Chapter 6
Chapter 6 of 6
Lady StrangeThe final denouement to the murder mystery where everything (or almost everything) is revealed.
Author's note: I own nothing, and just happen to have the habit of borrowing characters and playing around with them.
As to why the world is the way it is in this story, please c/f to author's note in chapter 1.
Description of murder(s) and politics herein may be gory and unpalatable to readers. If blood and gore offends you, and if depictions of any kind of non-western or non-modern-democratic government offends you, this story and the original AU murder mystery on which it are based are not for you. I do not say this to alienate my readers. I am merely giving fair warning.
Politics of Academic Murder
Chapter 6
The unsettled anxiety on both the arithmancer's and alchemist's faces lifted when they Apparated to the Ministry of Magic. Where any other investigator would be pleased on solving a murder and uncovering the suspect, our pair was much chagrined by what they were about to do. After much cover-up by the Ministry of Magic, the investigation on the true nature of Dumbledore's death had finally come full circle, and our pair was now face-to-face with the person who had commissioned and endorsed final account Harry Potter. It would not be easy speaking to the Minister who had officially sanctioned the theory that itinerant undesirable elements of wizarding society had done away with the venerable Dumbledore, but the two academics managed to keep their equanimity when ushered into the Minister of Magic's office.
Upon the briefest of salutations, Hermione started the ball rolling by apprising the Minister on their findings and their late encounter with Chancellor Flitwick.
'You mean Flitwick didn't do it and that it was suicide?' exclaimed Harry in disbelief as he leaned forward in his chair. 'I was sure the undesirables had killed off Dumbledore.'
'Filius Flitwick's insistence on his innocence was confirmed by Legilimency,' admitted Severus, declining the Minister's offer of a seat and settled for leaning on the wall next to his companion and fellow academic.
'So it was suicide then?' ventured a nonplussed Harry.
Hermione, who was looking out on the London skyline from his office sighed in dissatisfaction. 'Professor Dumbledore was murdered. But not by your undesirables. He was murdered by a member of the Ministry and a person with whom we are intimately acquainted.'
'It's fine if the Undesirables didn't do it this time, but how can it be anything other than suicide? Dumbledore was hanging from a beam!' reiterated Harry, pushing his spectacles up his nose bridge.
'The Chancellor had sought to cover up what he thought was Dumbledore's suicide and hide the nature of his work. The Chancellor did not kill Dumbledore,' expounded Severus in a slow and bored voice in a manner that expressed his opinion of the Minister possessing sub-par intelligence.
'How did you realise that?' pursued Harry. 'There was little enough to go on to start with!'
'As Professor Snape and I had discovered, the thing that misled us was the fact that Professor Flitwick and the real killer both shared a fear of the nature of Professor Dumbledore's work. I dare say you would have feared his work too if you had known the nature of his current research and writings which disparaged the political philosophy of your regime.' Hermione paused and exchanged a faint ironic curling of the lips with Severus. 'When the killer struck, he or she wanted to make it appear that Professor Dumbledore had committed suicide; and in so doing, discredit him. However, Professor Flitwick, believing that Professor Dumbledore's suicide was genuine, feared that the suicide would therefore bring discredit upon both wizarding Britain and the wizarding division of the University of Cambridge. Accordingly, he then tried to disguised the perceived suicide and blame the itinerant undesirables for murder.'
'I don't follow. Who killed Albus Dumbledore then?' demanded the Great Leader, Harry Potter. 'And how? There was only one key and according to Snape, you guys said you found it in the room.'
Severus eased himself by the edge of the desk nearest to the Minister. 'Still can't follow the tapestry of this intrigue? Very well, let me first explain why Dr Granger and I do not think Dumbledore took his own life. The obvious point was that it was physically impossible for him to do so. His health had been failing for the past two years. He was old and frail, and needed help even to rise from bed and go for breakfast. I stood on the bed and reached to the ceiling beam holding up the roof. Since I am a tall person, I was able to reach it with ease. But for an elderly and frail wizard, and one who was a half head shorter than me, it was impossible for him to stand on the bed, tie the rope and hang himself.'
