A Change in Plans
Chapter 9 of 12
Lady WhitehartDumbledore changes the course of Harry's extracurricular education.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Do I own HP? Nope. Am I making any money from posting this? Nope. Do I still enjoy writing fanfic? Yes.
A/N: Did you know this story is in the Top 25 Fics based on rating? Thanks to all of those reviewers who helped. As always, reviews are desired but not required.
Chapter 8: A Change in Plans
A few minutes before four o'clock, Severus was climbing the staircase to the headmaster's office when he heard the rise and fall of voices. Upon being admitted, he was mildly surprised to see Callista standing there, hanging her head contritely, face reddened with embarrassment. There had been only one other time he had seen her so chastised.
Callista stormed into the castle slightly ahead of the young Potions professor. She was furious that he had the gall to deduct points from Gryffindor. Since the beginning of the term two weeks ago, she had expressed how much she was beginning to like him, in spite of his grubby appearance and unpleasant demeanor. Miss Hawkins made it very clear that she admired his brilliant mind in the Potions lab and appreciated his helpfulness when she did research. Right now, however, she was fuming over the fact that he had just pulled rank on her. Severus could sense that she was working up the nerve to explode at him when they were met in the Entrance Hall by the headmaster.
"Professor Snape, Miss Hawkins, what is the meaning of this?" His eyes were devoid of their usual twinkle.
Callista opened her mouth to say her piece, but Severus cut her off. "Headmaster, I was patrolling the grounds when I found her down by the lake, sitting out in the open."
"Is this true, Miss Hawkins?" he asked; his strict gaze seemed to quell her temper.
"Yes, sir," she whispered, a perfect picture of contrition.
"What were you thinking, dear girl? You know it isn't safe for anyone to be out alone on the grounds. As Head Girl, I would think you'd have more sense."
"I couldn't sleep. I went out for a bit of fresh air," she explained quietly.
"How did you get out without Mr. Filch or Mrs. Norris noticing you?" the headmaster demanded.
"I waited until Mr. Filch passed and, well, I slipped Mrs. Norris a bit of chicken." She looked up at them through her lashes.
"You bribed his cat!" Snape was shocked. Yes, that was the kind of thing James Potter would have done.
She looked at him and lifted her chin in defiance, "I didn't bribe her; I fed her."
"Miss Hawkins, please go straight to your dormitory. I'll speak with you later," the headmaster said, with a tone of finality.
"Yes, sir," she said, lowering her head. Callista had only gone a few paces when she turned and asked in a sweetly innocent voice, "What about my detention, Professor Snape?"
Before Severus could answer her, Dumbledore replied, "That will be discussed when I speak with you later. You are dismissed, Miss Hawkins."
Once she was out of earshot, Severus asked, "Why did you override my authority, sir?"
"Severus, do you know who her father is? No? He is a ministry official heading a special group of Aurors in the capture of dark wizards. Even though I would, of course, vouch for you, I don't think it is wise for you to be seen alone with her, and that includes periods of detention. Things such as that could be misconstrued. She will serve her detention with either Professor Blackburn or Professor McGonagall." He surveyed the young man intently.
Indignant, Severus felt his face redden. "So what you're saying is I have no real authority over the students."
"Of course you have the same authority as any other teacher." Upon seeing the cynical look on the young face, Dumbledore explained, "I know it must be difficult for you, Severus. Many of the students are only a few years younger than you are; however, you are now a professor here and any social contact would be entirely inappropriate."
Social contact? Callista Hawkins was a student and an assignment, nothing more. He had no intentions of taking things any farther than absolutely necessary. Weaseling information out of the girl was one thing, Dumbledore could explain everythign away after the Dark Lord was defeated. But Severus knew taking advantage of her could land him at the business end of her father's wand, or worse, Bianca's.
Dumbledore was speaking to him. "Severus, I see you are right on time. As I mentioned in my note, there has been a slight change of plans. I have decided that you will no longer be teaching Occlumency to Harry." A slight smile tugged at Snape's lips. "Callista will instruct him from now on."
"Are you sure Miss Hawkins can manage the task?" he asked flatly, making it a point to sound as if she wasn't in the room.
Callista frowned angrily, no doubt ready with a stinging retort, but Dumbledore answered in his usual soothing tone. "I'm sure she is more than capable, after all Professor Hawkins learned from you. Don't look so shocked, Severus, I am well aware that you taught her when... it was necessary. While she is not as skilled as you are, I'm sure she will be able to manage."
Snape smirked. "Will I have anything to do with Potter outside of the classroom setting?"
