Unexpected Reunion
Chapter 3 of 12
Lady WhitehartSeverus and Callista are reunited at an Order meeting.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter. I don't own Severus Snape. No money is being made.
A/N: The revision continues. Many thanks to verity and sempra for making sure this is fit for posting.
Chapter 2: Unexpected Reunions
Severus stepped into the foyer of number twelve Grimmauld Place for the first time since Sirius Black's death. The only reason he came was for the simple fact that Dumbledore requested his presence. Normally, Snape would have been thrilled at the thought of going there and flinging into Black's face how he was risking his life for Sirius' precious brat of a godson while Black cleaned the house. Now that he was dead and gone, it hardly seemed important anymore. Dread filled him at the thought of giving up yet more of his nonexistent spare time to waste on Potter. Inwardly, Severus cringed at the thought of what foolish and pointless training he would be requested to give the arrogant little whelp this time, vowing to refuse no matter what the consequences. He opened the door to the library.
Inside, Dumbledore was speaking with a woman. Her back was to him, but he quickly guessed she must be the new Defense Against the Dark Arts mistress. He didn't even know her name, yet he despised her instantly. Their conversation ended when they heard the door close.
"Ah, Severus, how good of you to join us on such short notice," said the headmaster in greeting.
"You wished to speak to..." Severus stopped abruptly as the woman turned to face him, and he felt his heart skip a beat. No, this couldn't be happening. That person had disappeared and was assumed dead fifteen years ago. Here she was alive and well. She was a little heavier than he remembered and there were now light character lines on her face, but it could only be Callista Hawkins. Severus was seized by an impulse to sweep her into his arms and...
A twenty-three-year-old Professor Severus Snape waited outside the examination room while Callista finished giving her N.E.W.T. presentation. If it had been possible, he would have paced a groove in the stone floor. The door creaked open, and Callista walked out, her face expressionless, a by-product of the Occlumency lessons he had been giving her. Severus longed to learn every curve of the body that was hidden under those school robes.
"Well?" he asked with an anxious tone to his voice.
"Well, what?" Her voice sounded innocent and slightly puzzled.
"Fine," he said, realizing that she wasn't going to tell him unless he asked the question directly. "How did your presentation go?"
"Are you sure you want to know?" Her eyes were still clear as she met his gaze full on, revealing nothing. She was clearly enjoying herself.
"I suppose you became nervous, lost your head, and the examiners had to comfort you," he teased, raising an eyebrow.
She rolled her eyes. "Hardly."
They were standing so close to each other that he could virtually feel her heart beating. In a few days, she would finish school, and he would no longer be her professor. Pulling her into a secluded alcove, Severus reached out to place his hand on her waist. She looked up with shining, expectant eyes. He lowered his mouth to her ear, whispering, "You passed then?"
"You had doubts?" she asked in a matched whisper, her lips grazing his jaw.
Stop it! he ordered himself. She handed you over to the Aurors. You cannot trust her.
"I believe you remember Callista Hawkins," the old man said, a twinkle in his bright blue eyes.
Ignoring Callista completely, he asked "You needed to see me, Headmaster?"
"We will need to rearrange the Potions and Defense courses for this year."
The statement piqued his curiosity. "Why is that, sir?"
"Severus, I would like to offer you the opportunity to teach the Defense Against the Dark Arts and Potions courses for O.W.L. year and the N.E.W.T. levels," Dumbledore said, his penetrating blue gaze not wavering from the other man's face. "Professor Hawkins has more than enough qualifications to teach the beginning levels; however, after being away for so long, she does not feel comfortable enough to prepare students for their examinations."
It took the Potions professor a moment to digest the words. Did that mean starting today he would never need to watch another eleven-year-old girl cry when she failed to properly read instructions? Would he never have to mark another paper where more words were spelled incorrectly than correctly? If only this had happened five years ago, then Severus would have been spared dealing with that total incompetent, Neville Longbottom.