Hermione chose this moment to break in after nodding vigorously at her colleague's surmises. 'Yet, someone very close to Professor Dumbledore had gone to considerable and elaborate lengths to draw attention to the nature of the work in which Professor Dumbledore was then engaged. This person was so cunning as to feign approval while hinting that Professor Dumbledore was so overawed by his discoveries and regrets that he could not bear to face the fact of his complicity in the destruction of ancient texts on wizarding philosophy and political thought as well as the eradication of a society with soul, creativity and verve, that cared more for meaningful pursuits and socio-political engagement than economic prosperity. This person even said that Professor Dumbledore had approved of a quotation by Pliny, which this person cunningly left for us to find, having whetted our curiosity. The book Naturalis Historia contained a piece of parchment in Professor Dumbledore's hand. The killer was very cunning.'
Severus interjected at this juncture since his colleague was not getting to the point. 'Because this same book also contained a passage where Pliny famously stated, "Amid the suffering of life, suicide is the gods' best gift to men." A happy coincidence? I think not.'
'Then who murdered Dumbledore, if you two are so smart and already know everything?' snapped Harry waspishly.
'Your wife,' Hermione declared in a bored voice.
'Ginny?' Harry looked at her in amazement. 'But she was only there as Dumbledore's personal assistant, to make sure he did nothing to contrary to the policies of my government.'
'Precisely because she was his personal assistant, she knew all about his work,' lectured Severus, narrowing his eyes at the paling Minister. 'One of the mistakes Mrs Potter made was in pretending she had no knowledge of Latin when, as Chancellor Flitwick had testified, she knew enough to accuse Dumbledore of wrong interpretation.'
'But there is one thing you cannot explain,' Harry pointed out unsteadily, 'and in this your whole argument falls apart. There was only one key and that you confessed earlier to finding instead Dumbledore's room.'
Hermione smiled knowingly. 'I think you will find a second key.'
'And where will I find this key?' snapped Harry irritably, pointing a menacing finger at his old school friend.
'Please put aside your finger, Minister, it is not nice to point at a lady,' mocked Severus with scorn in his eyes and vitriol in his voice. 'The answer to your question, Minister, lies in your wife's duties as Dumbledore's "personal assistant". Or did she not report that to you?'
'On top of checking whether he was publishing seditious material and reporting his movements to me, she had to be his peon,' spat the Minister, who was evidently displeased at his wife being used in this fashion. 'She even had to help him rebind books. What has that got to with it?'
'I don't mean to be pejorative, Harry,' said Hermione with another knowing smile, 'but you don't know what occurs in the old medieval way of binding books, do you?'
'What?' His voice trembled as if he were trying his best not to scream.
'I think he doesn't know what pejorative means, Dr Granger,' sneered Severus with a mocking look in his eyes.
'Oh?' Hermione raised a brow at her colleague. 'Then I shall educate you on the book binding process. A medieval book binder makes metal book plates and book shrines, casting them from moulds in silver or gold. The whole process may be done magically save one the actually casting of the book plate. This is because the book plate may be set to magically close the book to all but its owner. In her role as overall scribe and assistant to Professor Dumbledore, and given that he had taught her how to bind and rebind the old books, it would not be beyond her capability to cast a second key, having made a mould from the first. You simply take the key and pres it into wax to form the mould from which you will make your cast. Since this would be a magically bespelled key, magically creating another key would be unacceptable as the old key would be rendered null and void. This key was also bespelled by Dumbledore so that it was necessary to unlocking the door. A simple Alohomora would not have worked on the door. Furthermore the wards were not undone in Professor Dumbledore's room because they had recognised her. The wards only worked to keep out visitors whom he did not know.'
Severus curled his lips disdainful at Harry. 'The key that I am now handing you Dumbledore's own key. You will note, as we did, the key was covered in grease. A search of Mrs Potter's chamber or study...'
