Hey! Your Imperio worked! I got such a "floating in the cloud" mood that wentover to your lj to see if I could find any tid-bits of the next chapter in there. Good luck with the clowns! On second thought, I might send them to you if the next chapter is not posted very soon! I'm new at intimidation,does it show?

That was quite lovely.  

Oooh. Another great chapter! I really do enjoy this story so, so much!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad it's holding your interest.

"For myself" rather than "to myself". Severus is right; that one word makes all the difference. Brilliantly done!

Glad to see this posted on TPP.  I loved it when I read it on Ashwinder. 

I love the way you write - the pacing, the rhythm, the urgency. Looking forward to seeing more of the story unravel!

delightful.

Such wounded spirits coming together (no pun intended). Despite the location, the desperation, reassurance, and passion make the scene beautiful.

Imperio'd again...I love how you get in Severus' mind

intiguing...on to the next chapter.  I just love getting inside Severus' mind  I have been duely imperioed

Interesting...I like it.

I should have seen that threesome coming. somehow I was hoping it was going to be SS/HG/HP. I liked the part where Hermione winked at him. I felt it was significant. Thanks!

I cant tell if your Snape has a vivid imagination or if he is a little nuts? Who is the other party in the threesome? I dont get the french orange juice joke. Does this make me a dunderhead? I am off to the next chapter!

This is a very gripping story. I'm very interested to find out where it ends up! Also, the final section with Lily-Snape is an amazing dream sequence. I probably haven't read a more truly dream-like one in a very long time.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you're drawn in.

I'm trying to figure out what his dreams mean if anything.  Good chapter.

I liked your command to review, it made me laugh.  Promising start.

This is quite interesting. 

ah, I loved this over at Ashwinder and now I'm reading it again because it is just so amazing!

Ooh. This looks like it's going to be a great one! :-)

Author's Response: Awww, thanks.  I promise I'll try my best. 

I have this strange compunction to review...."This girl glows the same way, like a good plum, like she’s swallowed a full season of sunlight."  Beautifully written, that!  In fact, you've captured his inner monologue exquisitely.So you're promising a dreamy threesome, are you?  Well, let's have it, woman!  He should have some juicy memories to keep for himself, once having given that other stuff to Harry.  He'll need some good, *real* memories, once he's tried out the new potion she's suggesting he create.  And then he should have the strength to follow through on 'em!

I am intrigued.  Can't wait to read more.

This is lyrical and so beautiful.  I love the missing scene memories, and your characterization of Severus. 

Go on, go on . . .

Did I read this lurking on the sshg exchange?  I love it here too!

So sad in the end, but it was the right ending for this beautiful tale.