Snape took time to consider this option. All students who were somewhat intelligent, and an extra free period a week, as he would be teaching six classes instead of seven. Working with the Dark Arts, even if it was only teaching the defensive portion. He was sure that he would still be stuck with that insufferable know-it-all Granger, now four periods a week as opposed to two and more than likely still have to put up with Potter and Weasley. However, Snape seriously doubted that either of those two dunderheads managed to receive an outstanding in their Potions O.W.L. All in all, it might not be terrible.
"How will Miss Hawkins be able to teach eight classes?" Severus asked before snapping his mouth shut, wondering why he even pretended to care.
"Professor Hawkins will not be teaching the fourth year Defense Against the Dark Arts."
"Who will be teaching it? Lupin?"
Dumbledore cleared his throat. "Harry will be will be teaching the class under Professor Hawkins' supervision. The course will focus on practical defense."
"Potter?" Severus was dumbfounded. There had to be some sort of a mistake. "Headmaster, is this a joke? Surely that little boy..."
"Is 'uniquely qualified' to teach students how to defend themselves against Voldemort," the old man said testily, throwing Severus's words back at him.
"Utter rubbish!" he snapped.
Callista stood in front of him, clearly surprised by his outburst. "Severus, you should be very proud of Harry's accomplishment. You're a good teacher..."
"Severus," Dumbledore said gently, "there is something else we need to discuss. Harry's mark for Potions was an Exceeds Expectations, but he needs to take Potions to qualify for the Auror training program."
"So this is the catch," Severus said snidely. "Oh, yes, let's lower the standard for my class just for Potter's benefit."
"It's not just for Harry," Dumbledore snapped impatiently. "There are several other students who need will need to take N.E.W.T. level Potions for their future careers. Terrence Boot and Anthony Goldstein also wish to become Aurors. Parvati Patel, Ernie McMillian, Tracey Davidson, and Daphne Greengrass need a Potions N.E.W.T. in order to be accepted at St. Mungo's for the Healer trainee program. As you see, this will benefit other students, some of whom are Slytherins, as well as Harry." He fixed the younger man with a very stern gaze. "Think it over, Severus. I'll need your answer by the middle of the week."
Dumbledore left the two of them alone, and Severus turned on his heel to leave. Callista reached out to touch his arm, gently detaining him. He tensed at her closeness.
"I've missed you, Severus," she whispered. "I had no idea you were still at Hogwarts. I thought that perhaps you were dead by now. Being a spy carries risks, no matter whose side you're on. Professor Dumbledore told me everything, well, almost everything."
Setting his face, Severus turned to her, wincing at what he saw in her eyes now. The look made him want to forget the past, to put old hurts behind him. Suddenly, the memory of her betrayal flooded his mind, and his heart hardened. He glared down at her, his harsh features rigid. "Don't ever allow yourself to believe that Dumbledore has told you everything. Like the rest of us, you will only be given information he feels you need to know."
"I see," she said. "He told me you tried to teach Harry Occlumency without much success. To be honest, I was really surprised. You're a such a highly skilled Occlumens, and Harry is surprisingly talented."
"Potter is an arrogant, self-centered bastard like his father." He kept his tone even as he continued to stare coldly down at her.
"He's not like James or Sirius..."
"Don't you dare mention their names to me," Severus snarled, remembering the day he was suspended in the air and stripped of all dignity.
"Lily stood up for you, and he's her son as well!" Callista's eyes blazed with anger, and her jaw had set stubbornly. "You really have changed. Perhaps I should have stayed away."
"At last we agree," he said bitterly, hoping the words stung.
"Worm!" Callista snarled as she practically threw herself out the door, slamming it behind her. Outside in the hallway, the portrait of Mrs. Black began screeching in fury. Severus fell into the chair, remembering the first time he had seen her as an adult.
"Professor Blackburn, I trust you remember Severus Snape?" Dumbledore said as he took young Severus Snape around to the dungeons of Hogwarts. The young man was to begin teaching part-time in September. The classes were finishing up exams, and they were sitting in on the sixth-year Potions practical.