'Or her kiln where she makes pottery for your office,' cut in Hermione. 'Or her person should bring the second key to light if she does not confess when faced with the rest of the evidence.'
'I see,' came the defeated voice of the Minister as he slumped backwards into his seat. 'I thought it was...; that it was an accident, so...'
'Still,' ventured the alchemist, 'I must say it was wrong of either you or the Deputy Commissioner of the Aurory to disguise the manner of Dumbledore's death.'
'What do you mean?' gasped Harry as he trembled in shock, his eyes widening alarmingly. 'You mean Ron assisted Ginny in the murder?'
Hermione settled into a window seat, crossing her legs and looking at Severus. 'Judging from his reaction, it seems that Ron indeed covered up for her.'
A nerve throbbed at the corner of his mouth. 'I will be the judge of that,' he snarled. 'Now, Minister, if you please, I need to access your memories.' Harry could only nod his assent dumbly in shock. When the task of using legilimency was done, Severus turned to Hermione. 'He's clean. It is Weasley.'
'It makes sense,' muttered Hermione, neatly folding her hands in her lap.
'Will you two stop talking among yourselves and tell me what is going on?' demanded Harry.
Severus spun around to face the Minister. 'Yes, gladly,' he quietly said. 'Flitwick genuinely believed that Dumbledore had committed suicide. In believing this, he thought that if news of the suicide got out, the nature of Dumbledore's work would be revealed. His rationale was, "Would you rather wizarding society know that one of its greatest movers and shakers committed suicide in protest at being responsible for the destruction of the socio-political order and the destruction of higher education?" A not altogether unsound rationale.'
'Professor Snape and I are of the opinion that it was better for British wizarding society to learn from such acts of destruction,' Hermione stated.
'I think it is a greater offence of Flitwick to fabricate false evidence,' announced Harry in his holier-than-thou speech giving tone.
'You must understand that he thought so doing would save Professor Dumbledore from condemnation,' explained the arithmancer.
'Bah!' Severus flicked a stray lock of hair away from his face. 'Had Dumbledore truly resorted to suicide, then he would have been condemned for his action what an ignoble way of dying.'
'Please don't tell me you are going to quote Martial,' pleaded Hermione with laughter in her eyes.
'Marshall? What has a military got to do with any of this?' enquired the bewildered Minister loudly.
'Don't encourage him, Harry,' cautioned Hermione with a kindly smile.
Severus took that as his cue to go ahead with that which he wanted to say. 'Not Marshall the rank, Martial the person. The lines go:
When all the flattery of life is gone,
The fearful steal away to death,
The brave however live on.'
'I don't see what this has got to do with anything?' demanded Harry, thumping his desk in frustration.
'Dumbledore was a brave man,' reasoned Severus with a narrow glare of contempt for the younger wizard. 'He would have lived to argue his case before the Wizengamot and to you if he had not been murdered.'
'But what was the case he would have argued? What did he write that was so offensive that Flitwick had to burn his papers and Ginny had to kill him?' asked Potter, his voice hoarse in desperation.
Hermione rolled her eyes and answered, 'The note we found in Pliny's Naturalis Historia in Dumbledore's handwriting, which read, "The administration should know that the truth and acceptance of that truth is the only means of ensuring the survival of our world By despising the other sectors of the wizarding world that are not deemed profitable or useful to society or the economy, and by disavowing their existence, we will simply teach this and future generations to despise our beliefs and way of life." That in itself should tell you enough.'
'That he was opposed to your draconian policies and the way in which you manage wizarding Britain as if it were a police state. He was deeply opposed to it and a part of him regretted putting you in power and grooming you to what you are now,' Severus simply said, brushing a speck of non-existent lint from his robes. 'Flitwick burnt Dumbledore's notes to prevent a more extensive paper on this tirade against your government from getting out for fear of what you could do to the wizarding division of the University of Cambridge.'
