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Politics of Academic Murder
Lady Strange23 Reviews | 6.09/10 (23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
A 6 chapter murder mystery and sequel to "Christmas Presents Undisguised" where Severus and Hermione are sleuths. Someone important is murdered in the University where Severus and Hermione are. They are roped in to find out who did it. Readers may find plot violent and the politics described herein distasteful.
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well, so far Flitwick has been cleared of Dumbledore's murder - but I still cannot determine the best candidate for the crime. hmm, perhaps Ginny herself? or even Harry?? thanks for the new chapter - will look forward to the answers next!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Well, still one chapter to go. The clues - the major ones as to who did it are in this chapter.Hints:Flitwick does reveal somethingThe iinvestigators found something while searching Dumbledore's room againAnd there's the Pliny the elder reference.
So, it was merely a suicide? But still, Dumbledore's motives aren't completely clear. Was he escaping what he'd contributed to create?
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
There's still 1 chapter to go. It was stated in this chapter that it was neither suicide nor "undesirable elements" murdering him. There's more to it than meets the eye.
Oh, you deserve far more reviews than you recieve! I am continually captivated by this story, and I love your style of writing. Severus' mannerisms remind me of Holmes!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you, thank you. This story has been fun for me too. Reviews - well, they will come when they come. So long as people read my work, I am content. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
This is well planned and executed story. After reading this, I went back to read your previous stories and really enjoyed them.
I look forward to the next installment.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you. Considering that I took a long sabbatical from fanfic writing, I am quite overwhelmed by the warmth on my return. The next instalment should be up sometime next week - late next week. Thank you once again.
PS - Molly as the murderer? Molly is the one who told Ginny to not desert her brood, Molly would kill to "protect" Harry's name, Molly considers herself untouchable because of her reputation for being uber-Mom.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Molly does not appear in this story, not even as a walk-on role. However, now that you mention it... I should write her in one of my murder mysteries....
Okay, I'm going with Harry or a Weasley as the prime murder suspect. I don't think Ginny would bother protecting anyone outside her "brood." The truth Dumbledore was discovering - something bad about Harry? Here's hoping you post the next chapter soon! Thank you for taking time to update, despite the busy-ness of this time of year.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Well, well, my beta was stumped right to the end as well. She suspected someone else and not a Weasley or a Potter on grounds that they were too obvious. But since everyone (or nearly everyone) is a possible suspect, anything goes! *Cackle*As for what Dumbles discovered... I have only one word of advice - consider the current Potter administration and what it is like. Think you on that.The busyness this time of year is madness, mainly with editing and ghostwriting work. This story as well as the 3rd mystery I am currently conceptualising keeps me occupied. So long as I do not have time to dwell on all that has passed in my personal life. Meanwhile, I am still panicking that I have less than 2500 words of the 6000 word ghostwriting project. Eek!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Well, well, my beta was stumped right to the end as well. She suspected someone else and not a Weasley or a Potter on grounds that they were too obvious. But since everyone (or nearly everyone) is a possible suspect, anything goes! *Cackle*As for what Dumbles discovered... I have only one word of advice - consider the current Potter administration and what it is like. Think you on that.The busyness this time of year is madness, mainly with editing and ghostwriting work. This story as well as the 3rd mystery I am currently conceptualising keeps me occupied. So long as I do not have time to dwell on all that has passed in my personal life. Meanwhile, I am still panicking that I have less than 2500 words of the 6000 word ghostwriting project. Eek!
I think I'll wait for the answer to understand by whom and why Dumbledore was killed.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I welcome speculation as to who did it...
It seems to me that with such a high-power alchemist and arithmantist on the case that a little more magical forensics would be forthcoming. Something like a spell that would put return all items in the room precisely back to the place where Dumbeldore last placed them thus reconstructing the crime scene and then the use of some potion like Luminol to show mystic traces of missing artifacts. Well anyway, back to the locked room and the next phase of our mystery...