"Ah yes, my most excellent student. How are you, young man?" the withered old Potions master greeted him warmly.
"Fine, sir." Snape gazed around the dungeon. "Part of me feels like I am home again."
"I haven't had a student who could hold a candle to you. Well, that's not quite true; Callista Hawkins is equally brilliant. She is the dark-haired one over there. I'm staying on until she finishes school. She's doing a bit of an independent study with me next year in addition to her regular course work. She's hoping to be accepted at St. Mungo's after she sits her N.E.W.T.s. An amazing mind she has. I'm sure the Sorting Hat struggled with where to put her. She would have fit into Ravenclaw nicely. Callista, come here if you can leave your work, I want you to meet someone."
A young woman walked over to join them. Her chestnut brown hair was pulled back away from her face. Her eyes were beautiful, wide set, and a most pleasing shade of blue. She smiled at Severus, and his heart skipped a beat. He prayed that she wouldn't remember him from his days at Hogwarts.
"Miss Hawkins, this is Mr. Severus Snape. He was my best student until you brightened the dungeons. He will begin teaching here next year and take over when I retire next June," the ancient man said as he introduced them.
"It's a pleasure to meet you, Mr. Snape," she said, shaking his hand firmly.
"The pleasure is mine, Miss Hawkins." He tried to sound mature.
"How is the potion coming along?" Professor Blackburn asked, smiling.
"Quite well, sir," she began, excitedly. "I decided to crush the foxglove to be able to extract the essence more quickly. I should be able to lower the simmering time, which in turn should keep the bowtruckle blood from curdling." Her entire face positively glowed with fervor. It was the same look Severus knew had been on his face every time he'd found a new technique. He had to admit that it only enhanced her stunning beauty.
"Excellent!" The elderly man clapped his hands together in delight.
She smiled at them before excusing herself to return to her project. Snape watched the concentration on her face as the pale, blue vapor began to rise from her cauldron. Her hands ladled some of the liquid into a beaker to cool. There was no smugness, only passion for her work. She looked over at him again, fully aware that the young man had watched her every move. Dumbledore surveyed him over his glasses. Apparently, he had noticed Snape watching her.
He pressed his hands against his eyes. It had been so uncomplicated then. Callista had been an assignment, a means of advancing himself in the Dark Lord's eyes, and nothing more. The last thing he had ever expected was to feel for her.
Lupin walked into the room. He stood, leaning casually against the door frame, watching Severus. He looked a bit peaky. "Severus, just so you know, the meeting is about to start."
"Funny how you were sent to fetch me," he said waspishly.
Lupin stiffened at the term, a trace of the wolf lurking within reflected in his eyes. Instead he said in an overly-casual tone, "It's hard to believe Callista has been alive all this time. I'm surprised you're not more grateful to see her."
Yes, of course, Black probably would have conveyed what he had known to his faithful, furry companion. Severus rose gracefully to his feet. "I had a job to do, Lupin. I never thought about her after she left."
"You really expect anyone to believe that?" Lupin's hands were in the pockets of his well-worn robes.
"She made her choice to betray me, and I ceased to care for her existence."
"Now that is a lie," Lupin accused, crossing his arms over his chest.
"If you're finished, I believe there is an Order meeting about to commence." Severus side-stepped the other man as he exited the room.
"You're making a mistake, Severus," Lupin told him.
As he silently billowed down the hallway to the kitchen stairwell, Severus wished Lupin would keep his muzzle out of his affairs. He paused at the door to compose himself. The thought of facing Callista any time before the term started, or ever again for that matter, was not appealing at the moment.
Callista had taken a side trip to the bathroom to compose herself. Judging by Severus's reaction at seeing her, Dumbledore hadn't prepared him for the encounter. Good God, would it have been so difficult to warn Severus that she was still alive? Callista cringed, thinking about their horrible reunion. Not that she hadn't expected Severus to order Dumbledore out of the room so they could become reacquainted in private, but after all she had heard about his isolation following Voldemort's first fall, she thought maybe he would be a bit more forgiving.
