entertaining and to the point. Go team you. Next stop for me is checking out your other stories. Keep up the great work.
Response from Corazon (Author of Forbidden Obsession)
Thank you! I am truly pleased that you see this story as more than just another vampire story.Many hugs,Corazon
wow o_0 great job...they will be toguether forever and...gosh I´m such a crybaby T.T
No doubt Jonathan will be very very proud of how you managed to finish this story.. It had me intranced from the very beginning and held my attention throughout.
Thank you so very much for bringing this story to life and continuing it even with the lose of your close friend.
Cheers, Sonia
I had been reading this on another site and had been enjoying it. I'm so glad you are posting here as well.
What a wonderful ending, even though it was a bit sad. But they will be together.
Great story... the ending was sad, but very sweet
Thank you so much for sharing this story. The writing was excellent and it captured me from the first to very last chapter. It was my first "vampire Snape" story and I feel lucky to have stumbled upon it. Thanks again!