'Ginny knows all your policies by heart and is your most fervent believer. To her, you can do no wrong,' Hermione added, as she rose from the window seat and took Severus's arm. 'She objected vehemently to Professor Dumbledore's writings and must have had an altercation with him. She must have threatened to report his "potentially subversive" writings as your government would have put it. Knowing Professor Dumbledore, his eyes would have twinkled annoyingly as he told her to do what she thought right just as he would go ahead and do that which he thought right. In her mind, Dumbledore failed to heed her reason.'
'And so, she took it upon herself to murder Dumbledore lest he make known his views to the Wizengamot, and thence wizarding society. This would give rise to much questioning over the way you have led wizarding Britain and could lead to widespread protests. If the junta in Burma are unable to quell the people who are undeterred by the high cost of getting involved in social movements, why should the people of British wizarding society? Where the people of Burma had monks playing a major role in Burma's politics because monks are traditionally considered influential community leaders, we have Albus Dumbledore,' continued Severus in his professorial voice.
'Exactly.' Hermione nodded in agreement. 'In Burma, the political behaviour of the people are in part fundamentally shaped by the socio-political character of monks, whose dajaka or lay disciples they are. The same may be said for us in the United Kingdom. Professor Dumbledore is to British wizarding society what the monks are to the Burmese peoples.'
'Mrs Potter must have feared something similar happening, for should the wizarding population of Britain rise up against you, you could be overthrown from power. While this would be most inconvenient to you, it would be extremely distressing to her,' Severus explained in a sneer.
'Because she would no longer be the wife of the Great Leader, enjoying all the power and privileges she now has,' Hermione concluded. 'Question Ginny and you will know this to be true.' When Harry remained dumbstruck with his head cradled in his hands, she softened her voice, 'We have concluded our investigation. All that remains for you to do is the right thing, namely
'Arrest Mrs Potter and her brother, and let the course of the law take its course,' recommended the older wizard as he bowed to the Minister.
The two former Unspeakable Unspeakables smiled sadly at Harry; rather, one smiled sadly at him, and the other looked pitingly at the man as they turned towards the door.
'Must it all come out?' called out Harry in a strangled voice. 'Must all be revealed?'
'That is for the law and the courts to decide,' replied Hermione, glancing back. 'Professor Snape and I are academics. It is not in our purview to make such moral judgements on what took place. I hope that you will do the right thing.'
As they stepped out of the Minister of Magic's office, they heard a muffled cry of dismay.
'Well,' said Severus, his visage expressionless when they stepped into the street and met with a blast of rain. 'This means I would have to flee from Britain. I doubt the Minister will let me off for insulting him this afternoon.'
'It is as if you have foreseen it,' replied Hermione, transfiguring her pen into an umbrella and opening it. 'Easter term lapses in two days, and you are free to head the alchemy school at the Paris-Sorbonne University.'
Taking the umbrella from her and checking to ensure that she was at her usual perch by his elbow, he riposted, 'The same may be said for you. I heard you have been offered an associate professorship in the Assas arithmancy department for the August term.'
She turned to him with a smile and huddled close to him under the umbrella. 'Touché, Severus,' she laughed. 'You were right. We did win by one moku; your hiraki and old joseki paid off. You do know what this means.'
He affected a mock groan of dissent. 'I will be plagued with your company and your insistence that we compare notes of the dunderheads we teach in Paris.'
* * *
'Have you read this?' enquired Hermione, setting down her copy of the Daily Prophet to Severus as they sat outside sipping coffee before the medieval structure of the original Collège de Sorbonne.
'What?' came his terse reply. He did not look up from his marking and was still scowling over his students' papers when he continued, 'Are you going to tell me, or will I live through the happy experience of never finding out?'
The arithmancer donned her best BBC newscaster guise and began to read aloud, 'The time now is fifteen hours GMT. This is "Wizarding Britain Today", broadcasting from the basement of Bush House, London. In a surprising move, the Minister of Magic, Harry Potter, has stepped down from office and announced his retirement from politics. The news came after the verdict of guilty was issued on his wife, Ginny Weasley-Potter and his brother-in-law, Ronald Weasley, the former Deputy Commissioner of the Aurory. Mrs Potter had been apprehended two months ago for murdering Albus Dumbledore, one of the key shapers of wizarding Britain, with a modified killing curse.