"Yes," replied Dumbledore softly, "you will be teaching him some of the Dark spells that he is likely to encounter and instructing him on the best means of defending himself."
"I still don't see how this is a good idea at all," Callista said, fighting to keep her voice controlled. "From what you told me, Professor Snape failed to teach Harry Occlumency because he was incapable of controlling his temper with the boy. Yet you feel it would be better for him to be left alone with Harry, completely unsupervised, teaching him--"
Snape whirled on her. "I see you've been drawn into Potter's little fanclub. Perhaps in time you will see him for the insolent brat he is. As for teaching him the Dark Arts, there isn't anyone else."
"Callista, I'm sure that James and Lily would want Harry to be able to defend himself, no matter what," Dumbledore said reassuringly. "Severus, I am trusting you with his safety. Don't let us down."
With a curt nod, Severus swept from the room without waiting for Dumbledore to dismiss him.
As Severus stormed down the second floor hallway, he became aware that the ghost of Sir Nicholas was floating placidly behind him. He couldn't stand the Gryffindor specter, with his unwanted chatter and prying ways. Had Severus known a decent ghost-repelling spell, Sir Nicholas would have been on the receiving end of it.
"Dear me, Severus, where are you off to?"
"I have many important things to do, Sir Nicholas," he snarled without pausing.
"What could possibly be more important than what you have left behind?"
Snape continued on. "I don't know what you're talking about."
"Surely, you must be overjoyed to have the lovely Miss Hawkins back. She was more than just a student to you."
Severus stopped dead in his tracks. "What are you insinuating?"
"Nothing that isn't common knowledge among the ghosts. You didn't really think that the Bloody Baron was beyond a bit of gossip, now did you?" The ghost went on with a laugh. "Miss Hawkins was so very infatuated with the young, brilliant Professor Snape, and it was obvious that you were rather taken with her genius and beauty. We may be dead, Severus, but we still remember what love looks like!"
"That is all in the past. She detests me now, and I have long since gotten over my feelings for her. Now excuse me, I have a lot of work to do." Snape started toward the staircase, lost in thought.
A small knot of seventh year students were in the courtyard discussing their future plans. Severus, who was stuck doing yard duty, a very unpleasant part of his teaching responsibilities, listened to them.
"I'm hoping that I'll get high enough marks to get into the Auror training program," said Allen Buxley, the Quidditch captain for Gryffindor. "If not, I hope to get an offer from Pride of Port tree."
"I sent my application to Gringott's last week. I can start by working over the breaks just to see if I like it." Dana Lions turned to Callista with a smile. "I suppose you'll get in the Auror program. That's what your father's hoping for anyway. Isn't he, Callista?"
"What he wants and what I want are two different things. I prefer Healing to Dark Wizard hunting." Callista shook her head.
" of Dark Wizards," Cera said, casting a glance at the young Potions master. "' reputation isn' exactly fine and upstanding."
"A Death Eater suspect, I'm sure." Buxley's handsome face darkened. He put his hand on the small of Callista's back.
"I suppose so," admitted Callista reluctantly, " is forever asking me questions about him. What does he do? Is he teaching us any Dark potions? I'm tired of trying to explain to him that Professor Blackburn still teaches our class, and Professor Snape is rarely there. All I've ever seen him do is mark papers for the lower years."
Dana shrugged. "But he was in Slytherin. My brother remembers him; up to his eyeballs in the Dark Arts, Snape was."
"Just because he was in Slytherin doesn't mean he has the Dark Mark," argued Callista. "Besides, Uncle wouldn't have offered him a post if he wasn't sure about his loyalties."
"Well, I think he's horrid, sneaking about the castle grounds, giving the Head Girl a detention and constantly looking like he just got out of bed. He should at least take the time to properly groom himself," Dana's roommate Cera commented.
"So that's who gave you the detention!" Allen growled, pulling Callista to him. "You should be more careful, Callista. It probably wouldn't be safe to be alone with him. Mum works at St. Mungo's; she's seen what Death Eaters can do to women."
"He wouldn't hurt me. I've spoken with him while I worked with Professor Blackburn. Professor Snape was ever so polite, and he helped me research a few of the more difficult assignments. I rather enjoyed his company. I thought he was, well, nice," she finished lamely.
Severus could hardly believe what he had heard. Not only was she defending him to her friends, but she dared to tell them she thought he was nice. He couldn't remember the last time someone had said anything good about him. WHACK! A sharp pain exploded above his right eye. He looked around to see a terrified, red-haired boy staring at him, too terrified to move. "William Weasley!"