If he's so cold and hateful towards everyone, Callista thought angrily, no wonder he's so despised. I refuse to waste another ounce of pity on him.
She looked at the assembled Order members in the kitchen of the old house. Earlier that evening, she had been introduced around by Professor McGonagall. Arthur Weasley had been delighted to make her acquaintance, plaguing her with questions about the Muggle world. Dear old Alastor Moody, who had known her father very well, was pleased to see her. Unfortunately, the eldest Weasley son, Emmeline Vance and Sturgis Podmore treated her with suspicion. She didn't exactly blame them, she was a stranger returned from the dead; their caution was reasonable.
"Excuse us, Callista. You haven't met Tonks yet," said Fred, or was it George, indicating a young woman with bubble-gum pink hair.
"Tonks?" Callista asked, shaking the woman's hand.
"Nymphadora Tonks," she said, smiling. "But everyone calls me just Tonks. I was Sirius's cousin."
Callista racked her brain trying to figure out the connection. Her family had been familiar with the Blacks, but she couldn't place how the name Tonks came into the picture. Thankfully it was explained to her. Callista remembered a photo she had seen at Sirius's flat shortly before her departure depicting a rather striking, young woman and a plain man playing with a bright-eyed girl whose hair changed color. They chatted for a bit until a dark figure descended the stairs.
"Well, if Snape's here, then it must be time to start," Tonks said, looking at Severus with a touch of contempt. "Don't envy you getting stuck at Hogwarts with him. Nasty bugger, but Dumbledore trusts him, so he must be all right. At least we hope he is."
Callista took a seat at the long wooden table between Remus Lupin and one of the Weasley twins. Reports were given, and Callista asked questions until Bill Weasley made a remark that shut her up for the duration of his statement. Arthur gave her an apologetic look that she returned with a fleeting smile. Kingsley Shacklebolt briefed the group on the goings on at the Ministry. Rufus Scrimgeour seemed to be taking a very proactive stance to protect both wizards and Muggles alike. Then Dumbledore nodded to Severus.
Callista turned her head slightly to focus on him. He was as thin and sallow as she remembered, yet Severus still gave off an aura of power that made her heart quicken. His voice was low and emotionless as he spoke of his most recent meeting with Voldemort.
"So he has plans to take over the Ministry?" Moody asked, his normal eye fixed on Severus's face. "But you didn't get to hear the details?"
"If I had been told, I would have passed the information to the Order immediately," replied Severus through clenched teeth.
Moody continued to watch him. "Sure you would have."
"Gentlemen," Dumbledore said with a stern glance at Moody before turning his attention to Kingsley Shacklebolt. "Perhaps the best way to prevent this action is increased vigilance of those protecting the Minister. Most likely he will have already considered the threat of assassination and will take the necessary steps for his own safety."
As they went on and on, thoroughly exploring the implications if the Ministry fell, Callista absent-mindedly turned her attention to Severus's hands.
"Try crushing it with the flat of the blade instead of chopping it," Severus instructed from behind her, as Callista labored over the shriveled pod.
"Crush it, sir?" Callista asked dubiously when her young Potion professor came for a routine workroom inspection.
He was behind her with his arms around her, not quite in what could have been considered an embrace. Slender, strong hands were over her suddenly limp ones. His sharp, masculine scent wasn't unpleasant, and she breathed deeper, her pulse racing. Her fingers, among other things, were suddenly wet, and Callista looked down at the bean in surprise.
Severus's voice was like a caress. "You're an excellent Potions student, Miss Hawkins, but there is much I can still teach you."
Callista yanked herself from the memory and turned her attention back to the meeting. Severus was watching her intently from his place at the table. She bit her lip, wondering if he knew what she had been thinking about just now.
