If only that idiot Rowling could write like this, Deathly Hallows might have meant something.Good work; you've got me crying.  It hurts, but it's a deep and meaningful story, and I salute you.

Wow. This was really incredible. I have to say that most fanfiction, entertaining and wonderful as it may be, never really pushes the limit of language and fiction writing, to write something interesting not just in plot but in the very languge. I'd almost come to expect that I would never find a fanfic that did any of that. Thank you for proving me wrong. Seriously, though, this was wonderful. The narritive was well thought out, the transitions between memory and thought made sense, you're one of the few people ever to write dreams the way I have them (the idea of watching and being a part of the same scene. why does no one else ever talk about that?) and the ending, while it might necessarily have been happy, was necessary. And so right. Gah. Really, this puts my faith back in the literary value of fanfiction. My creative writing professor would like this.....

-gulp-  That was so sad!  and yet so amazing.   Love your Severus' voice. 

A tiny little titbit of smut to tide us over. I think you just like teasing us, don't you? ;p

Argh... having the cure right there, so very close! *whimpers*

And why, in the name of all heaven, did he not think to make for her a little blue bottle for her own, of the Serum that would never have existed without her?I love your story, so sweet and yet so bittersweet, as it seems that we are heading inexorably for the "no after".  But still, this is a story very well told and I am loving it, even as it appears we are approaching the inescapable wall...

Wow. Just... wow.  

Best new additions to the HP-universe phraseology pantheon: "hex his bits to Snitches," and "dance with Blast-Ended Skrewts."

Intriguing. I like the idea of Harry fumbling with the phials and missing a few of these revealing memories. You have such a way with words, and weaving a spell (pun intended) around the interactions between Hermione and Snape. Her small little smile. And the bit about the sun-ripened plums was gorgeous.

Heck of a relationship going there.  Snape's memories are really something. 

 alittle short but still a good chapter but i am a little confused are theese srveus's memmories as he lays dieing or did i miss something

Kinky thing that I am I'll tell you I am enjoying all the almost public sex!! IMPERIO--I will write a longer chapter within one weeks time--

Well, that activity would take your mind off being scared.

The small comforts she seeks when she is distressed... will it lead to more?

Good chapter, I enjoyed the battle between Severus and his conscience.

The absolute best line of the chapter: “I wouldn’t want to tell, anyhow. I want to keep this for myself.”It makes my little romantic heart beat all the faster. I think it is interesting the way Severus wants to get caught so he will not have to murder Albus. If only.

Oh, this is wonderful.  Please let Potter get the message in time, let Hermione get to the treatment in time . . . .

wow very cool serveus is human but i bet he will be a prick once they leave the washroom

intresting start ill keep reading on thank you for another story for me to read

Hot and steamy in the bathroom. Good job!

Nice dream sequence!

Good start. I ofen wondered why no-one bothered raiding glaxo for a supply of anti-venom. I may be reading too much into the name, but cobra venom would be a good place to start (Nagini - naga) Of course, it's entirly possible JKR was just showing off her knowledge of Sanskrit but this is fan-fic, so anything goes! :D

A sad chapter and I wonder if you will save Severus or not.......

Thank you for another great chapter. 

Oh my, so well-written, like poetry. It was so poignant! I eagerly await your next chapter!Livvy