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Subversa28 Reviews | 6.89/10 (28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 17 Favorites )
While Hermione daydreams, Snape plots. This is a Valentine's Day vignette, written for the Romancing the Wizard community on Live Journal. The prompt was "scorched parchment scroll".
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Adorable, and Hermione`s doodling is out of this world... LOL. Thank you!
I loved this story the first time I read it and it is a pleasure to read it again.
*Sigh*
How could I have missed this one? I have two favorite lines, both by Severus:‘Such sentiments should never be destroyed' and 'Consider yourself taken.’Beth
I'm surprised I never reviewed this, I thought I had. But I must say I love this story. It's just as good now as the first time I read it.
lovely and very in character. thanks so much.
I'm pretty certain I reviewed this on Ashwinder. But I want to base a suggestion for a challenge on ideas inspired by this fic. SO I'm warning you here. I love that you added the extra bit about Druid Blue at the end of the story. I lreally enjoy other people's ideas of the untold details of the Wizarding world.
Nice.
Good stuff. Fluffy and sweet, but I'm reading a lot of angsty stuff at the moment, so a bit of fluff makes a nice tonic. Cheers.
I am glad that Severus didn't embarrass Hermione too much about her writing their names together. He was just happy that she felt that way. I like how he sneakily put Druid blue into her ink, so that it wouldn't burn. It was a very cute Valentine ficlet.
~raises hand, waving said hand back and forth~
needs taken please pretty please
This story made my heart swell!
A really good one, as usual! I love seeing your name in my email, and wish I saw it more often. Compliments to SubHub for his perspicacity (I just love that word, and don't live and work in a world where I can use it often), and the highly esteemed Bambu, as well the actual author, who is definitely one of my favorites!
You make the happy ending junkie happy! Thanks for your work -- I always enjoy it.
nicely done-- very sweet
It's very sweet and nice. Happy Valentine to you too.
I love it! It's really sweet. :)
Happy sigh, as always... what wonderful Severusness for Valentine's day.
what a sweet valentine treat! (kitty hearts subversa's story!)
He folded the parchment and tucked it away.
Bookmark anyone?
Absolutely divine indulgence on this day of love.
This was sweet!!!! Loved it... but oh so short:( lol!
Precious story for the holiday! Sweet and clever! I LOVED how he said that "such sentiments should never be burned".
Good job!
Livvy
Oh, unburnable ink! Very clever.
That was too cute! I especially love Doodling!Hermione. "Severus hearts Hermione" Heehee! Maybe she's been hanging around lovesick teens too long, lol. :)
Sneaky man, stealing her doodles. Can't blame him for wanting to be certain, though. Her reaction to his tentative kiss was very telling, though, as was his final statement. Sweet!