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Subversa

While Hermione daydreams, Snape plots. This is a Valentine's Day vignette, written for the Romancing the Wizard community on Live Journal. The prompt was "scorched parchment scroll".

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Hermione sat at her small desk, pushed into a corner of the laboratory, where it would not be in anyone’s – Severus’ – way. Her untidy head was bent over her task, and she scribbled on her ever-present stack of parchment.

From his own much larger desk, across the room, he watched her through the curtain of his long, black hair. Peace time had given Severus Snape, Potions master of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, the first leisure of his adult life, and he found himself using it in the oddest ways – such as observing his apprentice. More and more he noted her graceful throat – her rounded bum – her slender ankles – and, yes, her breasts. He was a man, was he not? Her indisputable femininity permeated his laboratory, perfumed his office, and had insinuated itself into his dreams.

But of what – or whom – did she dream?

The question plagued him. At times, he caught her watching him with such an indecipherable expression that he sincerely regretted his sad lack of experience with women. Did she find him … attractive? Acceptable? Tolerable? Or was her appreciation of a purely professional nature?

How the devil did one go about ascertaining such things?

Late one night, he had left her in charge of finishing a batch of Wolfsbane but had been forced to return to the laboratory to retrieve his reading glasses. She had been scribbling at a table, and as he had passed stealthily behind her, he was sure he had seen his own name, written in a feminine hand, embellished by … hearts? But she had perceived him, then, and the incriminating parchment had been thrust unceremoniously into the fire. Since then, she had taken care, at day’s end, to put her doodling upon the fire – he knew, because he had searched her things.

But today would be different.

He stood and approached her. ‘Not taken for Valentine’s Day, Miss Granger? It’s nearly dinner-time; you’d best be away.’

She jumped with such force that the blue ink from the well upon her desk smeared under her quill. ‘No,’ she replied, casually covering her parchment with her hand.

‘What are you writing?’ he inquired silkily, placing his palms flat on her desk and leaning into her personal space.

‘Nothing!’ She jerked the parchment into the air, and it quickly rolled into a scroll; with a swish and flick, she sent it into the fire.

He stared down into her wide brown eyes, noting the delicious flush on her cheeks. ‘Then you won’t mind if I read it.’

He Summoned the scorched parchment scroll without speaking a word, and it zoomed obediently into his hand.

‘No!’ she cried in great agitation, reaching for it. ‘You can’t! I burned it! Why isn’t it …?’

‘Ashes?’ he supplied helpfully. ‘Because it’s Druid Blue Ink, charmed not to burn.’ He opened the parchment, turning to prevent her from snatching it from him, and read, amidst the carefully drawn border of hearts and arrows and curlicues:

Severus Snape

Severus hearts Hermione

Hermione hearts Severus

Hermione Granger Snape

The triumph which blazed through him brought a flush to his cheeks as well; he turned to face her.

‘Burn it!’ she begged, looking away from his glittering eyes, obviously mortified. ‘I was just doodling!’

He folded the parchment and tucked it away. It was, in effect, his first love letter, and he had no intention of burning it. ‘Hermione,’ he said softly, letting his voice embrace her name as his arms would soon embrace her body.

And her eyes rose to his, the beginnings of hope shining in their depths.

‘Such sentiments should never be destroyed,’ he murmured, reaching to twine a curl about his finger. Personal, but not so committed an action that he would lose face if she rejected him.

Her lips parted enticingly, and she breathed, ‘You … you don’t mind?’

Tempted beyond bearing, he slowly lowered his head to hers, watching for any sign of dissent on her face; seeing none, he allowed their lips to touch.

She all but flew at him, one hand in his hair, the other at his cheek, her mouth opening to him, her tongue darting out, teasing. He pulled her firmly against him and retaliated by invading the sweetness of her, his tongue dominating hers, tasting all her cinnamon-flavoured mouth had to offer.

When she trembled in his arms, and he felt his control slipping, he moved his lips across her cheek to her ear and whispered, ‘Consider yourself taken.’

Author's Notes: Thanks to SubHub for his usual perspicacity where Severus Snape is concerned. Thanks to the inimitable Bambu for the perfect summary!

The Roman legions first encountered Druid Blue, much to their chagrin, upon their invasion of the British Isles. The ink Severus put in Hermione's inkstand is derived from the magical body paint the ancient Druids prepared for use in battle. Unfortunately, the Druids could not produce it in sufficient quantities to cover all their people, as the Roman nose and Roman name of a certain Potions master will attest.


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Latest 25 Reviews for Taken

28 Reviews  |  6.89/10 Average

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tenoh27

Adorable, and Hermione`s doodling is out of this world... LOL. Thank you!

10/10

kittyperry

I loved this story the first time I read it and it is a pleasure to read it again.

10/10

Muggline

*Sigh*

10/10

braye27

How could I have missed this one?  I have two favorite lines, both by Severus:‘Such sentiments should never be destroyed' and 'Consider yourself taken.’Beth

9/10

Lysithea

I'm surprised I never reviewed this, I thought I had. But I must say I love this story. It's just as good now as the first time I read it.

0/10

kimjo2

lovely and very in character.  thanks so much. 

10/10

pookah

I'm pretty certain I reviewed this on Ashwinder.  But I want to base a suggestion for a challenge on ideas inspired by this fic.  SO I'm warning you here.  I love that you added the extra bit about Druid Blue at the end of the story.  I lreally enjoy other people's ideas of the untold details of the Wizarding world.

0/10

DanaPAH

Nice.

8/10

helshez

Good stuff. Fluffy and sweet, but I'm reading a lot of angsty stuff at the moment, so a bit of fluff makes a nice tonic. Cheers.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that Severus didn't embarrass Hermione too much about her writing their names together. He was just happy that she felt that way. I like how he sneakily put Druid blue into her ink, so that it wouldn't burn. It was a very cute Valentine ficlet.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

~raises hand, waving said hand back and forth~


needs taken please pretty please

10/10

Merlinsbeard

This story made my heart swell!

10/10

jenonymous

A really good one, as usual!  I love seeing your name in my email, and wish I saw it more often.  Compliments to SubHub for his perspicacity (I just love that word, and don't live and work in a world where I can use it often), and the highly esteemed Bambu, as well the actual author, who is definitely one of my favorites!

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Cerydden M_Layne

You  make the happy ending junkie happy!  Thanks for your work  -- I always enjoy it.

8/10

Lkmaide

nicely done--  very sweet

10/10

snitchette

It's very sweet and nice. Happy Valentine to you too.

9/10

LillaQ

I love it! It's really sweet. :)

10/10

Fawkes_07

Happy sigh, as always... what wonderful Severusness for Valentine's day.

10/10

kittylefish

what a sweet valentine treat!  (kitty hearts subversa's story!)

10/10

LaiksMarei

He folded the parchment and tucked it away.


Bookmark anyone?


Absolutely divine indulgence on this day of love.

10/10

JTBJAB

This was sweet!!!! Loved it... but oh so short:( lol!

10/10

livvy6

Precious story for the holiday! Sweet and clever! I LOVED how he said that "such sentiments should never be burned".


Good job!


Livvy

9/10

CharmedForce

Oh, unburnable ink! Very clever.

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Sporky1126

That was too cute! I especially love Doodling!Hermione. "Severus hearts Hermione" Heehee! Maybe she's been hanging around lovesick teens too long, lol. :)

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i_read

Sneaky man, stealing her doodles. Can't blame him for wanting to be certain, though. Her reaction to his tentative kiss was very telling, though, as was his final statement. Sweet!

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