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Subversa

28 Reviews   |   28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 17 Favorites )

Romance Snapshot Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 858 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

While Hermione daydreams, Snape plots. This is a Valentine's Day vignette, written for the Romancing the Wizard community on Live Journal. The prompt was "scorched parchment scroll".

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Chapter 1: Taken


About Subversa

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Subversa

Member Since 2005  |  33 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,367  |  226 Reviews Written  |  1,394 Review Responses

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http://subversa.livejournal.com/

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0/10

tenoh27

Adorable, and Hermione`s doodling is out of this world... LOL. Thank you!

10/10

kittyperry

I loved this story the first time I read it and it is a pleasure to read it again.

10/10

Muggline

*Sigh*

10/10

braye27

How could I have missed this one?  I have two favorite lines, both by Severus:‘Such sentiments should never be destroyed' and 'Consider yourself taken.’Beth

9/10

Lysithea

I'm surprised I never reviewed this, I thought I had. But I must say I love this story. It's just as good now as the first time I read it.

0/10

kimjo2

lovely and very in character.  thanks so much. 

10/10

pookah

I'm pretty certain I reviewed this on Ashwinder.  But I want to base a suggestion for a challenge on ideas inspired by this fic.  SO I'm warning you here.  I love that you added the extra bit about Druid Blue at the end of the story.  I lreally enjoy other people's ideas of the untold details of the Wizarding world.

0/10

DanaPAH

Nice.

8/10

helshez

Good stuff. Fluffy and sweet, but I'm reading a lot of angsty stuff at the moment, so a bit of fluff makes a nice tonic. Cheers.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that Severus didn't embarrass Hermione too much about her writing their names together. He was just happy that she felt that way. I like how he sneakily put Druid blue into her ink, so that it wouldn't burn. It was a very cute Valentine ficlet.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

~raises hand, waving said hand back and forth~


needs taken please pretty please

10/10

Merlinsbeard

This story made my heart swell!

10/10

jenonymous

A really good one, as usual!  I love seeing your name in my email, and wish I saw it more often.  Compliments to SubHub for his perspicacity (I just love that word, and don't live and work in a world where I can use it often), and the highly esteemed Bambu, as well the actual author, who is definitely one of my favorites!

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

You  make the happy ending junkie happy!  Thanks for your work  -- I always enjoy it.

8/10

Lkmaide

nicely done--  very sweet

10/10

snitchette

It's very sweet and nice. Happy Valentine to you too.

9/10

LillaQ

I love it! It's really sweet. :)

10/10

Fawkes_07

Happy sigh, as always... what wonderful Severusness for Valentine's day.

10/10

kittylefish

what a sweet valentine treat!  (kitty hearts subversa's story!)

10/10

LaiksMarei

He folded the parchment and tucked it away.


Bookmark anyone?


Absolutely divine indulgence on this day of love.

10/10

JTBJAB

This was sweet!!!! Loved it... but oh so short:( lol!

10/10

livvy6

Precious story for the holiday! Sweet and clever! I LOVED how he said that "such sentiments should never be burned".


Good job!


Livvy

9/10

CharmedForce

Oh, unburnable ink! Very clever.

0/10

Sporky1126

That was too cute! I especially love Doodling!Hermione. "Severus hearts Hermione" Heehee! Maybe she's been hanging around lovesick teens too long, lol. :)

0/10

i_read

Sneaky man, stealing her doodles. Can't blame him for wanting to be certain, though. Her reaction to his tentative kiss was very telling, though, as was his final statement. Sweet!

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