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
This is not a CSI episode, unfortunately. Remember that I picture the wizarding world to be quite Victorian... As for what happens next, well... read on when the next instalment appears.
This is a gorgeously written story, and I eagerly await more!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I am very glad you enjoy it; there will be more shortly. It is my policy to post complete stories.
Hmm, not sure if Flitwick was lying about cleaning up Dumbledore's desk, or if someone else mis-led Penelope. In this story, almost everyone is under suspicion, you clever writer! Thanks for the new chapter.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Ah ha! A reader finally points out that everyone is under suspicion. I confess I was too transparent with the identity of the killer in the 1st story, so in this, I decided everyone would be a suspect. *cackle* Well, this is the halfway mark, 3 more chapters to go of suspense, Go and dystopic politics.
I like the way you have Severus lead her to the harsh realization that the time has come for her to stand up against her childhood friends. Not a pleasant task, but in this story they would not hesitate to move against Hermione. And all done over a game of Go! Thanks for updating.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I do try to inject some plot progression here and there, and Ch 2 was no exception. Go has a certain resonance with Severus, and I felt he would be best equipped to treat life as he would a game of Go. But I am rambling. :p Read on! This plot even confuses me sometimes.
A closed-room mystery: how delicious.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Oh yes, almost as delicious as my frosted cupcakes!
My Lady Strange, I must confess I can now truly empathize with how Dr. Watson and Chief Inspector Japp would have felt if Holmes and Poirot had ever collaborated on a tricky case with the two of them caught in the wake. You just combined politics, academia, and Go! Can there be any hope for those of us who are more into Cutthroat Canasta to understand what they're talking about and the reasoning behind it? Please have mercy and don't leave us mere mortals lying in the dust disconsolate.Oh, Iluvitiluvitiluvit!!! There, all better now, on with the show! ^_^
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
My dear Chatelaine,Unfortunately, I know nothing about Canasta. Is it like Patience? I play Patience every now and then. The definitions of the joseki moves are explained, and are intended to give readers a hint as to how the plot will progress. So the only possible thing to do now is to let the people who covered up the murder to think they are winning, and to test whether their complacency has gotten the better of them? What better thing to do than to investigate the gameplay of those who think they are winning, and invade empty territory when they least expect it? There is a reason why Go is called "encircling chess" in Mandarin. Tee hee.best,Lady Strange.
I am so glad I took the time to read Christmas Presents first. I like watching a world develop around characters I care for. The details of the faux Victorian/Dickensonian world of the British Wizarding World are fastinating. On with the sequel! I am SO ready for more,
and more,
and more, ad nauseum.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you for taking the time to read the 1st story before this one. I haven't written in a long while for the fandom, and do worry that I am a little rusty. Ch 2 will be up later this week (it is already Monday in my half of the world) as soon as I go through it one more time.
Intriguing!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Glad you liked it.
yay!!!!! you're writing a new story!! HG and SS are sleuthy investigators, and I'm looking forward to seeing them figure out how Albus died. The way things are going in Potter's Britain, I might wonder why HG and SS don't apply to schools in other countries. Thanks for posting!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I wonder whether it would give too much of the ending away.... *goes to refer to chapter 6* No, I can tell you that SS and HG do end up teaching in Paris II and Paris IV by the end of the story. See, and I have given nothing away! If you want to see more on the politics of Potter's Britain, wait till you see the exposition of how his administration has devolved.... You already get a hint of it in Ch 1 with the mention of "itinerant Undesirables"...It is the least I can do for you after all you have done for me. *hugs* Here's hoping that I get back to your end of the pond so that I can formally express my gratitude in person.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
no need for... erm... formal expressions. just get yourself over to this side of the pond - anywhere on this side!
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I love the setting of this, and I'm really in the mood for mysteries right now! Lovely job.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I am a little rusty with writing for our fandom. But the story needed to be written. Call it a cathartic (sic) exercise for my experience in academia. ;) Thank you once again.