"We pulled our Peruvian Darkness powder," one of the twins said, and his brother finished with, "And we'll give all Order members a special illuminator that we developed."
There was a bit more discussion before the meeting began to break up. Molly Weasley ambled about, offering food to everyone. The red-haired matron gave Callista a sharp calculating look after a private word with Bill. Callista turned her head toward the steps as Severus and Dumbledore exited the room.
Maybe the look wasn't intended for me, she thought, spearing a roasted potato on the platter in front of her.
The Weasley twin next to her grinned. "Mum's in her glory right now. She's used to cooking for a crowd. Hope you find everything to your liking."
Callista took a bite. "It's excellent."
"I'm George, just so you know which of us you're talking to," he said pleasantly. Lowering his voice to a stage whisper, he added, "I got the looks and the brains."
A giggle escaped her, and Callista took a quick sip of wine to cover it. George and his brother told her about their daring escape from Umbridge, which they assured her wasn't as romanticized as it sounded. Callista talked about her work for the university and offered to have some ingredients sent over for them to experiment with.
"Professor Hawkins." Dumbledore was next to her. "A brief word please."
"Excuse me, Gred and Forge," she said, getting to her feet.
She followed Dumbledore up the stairs. He led her to the library and closed the door behind her. His eyes twinkled at her and he said with a smile, "Severus has agreed to the arrangement of the classes. The post is yours if you still want it."
"I'll take it," Callista said without hesitation.
Later that evening, Severus Snape sat before a low burning fire at Spinner's End with an old book in his hand. With an almost loving expression on his face, he stroked the leather bound cover. Delving Into the Dark Arts was the first Dark book that he had received, at the tender age of thirteen. His uncle, aware that Severus, while deficient in aesthetics, instead possessed a keen intellect, had given it to him, saying to be sure of his loyalties. Not having many friends to encroach on his time, young Severus eagerly read the book and became enthralled by promises of power. It was small wonder that he knew more curses when he entered school than most of the seventh years. The only literature that he had ever been exposed to dealt with the Dark Arts. He wondered how it was that somehow he had managed to enter into Voldemort's inner circle while his uncle had not.
After a long time, his eyes wandered to the clock over the fireplace. It was after midnight, and he might as well turn in. After heading upstairs, he disrobed and pulled on his old gray nightshirt. He yawned and ran his fingers through his greasy hair before he settled under the blanket.
The night was so warm that he decided to take a walk along the edge of the lake. As he approached the shore, he noticed that someone else had taken up the same idea.
Callista Hawkins was sitting on a stump, the wind blowing through her long, brown hair. He took another step, breaking a twig. In less than a heartbeat, she drew her wand, pointing it in his direction.
"It's Professor Snape!" he shouted, holding up both hands.
"Oh, it is you, Professor." He noted the relief in her voice as she lowered her wand.
"If it had been an enemy, you would be dead by now! Why are you out of the castle at this time of night, Miss Hawkins?"
"I couldn't sleep. I came for a bit of fresh air." Her voice was apprehensive.
He stopped next to the stump she was occupying. How very Gryffindor of her to sneak out at night. He looked down into her blue eyes and said, "Ten points from Gryffindor and a detention for being out of bounds after hours. I expected better behavior from the head girl."
Anger and surprise shifted across her face, but she didn't dare answer him back. He was, after all, a teacher, even though he was only a few years her senior. Instead of arguing, she replied sweetly, "Would you care to escort me back to the castle, sir? You need to be sure that I get back safely. I don't think it would look good if the head girl was attacked right after her callous, young professor sent her back to the castle unguarded."
The corners of his mouth twitched against his will. Severus forced a stern look onto his face. How was he ever going to gain her respect if she was able to turn everything he said into a joke?
"Impertinent girl," he said in a sneer that didn't even remotely have the bite he had hoped. "How did you get out of the castle undetected?"
"I learned from the best," she said, lightly springing to her feet.
"Who?"
"James Potter and Sirius Black."