'The trial, which had just concluded this morning, sentenced her to death for planning and executing a murder. With Potter no longer Minister of Magic, it is very likely that the Wizengamot will commute her sentence to life imprisonment in Azkaban instead. Her brother, Ron Weasley was sentenced to life imprisonment for the charges of colluding to make the murder resemble a suicide by hanging the body from the ceiling, publishing a false report on Dumbledore's death, and hiding the truth from Minister Potter. As it surfaced in the trial, Dumbledore's murder stemmed from Mrs Potter's fear that he would stir dissent in her husband's administration and undo all the good he has done therein for our society. Some of Dumbledore's secret papers uncovered in the course of the trial revealed that he had become disillusioned with the Potter administration and its severe curtailment of socio-political freedoms.
'The various social movements in wizarding Britain rallied around this fact and had called for the Minister to resign, and resign he did today in a press conference immediately upon the verdict of his wife's trial. Harry Potter, former Minister and saviour of the British wizarding society expressed his wish to retire to a cottage in Ayr, Scotland where he would be able to visit his wife frequently should her sentence be commuted to life imprisonment at Azkaban. Fresh elections for the position of Minister of Magic will be held in three month's time. In the meantime, wizarding Britain will be administered by a caretaker government formed from members of the Wizengamot.'
'You could have made broadcasting your alternative career choice,' muttered Severus sotto voce as he replaced his students' scripts in his bag and looked up at his companion.
'Not stimulating enough, I'm afraid.' The arithmancer rewarded him with a grin as she tossed the newspaper in her capacious book bag.
He responded by drinking deeply from his coffee cup. 'That's over, thank goodness.'
'While all seems to have ended well, I am disturbed that no one suggested Potter had colluded with Ginny and Ron to keep the murder under wraps,' Hermione ventured, pinching her nose to stifle a sneeze. 'A part of me suspects that he did know the published report on Dumbledore's death was not all it seemed. Yet despite suspecting so, he endorsed the slipshod account. Was he trying to protect Ginny or was he trying to protect Ron?'
'Very likely both,' he said evenly, rising and straightening the scarf around his neck. 'Very likely, he suspected one of them but did not want to know which. That he had already suspected foul play, I do not doubt. I rather like to think he chose to be a mystery even to himself.'
'You're being cryptic again,' Hermione chided him on taking his arm.
'I am always cryptic. It comes from playing Go all the time with a person favouring the new joseki,' he purred with a smirk. 'Shall we go to Carrefour then? There's a sale on Portobello mushrooms and I have a sudden craving for your cream of mushroom soup.'
The only reply nearby pedestrians would have heard was his rich laughter in the air and the sounds of Hermione's smart smacks on his arm.
~Finis~
FOOTNOTES:
Everything here on wizarding politics is entirely made up. It may be disturbing but I just write what I know.
Readers may object to the 'Secret Department of Unspeakable Unspeakables'. I call it thus, as I explained in the first story, Christmas Presents Undisguised, because the agents there are more unspeakable than normal unspeakables. They are so unspeakable that they are secret.
Views on Burma stem from my own research and are culled from a paper I am currently co-writing with someone.
Hiraki - For explanation, please c/f footnotes in Ch 2.
Joseki- For explanation, please c/f footnotes in Ch 2.
Moku- For explanation, please c/f footnotes in Ch 2.
Assas refers to L'université Panthéon-Assas Paris II. It is also known as Paris deux. I call it Assas after its other name because it is headquartered at the rue d'Assas. It is one of the 13 universities descended from the University of Paris. I have arranged for Hermione to lecture there because Assas students mainly study law, business administration, economics, social and political sciences all fairly quantitative fields like I picture arithmancy to be.
Paris-Sorbonne University, or Paris IV as a friend there likes to call it, is one of the 13 universities descended from the University of Paris. I have arranged for Severus to lecture there because the school is traditionally for the faculties of Arts and Human Sciences, where I think alchemy belongs.