"Oh, Professor Snape, are you all right?" Callista called, hurrying over to him. "He didn't do it on purpose, sir. They were playing a game, and he missed. You're cut. Please, let me take care of that."
Callista gently dabbed at the cut with a clean handkerchief. She carefully touched the injury with the tip of her wand; he felt the skin slowly knit back together. She smiled at him. "I'm not very skilled yet so it may bruise, but that should fade in a day or two."
Her smile warmed his heart in a way he didn't even know was possible.
Severus wrenched open the door to his office and slammed it behind him. How could things between the two of them have gone so utterly wrong? Pressing his slim hands to his face, he took a few deep breaths. It doesn't matter. What's done is done, and perhaps it's for the best.
Callista turned to the headmaster. "I can't believe you're going to allow this! Why don't you just teach Harry yourself?"
"There are other lessons I must teach him," Dumbledore answered. "Severus knows better than anyone else what Harry could face."
The witch frowned in annoyance. "And the Occlumency lessons with me won't really exist?"
"Of course they will," the headmaster said, as he took a seat behind the massive desk and invited Callista to take the chair opposite. "You will instruct Harry to sufficiently protect his mind."
"But according to you," Callista began, her forehead wrinkling in confusion, "He-Who-- V-Voldemort can't bear the connection between them. If he can no longer invade Harry's mind, then what's the point of continuing with Occlumency?"
"Surely you do realize that there are others among his followers that may try to gain access to Harry's thoughts. According to Severus, Riddle hasn't been eager to share his failure with any of them," replied Dumbledore. "However, there may come a time when Harry may find it necessary to connect his mind to Riddle's, and I want him to be able to do so without detection."
"Long-distance Legilimency?" Her eyes widened in surprise, and Callista felt utterly overwhelmed. "That' completely beyond my skills! The best I can do is teach Harry to detect when his mind is about to be infiltrated and block an attack. With practice on my part, I may be able to show him the basics of decoy images. Perhaps Severus--"
"Severus is a proficient Occlumens, the most practiced one I have ever encountered, but his skills in Legilimency are barely more than rudimentary. He can detect if someone is lying; however, that may have more to do with his experience in the classroom than anything else. "
"But, sir--"
Dumbledore raised a wrinkled hand. "Callista, I'm of the opinion that you are capable of such a skill." He smiled at the dubious look she gave him and went on. "I spoke with your mother after Jarvis Pike informed me you would be willing to interview for a teaching position. She told me that for the last few days she had been experiencing some very vivid dreams about you. In one of them, she described you sitting next to a fountain, staring at a large brick building with white pillars, and a clock tower. Your mother was not exactly surprised by the news that you were alive and well and would soon be returning home."
Callista rubbed at her temples. Shortly after speaking to Jarvis, she had been so agitated that she taken a long walk around the campus and had stopped at her favorite spot, the fountain in front of the Main. Her thoughts had been so focused on her family that it could have been possible that her mother had felt something. Even if she had, the connection likely had more to do with a maternal bond than any special ability of her own. No matter how it had been accomplished--provided it wasn't just a coincidence--it wasn't a conscious act. The chances of Callista being able to do it again were minimal at best, and the possibility of her being able to actually instruct anyone else were laughably slim.
"I'll do my best," Callista promised with forced enthusiasm.
"I ask nothing more," he said kindly. "There is one more thing I do need from you concerning the instruction of another student."
"Oh?" She was instantly wary.
"I would like you to work with Neville Longbottom," Dumbledore replied in a matter-of-fact tone. "He would like toe. continue with Potions but will not be able to take the N.E.W.T. classes."
"But I thought Severus was going to allow students--"
The headmaster broke in with an explanation. "Mr. Longbottom is, according to Severus, 'too dangerous to be allowed in the classroom.' He also only achieved the mark of Acceptable on his O.W.L., which was more of an allowance than Severus was willing to give."
Callista barely restrained herself from rolling her eyes. "So I'm going to be stuck with him."
"You indicated a need for a personal workspace so you could experiment with Healing potions." The old man was smiling at her in the most irritating way. She was cornered and they both knew it. "Surely an assistant would be helpful?"
"Yes," Callista said, suddenly wondering if Severus had made the suggestion in hopes that both she and this Longbottom person would end up a slimy puddle on the floor. "But not one that could land me in St. Mungo's! A potions lab where there are experimental brews involved is no place for incompetence. I don't want to be responsible for any disasters he could create."
"A valid concern, Callista. However, I believe Mr. Longbottom would benefit from tutoring with someone who is patient enough to instruct him in the basics of Potions." The headmaster continued to smile pleasantly at her desperate look. "He has a keen interest in Herbology, and I'm sure he would find accounts of your university work and travels fascinating."