Severus woke with a start.
Another reason to hate her, he thought, lying back down; she had been friends with them.
Sleep was elusive that night, punctuated with dreams of taunts, gentle touches, and laughing blue eyes.
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18 Reviews | 6.61/10 Average
Loved that Callista and Severus are basically having the same dream.
Draco - I have to agree, what a prat. I loved the author's notes.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Seriously, that little pain in my butt held up the whole stupid chapter. I was going to use him for an important role in the story, but now he's a goner.
As always, that was wonderful. I laughed out loud when I read the Granger fantasy comment. You're not a fan of that pairing as I recall. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
LOL But I love SS/HG! There so much to giggle over.Thank you for enjoying the chapter. Hopefully the next one will go much easier.
LOL I rather expected her to be nicer to Harry, but he did not take well to her forthright tone at all. I hope the two will find a comfortable working relationship. I'll be interested in what she tells him of her past.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Personally I think Harry on some level wants to be coddled a bit. I mean, he recently found out he will either be murdered or be a murderer. It will take some time, but Callista and Harry will manage. As to your last question, I haven't decided yet how much he really needs to know. Any suggestions?
Oh that is so petty of Severus, so petty. Why in Merlin's name are they sharing a classroom anyway? Plot? Doesn't the castle have any other rooms? The place is HUGE! It's really annoying, really,
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Please don't be annoyed at me. *wibbles* Schools (even magical ones) probably wouldn't outfit anymore classrooms than they absolutely had to.
Ooooh, so she was friends with Barty Jr.! I'm really surprised that Winky told her so much. That seems rather out a cahracter, considering that Winky was still protecting Crouch's secrets in canon. And she just divulged everything. odd. I wounder how Dumbledore will spin it?
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Winky has known Callista and Callista's family for quite sometime and probably doesn't consider the girl of another pure-blood family to be a total outsider. Dumbledore being Dumbledore will give out as little information as possible. It may even generate more confusion than it aleviates.
I think this is a mistake for possibly a note left in from your beta? At the end of the 12th or 13th paragraph "House elf-ese isn't easy, but they do seem to choose the simplest way to say something and that combo of past and present tense bothers me."Best, Gryffkat
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Thanks for catching that. Did you like the story otherwise?
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
Yes, I realized after I clicked send that I should have said that I am enjoying it. I haven't had a chance yet to finish what was posted yet. I like that it is about Severus as much as the OFC. I will keep reading.
Well written and interesting... good start as the character seems well thought out... I am glad you chose to give her some history and did not start with Snape seeing her at Hogwarts... too often OC characters are not fleshed out before the story realy gets moving ... very well done
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
That was the problem with the original story. My biggest hope is that giving the OC's PoV will make things a little more interesting. Thank you for reviewing.
First off, wow. I hope this is going to be one of those long 60+ chapter stories, because 12 chapters simply won't be enough.I love this. I had forgotten how much I enjoy seeing glimpses of what Snape must have been like as a young teacher. And I really like that the nature of the relationship bothered him, even though they were so close in age. Will Snape be jealous that she will be working with Harry? Also, you mentioned some order members that were cool to her at the meeting. Are these people that knew her before she removed herself from the British wizarding world? Hope the questions don't bug you, it really is my form of affection for a story
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Questions rarely bug me, unless the person is asking me why I don't write SS/HG. *see Ho'Moaning* The first question I can't answer, but I think you'll be able to figure it out a little later in the story. The second one: most of the Order members know her in one way or another. The fact that she disappeared shortly before the Potters were killed raised a lot of questions about her loyalties. Her father, while definitely not a DE, did share some of Voldie's ideals about the status of Muggle-borns.Here's hoping I keep hearing from you! The original had over 30 chapters before I started the re-write.
Dumbledore wants her back awfully bad. Just out of curiosity, When did you start this story, in its original form? My guess is between books 5 and 6. Anyway, I love it.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
The original was started back in May of 2005 *cringes*. I'm glad you love.