Carrefour means 'junction' in French and is a chain of very large supermarkets my favourite supermarket to be exact.
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Acknowledgements
Many thanks to my beta (the lovely Su) and preliminary readers (Lawrence and Pius) for taking the time to go through this story.
Sincere gratitude is also extended to my esteemed patroness, JuneW, who is in every sense of the word - a lady.
And thank you, dear readers, for welcoming me back after the long hiatus from the fandom, and sticking with this very short murder mystery.
best,
Lady Strange
3rd January 2008
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23 Reviews | 6.09/10 Average
well, so far Flitwick has been cleared of Dumbledore's murder - but I still cannot determine the best candidate for the crime. hmm, perhaps Ginny herself? or even Harry?? thanks for the new chapter - will look forward to the answers next!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Well, still one chapter to go. The clues - the major ones as to who did it are in this chapter.Hints:Flitwick does reveal somethingThe iinvestigators found something while searching Dumbledore's room againAnd there's the Pliny the elder reference.
So, it was merely a suicide? But still, Dumbledore's motives aren't completely clear. Was he escaping what he'd contributed to create?
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
There's still 1 chapter to go. It was stated in this chapter that it was neither suicide nor "undesirable elements" murdering him. There's more to it than meets the eye.
Oh, you deserve far more reviews than you recieve! I am continually captivated by this story, and I love your style of writing. Severus' mannerisms remind me of Holmes!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you, thank you. This story has been fun for me too. Reviews - well, they will come when they come. So long as people read my work, I am content. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
This is well planned and executed story. After reading this, I went back to read your previous stories and really enjoyed them.
I look forward to the next installment.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you. Considering that I took a long sabbatical from fanfic writing, I am quite overwhelmed by the warmth on my return. The next instalment should be up sometime next week - late next week. Thank you once again.
PS - Molly as the murderer? Molly is the one who told Ginny to not desert her brood, Molly would kill to "protect" Harry's name, Molly considers herself untouchable because of her reputation for being uber-Mom.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Molly does not appear in this story, not even as a walk-on role. However, now that you mention it... I should write her in one of my murder mysteries....
Okay, I'm going with Harry or a Weasley as the prime murder suspect. I don't think Ginny would bother protecting anyone outside her "brood." The truth Dumbledore was discovering - something bad about Harry? Here's hoping you post the next chapter soon! Thank you for taking time to update, despite the busy-ness of this time of year.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Well, well, my beta was stumped right to the end as well. She suspected someone else and not a Weasley or a Potter on grounds that they were too obvious. But since everyone (or nearly everyone) is a possible suspect, anything goes! *Cackle*As for what Dumbles discovered... I have only one word of advice - consider the current Potter administration and what it is like. Think you on that.The busyness this time of year is madness, mainly with editing and ghostwriting work. This story as well as the 3rd mystery I am currently conceptualising keeps me occupied. So long as I do not have time to dwell on all that has passed in my personal life. Meanwhile, I am still panicking that I have less than 2500 words of the 6000 word ghostwriting project. Eek!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Well, well, my beta was stumped right to the end as well. She suspected someone else and not a Weasley or a Potter on grounds that they were too obvious. But since everyone (or nearly everyone) is a possible suspect, anything goes! *Cackle*As for what Dumbles discovered... I have only one word of advice - consider the current Potter administration and what it is like. Think you on that.The busyness this time of year is madness, mainly with editing and ghostwriting work. This story as well as the 3rd mystery I am currently conceptualising keeps me occupied. So long as I do not have time to dwell on all that has passed in my personal life. Meanwhile, I am still panicking that I have less than 2500 words of the 6000 word ghostwriting project. Eek!
I think I'll wait for the answer to understand by whom and why Dumbledore was killed.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I welcome speculation as to who did it...
It seems to me that with such a high-power alchemist and arithmantist on the case that a little more magical forensics would be forthcoming. Something like a spell that would put return all items in the room precisely back to the place where Dumbeldore last placed them thus reconstructing the crime scene and then the use of some potion like Luminol to show mystic traces of missing artifacts. Well anyway, back to the locked room and the next phase of our mystery...