"I don't suppose I have much of a choice in the matter, do I?"
"Of course you do, but I would be much in your debt if you undertook this task."
Her shoulders slumped in resignation. "As you wish, Headmaster. But if his incompetence impedes my progress, I want to have the right to dismiss him."
Dumbledore gave her a twinkling smile that bordered on patronizing. "That sounds quite reasonable. If you have no further questions, you are dismissed to continue with your preparations."
Callista nodded and turned to go. She paused at the door and turned to the headmaster and asked, "That other matter we discussed, the one concerning Severus and Barty Jr.--"
"I have told you what I know," replied Dumbledore repressively. "All of it was made a matter of public record over the summer, Callista. Anything more, you will need to ask Severus, but I'm sure you've deduced that he is unlikely to answer your questions."
"I understand, sir." Callista pushed the door open and made her way down the staircase. More likely than not, Severus indeed had been responsible for Barty's fate. No matter what Barty had become, Callista didn't think she could forgive Severus for having someone Kissed.
A/N: One of my pet theories post GoF, was that Severus Snape had played a part in Fudge's decision to have Barty Kissed instead of just incarcerated. True, Fudge could have been covering his own backside, but Severus also had secrets that only Barty would know, secrets that could have caused difficulties had they made it back to Voldemort's... um, ears. Here's hoping this latest hasn't made me unpopular to the point that my handful of readers ditch me.
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18 Reviews | 6.61/10 Average
Loved that Callista and Severus are basically having the same dream.
Draco - I have to agree, what a prat. I loved the author's notes.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Seriously, that little pain in my butt held up the whole stupid chapter. I was going to use him for an important role in the story, but now he's a goner.
As always, that was wonderful. I laughed out loud when I read the Granger fantasy comment. You're not a fan of that pairing as I recall. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
LOL But I love SS/HG! There so much to giggle over.Thank you for enjoying the chapter. Hopefully the next one will go much easier.
LOL I rather expected her to be nicer to Harry, but he did not take well to her forthright tone at all. I hope the two will find a comfortable working relationship. I'll be interested in what she tells him of her past.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Personally I think Harry on some level wants to be coddled a bit. I mean, he recently found out he will either be murdered or be a murderer. It will take some time, but Callista and Harry will manage. As to your last question, I haven't decided yet how much he really needs to know. Any suggestions?
Oh that is so petty of Severus, so petty. Why in Merlin's name are they sharing a classroom anyway? Plot? Doesn't the castle have any other rooms? The place is HUGE! It's really annoying, really,
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Please don't be annoyed at me. *wibbles* Schools (even magical ones) probably wouldn't outfit anymore classrooms than they absolutely had to.
Ooooh, so she was friends with Barty Jr.! I'm really surprised that Winky told her so much. That seems rather out a cahracter, considering that Winky was still protecting Crouch's secrets in canon. And she just divulged everything. odd. I wounder how Dumbledore will spin it?
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Winky has known Callista and Callista's family for quite sometime and probably doesn't consider the girl of another pure-blood family to be a total outsider. Dumbledore being Dumbledore will give out as little information as possible. It may even generate more confusion than it aleviates.
I think this is a mistake for possibly a note left in from your beta? At the end of the 12th or 13th paragraph "House elf-ese isn't easy, but they do seem to choose the simplest way to say something and that combo of past and present tense bothers me."Best, Gryffkat
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Thanks for catching that. Did you like the story otherwise?
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
Yes, I realized after I clicked send that I should have said that I am enjoying it. I haven't had a chance yet to finish what was posted yet. I like that it is about Severus as much as the OFC. I will keep reading.
Well written and interesting... good start as the character seems well thought out... I am glad you chose to give her some history and did not start with Snape seeing her at Hogwarts... too often OC characters are not fleshed out before the story realy gets moving ... very well done
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
That was the problem with the original story. My biggest hope is that giving the OC's PoV will make things a little more interesting. Thank you for reviewing.
First off, wow. I hope this is going to be one of those long 60+ chapter stories, because 12 chapters simply won't be enough.I love this. I had forgotten how much I enjoy seeing glimpses of what Snape must have been like as a young teacher. And I really like that the nature of the relationship bothered him, even though they were so close in age. Will Snape be jealous that she will be working with Harry? Also, you mentioned some order members that were cool to her at the meeting. Are these people that knew her before she removed herself from the British wizarding world? Hope the questions don't bug you, it really is my form of affection for a story
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Questions rarely bug me, unless the person is asking me why I don't write SS/HG. *see Ho'Moaning* The first question I can't answer, but I think you'll be able to figure it out a little later in the story. The second one: most of the Order members know her in one way or another. The fact that she disappeared shortly before the Potters were killed raised a lot of questions about her loyalties. Her father, while definitely not a DE, did share some of Voldie's ideals about the status of Muggle-borns.Here's hoping I keep hearing from you! The original had over 30 chapters before I started the re-write.
