Excellent chapter!  I'm so delighted they, er, got down to business.  "  “Closer, Miss Granger. Sex is generally more effective if your partner is at least in the same time zone.” " ROFLMAO!  No cybersex in the wizarding world!

I've rarely seen two people insult each other like that before sex ;) The dialogues are very good.

Oooo!  I am loving this.  As a long time fan of your stories, I'm thrilled to see a new one.  Great work so far.  I especially enjoyed the misunderstanding over 'flying for the other team'.  Keep the chapters coming! 

Love your stuff -- thanks for sharing!

Don't take this the wrong way, but this is actually....adorable.  It's light and funny and well done.

Biting the inside of her cheek in thought, she came to the conclusion that in the name of research she was going to have to take one for the team. Snape pulled away from her mouth. “Quit dallying about. I assure you it’s clean, Miss Granger. I just had a shower.”

ROTFL I am loving this! I laughed my way through the entire chapter. Well done!

Ooo!  A snarky Snape and a naive Hermione.  I love it! A great start - you've hooked me!

THUD!  MORE, MORE!!!!  I LOVE IT!

Heh, the note taking - so very Hermione. I bet Snape wasn't even surprised.

Lovely, Lovely, Lovely

*melts*

Delightful!  I can't wait for the next part of the lesson.  I just loved the part where she really thought of taking notes.  What a hoot.  Thanks for sharing, JoAnne

Ooohhh!  More!  More!  More!  Not exactly concrit, I know, but certainly the first thing through my mind.  Love your take on the characters, and their interplay is just as interesting as the, uh, lemons, to come.

I guess I'm as bad as Ron because I'm drooling all over the place.  Painfully short chapters Ferv.  But at least you're cranking them out fast.  Want more.  Much more. 

Well, good Lord! What a place to stop! lolI like this Hermione/Snape interaction. It's impersonal or maybe professional?? yet still intimate - very interesting.

You're on a roll here, i think. It's very.. khm... realistic :) And so the ice queen of Gryffindor finally responds. This should be fun. Please keep writing. Pwetty pwease? (oh, lookit! I posted first :D)

yummy

Oh, delicious.

I'm so glad you're on fire.

I am loving it so far

You made Charlie gay... tsk tsk tsk.  LOL, you know I love your stories. I love what you have done so far, like there was doubt that I wouldn't. Kepp up the good work.

My favorite line, "and then try some practical work, Miss Granger". Can't wait for more.

Hello. Thank you for writing this piece of very interesting literature. I particularly like the way you burst into the chapter with conflict between the two protagonists. Perfect sexual tension platform :DNicely done! Loved the last line, too.Norma xxx

Giggle.  Once had that experience myself!

Really liked it. Snapes a bit of a bastard (I know he always is but he seems to dispise Hermione a little more than normal in this fic) but I always like the snarky bastardness of Snape anyway :)

lol great premise :D Can't wait for the smut... :))

Tee hee!  Poor Hermione is running out of older men here, isn't she...  *drums fingernails incessantly on keyboard*  Yay Ferv!  I eagerly await the acquisition of knowledge!!!