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
This is not a CSI episode, unfortunately. Remember that I picture the wizarding world to be quite Victorian... As for what happens next, well... read on when the next instalment appears.
This is a gorgeously written story, and I eagerly await more!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I am very glad you enjoy it; there will be more shortly. It is my policy to post complete stories.
Hmm, not sure if Flitwick was lying about cleaning up Dumbledore's desk, or if someone else mis-led Penelope. In this story, almost everyone is under suspicion, you clever writer! Thanks for the new chapter.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Ah ha! A reader finally points out that everyone is under suspicion. I confess I was too transparent with the identity of the killer in the 1st story, so in this, I decided everyone would be a suspect. *cackle* Well, this is the halfway mark, 3 more chapters to go of suspense, Go and dystopic politics.
I like the way you have Severus lead her to the harsh realization that the time has come for her to stand up against her childhood friends. Not a pleasant task, but in this story they would not hesitate to move against Hermione. And all done over a game of Go! Thanks for updating.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I do try to inject some plot progression here and there, and Ch 2 was no exception. Go has a certain resonance with Severus, and I felt he would be best equipped to treat life as he would a game of Go. But I am rambling. :p Read on! This plot even confuses me sometimes.
A closed-room mystery: how delicious.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Oh yes, almost as delicious as my frosted cupcakes!
My Lady Strange, I must confess I can now truly empathize with how Dr. Watson and Chief Inspector Japp would have felt if Holmes and Poirot had ever collaborated on a tricky case with the two of them caught in the wake. You just combined politics, academia, and Go! Can there be any hope for those of us who are more into Cutthroat Canasta to understand what they're talking about and the reasoning behind it? Please have mercy and don't leave us mere mortals lying in the dust disconsolate.Oh, Iluvitiluvitiluvit!!! There, all better now, on with the show! ^_^
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
My dear Chatelaine,Unfortunately, I know nothing about Canasta. Is it like Patience? I play Patience every now and then. The definitions of the joseki moves are explained, and are intended to give readers a hint as to how the plot will progress. So the only possible thing to do now is to let the people who covered up the murder to think they are winning, and to test whether their complacency has gotten the better of them? What better thing to do than to investigate the gameplay of those who think they are winning, and invade empty territory when they least expect it? There is a reason why Go is called "encircling chess" in Mandarin. Tee hee.best,Lady Strange.
I am so glad I took the time to read Christmas Presents first. I like watching a world develop around characters I care for. The details of the faux Victorian/Dickensonian world of the British Wizarding World are fastinating. On with the sequel! I am SO ready for more,
and more,
and more, ad nauseum.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you for taking the time to read the 1st story before this one. I haven't written in a long while for the fandom, and do worry that I am a little rusty. Ch 2 will be up later this week (it is already Monday in my half of the world) as soon as I go through it one more time.
Intriguing!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Glad you liked it.
yay!!!!! you're writing a new story!! HG and SS are sleuthy investigators, and I'm looking forward to seeing them figure out how Albus died. The way things are going in Potter's Britain, I might wonder why HG and SS don't apply to schools in other countries. Thanks for posting!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I wonder whether it would give too much of the ending away.... *goes to refer to chapter 6* No, I can tell you that SS and HG do end up teaching in Paris II and Paris IV by the end of the story. See, and I have given nothing away! If you want to see more on the politics of Potter's Britain, wait till you see the exposition of how his administration has devolved.... You already get a hint of it in Ch 1 with the mention of "itinerant Undesirables"...It is the least I can do for you after all you have done for me. *hugs* Here's hoping that I get back to your end of the pond so that I can formally express my gratitude in person.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
no need for... erm... formal expressions. just get yourself over to this side of the pond - anywhere on this side!
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I love the setting of this, and I'm really in the mood for mysteries right now! Lovely job.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I am a little rusty with writing for our fandom. But the story needed to be written. Call it a cathartic (sic) exercise for my experience in academia. ;) Thank you once again.