Dumbledore wants her back awfully bad. Just out of curiosity, When did you start this story, in its original form? My guess is between books 5 and 6. Anyway, I love it.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
The original was started back in May of 2005 *cringes*. I'm glad you love.
I came to read this story "by accident", I like it and are looking forward to following it from now on. Looking forward eagerly for the next chapter
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Thank you. Sometimes accidents aren't always bad things. Hope to hear from you again soon.
I'm pleased to see that you are posting the revision here too. TPP needs more Snape OFC stories to balance out the overload of SS/HG. Some more stories with Snape and other canon females wouldn't come amiss either. I've read some really cute Snape/adult Luna stories lately and I enjoyed the 'iresistable force vs old immovable object' of the opposites attract that those stories project.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Since I write mainly to please myself and a small handful of people, I figured what the heck, might as well. OFC's have it rough in the fandom, but I think Severus would be much happier with someone his own age. Thanks for commenting!
I love your story. In the book it is McGonagal who is the wittnes ot the infamous kiss. But you have of cource an authors right to bend the story to your liking. Beeing a fan of Severus Snape I cannot help defending him.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Defend away. Snape needs someone in his corner too.Hope to hear from you again.
Oh the little battle of willand desires that these two go through. I actually enjoyed the scene in the Potions lab. with a little patience, she'll have more placenta come spring. I do hope that the little unicorn surrives.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
I want to bring said little unicorn up in the story again but that would require me to write more Hagrid. *cringe* There will be more trips to the Forbidden Forest come spring. Hopefully Severus and Callista will make them together. ;)Don't know about you, but I can't stand someone hovering over me while I try to work.
I also think I was reading the original before. I like this story very much and while I don't review much, I will be reading. I like that your OFC is not maudlin or saccharine. I enjoy that Severus is not OOC either. My husband in now mad at me because I have been reading this story and not attending to Saturday chores. I look forward to more.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
There will be some changes from the original, especially because in a few places I wrote myself into a corner. ONe of hte pros of fanfic: You can always change it. Sugar-coated OFCs and OOC Snapes are two of my greatest fanfic pet peeves. Here's hoping I keep from writing them. Back to those chores! The sooner you get them done; the soon you can read more fanfic. :)
I loved that she drifted off to sleep with her father singing. Very Sweet.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
She's definitely a 'daddy's girl'.
I love this story. In fact, I went on a quest to find the rest of the original. I only read a few chapters of the original version (the fact you had taken it down on all of those other sites made me feel a little guilty) but as good as that first one was, this version is incredible. I can't wait to read the rest. I did discover that you wrote the very first Snape fan fic (maybe the first fan fic) that I ever read. On my first visit to Occumency, I hit the random button and "A Single Strand" popped up on the screen. I was hooked. I was too shy to review then, so I'm glad for the chance to make amends now.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
Thanks,
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
! I started writing this story 5 years ago and hopefully my writing has greatly improved. I'm glad you loved "A Single Strand" and I hope you went on to read and review Veirty's A Merciless Affection too. *hugs*
Are you sure Dumbledore didn't have a hand in everything getting screwed up for her? (Sorry, I'm not a huge fan of Dumbledore these days.) I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
DH kind of killed my love of Dumbledore as well. I respect his character for his academic achievement but the man really needed to just keep to the classroom. Keep reading and let me know what you think.
Yes, I am at least! Hi! Ok, I had to backtrack a bit to reaquaint, but I'm caught up and rearing to go... Callista is settling in. Good of her to NOT rise to Severus' ill-manners. "O" and I loved that Minerva gave her a true evaluation of Harry.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
As much as I love Snape's character (Why else would I write him?) he has only slightly more maturity than the seventh-years at times. While he's spent the majority of his life at school, Callista has moved on to the adult world.Some Snape fans hate Harry because "Harry was always so rude to Severus," but I'm not one of those people. I'm glad you sticking around, as it's really hard for a SS/OFC fic to carve a niche on a mostly SS/HG archive.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Hey, don't I know it! I still write an occasional Weasley twins story! or with minor canon characters! Teehehe
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Shadow on My Heart)
I love your stories. They're always fresh and interesting.