I came to read this story "by accident", I like it and are looking forward to following it from now on. Looking forward eagerly for the next chapter
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Thank you. Sometimes accidents aren't always bad things. Hope to hear from you again soon.
I'm pleased to see that you are posting the revision here too. TPP needs more Snape OFC stories to balance out the overload of SS/HG. Some more stories with Snape and other canon females wouldn't come amiss either. I've read some really cute Snape/adult Luna stories lately and I enjoyed the 'iresistable force vs old immovable object' of the opposites attract that those stories project.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Since I write mainly to please myself and a small handful of people, I figured what the heck, might as well. OFC's have it rough in the fandom, but I think Severus would be much happier with someone his own age. Thanks for commenting!
I love your story. In the book it is McGonagal who is the wittnes ot the infamous kiss. But you have of cource an authors right to bend the story to your liking. Beeing a fan of Severus Snape I cannot help defending him.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Defend away. Snape needs someone in his corner too.Hope to hear from you again.
Oh the little battle of willand desires that these two go through. I actually enjoyed the scene in the Potions lab. with a little patience, she'll have more placenta come spring. I do hope that the little unicorn surrives.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
I want to bring said little unicorn up in the story again but that would require me to write more Hagrid. *cringe* There will be more trips to the Forbidden Forest come spring. Hopefully Severus and Callista will make them together. ;)Don't know about you, but I can't stand someone hovering over me while I try to work.
I also think I was reading the original before. I like this story very much and while I don't review much, I will be reading. I like that your OFC is not maudlin or saccharine. I enjoy that Severus is not OOC either. My husband in now mad at me because I have been reading this story and not attending to Saturday chores. I look forward to more.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
There will be some changes from the original, especially because in a few places I wrote myself into a corner. ONe of hte pros of fanfic: You can always change it. Sugar-coated OFCs and OOC Snapes are two of my greatest fanfic pet peeves. Here's hoping I keep from writing them. Back to those chores! The sooner you get them done; the soon you can read more fanfic. :)
I loved that she drifted off to sleep with her father singing. Very Sweet.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
She's definitely a 'daddy's girl'.
I love this story. In fact, I went on a quest to find the rest of the original. I only read a few chapters of the original version (the fact you had taken it down on all of those other sites made me feel a little guilty) but as good as that first one was, this version is incredible. I can't wait to read the rest. I did discover that you wrote the very first Snape fan fic (maybe the first fan fic) that I ever read. On my first visit to Occumency, I hit the random button and "A Single Strand" popped up on the screen. I was hooked. I was too shy to review then, so I'm glad for the chance to make amends now.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Thanks,
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
! I started writing this story 5 years ago and hopefully my writing has greatly improved. I'm glad you loved "A Single Strand" and I hope you went on to read and review Veirty's A Merciless Affection too. *hugs*
Are you sure Dumbledore didn't have a hand in everything getting screwed up for her? (Sorry, I'm not a huge fan of Dumbledore these days.) I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
DH kind of killed my love of Dumbledore as well. I respect his character for his academic achievement but the man really needed to just keep to the classroom. Keep reading and let me know what you think.
Yes, I am at least! Hi! Ok, I had to backtrack a bit to reaquaint, but I'm caught up and rearing to go... Callista is settling in. Good of her to NOT rise to Severus' ill-manners. "O" and I loved that Minerva gave her a true evaluation of Harry.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
As much as I love Snape's character (Why else would I write him?) he has only slightly more maturity than the seventh-years at times. While he's spent the majority of his life at school, Callista has moved on to the adult world.Some Snape fans hate Harry because "Harry was always so rude to Severus," but I'm not one of those people. I'm glad you sticking around, as it's really hard for a SS/OFC fic to carve a niche on a mostly SS/HG archive.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Hey, don't I know it! I still write an occasional Weasley twins story! or with minor canon characters! Teehehe
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
I love your stories. They're always fresh and interesting.