How absolutely wonderful to have you back - and to have this story continued. So Dumbledore died under unnatural circumstances and Harry is trying to hush it up? Very interesting start.One minor thing. I think you missed an "ago" in the following sentence: "Albus died three days in his rooms at Merton". Or does unnatural refer to the lenght of his death? :-)
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you for pointing out the missing word. My betas and I must have missed it. Well, it is a short mystery. Not as gory as "Christmas Presents Undisguised", but equally as disturbing. Thank you for your encouragement.
oh my, you played this out very well - Ginny, with help from Ron, to protect Harry from knowledge of the crime and perceived political harm. It all fits Ginny's belief in family sticking together, and how the killer entered Dumbledore's room. Well done! (Did S&H testify before the Wizengamot?) I also like the new lives you gave S&H, safely away in France in a larger academic community, and with good food and Carrefour. In the aftermath of Benazir Bhutto's death, the mentions of Burma were especialy poignant. Thank you for the great story!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Ah well, I write the kind of political system I know best - and I don't mean the kind I learn from my Plato, Xenophon and Caesar. And to think I was told I was not cut out for the academic world *grumble* The Burma bit was added in after last minute consideration because I wanted Dumbledore to be a mildly sympathetic character since he did spend the whole of this story dead.Ginny is as I think she would be in this dystopic world. I always wanted a villain that was somewhat flawed. I presume S&H did testify. I love their new lives too, and cannot help but long for that kind of a life myself. However, they will not be able to rest on their laurels too much... Their reputation as sleuths may have just followed them across the English Channel... *cackle*And thanks for the review! :)
I find your long footnotes very informative. They usually answer all the questions I have about the chapter that proceeds them. If you repeat information from a previous chapter, I just skip over that. When I first saw "undress," I thought oa a diaphanous robe with lacies underneath.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
You must thank my betas for the footnotes. They are conversant in both British and American English. Whereas I am only proficient in the former. As you can imagine, this leads to much misunderstanding between myself and the readers when I first started out because several words existent in both British and American English have different definitions, and there are spelling differences between the two as well that led one camp to say my language skills were sub-par.I come from a purely british/commonwealth tradition where undress has several meanings among them - removing clothes from oneself, informal academic gowns worn for teaching by the academic staff of Oxbridge.The type of "robe" you are describing would be a dress gown in the loosest sense of the word, meaning - something you throw on to hide the fact that you are either naked or just in undergarments.
I find your long footnotes very informative. They usually answer all the questions I have about the chapter that proceeds them. If you repeat information from a previous chapter, I just skip over that. When I first saw "undress," I thought of a diaphanous robe with lacies underneath.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I provide fair warning on long footnotes because many readers have complained (in the past) that my footnotes are too long and do not add anything to the plot. I repeat footnotes because past experience has taught me that readers very seldom refer back to an earlier chapter where something is explained.An example would be the reticule vs ridicule distinction in my regency fic. reticule is the handbag used by ladies ca. the late 1790s to late victorian times (c. 1901). But between the years 1798-1825, it was called a ridicule because it was thought ridiculous to carry a handbag for things when previously you would have pockets to do so. Readers who did not read the footnotes in an earlier chapter came across the term in a much later chapter and inundated me with emails as to my incorrect use of the term. To prevent such things from happening, I repeat footnotes in the hope that readers pay attention. However, that seems doomed to failure as well as readers complain that my footnotes are unwieldy.
I loved "Christmas Presents Undisguised" and this is a great follow up fic. I would enjoy reading more stories along the same lines.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I am glad you enjoyed this fic. At present, real life is rather hectic for me, so there are no current plans for another serious mystery. Perhaps when I find more time to write... Thank you for the compliments.
I should have seen this coming; I've lost my touch. Thank you for that lovely tale BTW I smiled when I read "Carrefour".
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I would not say you lost your touch. Rather, I made everyone a suspect. Ah yes, the carrefour reference. I am helpless biased that way... :)