How absolutely wonderful to have you back - and to have this story continued. So Dumbledore died under unnatural circumstances and Harry is trying to hush it up? Very interesting start.One minor thing. I think you missed an "ago" in the following sentence: "Albus died three days in his rooms at Merton". Or does unnatural refer to the lenght of his death? :-)
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Thank you for pointing out the missing word. My betas and I must have missed it. Well, it is a short mystery. Not as gory as "Christmas Presents Undisguised", but equally as disturbing. Thank you for your encouragement.
oh my, you played this out very well - Ginny, with help from Ron, to protect Harry from knowledge of the crime and perceived political harm. It all fits Ginny's belief in family sticking together, and how the killer entered Dumbledore's room. Well done! (Did S&H testify before the Wizengamot?) I also like the new lives you gave S&H, safely away in France in a larger academic community, and with good food and Carrefour. In the aftermath of Benazir Bhutto's death, the mentions of Burma were especialy poignant. Thank you for the great story!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
Ah well, I write the kind of political system I know best - and I don't mean the kind I learn from my Plato, Xenophon and Caesar. And to think I was told I was not cut out for the academic world *grumble* The Burma bit was added in after last minute consideration because I wanted Dumbledore to be a mildly sympathetic character since he did spend the whole of this story dead.Ginny is as I think she would be in this dystopic world. I always wanted a villain that was somewhat flawed. I presume S&H did testify. I love their new lives too, and cannot help but long for that kind of a life myself. However, they will not be able to rest on their laurels too much... Their reputation as sleuths may have just followed them across the English Channel... *cackle*And thanks for the review! :)
I find your long footnotes very informative. They usually answer all the questions I have about the chapter that proceeds them. If you repeat information from a previous chapter, I just skip over that. When I first saw "undress," I thought oa a diaphanous robe with lacies underneath.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
You must thank my betas for the footnotes. They are conversant in both British and American English. Whereas I am only proficient in the former. As you can imagine, this leads to much misunderstanding between myself and the readers when I first started out because several words existent in both British and American English have different definitions, and there are spelling differences between the two as well that led one camp to say my language skills were sub-par.I come from a purely british/commonwealth tradition where undress has several meanings among them - removing clothes from oneself, informal academic gowns worn for teaching by the academic staff of Oxbridge.The type of "robe" you are describing would be a dress gown in the loosest sense of the word, meaning - something you throw on to hide the fact that you are either naked or just in undergarments.
I find your long footnotes very informative. They usually answer all the questions I have about the chapter that proceeds them. If you repeat information from a previous chapter, I just skip over that. When I first saw "undress," I thought of a diaphanous robe with lacies underneath.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I provide fair warning on long footnotes because many readers have complained (in the past) that my footnotes are too long and do not add anything to the plot. I repeat footnotes because past experience has taught me that readers very seldom refer back to an earlier chapter where something is explained.An example would be the reticule vs ridicule distinction in my regency fic. reticule is the handbag used by ladies ca. the late 1790s to late victorian times (c. 1901). But between the years 1798-1825, it was called a ridicule because it was thought ridiculous to carry a handbag for things when previously you would have pockets to do so. Readers who did not read the footnotes in an earlier chapter came across the term in a much later chapter and inundated me with emails as to my incorrect use of the term. To prevent such things from happening, I repeat footnotes in the hope that readers pay attention. However, that seems doomed to failure as well as readers complain that my footnotes are unwieldy.
I loved "Christmas Presents Undisguised" and this is a great follow up fic. I would enjoy reading more stories along the same lines.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I am glad you enjoyed this fic. At present, real life is rather hectic for me, so there are no current plans for another serious mystery. Perhaps when I find more time to write... Thank you for the compliments.
I should have seen this coming; I've lost my touch. Thank you for that lovely tale BTW I smiled when I read "Carrefour".
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Politics of Academic Murder)
I would not say you lost your touch. Rather, I made everyone a suspect. Ah yes, the carrefour reference. I am helpless biased that way... :)